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  1. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey everyone! I just posted the latest chapter of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular. Our heroine draws closer to fully realizing the depths of depravity she’ll sink to in her search for cock and cum when she meets the mysterious proprietor of the Hole in the Wall. Please enjoy and let me know what you think! I plan to get back to BDH very soon and hope that I can finish and have it up by the end of July <fingers crossed> I wanted to take a quick second to say thanks again to everyone who has voted in the new poll, which I’ll repost to give people who haven’t yet seen it another opportunity to do so. Then I’ll address a few comments. Remember please chose once for each category: Ok on to you guys: ArcherNexus: I’m very glad my story could introduce you to Ariana Grande, that lovely, sexy, little diva. She is incredibly hot , but don’t thank me for her inclusion, that you owe to the fans. She was the winner of my first fan selection poll. (Although if I’m being honest, she was on my list before she won that vote ). Now, on to your comment about one girl who “never really consents.” Here is my humble opinion on that subject. I think you could make a pretty great case for basically everyone but Emma, Taylor and Chloe being in that boat. While they do all participate, and they do all get off on the sex they’re having, that certainly doesn’t mean they wouldn’t leave if given the chance. As you said, they probably don’t want to participate, but they have to in order to avoid punishment. But that doesn’t mean they want it. I try to write the story in the context that you guys ( the readers) never truly know who has given in. True, occasionally you get a line like “Margot thinks she might not ever want to leave this place,” but to me, that raises just as many questions as it answers, especially in her case. It is obvious Margot doesn’t like the way the girls are treated, she obviously objects to many of Alex’s methods...but what choice does she have? When they fuck, she gets off, but I think that speaks just as much to Alex’s skill as a lover than Margot’s desire to stay in the harem. Over time, fucking Alex and getting off on it is bound to screw with her mind. After all, he treats HER well and does a good job justifying all the punishments he’s administered. I guess, I look at it this way: Hypothetically. A happily married man whose wife is smoking hot and who has two children he loves is kidnapped by a super hot crazy as fuck super model. He wants to get home to his family to the life he loves, but hes in a situation where he’s forced to fuck the model or get raped up the ass by guards with huge pricks… Do you think he’s not (as a heterosexual man) going to get off when he fucks this model… Its the same thing here. All of these celebrities enjoy sex with men… the fact that they would rather be somewhere else is of little consequence when a well-build attractive man is making good and goddamn sure he’s giving them the dick in a way that gets them off….Of course their bodies respond, its only natural. Also glad you liked the writing and that I convinced you as to Emma’s convictions . Finally, as to the “happily ever after,” I can’t comment, obviously, spoilers. But I will say this. I know exactly how the story is going to end. (I’m also planning on a rough time line of around 50 chapters We’ll see how well that works out lol). Juan: Thanks! Ever since the dragon print count on BDH started to climb, 100k had been a goal of mine. I still can’t believe I finally got there! Kitty Ariana….what can I say about this….hmmmm…. meow…. I guess not much else without spoilers lol….I do agree that it is an interesting fetish which isn’t touched upon too much in main stream erotic lit, of course this story is far far away from mainstream lol…. Also, glad you enjoyed the Taylor bits and the way her character has developed. It’s interesting how much people have enjoyed my version of Taylor. When I first decided to include her in BDH it was mostly because she was a celeb that would bring more readers to my story, than because I was a big fan. But since bringing her in, I’ve actually become a bit of a fan of Taylor and I’ve found I find her more attractive than I ever did before. (Not that I found her unattractive, she just wouldn’t have been at the top of my list before I started this). I can’t say who she’ll be paired up with in the near future (again spoilers) but I do have some plans in motion for her. Lastly, thanks for voting, and I’ve already got some ideas brewing. On a side note, its interesting to see who is pulling out to early leads in the first two categories, and I honestly thought some of the other scenarios would have seen SOME sort of response. 5 was honestly my least favorite of those I listed… But it should be fun to see how it plays out, assuming it ends up winning. Bill Friese: 1) See the ArcherNexus response. 2) Interesting idea. I can’t say how it will end, but again I do know and I have a rough time line. Niveral: Of course I won’t get mad at you for not liking the chapter. You’re entitled to your own opinion, and not everyone is going to like everything that happens. As to the Emma Cara scene, I felt it was important for those two to have a long conversation, one you guys needed to see, as I build up to the next thing between them. If Cara just started trusting Emma without seeing that scene, especially given what is coming up for them, it would be very unrealistic and I think most people would see it as coming out of nowhere. I guess I sort of understand why you’d be neutral about Taylor’s punishment as its kind of hard to “get into it” if you will… But I also think its pretty hot in its own way. Ariana’s thing is about to get VERY interesting…. I am Batman: Good to hear from you again! Glad you’ve been following along and that hopefully you’re still enjoying the story. I can’t say too much more about your other comments other than to say keep reading… Thanks for coming back and making more comments, please come again soon! Well: Glad you liked the Taylor scene… I did too, it was a lot of fun to write. JimmyTheWP: I literally laughed out loud at your comment! Good work! Thanks for voting, and I can’t wait to work on the poll once the results are in. Ok guys, that’s about it for me. Till next time, -Mal
  2. Chapter 3 is here. Our heroine’s journey of self-discovery continues as she meets the mysterious proprietor of the Hole in the Wall.
