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Odd thought...did the castaways ever know what the Professor's real name was? I suddenly have this idea,Gilligan's Island of Professor Moreau... Instead of making animals more like people...what if he decided their only chance for survival was to make the people more like tropical jungle animals.... Just to keep them healthy while he perfected changing Skipper into a porpoise to go 'get help.'

But....it's making FUN of the guy making the comment! That guy turns on MTV and concludes anyone dressing like an 80's rock star must be gay...and getting chicks for free, which is odd, but bigots is seldom known for well-thought-out views. This song is neither insensitive towards gays nor pro-homosexual-agenda. It's anti-(guys who use 'faggot' derisively with their head up their ass). A sad but biting commentary on the generation JUST prior to my own, that thought MTV was nothing but fags and girls in lingerie. THere was more to it! I think. Explosions. In slow motion. And psychedelic backgrounds as people danced. In slow motion.

I think this might be more of what you're looking for? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103216

A friend of mine in high school was fond of some wrap-around pants. The front and back panel were sewn together on the inseam but not on the outside of the leg. I'm not sure if those are what you're describing inthe OP. She put the back panel on first, where it covered her from back pocket to back pocket, as it were. Then she tied straps around the front of her belly to hold it in place. She then pulled the front panel between her legs to wrap around the front. The straps went all the way around the back, crossed at her tailbone, then tied in front like the back straps. She didn't like knots at her back because she had a really nice ass she didn't want to distract from, and she didn't want anyone tempted to tug on them... The material of each leg was long enough to fully wrap around her legs. She mentioned maybe adding velcro at the ankles in cold weather but she graduated at mid-semester and i never saw her or those pants again. Anyway, these would seem to be donned much like wearing a saddle. Sliding up under the tail, wrapping around the legs without having to deal with the paws at all. I would probably put shoulder straps like suspenders from either side of the tail to attach to the front, and a belt to hold the top wraps tight, but that's me.

Well, sure. In my stories, there's a part of me in each and every character. But it's not self insertion. I think the technical term would be 'unavoidable.'But if you're writing and you start to worry that someone may think your character is SI, it may be worth reviewing. Maybe your subconscious or your muse is trying to tell you something. Don't be afraid to count traits. "Like me...not like me...like me...like me...identifiable as me from orbit...not like me...." But it's not a crime. Hell, Self Insertion isn't criminal. But at the level of Mary Sue, it starts to look like masturbating...which is frowned upon in public venues... Zacktly! Just make sure your character is believable. IF you have that down, no one even notices if it's Self Insertion.

I've drawn from life a lot, and used 'self insertion' only twice. For a lot of story details, people who know me could point to the scene or the dialogue and say: "I know where you got that!" or they might point to a character and say: "HE's a lot like you." Well, we write what we know. None of my characters are first-person SEALS because i don't know enough to support that. Many work in a cubicle. But then, many people who are not me work in corporate environments. For one of the SI's, i went full bore Marty Stu on purpose. There just wasn't a way or a reason to put a pretend layer of separation. No way to move the details enough to make it not me and still have a story. The second SI was a pun...

Hell, sometimes i reread stuff the next morning and it doesn't sound like me. I think that when i really get in the zone, there's a different part of my brain that comes into play. Or i exercise the mind differently, not sure what. But I wouldn't rewrite it just to match my current style. Maybe to correct some basic errors?

Well, think of Sky High. It was deconstruction. After years of comic book heroes doing their thing, someone asks: Hey? If there are that many meta humans, would they be in public school or something more for their unique natures? They played with it a bit, referring to themselves with 'my supervillain speech' and such. But it's a natural progression. Everyone already has a pretty firm grasp on side kicks and heroes, villains, action sequences and secret identities. So playing further in the field can be captivating, rather than just holding the genre up to a bright light and listing the problems or the illogical natures. My madscientist fics tend to ask questions like: If madscientists are real, what sort of courses would they have taken in college? How do they select the Sexy Lab Assistant? Is her sexiness aimed at the Mad's interests or the likely interests of the Hero who'll be knocking at the door some day? HOpefully i don't take it too much into the theoretical, so that, as stated above, there's still a story in the story. But still, the logical progression of a setting, taking it as real and asking whathappens outside the scenes we see on the TV, that's a great source for fanfic.

I have written stories that squicked me out. They were just so right for the story i had to include them. The one where Smurfette seduces Gargamel would be the first thing that comes to mind... Eugh.

