Melrick

Aww come on, come for a visit!  You’ve got a good 50/50 chance of surviving!  Those are some fine odds!

Aww come on, come for a visit!  You’ve got a good 50/50 chance of surviving!  Those are some fine odds!

Aww come on, come for a visit!  You’ve got a good 50/50 chance of surviving!  Those are some fine odds!

With those odds, I’ll be sure to increase my life insurance policy first! xD

Aww come on, come for a visit!  You’ve got a good 50/50 chance of surviving!  Those are some fine odds!

https://archiveofourown.org/works/9287447/chapters/21047156

When The Devil Takes Hold
Dancing Flames
Point Of No Return

When The Devil Takes Hold
Dancing Flames
Point Of No Return

When The Devil Takes Hold
Dancing Flames
Point Of No Return

Name is now changed. :-)

And if it doesn’t work for that story, you can use it for a biography of Gene Simmons!

Yeah, he was awesome! Pretty sure he took off with my wallet though… or my soul… Either way, something feels a little light. Hey, you look a little familiar...

Authors: PippyChick and Melrick
Title: Awakenings
Summary: Ray moves to an Australian country town to get away from his old life, and becoming a school bus driver is about as far away as he can imagine. His first passenger, Nina, takes him even further away.
Feedback: Yes, as always.
Fandom: Original
Pairing: N/A
Warnings: AFFO, AgePlay, Anal, Fingering, HJ, MF, Minor2, Oral
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Dying for the Devil, that’s a damn fine title for a story.   Must have been a freaking genius that came up with that title! ;-)

Regarding the daddy stuff, that’s no problem!  It’s just that we’ve both come across reviewers that will read something in a story that they hate and complain about, yet will keep reading future chapters and continue to complain about it, and it just leaves you scratching your head wondering why the hell they’re continuing to read something they don’t like. lol
And no, no offence taken!  I just thought I’d explain that because many people – including a surprising number of writers – really don’t get that concept.  So that wasn’t just for you but for anybody else reading that post who might not quite grasp that people can (and should) write for themselves first, even if that limits the number of readers you’ll get.  It’s not like we’re professional authors that feel the need to write to a target audience, after all, so we’re free to do as we wish.  One bonus of not being published authors, I guess!  Not becoming rich and famous authors is the downside though. ;-)
Anyway, we do appreciate the fact that you’re a diligent reader and reviewer!  Not many people out there that are both, that’s for sure!
 

Thanks again for your review!
Right off the bat, I’d like to point out that if the daddy part bothered you then we wonder how worthwhile it would be for you to keep reading, since there’s going to be plenty more of that to come over the following chapters, many of which we’ve already written, and right to the very end, which we haven’t written yet.  We just thought we’d warn you to give you a more informed decision, and to cut off any ‘well that really turned me off!’ complaints, because… well, you were warned.   Anyway, it’s entirely up to you, of course! 
Also, I just thought I’d give you a bit of an insight into the reasons behind us writing this story.  We wanted to write something that really appealed to the both of us, something that we would really enjoy writing and exploring, and that’s very much what we came up with.  We love the story and we each love both of the characters – so much so that it’ll be a bit of a wrench when we have to leave them behind.  We decided to upload it as well since maybe others might also enjoy reading it, but it’s first and foremost for us two.  But we’re both firm believers in writing to appeal to ourselves first anyway, which we feel every writer should do! 

http://www.ladbible.com/news/animals-aussie-couple-find-huntsman-spider-eating-pygmy-possum-20190617
That’s not a sight you want to see.

Hey, @InBrightestDay and thank you so much!
Thank you for reading, even if it is out of your comfort zone. I’m entirely responsible for Nina’s age, and it’s interesting to think back and imagine what she would be thinking and feeling. But we wanted to try and write about two characters first and foremost, so if you do stick with it, be prepared for this to go a lot deeper.
As for Ray, he absolutely does realise, and I think ordinarily nothing would happen here. But this is fiction, so we are just having a little fun as the Gods of this world, and watching what unfolds, so I’m really happy that it seems to be just happening, rather than being forced. I hope you will root for Ray and Nina by the end. Together, they are more than their age difference

In case anyone is confused, someone made a request for a copy of the story to be sent to them, that post was hidden and I then deleted it, as I will with all such requests.

Thank you so much, Melrick
I really love that piece of music and the character of the duet. I hope I wrote something to do it justice.

For They Bounce
I wrote that story right after my dad died of lung cancer, so there were a lot of emotions going around my head at the time.  I have to say, it’s perhaps one of the favourite things I’ve written, even though it’s so short.  Thank you for reading and reviewing. 

If you have a question then you need to start your own thread.

For Drawn Together
I’m very happy to hear you describe the story as realistic, because that’s what I was doing my best to achieve.  I don’t think gooey romance is really your thing too much, so i’m glad you were still able to come along for the ride. lol  I’m really glad that you read the whole thing and enjoyed it so much.  That makes me very happy!  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

For Drawn Together
The Slash was pretty much a spur of the moment decision, like much of this story.  I’m surprised at how much of this feels like it largely wrote itself.  Definitely not my usual style of writing at all.  Thanks very much for reviewing! 

For Drawn Together
Thank you!  I’m glad you’re enjoying it all so much.