  3. Mal

    The Unreviewed

    Rape is a trigger tag, one that can gain you a good deal of readers due to the fact that fiction is the only way fans of this fetish can legally experience it. However, I feel that it is also a tag one absolutely must include in any circumstance which is even borderline (i.e. Coercion, Blackmail, DubCon (which to me is just a bullshit way of trying to make rape sound less rapey...) and even NC/Con (where a non-consenting individual becomes consenting) should most likely include the rape tag. Because rape is such a traumatic event, something that can leave a survivor of it scarred for the rest of their life, the tag can and should be used when there is any dubious content around consent. To me, as a writer of such fiction, i know I don’t want someone, especially someone who has experienced it, accidentally stumbling into a story with rape content. That, to me, is one of my greatest fears as a writer. I might bring that subject to life and fantasize about it, in a fictional sense, but to people who have experienced it, it is not a subject to handle lightly it is something we must respect at the utmost level and do everything in our power to warn away those who have an aversion to such things. In my stories, there is usually very little doubt about when the rape tag is needed, but its my philosophy is that its better to include it and warn away someone who might be reminded of a traumatic experience than to not have it and gain a few dragon prints. I’m not sure how a Christian student could save Luzurial from her fate at the hands of Eparlegna…. unless he also happened to be some badass Witcher or an archmage or something...but I have a feeling both of those are against the rules of being Christian anyway… lol… I think its hilarious picturing some IT tech at a Christian University scanning browser histories, especially in this day and age, when you know every 18 and 19 year old boy in every dorm is streaming Pornhub like 24/7 lol…. You can picture them bent over their computer screens, brows dripping in sweat and thinking what the hell has this world come to… I’ve read a several of your stories…. come to think of it, I think I’ve been a bit hypocritical since I never left you a review <ducks> but I’ve thoroughly enjoyed everything I’ve read so I really don’t think you’re giving yourself enough credit. As to going back and looking over past work, that to me is always cringe worthy. I’ve on occasion re-read some of my earliest chapters of Billion Dollar Harem, my first serious attempt at fan-fiction, and I think “oh god, why did I do this… or what the hell was I thinking...” So I completely understand that. I feel like I should go back and re-work them but then I also think well how different would the story be if I went back and changed something that happened 30 chapters ago. In then end I feel its better to just move on to the next thing and try not to think about it. I can’t say I completely understand people’s aversion to celeb fiction (or any fiction which has had a character portrayed by an actor), since to me it isn’t real. As our disclaimer’s loudly announce, it is fiction. Part of writing and reading is parsing what is real from what isn’t and I just don’t understand not being able to separate those things. But I do really appreciate the offer the offer. I have been considering what I might do after Billion Dollar Harem is over. My two options at this point are 1) a Hogwarts Harem story set in an alternate version of the Harry Potter universe, and 2) doing some originals, which I’d practice on first by posting some stories here, before I then move on to writing stories that I’d try to market on Amazon. The problem with 1 is simply the proliferation of HP fiction and the propensity for such work to get lost in the veritable hurricane of such works. The problem with 2 is I’d have to write much tamer work if I ever hoped to make money with writing it.
