Fhelly Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 Responses for my story. Ch. 4 THANK YOU: Alex, kissedbymidnight, and littlemiss76 for reviewing! It made my day! Kissedbymidnight: This is why I love reviews! They show me where my weak points are.. I meant for Leila to want to meet up again, not go back home. I hope the beginning of the chapter will fix any misconceptions. Thank you again for the feedback! Alex & littlemiss76: Hehe Ch. 5 Snow: hehe littlemiss76: You'll have to wait and see! missmiakay: YAY! I'm glad I make you excited lol Hope I don't disappoint And thanks for pointing that out.. I noticed it later. When you stare at things for so long, sometimes you don't catch it right away. I think I'm going to go back and do some tweaking when I have time. Thank you for your comment I loved the feedback! Sunni: Aww... thank you! And yes... yes they did. addiena saffir: Nope she won't! And you'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reviewing! Arche De Katze: Thank you! I'm glad you like it Alex: Thanks for the review! Yup, you'll see more of her one-on-ones in the next few chapters And as for the backgrounds.. you'll see soon! Little plot and a little sex, is what I'm aiming for, hehe Mrs. Monster: Being a nursing student, I totally feel for you on an entirely different level. I hope it's nothing too serious. I'm really glad I can serve as a bit of entertainment to you Haha.. I write as fast as I can! And thanks for mentioning my other two! Sometimes I wonder if anyone still reads them. Vixerism: Thanks for the review! And thank you for the compliment! I'm really glad you like it Ch. 6 littlemiss76: Well yunno.. he was sorta surprised, or aroused, or something o.O Haha.. I changed it a bit after you reviewed. Thanks for the review! I realized I made it seem like she began to shack up in Logan's room completely.. but she's still making the rounds for the most part Shyann: Let me turn down the lights for you! And welcome! Thanks for the compliment! Alex: Mayybbeeee, and haha.. I think you must have read it after I tweaked! Cuz it was time-warp weirdness going on there. Thank you for the review! Kleool: Aww.. thank you! I'm glad I pulled you over to my.. side Thank you for the compliment! I shall attempt to keep the impatience-ness down to a minimum as much as possible. San59: Thank yoouu for the compliment It made me happy! Ch. 7 Learia: Thank you for the compliment! I'm really glad you like it. Annndd.. you'll find out in due time! kissedbymidnight: Thanks for the review!! And that was what I was aiming for As of now, I was kinda leaving Logan more of a mystery on purpose. A bit later on when some stuff is revealed, it will change to being in the boy's POVs more, so you'll get a bit more of their thoughts and personalities... but right now their thoughts would give stuff away.. sooo you'll be stuck in primarily Leila's POV for a while longer. kain: Thanks for the review! I realize I overdid the time-skips that chapter, lol... but I think if I didn't use them at all, I'd have to shoot myself... and I'd also bore you all to tears! Since her days are pretty much the same, the ones I skipped over anyways But yes.. stories are usually better that follow one timeline. This one is going to likely go over a year though, so sadly, I will be using more.. I'll try to keep em to a minimum littlemiss: Nooo review allll you want! I won't change it anymore Thanks for the comment! And the daddy mystery won't be resolved for a while! Shyann: Eep, sorry! I ended where I stopped writing last week for time constraints. I actually didn't realize it was much of a cliffhanger, lol.. Thanks for the review! And sorry for the delay. If I post, it will usually be between Sat-Mon. If I don't get it up on Monday night, it will be another week before I have a chance to do anything. School dominates my week. San59: Thank you for the review! And haha.. I think it's more to pass the time then for their benefit No worries! Do you google translate my story? I'd be curious how that turns out! lol Alex: Thanks for the review! And.. silly me I'm glad ya like it! Luci Matsumoto: Aww.. thank you so much for the compliment. I'm actually really surprised at the reaction I've got from this story. I didn't really think it would go anywhere! Ch. 8 Vixerism: Thank you for the review!! And yuup I actually really like Cade, I was wondering what people thought of him! Hehe. I love your story too! Been waiting for an update. Salaphina: Thank you for the review!! I’m really glad you like it and I’m going to try to get back into a habit of regular updates. My life is just so hectic. And yes.. I really like Aaron too Don’t worry! Everything will be resolved in the end… just not sure when that’ll be. As for the lack of enthusiasm, I was just trying to make them sympathetic to her feelings, since she wasn’t too thrilled herself I’ll probably end up going back and doing little edits here and there.. That’s why I love feedback! Shows me where I’m lacking. Shyann: Working on it! You are