Eh, that gallimaufry prompt wasn't too terrible - but, we had it rough in those weeks!
No, but seriously, content aside (and anything I did with Real Persons) 'cos the current story I'm on is too gory for some, and not gory enough for others (waaay less gory than the source game!) some of the writing in my old stories is appallingly weak in places, I went back through one of my older Mortal Kombat chapters before starting on my current multi-parter and it has bits that're clunky as fuck! Instead of word pictures, imagine an etch-a-sketch being used by a one handed gal on a roller coaster.
I'm not fishing for praise here with that comment - the shit I really can't stand I took down from everywhere I could. Like this one Dragon Ball Z request I did as a despite knowing nothing about the series. I assumed it was something like Pokemon. Apparently not. That was a steaming pile...