  4. Mal

    The Unreviewed

    Hey, thanks for responding to my query. I guess first off, I definitely think you’re right about having a thread dedicated to the story taking away from reviews. But I guess it still kind of bugs me that my other stories have no reviews despite having what I’d consider a decent dragon print count. It does kind of make me wonder though if you’re right about Oneshots getting less reviews due to the fact that the reviewer knows there won’t be another chapter. I’m not sure, however, that as far as celebrity fiction is concerned that its a lack of wanting to be recognized that keeps them from commenting / reviewing. As you’ve said, there are many...very disturbing celebrity fan fiction enthusiasts who go out of their way to make their comments known. I try not to get enmeshed in those type of things. I write celebrity for two reasons. One, I’m a fan of the celebrity. (I like their work, or find them attractive so I bring my fantasies to life). I certainly do not wish that something that happens to them in my story, or any story would happen to them in real life. I’m just a fan who wants to fantasize, and... Two, in the vein of liking their work, I see celebrity fiction as a subsection of the Movie, Television, or even Novels category… basically, I feel that if a character (Hermione, Aragon, Black Widow...etc.) has been portrayed by an actor/actress, then 99% of the writers and readers of such fiction are just picturing that actor/actress as they read/write anyway so what’s the difference. Anyway, back to the topic at hand. I don’t know that I completely agree that Dragon Prints don’t signal quality. I mean I get what your saying that its just a count of people clicking on it. But at a certain point, as the count grows, you have to associate that with readers finding quality in your work… don’t you think? But I totally agree that one of the main reason people comment/review is to push the fetishes and (in the celeb writing world), the people/characters they want to see featured on the writer because they want to see more of it/them. Finally, JayDee, I don’t think you’re a writer of shitty stories at all. I’d like you to know that I have your bio page bookmarked, just so I can more easily find your work. Your story, Whore of Heaven is one of my favorite erotic works and that it was part of the inspiration for me to peruse my own erotic writings. (FYI, I have a penchant for seeing the beautiful and the pure corrupted and or humiliated…) Desiderius Price, I totally agree that dragon prints help feed/dispel the doubts a writer may have about their work. When I release a new chapter or story, I find myself hitting the site sometimes 10 or more times a day just to see how the count has changed and when I see a rapid increase I think “well that must have been a good chapter,” and when its the opposite, I fall into despair and sit at home with the lights off playing video games to bolster my self-esteem. Ok, that might be a slight exaggeration...but only slight. Reviews and or comments really help me understand, like you said the answer to where I went wrong or where I went right. And watching dragon prints rise consistently definitely leads me to feel that I have a growing readership and that people are genuinely enjoying my work. Alright, well I thank you both for your responses and I guess I’ve droned on long enough. Till next time, -Mal
  5. Mal

    The Unreviewed

    This is an interesting thread. I’ve often wondered about the different “genres” or domains… or whatever you guys want to call them and how working in one realm gets a writer more attention and potentially more reviews because of that genre’s proliferation. For example, if you go to the Harry Potter archive, there is barely a damn story there that doesn’t have a review, as someone already pointed out. The same seems true of the Original’s archive, a great many stories there get reviews even when the dragon prints are low. However, if you venture into the (apparently) very taboo world of the Celebrity archive almost no stories get reviewed, even when the prints are high. As I work exclusively in the Celeb realm at this time, I’ve often found myself jealous of how many reviews writers of other genres get. It also got me to thinking does the genre one writes in have more of an effect on the number, and quality of the reviews one receives, even more than the quality of the writing by the author? (Quality, at least as its determined by the number of dragon prints a story has received) I have five stories on this site, and as far as I can tell (comparing them to other stories in the celebrity archive) I do very well for myself in terms of the number of dragon prints I receive. But, I also get no reviews. Here is a listing of my stories with the Dragon Print count and number of reviews: Billion Dollar Harem: 100913 / 4 Felicity’s Fate: 5186 / 0 The Orb of Janus: 5698 / 0 The Mile High Rape Club: 3936 / 0 Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular: 3949 / 0 As you can see, despite having good dragon print count, my stories have almost no reviews. This is true of most stories in the Celebrity archive. However, in the Originals or Harry Potter archives, for example, stories with far less count have a lot more reviews. Does this suggest a certain degree of passivity on the part of those who read celebrity fiction, a level of protectiveness from those who read HP or Original? Or is it a taboo around Celebrity… This is something that has had me curious for years as I’ve always wanted to see more reviews for the stories I write. I also wonder if the number of reviews I receive is offset by the fact that I have a thread on the forum dedicated to my primary story, where many of my regular readers comment. Then again I see many authors have their own review threads too so… I don’t know. I would love for someone to explain to me why my preferred genre seems to be the black sheep of the fanfiction world…. Anyways, I thought this was an interesting thread so I wanted to contribute. Thanks to Jaydee for starting it!