one hard one to please.. hehe Snow: Thanks for the feedback! I’ll work on that, and no offense taken. Please give me more! I’ll never get better if I don’t know what I’m doing wrong. Anon: Sorry! I posted it but didn’t really like it. So I had to do some edits. Here it is Ch. 9 San59: Thank you for the review! Here it is! Shyann: Awww that was super sweet! Thank you so much And Happy early birthday! Hope you like it! Luci Matsumoto: Thanks for the review! Here it is! flyingbando: It was all apart of the plan Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review! Alex: Thanks for the review! Sera will be explained more soon littlemiss76: Thanks for the review! You'll soon find out w: Thanks for the review! Here it is! Learia: Thanks for the review! Awww... thank you so much, it means a lot! exolove: Thanks for the review! I'm glad I can spread my love of fantasy And I'm glad Cade is getting some love! Ch. 10 Shyann: Thank you for your compliment!! It was really sweet I’m really sorry for the wait. flyingbando: Thanks for the compliment! I'm sorry for the wait. exolove: Thank you for your review!! I apologize for the wait.. and I’m sorry! you’ll have to wait a bit longer to find out who the father is Though I’m curious who everyone thinks it is! Alex: Thank you for the review! Sorry for the long wait between chapters. Salaphina: No No.. Thank YOU for reviewing! I looovveee reviews! And I am EXTREMELY appreciative of them Haha.. yeah Cade was a meanie! But I hope I redeemed him. As for Logan, I haven’t done much in-depth characterization with the boys yet… so you’ll haveta wait and see! Sorry for the long wait! Sienna McLaggen: Thank you for the review!! I tried to come up with my own thing, but a lot has come before me! It’s hard these days to be completely original, but I like my little world And I think it’s my multiple plots that got me stumbling a bit, besides my being busy! I’m sorry for the long wait.. RedQuill: Thanks for the review! I’m glad you find Leila likeable! I was wondering how her portrayal was coming across. And as for the grammar and wording.. I know I have trouble sometimes. And YES! It’s extremely difficult to not overuse phrases. It still needs a lot more edits and changes, and I’ll get around to it eventually. Anon: Thanks for reviewing!! I wish I had 125 reviews! Lol but 56 are more than I ever thought I’d get! I totally love it! You have to remember, Leila never had any problems with money her entire life, and nor has she ever worked a day in her life, so she doesn’t exactly have an attachment to money the way a normal person might… besides, it was pretty much stolen money, and she never intended to live on her own. She planned to meet up with her family again, so she was just going to live off it until then.. it didn’t have any irreplaceable value to her. Yeah she was angry about it, but it was more the principle of the matter for her. Besides, her grandfather was rather stingy on what he let them spend things on, so she’s used to living on what she gets. Also, they are part animal, with instincts. She's fallen into her innate pack mentality. So the fact they took what was hers doesn't matter anymore, since in a pack setting, everything is shared. Also.. the mating bond is absolute. She knew she was stuck with them either way. As for the five mate thing… and the five potential fathers, you'll have to wait and see. I have plans for it.. Interpret that as you will! But for now, she knows it’s unusual, and she’s not exactly happy about it, but she’s not going to dwell on things that she can’t do anything about. Ch. 11 Sinfulmind: Thank you so much for the review! I'm very glad you like it! And awww.. thanks! And haha.. yup! She's a lucky girl And I do have it thought-out.. sometimes I just hit some bumps in the road! I have an ending though! Just need to get there Sienna_McLaggen: Thank you so much for the review! And yes.. Logan has a dark side, but I think we all do to an extent, hehe. And nope, two different stories, two different writers. I don't mind the similarities, I've read it. But thank you SO much for looking out for me! I only post my stories on this site, so if anyone sees them anywhere else, please let me know! I'm soooo paranoid about that. Vixerism: Thanks so much for the review! Gave a bit more background info.. or a lot, I guess Sorry for the long wait! And your story is fine. Thanks for asking I really enjoy your story. Alex: Thanks so much for the review! Here are s'more juicy details NA_Zeno: Thanks so much for the review! And thank you for the compliment. I'm sorry for the long wait! Here it is Pancreas: Thanks so much for the review! And aww.. I'm really glad you like it. I try to write well, but I know some of my sections are a little awkward.. but my running scenes are areas I'm pretty proud of lol. I know her college goal seems pushed aside for now, but it'll be brought up again soon I'm totally just making up my own pack dynamics.. sorta based off of actual wolf packs and tribal stuff. Thanks for