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The idea that I should raise the stakes for Maria by making her further enslaved by the dildo came from a reader. This scene when she get the compulsion to masturbate, but cannot act on it since the magic of the dildo has messed a lot with her head seemed like the perfect way to show it for the reader. There are more hypno commands in play than Ronja (or the reader) knows, but there is also a thought that the commands are so effective since Ronja have no real objections to doing the sex. Back in the first chapter she fantasized about Jonathan using hypnosis to exploit her sexually. The reality of that turned out to not be less glamorous than she had imagined, but Ronja is practically the perfect victim for the ghost since she is inclined to like all kind of sex a lot. Yep, seems you are getting it, but are over thinking things. He he, part of humiliation is that somebody must be listening if there are loud sex. Having the girlfriend over and making sure she gets how embarrassing it is with parents listening is bound to make things more peaceful for the parents, at least that is what the mother hopes. It is also worth to mention that it is meant to be general theme that much of the fear about coming out as lesbians is in the girls heads. The people around the girls are all remarkable tolerant compared to what might happen in the real world if girls start to do depraved things. Maybe I should do some short story about such linen ghost costume, that concept has promise. Important for the ghost to stay in character. Just about every place in the story is real. The final chapter will feature some links to real locations of the story for readers that are interested. As for Kristinehovs Malmgård I have never been there for a masquerade, but it is great place for parties. Considering the young men has stumbled over to ads posted by Mikaela it is a continuation from the previous blackmailing. Cannot having her drooling too much over ordinary cocks when she got a obsession with the ivory dildo. Good that you enjoyed it Having the cosplay trigger for once helping the girls was fun. I had to make sure the cosplay trigger also caused some serious troubles. 😉 Ronja put herself on the pill a few chapters back to avoid accidental pregnancies. Sounds promising, I go digging through your stories when I get time.

It took a while, but a new chapter of “RB-X-17” is finally ready! Chapter 3

I’ve had this problem with the last few story chapters I’ve added: When I paste in the text from the Word document, spaces are randomly removed so that words get fused together. Here’s the first paragraph from a chapter I just posted: The only workaround I’ve found so far is to paste the text into Notepad, then paste it into the textbox from there. But then I have to manually redo all of the bold, italics, etc. Is anyone else having this problem?

I totally get the limitations of the flashfic format (one of the reasons I don’t dabble in those myself) so the comment was more meant as encouragement that maybe you should consider revisit the topic. Considering that dog has a male name I think there is a lot of potential for gags. The best joke is of course in the title of the story that you already used. It is good that we live in the english speaking part of the world so Zell loves hot dogs. Having the title of the story as Bretzel or Flavored Bread would not been as fitting. 🙂

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Hot Dog! By @Thundercloud Thank you for the review! With those circa 1000 word flashfics could be kinda hard getting much character in, so nice that one worked for ya. I tended to find with writing those I’d end up having to cut bits out to make the limit, It’s been a few years but I may well have just not had room for extra jokes. Would definitely be some good gag options though! As for the words… well, obstreperous is probably most common, especially as obstreperousness, will more often feature in broadsheet newspapers or more journal-like magazine articles, while oblation and oakum are probably best known/used in much more niche categories, although you probably wouldn’t be too surprised to find them in fantasy works either. All three words probably count as more common than some of the prompts we used to get! Thank you again.

“What do you mean you were only speeding to get Toys R Us open for a sale?” ...Yeah, not quite the same No worries!

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Re: “Traffic Stop” @JayDee In this case, the police really had it cumming. I figured that Nick, being a lifelong con artist and petty criminal, probably knows a lot about how to mess with tech—especially police tech. Size difference was meant to be this story’s central kink, so I did a fair amount of research to find an animal several times Judy’s size that would also project masculinity. (It just wouldn’t have been the same if she’d pulled over, say, a giraffe, regardless of its size.) Thank you! One reason why I like writing porny cartoon fanfics is the challenge of making characters say and do things they never could in canon but that seem in-character nonetheless. Thanks so much for the review!

I’m gratified to learn that there were already several Zootopia stories here before I posted mine! That seemed like an awfully big gap in fandom. I’ll definitely give them a look.

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“Hello, tech support? Yes, I clicked the wrong button and a rampaging porn monster burst from my machine…. yes… yes…. yes I did try turning it off and on again…. I showed it a JayDee story followed by an InBrightestDay one… No, it’s already eaten all the cookies… it’s currently in the other room trying to order a big meat pizza it can’t afford to pay for and then hire a plumber to “clean some pipes out.” Look, just tell me how to stop it playing cheesy synth music every time it starts doing something.”

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It was actually no trouble at all, with the new beta. I do want to check with manta before I attempt moving the one from Movies to Cartoons, however. We have a new widget for that as well, but there were all sorts of cautionary statements, and I’m likely to end up summoning something I can’t banish...

Oh, cool! I hope it wasn’t too much trouble. Definitely hoping to read and review all of them before I suddenly find myself back in the black pit of despair where I spent the last four or five years! (actually, i hope to avoid that pit entirely. Depression fucking blows.)

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