  6. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hello there gang! I’m back again so soon because, as Sazbi pointed out, Billion Dollar Harem just passed the 100,000 dragon print mark! I am just absolutely flabbergasted by the response this story has had and by the support and encouragement you all have given me in the two years since I started writing this. As I’ve said before, this story would have died off long ago without you guys, so this accomplishment is just as yours as it is mine! I just wanted to offer a great big thank you to all of you guys for reading along over the years and for offering up those comments and suggestions that continue to inspire and encourage me to continue onward. I wanted you all to know that I’ve started work on the next chapter of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular and that I hope to have it ready for you sometime in the next couple weeks, hopefully sooner. After that, I’ll go to work on the next chapter of Billion Dollar Harem, where my primary goal will be to build up to the moment where I can include the contents of that first fan selected scene. As a reminder, that scene will include BDSM and will star Alex, Emma and Cara (all things selected by you guys). I know the results of that poll came out quite some time back, but as the main focus of BDH is and will always be story, its not always easy to make certain kinds of scenes happen. That said, I want to announce the results of the last poll, which was an informal survey to test the waters, if you will, as I try to decide which two celebrities will be Alex’s final guests in the harem. I also, in celebration of reaching the 100,000 dragon print mark, plan to begin a new scene poll, where you guys will vote to see which ladies will appear in an upcoming smut scene in BDH and in what type of scenario that scene will be set. But, before I do either of those things, I’m going to address the few comments you guys have had since I last posted. Steel: I believe I mentioned after you suggested it, how much I liked this idea. The edging chastity belt meant to keep a girl on the literal edge of orgasm for an extended period of time is amazingly hot. It was all about finding the right time and place to drop it in. Personally, I don’t think there could be a better time or a better girl I could have chosen to include this fetish. With the way Taylor has developed as a character, I’m not sure there is a punishment more fitting for her than this great idea of yours. Thanks for all your comments and suggestions over the years, and please keep them coming! Sazbi: I’m so glad you liked the chapter, and the punishments. I for one was very happy with how chapter 33 turned out. I know not everyone is a fan of the method of punishment I chose for Bella, but I do think the scenes with her turned out very good. I also very much believe they had the desired effect on the story and on the girl in question. If I were Bella, or any of the other girls for that matter, I would never consider violence against one of the others ever again. I’m not sure that I agree about Felicity being Chaotic Neutral, I think she IS looking out for herself above all the others, but I’m not sure her actions are random… I think of it more that she’s seen the violence and jealousy of the other harem girls, she knows that despite all this, that she must live with them and be apart of Alex’s sex life so its about protecting herself without pushing any one girl too far away. As to Emma driving a wedge between Margot and Cara… I can’t really talk about that, cause...spoilers, but I will say I have a plan for the three of them and I think… when its all said and done you guys might be surprised with how things turn out. But I do think you’re right on about Emma trying to make Dove loyal to her, she really needs the whole harem to be loyal to her...at least I’m sure she sees it that way. Its just a way for her to get in good as quickly as possible. Lets see… how long will Taylor’s punishment last… oh…shit...I can’t say...spoilers but it will be a fun ride, at least for everyone but her… Lastely, there will definitely be some interactions between Bella and the girls before her punishment comes to an end. I just doubt that I’ll go into many more of the grizzly details of her punishment. And, again I can’t really reveal the details of Ariana’s punishment but it will be fun. CrisX016: Thank you good sir, I like to think my taste is supremely refined. Also, if you think Kitty Ariana is EXCELLENT now, just wait till you see her lapping up milk in the next chapter. (Oh shit, did I just give something away… my bad). Ok, next the poll results from the informal survey. As a reminder, there were two categories you could vote on with a