waiting! Ch. 12 Kain: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you like it! As for the hunters, yes you will meet them, annndd most likely hate them. Salaphina: Thanks for the review! I know.. I felt bad doing it. Sorry for making you wait so long! Dru: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you like it I guess I did jam a lot in there.. lol Raven: Thanks for the review! I'm sorry for the long wait.. I honestly don't do it on purpose. My life just sucks right now lol I do this as my stress-reliever, and haven't had much time for it. And yay for Cade having a fan.. I have fun with him lol Littlemiss76: Thanks for the review! And it was pretty much her only way out, so she took it. NA_Zero: Thanks for the review!! I've seen you updated, but I haven’t had a chance to read anything yet lol I'm going to try to get to it this week Jenny: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you feel connected to it, it's what I was trying for! And aww.. crazy blood moon fan is awesome! Thank you! Alex: Thanks for the review! Lol that she has.. it's been about a month and a week and a half-ish according to be calculations Ae: Thanks for the review! Sorry to cut into your sleep schedule.. lol I'm reeaaalllyy glad you feel emotionally connected to all the characters. When I first started this I had no idea what a challenge I made myself with so many main characters. It's a lot easier with just two main characters and then secondary characters but because of the nature of the story, they don't really fall into that category. I'll be switching to more of the boy's POVs from here on out. Thanks again for the review! Ch. 13 Aj: Thank you for the review!! Did you mean Mezley? Or the girl at the end? (Since that's Leila, just from the boy's POV) Sorry I know I confused some people.. but if you meant Mezley, rest assured.. she's just a once in a while thing Annnddd.. yes, you nailed it, hehe, you'll have to see what happens. pyonnn: Thank you for the review!! You are so sweet Sorry for the wait! Don't worry.. it may take me a little longer than expected, but I fully intend to finish it. DewHast: Thank you for the review! I fixed it in that last chapter.. I'll have to go back through the others. Lol I'm not sure why I used that word.. I just let my fingers do the story telling at times Kain: Thanks for the review! Haha no worries. I take full responsibility.. didn't make a clear distinction. But nope! She's still the only one in her pack at least! Alex: Thanks for the review! Hehe.. I intended it as a combination of them trying to hide it, and Leila not being observant.. but it's addressed in this chapter! I have a lot of plans for Mezley And you have great insight my friend. Sienna McLaggen: Thanks for the review!! I'm really appreciative of them I'm so happy you like it! And hehe, I like to hear who people prefer. Not getting much Logan love though! lol Jenny: Thanks for the review!! Yay! I'm glad you like it Sorry for the wait, I try to get them as quick as I can Ae: Thanks for the review! And YES! Be my grammar Nazi all you like! I'm terrible with grammar… lol My beta caught those too.. but I had some trouble copying from hotmail and I think I ended up using the draft before she edited on accident. Thanks so much for reading! I'm very glad you like it MrsMonster: Thanks for the review!!! I shall update now in fact.. haha. I saw your review and decided I may as well update what I have… even though I was gonna try to end on a higher note, but I know it's been a while. I'll save the rest for next chapter. I know I'm waaayyy behind on the Wilds.. I actually am stuck on two scenes that I just can't get satisfied with. But it's SOOO nice to hear people are still interested. Be rest assured! I shall get that story done. I have both this one and that one completely mapped out to the end.. I just need to take it out of outline form. Sly: I know you reviewed on The Wilds, but you mentioned you read this one too.. so I thought I'd respond here. Like I said with MrsMonster, I'm just kinda stuck.. but I haven't given up! Your review totally made my day.. I really loved those two stories, they were my first two real attempts at writing a story. Don't worry.. they won't be left in limbo. I just got into this funk with it, and nothing that I was writing seemed any good. I started on Blood Moon trying to get out of that funk.. but then I just ended up distracting myself. If I can just get those next few scenes done, the rest of it will be easy to do.. since I have them fully mapped out. After finals I'll be trying to work on both stories.. I can't promise you a time-frame since I'm not sure myself, but I'll definitely be working to get another chapter up. But THANK YOU so much for reviewing it. I can't tell you how much that means to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted April 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2013 I'm SO sorry for my prolonged absence.. Been extra busy this term, and went out of town for two weeks. I'm working on the next chapter, and it WILL be up by the end of the month. