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First of all, i have no idea in what Category i should post this Request. I read “The Jungle Empress” on Ao3, but it only has one chapter and was posted 2023 and now i really would like to read something similar! Said fic has Junglebook as its Origin, with Mowgli being the unchanged Character, Bagheera is exchanged to Yoruichi from Bleach and Kaa is replaced by Boa Hancock of One Piece. Her seduction of Mowgli is really good, especially the hypnosis part. The only things i could critisize about it, that it seems as though Mowli (and Yoruichi) are later permanently under Hancocks controll, it seems. All of that happened in the one Encounter of Kaa in the Movie and in the Meantime i read a different story with a female descent of Mowgli, who meets a descent of Kaa in the Jungle and she gets hypnotised by her aswell, multiple times. Now i would really like to know if there are other fics out there with a Lamia seducing and hypnotising Mowgli, 2 times as in the Movie or more and although he knows what she is after, when their first time is done, he cant hold himself falling into another hypnosis, also maybe because his Body would like to have fun again. Or if there are fics with a Boy (not mowgli, but an Original character), who meets a Lamia, that ensnares him. If you know some, i would like to know. If not, that this Post here would be a challenge Request for writing. If my Request would be in the Wrong category (Cartoons), let me know and i post it anew somehwere else. I choosed Cartoon, because Junglebook is one and no “Anime” and the characters behavior do mirror the Movie, partially.
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Hi, Per your request, the profile and story have been deleted from the archive.
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Sorry, for this profile: https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296951957 Could you please also delete the story that is on it? Thanks
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Hi, could you please delete my account? The profile is here: https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296951957 If needed I can confirm the email address linked to it – the reset link didn’t work for me. Thanks in advance
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Would anyone be up for a second opinion on a single chapter of a work in progress? I don’t really need any editing. (…unless someone notices a missing word or comma both I AND my editing app missed.) I asked on Reddit and got a reply, but they ghosted me. Ghosting someone who goes by “Ghost” is a bit on the nose, but whatever. It was a dick move.
To put this as simply and briefly as possible, my brain got fried with the packing, moving, and all that entailed. I had no time to write. Now that I have time, my brain is struggling to switch back to non-crisis mode—the storms and renovations aren’t helping—and focus. It’s stuck in a hamster wheel of “so tired/gotta keep working/where’s the box tape/shit, is that bug something to worry about/fuck, my ass hurts, why do I hurt so much,” and so forth. My writing muscles are atrophied to noodles and I’m struggling to get sentences out. I’m not really happy with the second half of my most recent work, the flow, or the pacing. It’s been well over a year since I updated the story, and I won’t even get started on the delay my others are experiencing. If anyone can help, I’d appreciate it more than my fried brain can express.
This can be a one-off, and I’m happy to correspond by Google Docs. The chapter has some cursing and questionable humor but nothing really dirty; the bulk of it, sans headings and notations, is just over 3,100 words, and I’ve already done what I can for editing. You shouldn’t run into any mistakes. Also, if you’ve read any of my other writing, I’m not writing any accents or using non-English language aside from a couple of words in elvish. I’m trying to keep this story simple, easy, and posted in small bites unlike my usual approach to writing. Fandom is Dragon Age: Inquisition; I’ve got the other chapters posted in the archive if anyone is morbidly curious.
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I am game to give the chapter a read, mostly because I’m in a writing drought myself and looking for ways to jump-start myself, and because Inquisition is one of my favorite games.
(Actually, I really like Origins too, although DA:II was notable for lack of enthusiasm and effort on the part of the developers. The best part was Flemeth’s make-over, and Varric.)
So, I can be reached by email at bronxwench@gmail.com or via bronxwench9549 (display name is BronxWench) on Discord.
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I hope you realize just how amazing you are, and not just for this. I’ll send you a link here soon. Thank you so much!
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Chained to the Whirlpool BETA/Rewrite Poll
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Well I was planning on releasing it by mid June but I’ve been busy dealing with a family matter so it’s going to be a little while longer. -
It’s not exactly the same as either of the two examples above, but fairly close is Marriage Counseling by TheFrigidPidgeon on AO3.
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1 vote for business women Hi LHunt, thanks for voting. Whichever ends up winning, I'll be going for a new money / old money dynamic. Women who were excluded from high society because they didn't go to the right school or have the right surname, sick of being looked down on and now able to take their frustrations out on a member of the aristocracy. And Lara, because of her posh upbringing, will feel that serving them is beneath her, which will add to her humiliation.
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My opinion – business women. But not those rich socialite types Lara is accustomed to. Common type business women that over time was treated rather unfairly by Lara and her old staff...like when Tori went shopping for Sarah...Winston and the others when they was out and about doing the estate’s business. Now, Lara has to atone for all their rudeness and overall attitudes. These women are rich enough to be members of a country club as well, just not rich enough to own one. Mary still controls what she has to do – Lara feels it’s beneath her to be servicing lower class women. Lead the Way!
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