selection of ladies in each. I’ll list them now, along with the number of votes each received. (Note: not everyone followed the format I asked of you so the tally might not be 100% on, but as this is more of a testing of the waters, I wasn’t so worried about getting the exact number of votes.) For the 3rd spot, or the 10th girl to enter the harem, the category was brunettes. I always thought the harem could use one more girl with dark hair so I gave you guys some choices. Here they are, along with the votes they received. Alexandra Daddario with 11 votes Megan Fox with 1 vote Kendall Jenner with 1 vote Gal Gadot with 13 votes For the 4th spot, or the 11th and final girl to enter the harem, I really wanted a second redhead or maybe a supermodel. The harem only has one red head and no true supermodel so I wanted to give you guys a choice and some options. Here they are along with the votes they received. Rose Leslie with 6 votes Karen Gillan with 17 votes Alexina Graham with 0 votes Elsa Hosk with 2 votes Stella Maxwell with 0 votes As you guys can see, the winner of the third spot was Gal Gadot and the fourth spot was, by a landslide, Karen Gillan. I wanted to thank you guys again for voting, this gives me a good idea of what it is you guys would like to see, or should I say who you guys want to see enter the harem. The voting was close with the brunettes, and I can’t really say for sure yet which one it’ll be since I myself haven’t decided. But I will say for sure that it will be either Alexandra or Gal that much I’m set on. As for the 4th spot. Karen Gillan ran away with it, but that doesn’t mean she is my clear cut favorite for that spot. I’m still debating, but this vote does set a clear precedent for who you guys want to see given these choices. As such, I can say this, if I don’t end up considering someone not on that list, Karen will get the last spot...But I haven’t decided yet who it will be, and likely won’t until I’m closer to bringing them in. Thank you guys again for voting, it was really interesting hearing some of the reasons you guys chose the girls you did. Ok, on to the big finale! As I said above, I wanted to do something special for reaching 100,000 dragon prints. I can think of nothing better than giving you guys another opportunity to vote on a list of characters and scenarios you’d like to see included as a smut scene in an upcoming chapter of Billion Dollar Harem. For this scene I want to make sure one of the two new comers is included. I think it will be a fun way to introduce our newbies to the harem. Anyway, without further ado...here are your categories: Newcomers: Please choose EITHER Ariana Grande or Dove Cameron The Veterans: Please choose ONE of the original five girls: Emma Watson, Margot Robbie, Taylor Swift, Chloe Moretz, or Bella Thorne The Scene: Please choose ONE of the following scenarios: Alex and the Veteran teach the newcomer the ropes in a consensual scene featuring a “light” fetish tag of my choosing. The Newcomer and the Veteran explore one another in a passionate lesbian scene featuring a “light” to “moderate” fetish tag of my choosing. As part of a bonus for a job well done, one or more of the guards (please offer a number between 1 and 5) are given a night with the Newcomer and the Veteran in a scene featuring a “hard” to “moderate” fetish tag of my choosing. Alex and the Veteran instruct the newcomer in proper blowjob technique in a consensual scene featuring the oral and rim fetishes. As a gift to their master, the veteran asks the newcomer for their help giving him a present he’ll never forget in a scene featuring a “moderate” to “hard” fetish of my choosing. There it is gang, the parameters of the poll. Please vote once for each category and formulate your votes as such: Your favorite newcomer Your favorite veteran the number of the scene you’d like to see (i.e. 1-5) Thanks again gang! I’ll be checking back periodically, anxious to see your votes which also means I’ll be around to respond to any further comments on chapter 33. Till next time, I’m Back to the Black, -Mal
  7. Billion Dollar Harem just passed 100,000 Dragon Prints! I want to thank all my fans and readers for your continued support! I would never have gotten here without you guys, I am just humbled and amazed by the response and encouragement you all have provided me in the two years since we began this little trip together. Thanks again so very much.

    1. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      Many congratulations on the milestone! I hope you reach the next one quickly, and that your readers remember to review!  :congratualtions: :thumbsup:

    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Congrats, 100k is astounding, I’m not even to 10k…. (yet).

