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Sounds like you want to start talking about Chekhov’s Gun... Reading your stuff and trying to avoiding nasty content might not be the best plan. On the other hand, I have read enough by you to know what to expect. Great sex scenes and you sometimes knowing the franchise you are dabbling with… 😉 At the end of the day I also have a reputation to uphold. You might not need reviews to review, but everyone is not as good at doing reviews.

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One way to keep public sex under cover! It does look like a great venue. It’s honestly great to see fine old buildings still in use and getting some good public access. They’re only 99% effective 😛 Is she absolutely on the pill then, and not just under a hypno compulsion to pop a breath mint and assume it’s the pill? No, it’s fair enough, I just wondered if that was what the line was about. I am sure it gets brought back later on. Don’t worry about it, honestly, truly! like 90% of my stuff was pretty nasty content, and I don’t need reviews to review. It’s just been a while since I was reading or writing or in the right headspace to do either I guess.

Oh, yeah, got lucky with that one! I think if I ever go back to the FF universe, it’ll be for twink Cloud getting railed by futa Tifa. There’s not a lot of demand for it, I grant you.

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The idea that I should raise the stakes for Maria by making her further enslaved by the dildo came from a reader. This scene when she get the compulsion to masturbate, but cannot act on it since the magic of the dildo has messed a lot with her head seemed like the perfect way to show it for the reader. There are more hypno commands in play than Ronja (or the reader) knows, but there is also a thought that the commands are so effective since Ronja have no real objections to doing the sex. Back in the first chapter she fantasized about Jonathan using hypnosis to exploit her sexually. The reality of that turned out to not be less glamorous than she had imagined, but Ronja is practically the perfect victim for the ghost since she is inclined to like all kind of sex a lot. Yep, seems you are getting it, but are over thinking things. He he, part of humiliation is that somebody must be listening if there are loud sex. Having the girlfriend over and making sure she gets how embarrassing it is with parents listening is bound to make things more peaceful for the parents, at least that is what the mother hopes. It is also worth to mention that it is meant to be general theme that much of the fear about coming out as lesbians is in the girls heads. The people around the girls are all remarkable tolerant compared to what might happen in the real world if girls start to do depraved things. Maybe I should do some short story about such linen ghost costume, that concept has promise. Important for the ghost to stay in character. Just about every place in the story is real. The final chapter will feature some links to real locations of the story for readers that are interested. As for Kristinehovs Malmgård I have never been there for a masquerade, but it is great place for parties. Considering the young men has stumbled over to ads posted by Mikaela it is a continuation from the previous blackmailing. Cannot having her drooling too much over ordinary cocks when she got a obsession with the ivory dildo. Good that you enjoyed it Having the cosplay trigger for once helping the girls was fun. I had to make sure the cosplay trigger also caused some serious troubles. 😉 Ronja put herself on the pill a few chapters back to avoid accidental pregnancies. Sounds promising, I go digging through your stories when I get time.

It took a while, but a new chapter of “RB-X-17” is finally ready! Chapter 3

I’ve had this problem with the last few story chapters I’ve added: When I paste in the text from the Word document, spaces are randomly removed so that words get fused together. Here’s the first paragraph from a chapter I just posted: The only workaround I’ve found so far is to paste the text into Notepad, then paste it into the textbox from there. But then I have to manually redo all of the bold, italics, etc. Is anyone else having this problem?

I totally get the limitations of the flashfic format (one of the reasons I don’t dabble in those myself) so the comment was more meant as encouragement that maybe you should consider revisit the topic. Considering that dog has a male name I think there is a lot of potential for gags. The best joke is of course in the title of the story that you already used. It is good that we live in the english speaking part of the world so Zell loves hot dogs. Having the title of the story as Bretzel or Flavored Bread would not been as fitting. 🙂

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Hot Dog! By @Thundercloud Thank you for the review! With those circa 1000 word flashfics could be kinda hard getting much character in, so nice that one worked for ya. I tended to find with writing those I’d end up having to cut bits out to make the limit, It’s been a few years but I may well have just not had room for extra jokes. Would definitely be some good gag options though! As for the words… well, obstreperous is probably most common, especially as obstreperousness, will more often feature in broadsheet newspapers or more journal-like magazine articles, while oblation and oakum are probably best known/used in much more niche categories, although you probably wouldn’t be too surprised to find them in fantasy works either. All three words probably count as more common than some of the prompts we used to get! Thank you again.

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