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted April 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 (edited) kain: Thank you for the review!! Hehe.. yuupp, Cade's got tact! And Mezley started out to be kind of a side-charrie.. but I dunno.. Lately I've been making lotsa changes to my notes.. You may or may not be seeing more of her! And yeaahh.. Logan's got a secret. You'll just have to wait and see how it's going to turn out. Need to stop spilling things in my replies! Hehe. Nuki: Thank you for the review!! Aww.. I'm really glad you like it Thank you so much for the compliment... and taking the time to give me a review. It's really really encouraging! I'm sorry for the long delay. Anon: Thank you for the review!! I actually was having some writer's block on the chapter before I started posting the boy's POV. I made a buncha out-line style notes of what was happening on their POV so I could make Leila's depictions as accurate as I could while writing Ch. 2.. then somehow, I just ended up typing it out when I couldn't continue forward with the story because I was stuck. So it wasn't really intended.. my mind just does weird things sometimes. Anyhow! The rest of it is posted I hadn't planned to continue further than that, but I will take requests if there is any particular scenes you wanted to see from their POVs! I'm so sorry for the delay. Alex: Yes.. yes he did Rest assured, you will see more sunken soufflés at a later date! Thank you for the review!! I'm always happy to hear from you! And again.. I'm so sorry for the delay. Jenn: Thank you for the review!! I'm SO happy you like it It means a lot to get reviews, so thank you for taking the time to give me one! I love hearing from new people. And I'm not a male.. lol but I grew up around enough of em. I hope I'm portraying them as realistic as werewolfy brothers can be L8RSBB: Thank you for the review!! Nope! It is indeed not the last chapter.. I'll probably have about 5-7 more I think.. depending on where I end up going with it. So worry not! I have more for you, if I can just find the time to get it out of my brain. I'm not sure about e-mail notifications on AFF. Maybe this board has one? I haven't had a chance to look into it, but if you find out, please let me know! claire: Thank you for the review!! I'm so happy you took the time to give me one It means so much. Please keep them coming! And I'll be adding 17 more pages worth of their POV. Hope you like it! Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted May 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2013 Okay so I know I promised you an update by the end of the month.. but having some SERIOUS issues with it. I'm really not liking it.. sooo I think I'm going to scrap a lot of it and re-work it. I'm sorry for the extra long wait.. but I don't want to post something I'm not happy with again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted May 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2013 (edited) kylee: Thank you for the review!! I'm so glad you took the time to And haha.. I honestly had no idea so many of you would get upset about that o.O But Leila pretty much fell into the pack mindset, so it really doesn't bother her considering they share everything.. lol Initially it did cuz she still felt her situation was temporary. Also, it wasn't really hers per say, it was stolen Kristen: Thank you for the review!! It means a lot! Hehe, I'm very glad you like it! I shall keep trying to get the updates up as quickly as I'm able. Franz: Thank you for the review!! I'm very glad you like it! Thank you for reading I'm working to get the updates up as quick as I can (without sacrificing my writing, haha), sorry about the wait! Sienna_McLaggen: YAY! Always happy to hear from you Thank you for the review!! I'm sooo sorry about the wait! It was a mixture of things, plus some writer's block. Sorry for the short chapter! I'm going to try to give ya a longer one next time, which hopefully will not be long. Alex: Thank you for the review!! Always wonderful to hear from you Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted May 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2013 (edited) Kylee: Thank you for the review!! Hehe, glad you liked the idea Much cuteness awaits! I promise Learia: Thank you for the review!! I'm really happy you take the time to. And aww.. thank you so much for the compliment. It totally made my day! Jenn: Thank you for the review!! I am reallllyyy sorry for the long delays, I wish I could get them up every few days, but it just never works out that way.. lol I'll try to give you snippets here and there instead of waiting to fully lengthen the chapters. Maybe that'll work out a bit better in terms of wait time Elena: Thank you for the review!! I'm SO happy you commented on that! I always wonder how I'm doing in realism terms (I was hoping they'd feel like a family ) And thank you so much for the compliments! They made my