    3. Mal

      Mal

      Thanks BronxWench and Desiderius Price for the well wishes! I still can hardly believe I made it to 100k. I don’t get many reviews in the review section of my story, but I do have quite a few regulars who comment in the Billion Dollar Harem thread on the forum so that’s nice. When I started BDH 2  years ago, I never thought it would be successful. It was just something I did for my own amusement and to practice writing. But as the story started to gain dragon prints, it was always my goal to reach 100k. I’m so happy that I finally got there. Hopefully, in time, you both reach the goals you’ve set for your own stories too. Thanks again, and good luck to you both.

  8. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey there boys and girls...Men and Women...Ladies and Gentlemen… Sup Guys! LOL I’m back and I come baring gifts in the form of chapter 33. I have some good and bad news about it. First, the bad news. The bad news is that the big scene with Ariana Grande will, unfortunately have to be pushed back to chapter 34. The good news is, that chapter 33 is absolutely packed. Its my longest chapter yet at a full 24 pages in Word. This chapter features some very hardcore content that further details Bella’s punishment. I know that most people could do without this fetish, but I’ve already stated my reasons for using it, and I feel its important to carry it out to its completion now that its started. Next, there are some nice interactions (conversations which were left out of 32) featuring Margot and Taylor and Emma and Cara. I think these are fun and important to what is coming next. Let’s see, what else, oh yeah, the fabulously delicious details of Taylor’s punishment, which I just have this strange feeling everyone is going to love… Lastly, while the full details of Ariana’s punishment will come in 34, there is a very devious scene further detailing her humiliation and initiation, which I think you guys will also very much enjoy. Although this chapter kind of also left off on a cliff hanger, I really want to continue with Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular. Therefore, I plan to go to work on it right away. Remember, these are much shorter chapters that I can likely push out in just a couple weeks. Its my plan from there to move on to 34. I plan to have both of these out by the end of July. EWBS chapter 3 will continue with her adventures at The Hole in the Wall smut shop. While BDH 34 will see FINALLY the finale of Ariana’s punishment. It will also see the furthering of some relationships, both new and old which will led to the beginnings of the next major dramas. I do plan to include a bit more stuff with both punishments (Bella and Taylor). Mostly summaries so you guys can see how they were tormented over the time the spent in trouble. But, rest assured for those of you who didn’t like the full on details of Bella’s punishment, I don’t expect to go into anymore of the grizzly details surrounding it. Do expect more stuff from Taylor though...lol I love her punishment… The last order of business for 34 will be to start ramping up to finally put the fan selected smut scene on the page. I know its been a while, quite a while in fact, but I said I would get to it, and I meant it. I’m fully expecting it to land in chapter 35 or possibly 36. Finally, guys! I don’t know if you noticed it, but Billion Dollar Harem is very nearly at 100,000 dragon prints!!!!! Can you guys F’n believe it! I know I can barely contain myself. I never thought this was possible. When I first started this two years ago, I didn’t even know if anyone would read it and now...well I just can’t say thank you to guys enough times! I really really do appreciate it. Your comments and support have kept me going and this is just hugely flattering. As I mentioned in an earlier post, i plan to hold a second fan selected scene poll when we cross 100k. Which, with the dropping of chapter 32 will likely be very soon. I plan to post the results of the poll for the 10th and 11th occupants of the harem, but keep in mind that poll was an INFORMAL survey for me to get a feel for what you guys wanted to see. I won’t announce the official winners until they make their appearance on the pages of a later chapter of BDH. So be sure to check back soon for those results, and for the new poll. Let me just address a few comments, and I’ll get out of here: ArcherNexus: Glad you enjoyed 32. I myself love degradation and humiliation, those are by far two of my most favorite fetishes. So if you love those, you’ve definitely come to the right place. As to Ariana, you’ll have to stay posted (and don’t let how she behaves in the teaser to be a full indicator of her compliance… You’ll have to wait for 34 to see everything I have in store for her tiny, sexy, ass! Sorry to hear that you’re not a fan of “sudden lesbian sluttiness,” I myself love both lesbians and sluttiness so that’s a great combination for me! Either way, I hope you continue to enjoy the story and to offer up your opinions, I love hearing them. As to the selection of girls, yeah I guess to say I am very picky would be an understatement, and I really find it hard to get