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yeah, i was going to use him as an example, but it lets him keep his hand visible so i thought, need a better example.

like this kinda, but no technology https://www.slashgear.com/wolverine-claw-glove-is-activated-by-flexing-muscles-27385469/

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTVjHDjLXG0KVkQ-PNnT-4754FipppWz1eeGYca0D0j4DHhnPRo but with an armoured fore-arm in out version

like the golden tiger claws rom xaolin showdown, though those are good as well

i figure. that could work. or a claw-gauntlet.

yes, in fact they showed her following proper gun safety down to the details in every following episode. gargoyles was great writing

if we go the paladin route for eliza. i mean she WAS quite the marksman. or maybe she has a pistol like zarina

hmmm… that does seem good, but we could have tauri half-heatedly trying to play along with the archery discussion. or snow actually learn it. arre there any other archers? rapunzel and anna seem like they’d try, and cassandra probably knows archery

oh, and grimhilde could comment that the light girl (snow) he keeps running into is probably a stray like the others, for the irony of it. probably while insulting her for the gnome thing.

If you do wind up doing a second chapter, this might be an idea. The girls are using the hot-tub but here someone coming. they close it off, with them inside, and the boys slowly leave, leaving only ron. bonnie can;t wait and keeps going at kim, who tries to keep quiet, enjoying doing it where they might be discovered, but eventually they make a sound and ron hears. so they drag him into it. shego could also be a participant.

no, likely because of his face. well, he could adopt ingrid after. it’s a good running gag, and if we wait to reveal who ingrid is she makes a good exception. plus having bonded with the others it makes some nice potential for interactions once she, and they, learn what she did. though i wouldn’t have her remember her sister right away, she probably didn’t know what happened and her children would be the bigger priority.

how about this? Idunna has to leave on the ship and have her accident, so she should probably be the one to wash up at the tower (probably with ariel’s help), but we can still have Ingrid become a hermit and helga marrying the duke. she could be egging him on, trying to take back what’s ‘hers’. I’d have Ingrid be a late-game introduction though, like on the way back to save elsa. hint at her a bunch though ingrid and idunna could bond over their exiles Aza nudity is hilarious. maybe the orcs consider warpaint a kind of clothing (hence the stripes). we could also have hiccup struggle to comprhend the battle strategy until he realises he can’t look at her so he can’t fight. also, fun fact, the celts did something similar, so maybe merida has similar ideas

or, she ran away and became a hermit, and was captured by the empire when they came. elsa ran away inspired by the stories of the ‘witch’ but didn’t think she was real. also, given she’s immune to col and probably doesn’t have a tailor, what if she’s a snow-nudist?

while this is a workable idea, we don’t have a lot of character to work with for ingrid, and idunna is a lot less sympathetic here, plus she wouldn’t bond with elsa so much and ingrid wouldn;t have the maternal experience idunna does. what if ingrid ran away like elsa did, and comes back after seeing elsa’s castle? then the sisters bond again.

this it? https://dinmoney.deviantart.com/art/Fem-Azog-the-Defiler-478117905 plus it would be a bit off-putting if hiccup was okay with cannibalism

thanks, i went looking for such a thing and couldn’t find it

well the minions aren’t exactly clever, so oculdn’t teach him that much, and there aren’t too many sentients around the castle. plus the sorceresses would have to avoid SOME traumas. and just because something’s ‘normal’ doesn;t make it appealing, or any less disturbing I mostly meant living people and babies, but yeah, that too.

and hiccup’s ire. he DEFINITLY cannot. you could have him repeatedly have to draw lines at what gets carried away for food

and yeah, you;d be surprised what peoples can forget. In this version it’s not so much ‘instinctual’ as a form of tribal ritual/magic, so forgetting it makes a bit more sense, particularly if it was carried out by shamans

The gist idea was that maleficent turned toothless human to be a friend for hiccup and they wound up falling in love, but when he set out she turned her back into a dragon to protect him and keep him safe with the reward that if she managed, toothless would be able to change at will. when hiccup found out his best friend and first love had always been with him he asked her to marry him. I could find the post if you like, you said it was a good idea. Pardon me for suggesting this, i really don’t want to be rude, but we both seem to forget things, so it might be a good idea to go back and re-read the chat I like those two suggestions, and to make it work even better, what if hiccup entered the tower through the minion hives after it got taken over? i’d suggest individual hive connected via tunnels, since they seem to follow him around. but the minions squabble and kick each other out of their own hives.

true, but that would derail the ‘malefient’s gift to toothless’ plotline idea. but we can work with that. what if it was ‘forgotten knowledge’ and valka uncovered it and shared it with her dragons, similar to how she knew more than hiccup in the films. she uncovered the ancient secret, and hiccup helps her share it with the rest of the dragons under his rule. hmmm… also remember ho is uggested toothless be the one to release her? what what if she shoes up a few times, but TOOTHLESS, not hiccup is the one to encounter her, so she hears about hiccup that way and plants the idea in cloudjumper’s head. plus she builds respect for her future queen/lover/daughter-in-law

okay, but i do feel that she could have been useful to have appear early a few times. you remember the jotaan prisoner idea? it’s okay if you din;t want that, but it could be useful for hiccup/toothless devlopment and help explain her bond one thing we have to include though, is a way for cloudjumper to be a ‘dragon girl’

okay. thank you anyway

oh, i meant our ideas in this story

Can i ask what you think of our other ideas? no rush, at your own pace