day. I'm really glad you like it! And I'm really glad you find Leila likeable. I always wonder about things like that, since she's my lil baby, it's hard to know how others feel. Dark_Flower: Thank you for the review!! I'm sorry it takes so long! I know how frustrating it is when you check and there is no updates. I'm going to try to get them up faster by doing shorter chapters. And I hope I answer some of your questions with this chapter! I'm very glad you like my story.. I do try to balance the sex and plot in each chapter, hehe. Not always easy though! Ashleigh_hunter: Thank you for the review!! And aww.. thank you for the compliment! I'm going to try to update on a more regular schedule with shorter chapters. And YAY! I was hoping there'd be some Logan love I know a mama isn't supposed to have favorites.. but I'll tell ya a secret.. (he's kinda mine too! hehe) Anywho.. thankkkss for taking the time to review! And I'm very glad you like it! And yyaaayy for liking Leila too, and no need to worry.. you'll get some Leila-fighty action. You actually gave me an idea to stray a bit from my notes.. but it seems to be coming along fairly well! I never stray either o.o Hopefully I don't burry myself. Alex: And again.. THANK YOU for always reviewing. You are a real sweet heart for it. And I know.. I feel kinda bad doing it to em! But every story has to have tension! I'll work on something for em though.. Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted June 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2013 Just a little update.. I'm actually working on the Wilds right now. I got a rare bout of inspiration for it and I'm taking advantage.. hopefully it will be done with this chapter by the weekend then I'll start working on the next Blood Moon chapter (it's half-way done), I'm going away from my original notes for Blood moon.. but I hope you guys like the added action I decided to throw in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted June 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 I really need to stop giving myself deadlines, cuz I suck at them. I'm still here, and I'm still working on it! I've been going back and forth between my two stories, but I keep getting stuck. Haven't been in the writing mood lately and it's really hard to force it. I'm sorry for the delay, I'll have it up ASAP. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted June 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2013 UGH! I'm in full blown writer's block now. Been stressed with school and work and home stuff.. it really kills the creativity. I apologize for the delay, I'm going to be trying to write more this weekend, hopefully I'll be over this lil snag by then. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted July 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2013 The writer's block demons.. are being a bitch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted July 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2013 Hey guys.. I'm still here. I haven't given up. I went through a move, and the stuff I've been writing just.. isn't very good. Stress with work and school is high right now, but I'm kinda glad I didn't post, since I've been getting better ideas for the upcoming scenes. I hope it'll be worth the wait.. just need to get over this writer's block, having trouble getting it out of my head into type. Also.. whoever has been rating, thank you! You have made me start working on it again, I know I've kept you waiting, and I'm sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted September 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2013 (edited) Kylee: Sorry for the confusion! Yeah, I'm jumping back and forth between perspectives, so Leila doesn't know about it, but Logan now does. THANK YOU THANK YOU for reviewing! It really does mean the world. Ashleigh_hunter: Haha, yeah.. secrets are no bueno! But might have to wait a bit longer to see angry Leila! I'm SO sorry for the long wait. It's really hard to force it and still keep it decent! THANK YOU SO MUCH for the review! It realllyyy helps keep me going. Alex: THANK YOU my constant reviewer. I'm sooo sorry for the wait, I really have been trying. Rest assured, even if it takes me a while.. this story WILL be finished!! And yes, he does have a warm gooey center And yay! I'm so glad ya liked the lil flashback, hehe.. was wondering how that went over. So don't put me in the old unfinished fic file! I shall finish! I promise. Tagl: THANK YOU for the review!! I'm so glad you like it! And I'm so sorry for the wait, I'll try to do better in the upcoming few chapters. Lay: Thanks for kicking me back into gear! Even though it took me a while Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted October 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2013 (edited) J: Thank you!! I'm very happy you like it And thank you a bunch for the review! I lovvveee love love them! And sorry for making you sad! Franz: Thank you for the review!!! Rest assured! Baby