into writing about girls who I just don’t find that attractive, And I’m sorry to say that curvy Kylie Jenner / Kim Kardashian body actually kind of repulses me… I have written a short story on CHOYA with Kylie, but I really don’t like the curvy body time. You know big tits, huge ass… it honestly doesn’t do a damn thing for me. I obviously really like the choices you made for if you started your own story. I love Brits and Kate is a long time favorite of mine. I did consider her for BDH but as I stared to line guests up, it just didn’t make sense to include her. I also totally agree that more inner dialogue is hot. Its not an easy thing to balance though...keeping the action going and hearing the girls inner thoughts. I think I’m getting better at it, and I’d like to thank my editor for that. He’s always keeping me on my toes with little things like “more sexy talk here,” or “this section could use some of what the girls are thinking.” Maybe one day I’ll get it down pat! Lets see, what else. I read a little of the Sarah Walker story you mentioned. I watched a few seasons of Chuck, and I’m obviously familiar with Yvonne Strahovski because I play Mass Effect and she’s killer hot. However, while I agree this author does a good job giving voice to the internal struggle. I think its balanced poorly. I often found a hard time keeping up with the action and the dialogue. And while its by no means the worst fanfiction I’ve ever read, I guess I just found the writing hard to follow which really took me out of the story… And last but not least, verbal humiliation. I agree, I couldn’t definitely have more of this. I plan to work on trying to include more of it as I also find it to be damn hot. Thanks for the comments. Niveral: I understand that Bella’s punishment is not everyone’s cup of tea...so to speak… but as you said, I do think it will be very effective. As to your comment about spanking / canning / whipping and such I have been thinking about a way or a scene to include this fetish. I’ve played with light spanking before, but I really want to do a scene where this fetish is featured more heavily. I’m really glad you enjoyed Emma’s interactions with Dove and Chloe.as I said somewhere before, Chloe is one of my favorite characters and I love the way Emma and her play off one another… there sort of like the sexy version of the straight man and the goofy man ala Grumpy Old Men. I can’t answer your question about Emma Margot Cara because spoilers, but I can say this there will be issues between the three of them in the next few chapters as they learn more about one another. Sazbi: Glad you liked the chapter. I was a huge fan myself of how the interactions with Chloe turned out. As to your question about Emma/Toy well I have been thinking about how I might use that… You’ll just have to stay tuned… sorry I hope you enjoy Taylor’s punishment and the preview of what Ariana’s punishment will look like in 33… I look forward to your comments about it. As to Zeru’s punishment, I don’t think you have much to worry about that. I never planned to write a chapter about him just sitting in his suite watching his fellow guards put the dick to the punishment victims on a CCTV while one of his slaves sucks him off… lol TimeofAngels: As to editing your posts. I encourage everyone to register. It offers legitimacy to this thread that guest posts just don’t quite provide. Not that I don’t love hearing from my guests lol… But it does make it seem like that people here have a more vested interest in the forum when they aren’t logged in as guests… I’m only a few episodes into the Dr. Who season when Clara arrives. My favorite companion so far is...well...obviously its Amy Pond! Who wouldn’t like Karen Gillan in a leggy police uniform! I’ve never seen any of those other shows / movies with Jenna Coleman… Not sure if they are a British thing.. I live out in the Black, we only get certain channels out here… Goram Alliance tyrants! I just can’t get enough Alexina Graham. I started following her on Instagram...she is just so godmamned fine… She would definitely have a spot in this story if I started it from the beginning. I wonder how different BDH would be if she were one of the starting 5 instead of Bella…. As to Felicity Jones… oh my… she is my personal number 3 hottest celebrity. But even without that, I love her… that grin of hers just gets my motor running. But given that aside, I also picked her to help with some of the diversity by adding someone who is a little older. I mean I’m also strongly considering Alexandra Daddario and Gal Gadot and both of them are the same age as Felicity, or very close to it… Well: Lets see… I don’t watch Eurovision… never even heard of it before you mentioned it… I agree anyone doing something like what Bella did would be very foolish. Ulu? Zeru was the one who is in trouble and I guess the answer is nothing...He just won’t be on page for a while. And… are you suggesting the girls play soccer… I guess they could have a FIFA tournament but I doubt any of them would be very good lol… I doubt we’ll see that. Alright gang, that about does it for me. Happy reading, and I’ll be around to answer any posts as much as possible. Till next time, -Mal
