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Review responses for "Biological Imperative" [Lilo & Stitch]

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18 hours ago, neo4812 said:

wait really? i just made that up! i had no idea it was from a play!

I check out forum activity sometimes and saw the post out of context and, for some reason had a mental image of Charlie Brown as a really angry Joe Pesci-a-like, and thought I’d post the joke!

After all, Chuck probably wouldn’t really get made as he was only Sicilian on his mother’s side.

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10 hours ago, JayDee said:

I check out forum activity sometimes and saw the post out of context and, for some reason had a mental image of Charlie Brown as a really angry Joe Pesci-a-like, and thought I’d post the joke!

After all, Chuck probably wouldn’t really get made as he was only Sicilian on his mother’s side.

You might enjoy SNL's "You're a Rat Bastard, Charlie Brown"

 

 

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From Pixel-King on February 20, 2021

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(One minor error of calling Lilo by the name Nani when Stitch pops her black cherry.)

Thanks for that. Just fixed it.

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I definitely prefer the happy, lovey-dovey stories you have done, and generally like when the girls become horny little beasts too.

But Stitch is pissing me off in this, though it is interesting at least and kinda enjoyable now. Personal preference I suppose. I do miss his quirkiness and humor for sure.

 

Like I say in the disclaimer at the beginning, this story isn't actually based on L&S; rather, it's inspired by various pieces of porny L&S artwork. 

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Where is Jumba to explain or revel in all this?

No David Ogden Stiers-voice in my porn, thanks.

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I agree with Sailor Nemesis, and if the girls are going to be recruiting anyway . . . Nani needs to introduce the Lifeguard to the joys of double-dong dickings. Her body is built for sin and I'm sure Nani could easily convince her to come over for an undisclosed reason. Nani already seems fallen to Stitch's prowess and would probably be eager to share and corrupt others. Maybe Nani could even warm her up a little first?

We shall see.

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Plus, it would be fun to have a girl who isn't an anal virgin, cause I'm certain she wouldn't be, and she could totally be a major size queen. Having her barking like a bitch in heat as soon as she realizes what is going to happen and sees the massive dicks would be a fun change of pace.

Especially considering Myrtle looks to be next and I can't imagine that being anything but super rapey and full of tears. And maybe some revenge face-sitting by Lilo while Stitch works the other end? That'd shut her up. Put her rude mouth to good use even.

 

There's fun times ahead. :)

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"Meega nala Struggle-snuggle!"

'kay.

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From LiloxStitch on February 21, 2021

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While this is much more intense than I usually enjoy, you put in these little moments that help bring me back into it. I honestly applaud you for being able to walk this line.

Thanks!

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I really enjoyed seeing Lilo and Nani enjoy things, or at least need to for satisfaction in chapter 6. And hope we get to see Lilo entirely enjoying having sex with Stitch. Though bringing in Mertle should be fun. Can't wait to see where this goes! I check almost every day to see if there is an update.

If you want to follow my Transparency Thread, I always announce new stories and chapters there. Thanks for the comments!

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Aw come on, who doesn't love some superiority complex bragging from good, old Major Charles Emerson Winchester, III, M.D. ?

"Meega nala kweesta" is the thing Stitch shouts a lot. It means "I want to destroy" in Stitch's Tantalog alien language.

"Struggle-snuggle" comes courtesy of (self-deprecatingly pedophilic) comedian Jimmy Carr.

 

https://stitchdatabase.fandom.com/wiki/Tantalog_language

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From SailorNemesis on March 17, 2021

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Enjoyed chap6, sexy times with Nani. Less enjoyed 7 with it's Mertle focus.

Although there’s a pretty solid dose of Nani-sex in chapter 7, too.

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Now that Stitch is expanding his pride I hope Nani lures the LifeGuard into this..

Does she even have a name?

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From SailorNemesis on April 09, 2021

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chap8, good to see LifeGuard.

Yeah, I know a lot of readers have been looking forward to that.

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`ya l’il space-fucker' hilarious

I love writing drunken dialogue.

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Hope to see her and Nani making out in future chaps. Hope to read more.

There’s just the epilogue left to go, so I can’t promise much.

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Not sure who else might get involved. Maybe reincarnated Elsa and Anna?

If you like crossovers, I’ve got another story for you...

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