People often have a rather strong negative reaction to sex scenes with characters they do not find physically attractive. All too many tend to assume that anything outside of their range for acceptable mates is going to be gross (be it age, gender, species...). As a writer, if you think the sex is justified by the character interaction, then have at it. If you want to have them play connect the dots with their liver spots or cover their walkers with fetish latex sheaths, or sensuously trade dentures, more power to you. Or, maybe, just treat them like humans that have attractions for others and let nature take it's course. It's your story, write what you're comfortable with. But you could consider using headlines and scroll instructions. I tend to have the opposite problem. I write for a few very specific fetishes. They don't care about character development or dialogue or, you know, story. They want to jump to the sex. So on the fetish boards, i tend to interrupt the story with SCHMEX BEGINS HERE! warnings, so they can scroll down and find it. Then SCHMEX IS OVER until NEXT SCENE or PAGE SEVEN so they won't accidentally read any real, you know, story content they find so offensive. You could post "OLD PEOPLE ENJOY LIFE STARTING AT TIME NOW" so they can skip the offensities, then BACK TO STORY STARTING HERE so they'll know where to scroll down to. True, it does look like you're making fun of people with limited imaginations and demanding needs, but the good news is that they're rarely going to notice anything besides their focal point.

Well, thank you. But what are you after? Something, a hook to hang the story on...

I dunno how 'well done....' Star Trek: Next Gen on Crack, a story between the Naked Now and whatever the next episode was http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095532

Well, damn. I just wrote one about abortion... What sort of moral dilemas do you think ARE appropriate?

I think 'the foreign' or 'the strange' would be a better definition than foreignERS. The Strange covers a lot of territory and gaps in familiarity. I mentioned a xenophilic story on another forum. I was thinking of sex with aliens that don't breathe oxygen, they all thought i was talking about Italians. I don't often get the chance to call those people vanilla, but this was certainly one chance.

Not quite fitting for the challenge, but i do already have a fic that includes abby/ziva http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091146

In my latest story effort, i've got some actors/actresses in mind for the characters. I took the first and last syllable of their names and made the characters. So the one that looks like Joyce DeWitt in my head is Joyitt, Renee Tenison is Renson and so on. Of course, this gave me a maid servant with the incredibly lady-like name of 'Patton,' but there you go. You can always just flip through a phone book, pick names at random and use the first syllable of each as half of a name.

Ahem: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097353 http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600083933 and sorta kinda: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091374

Okay. And, don't know. And, have you seen my Island of Dr. Moreau chapter in Monster's Mate: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544187217 ?

Fell is evil, dark, malevolent. Trolls live in fell swamps; orcs march from fell castles, and so on. To the mouse, the eagle swooping down to snatch his prey is pretty fell.

You misspelled 'bestiality.' It's a common mistake. It's even spelled wrong on the pull down menu for the site.

Is that the best interpretation of the word for a story code? TO me, the word means more 'sex with the strange' or 'sex with the unknown.' Aliens would certainly qualify, but i use it for stories with schmexing up lamia, centaurs, Naga, sphinx, et and cetera. Or is there a better word for mounting a human/critter hybrid? Their intelligence, i think, disqualifies them as bestiality. They're part human, part animal, it's not quite anthropomorphizing an animal into something human-like. And the Naga certainly isn't furry.... Just a thought, but could we either expand the Xeno definition or maybe add a warning code like: Hybrid: Sex with human/animal mixes (mermaids)

I guess i do have a content code request for 'abortion,' please. I have an idea for a Star Trek: Next Gen fic that resolves around that issue.

Well, was half joking, but half serious....like always. I dunno, though. Would 'abortion' be too specific? Or would a more general 'Birth Control Issues' be more useful?

Now, now. We certainly don't want to write fics for the express purpose of antagonizing a member of AFF. I think there's a rule somewhere....On the other hand, the whim to petition for an Abortion subsection...people can take responsibility for their own offense. Is there an abortion story code? When i was in the Navy, they pushed donations to the Combined Federal Campaign, the military version of united Way. I donated about $400 one year. The Commanding Officer made a big speech about how cool it was that everyone could donate to charities they found worthwhile. The ten biggest donors got called up on stage. CO went down the line, asking everyone who they donated to. I was the third. I gave to NARAL. I got as far as 'National Abortion Ri-' and he took away the microphone. Didn't ask anyone else who they donated to. Cut the ceremony short and we all left.

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