daddy/(s) will be revealed soonish, actually.. once I finish this next bit of action! I promise I won't make ya wait forever. Anon: Hehe yeaahh.. but he's still someone from back home. Even a dick is better than nothing! And THANK YOU for the review!! I was worried there for a moment, thought I mighta lost you! And yeah.. Leila's getting an emotional beat down. Leila isn't exactly letting em in much either, though, at least, not yet. And the awkward relationship thing is kinda what I was going for! They really don't know how to handle it, buuuuttt I do have some solutions for it, you'll just have to wait and see! Elena: Thank you for the review!!! Thank you for your compliments! They are so sweet.. I shall continue to soldier on until the end! Rest assured. And yuupp.. their sleeping arrangements likely suck hehe. MrsMonster: Aww.. I love you too! Thank you a bunch for your review!!! And yeah.. In those first few chapters, especially when she heard her mother during her escape, and after she read the letter.. somewhere inside her she knew, but denial is a very powerful thing. She wouldn't even let the thought cross her mind. As for her reaction, I dunno if you'll like it! But here it is. Alex: Thank you for the review!! And you're very welcome! To be compared to Christmas.. is an honor I shall not take lightly! Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted November 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2013 (edited) MrsMonster: Thank you for your review! It means SO much! And sorry.. yeah she's being rather foolish. Sorry for the delay! I'm going to try to get another chapter up by the end of the week. Franz: Thank you for the review!! I appreciate them so much! I know she's sad I was kinda sad doing it to her. Joan: Thank you for your review!! I'm sorry it's taking so long! Lol but they'll come eventually! My development of the story has changed a few times. Ann: Thanks for the review!! No no.. YOU rock my friend Diamond: Haha.. when I first read your review and saw the 'ugh' you had my worried! Lol Thank you for your review!! And sorry for the lengthy waits. I wish I was faster! And aww.. thank you so much for the compliment it means so much. Alex: Thank you for the review!! Hehe, I almost scrapped her actually, but I decided to stay true to my original notes! I keep getting wishy washy, but I think it's turning out okay Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted November 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 (edited) ae: THANK YOU for reviewing! I'm super glad you liked it!! And I hope this new pack meets your standards! Probably be seeing more of vampys too Though I think I might make a spin off with Niki since she was actually a rp charrie of mine. Alex: THANK YOU for the review! Always LOVE to hear from you lol and shhh.. you are getting ahead of me a bit! nightwillows: THANK YOU for the review! Here's s'more! Della: THANK YOU soooo much for the review! You have no idea how happy it makes me! And yay! I was actually wondering how their relationship dynamic was perceived. And yes.. that she is, and this won't be the last time! I feel kinda mean.. lol Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted November 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 (edited) Anon: THANK YOU for the review! I know it may seem weird, but with their mating habits, it's almost wise for them to have some sort of arrangement prior, especially in their situation out there! Not that Leila really sees it that way, especially since she knows what it feels like to be forced into an arranged coupling. But in their normal pack society, Alpha pairings are usually arranged early on. But other then that, you'll have to wait and see what happens! If I say anything else, I may spoil some stuff but you are on the right track my friend. Though it has to get worse before it gets better.. hehe. Della: THANK YOU for the review! It really means a lot to hear from you! I know it's bad now.. and about to get worse! Lol just hang in there.. it'll get better. Alex: THANK YOU for the review! I actually didn't have anything planned for revealing much about her father.. but now that you've shown interest, I'll figure out a way to weave some bits about him into their conversation Hehe.. you'll have to wait a bit longer to see reactions. And yup! You are right, all five of her mates would need to be killed off for all her bonds to break, and for her to be able to make another with someone else to effectively steal her. And no it's not the first time by far! It's happened in the past, quite a lot in the olden days, especially in packs who didn't have enough females. but in modern times, it's more or less taboo, so it's never talked about. How the mating bond works is as thus; The first mating bond is strongest, however, the bond's strength also depends on emotional attachment. For instance.. if a female is forced into a bond against her will, through an arranged coupling or rape, the bond will be there, but not as strong. The second bond would be weaker, but most females just wouldn't even have the desire to re mate, because they have the 'mate for life' attitude, and if they were attached to their first mate, it'd be even harder to re-establish a second bond. A second bond DOES have the potential to be stronger then a first, however, if the second mate is one that the female has an emotional attachment to and her first wasn't, but not as strong as it would have been if her love would have been the first. If that makes sense lol. Leila's mother and father loved each other prior to going into their matehood, so her bond was as strong as any could be. Mezley is on her second bond, but she was forced into it.. which is why it's so weak and nearly non-existent (So much so, Cade thought it could be her third). If she were to make a third, with an emotional attachment, she would be able to re-establish a decent mating bond. But as a rule, third and fourth bonds aren't usually much of anything at all. The first is the primary one that matters, followed close behind by the second. And because it's kind of hard to introduce them all and keep the flow of writing, I'll give you some info on the French pack.. it'll take me a while to initiate them all, but for now, here's an overview Geoffrey (66) - Alpha - Mate to Marion Marion (49) - Alpha - Sister to Julian (litter mate) Julian (49) - Brother to Marion (litter mate) Aldrick (63) - Brother to Geoffrey Christophe (55) - Marion and Julian's cousin Marius (28) - Geoffrey and Marion's son Cedric (26) - Christophe's son (litter mate to Vince) Vincent (26) - Christophe's son (litter mate to Ced) Thibault (23) - Julien's son Serge (21) - Julien's son Treves (19) - Aldrick's son Mathieu (18) - Geoffrey and Marion's son Andre (6) - Geoffrey and Marion's son Renault (4) - Geoffrey and Marion's son Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted December 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 I'm here.. bit stuck though. I know what I want to happen, but I can't seem to decide on HOW I want it to happen. I've been working some on the Wilds while I try to get over this road block. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted January 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 Welp.. I've done it. Graduated nursing school! That last term was rough.. but I passed my exit exam this week and now I can breath. So I shall be working on those chapters! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted February 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2014 Candigirl: THANK YOU for the review! It totally made my day I'm sorry I'm so slow, I really do try to keep on a schedule but I'm kind of a slow writer.. usually takes me a while to get things how I want them. Plus, I have a very busy life.. I work two jobs and was in school. And awww.. thank you for the compliment! It made me happy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted March 29, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2014 (edited) Alex: Thank you for the review!! And I'm glad you liked the chapter! And thank you for the congrats! It was a loonngg difficult road. I'm so happy it's done with! Weirdly enough though.. between all the NCLEX prep, work and family stuff I have been catching up on (didn't have much of a life for two years) I feel like I have LESS time now. I'll try to get the chapters out faster! Merely Truth: Aww a French mama! Thank you for the review!! Please let me know if I butcher any of the French.. I am trying very hard to do the language justice! (The beautiful language that it is! Wish I took it!) I'm glad you like my story Della: Thank you for your review!! Sorry for the long wait… and yes, yes they are. Again sorry about the cliffhanger! I hope you like this chapter. And rest assured, everything will be wrapped up with a nice lil ribbon when I finally do get to the end! But that probably won't be for a while.. the longer I take developing the chapters.. I keep getting new ideas. I think it's for the better though! Edited March 29, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted May 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 (edited) Alex: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!! You shall see it, and you shall see it very soon! Sorry for the long wait.. this chapter was an odd one I had to power through. Wasn't quite sure how I wanted it to go. And you make a very good point my friend J. I think you are thinking of Leila's suggestion to build one in the area they often don't go into and get some renters, but nope.. just their little ol lighthouse for now. Flyingbando: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! It is! Scary being out in the working world though.. haha. Especially now, sucky time to graduate for my profession considering nurses are getting laid off right now, not hired. Hopefully I can focus on getting this story done in a more reasonable time frame! But I tend to go all over on tangents with my thoughts. Della: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! Yeah I couldn’t do that.. he's my favorite! haha. And it's gonna be interesting! I try not to do cliffhangers, but half the time it just ends up being a good stopping point. Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted June 29, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 (edited) ramblingrobin: THANK YOU for the review! I'm extremely glad you liked it! And thank you for the compliment I'll be getting more chapters out as soon as I can! Anshell: THANK YOU for the review! It means so much! There was very little Logan love in the beginning! lol I know he's a bit stiff now, but maybe he'll grow on you in the chapters to come I actually like Marion a lot too.. thinking of making a spin off story after I complete this one (I know it's taking a while!) of her life, since hers is kind of interesting. I have it all mapped out! As for the POV chapters, did you mean switching POVs more in the upcoming chapters? Or do you want me to go back and show previous chapters from another POV? I actually have a lot of POV jumping in my cut scenes. I'll take requests if you want to see anything in particular! Della: THANK YOU for the review! You constant reviews mean so much Thank you thank you! And yes it certainly has! Edited July 24, 2014 by Fhelly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted July 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2014 FRUSTRATED! To the max.. I was nearly finished with Chapter 27, and I got it just the way I wanted with just a few things left to do.. so I went to sleep. Today while at work, I decided to open it and work on the final bit while on my break.. and it's giving me an error, the dreaded 'corrupted' error. I've spent the last two hours trying to recover it with no luck. The ONE site that seems to work on it wants a ridiculous amount of money for the full recover.. but I was able to get some pieces of it at least from the demo. Ten pages down the drain. I'm starting over Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted July 25, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2014 Anatyne: THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING! And I'm very happy you like my story! I know how you feel.. even though I'm the writer I kinda feel guilty and sorry for my characters sometimes.. lol And I'm glad ya still like Leila despite her faults, for she has many! But she's also still young, and has a lot to learn about life. She was also pretty sheltered and spoiled at home when it came to certain things. As for the sexy stuff.. I'll be honest. I was kind of glad for the break from it. It's very hard when a story goes long to keep those scenes actually decent. You kind of use all your tricks in earlier stuff then have nothing to offer for new scenes. It's a very awful dilemma of mine.. but rest assured, they will be back! Hopefully up to your standards. As for how this is going to end, yunno.. I am kind of all over the place now. I used to have a very structured little time-line, but my brain lately isn't following it. So your guess is as good as mine at this point where I end up! Sarah: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW! Can't tell you how much reviews mean to me, and I'm very glad you like my story! And that my strange imagination brings you entertainment! I'm hoping to never have that corrupty problem again. It was pretty frustrating, I was scared it would kill my writing libido.. but actually, in a way I got something good out of it. That week delay gave me a good idea for how I wanted something to play out in the next chapter, way better then my first idea. So all is well that ends well! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhelly Posted August 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2014 Angel: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! I'm glad you like Vivian! I wasn't going to post those scenes.. but I figured why not! I wrote em.. eventually I thought I might get around to making a companion story with Giles, Mya and Vivian, but that's kind of doubtful since I have so many projects going.. so little glimpses into their past life will have to do. I think I might post the ones with Teo and Sera and Geoffrey and Marion (but.. obviously, those will be sad!) sometime later in the story too. It's hard to have a character tell a story in dialogue and give it justice, at least to the way I have it in my head. Sarah: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! It means so much! I love baby Cade.. just wanna eat him up lol. I'm glad ya like Vivian too, I wanted her story told before she entered the main story, since the boys' didn't know what happened all the time, and obviously, you hear mostly from Logan whose view of her is one-sided. I think I might have one more chapter involving her sometime later too... depending on how much inspiration I have to write out the scenes in my head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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