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    Hello again everyone! Chapter 33 is here. This chapter was massive. So massive in fact that I just couldn’t include all the rest of the events of day 38. I’m also pretty sure its my longest chapter yet, at exactly 24 full pages in Word. A lot of stuff happens in this chapter. We see the full details of Bella’s first day of punishment. There’s also the interactions between Margot and Taylor and Emma and Cara which were skipped over in chapter 32...what else? OH right Taylor’s punishment is fully detailed and I have this sneaking suspicion that many of you guys are going to love it. Finally, the chapter ends with just a little more teasing of Ariana…. Oh does Alex have plans for her… Unfortunately, you’ll have to wait until 34 to get the full details but I think what I do include is...well I think its very enticing. I’ll begin working on 34 soon, but I do plan to put out chapter 3 of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular first. As a reminder, these are much shorter chapters and I’ll likely have that out in just a couple weeks and then I’ll go to work on 34 right away. 34 will, absolutely include the finale of Ariana’s initiation. I know its kind of been teased for the past two chapters, but this time I mean it! We’ll also see the furthering of relationships, both new and old. There will also be a little bit more with Bella and Taylor’s punishments, but fear not, those of you who are squeamish about Bella’s punishment, I don’t plan to go into many more hardcore details around it. Finally, although I doubt I’ll get to it in 34, I am working up to finally putting the fan poll from oh so long ago onto the page. I’m thinking it’ll be in 35 but we’ll just have to see. One last thing, Billion Dollar Harem is very nearly at 100,000 dragon prints! Can you guys believe it! I know I’ve said it before, but I really never thought this story would have such a great reception. All the support and comments from you guys really means a lot to me. As such, when we do reach the 100k prints I plan to post a second fan selected scene poll with very similar parameters as the one from last time. So be sure to check the forum once you see that we’ve crossed that threshold. As always, you can find my thread located in the All Other SubDomains category, under the Celebrity heading in the Het-Male/Female section: Look for Billion Dollar Harem! I look forward to hearing from each and every one of you! Till next time, happy reading! I’m Back to the Black, -Mal
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    Ok gang, just gonna pop on here to address the comments of late. For now, all I’ll say about the current chapter is this: I know that the punishment /fetish I used for Bella isn’t everyone’s thing. In fact, I pretty much knew most people wouldn’t like it. I used it because of that. I wanted to show how angry Alex was with her by doing something so terrible to her that hopefully no one would ever think to replicate her crimes. There will be a little more of it in chapter 33, and if its not your thing, I get why you might skip those parts. But keep in mind that however much it repulses you, you’re not there… put yourself in Bella’s shoes and ask yourself, if you were her would you ever considering putting a toe out of place ever again… That’s whey Alex did it. Not because he’s into that fetish but to put Bella in her place, hopefully for the last time. On to you guys: TimeofAngels: If 50 shades has no subplot or character development, it baffles me how it ever got on the NY Times Bestseller list… I guess that’s something so say about horny housewives sitting at home alone all day with nothing to do but tickle the little man in the pink canoe… lol… Again, I really appreciate the compliment that my work could come anywhere close to that level of success. I love keeping things fresh, trying new ideas out and at least attempting to keep the readers on their toes with unexpected plot lines. I only hope that one day I can produce a work that actually makes me some of that $$$$! As to your favorite Brit...I get those others, but Jenna Coleman… really? Isn’t she widely regarded as the worst of the Doctor’s companions? She’s cute, I suppose that is true, but I honestly think Felicity Jones, Emma Watson and Cara Delevingne are way more attractive… What do you think about Alexina Graham, the VS supermodel? She’s from Nottingham and I think she’s super fine. SWSam: The poll is still opened, and thank you for voting. Maybe someone will go back through the thread and post the current results? I have a tally sheet somewhere, but as making my final decision is still a long ways off, I haven’t looked at for quite sometime. Sazbi: While I do think that would be pretty hot, I don’t really know that its Emma’s style. But I will say this, I do plan on trying to describe her outfit every day from now on. As level 5, she can dress however she likes as long as its sexy, so she’ll be coming out in hot sexy clothes all the time. JimmyTheWP: I’m glad you enjoyed chapter 31. I hope 32 has begun to live up to what you wanted to see as far as punishments go. I definitely think Bella’s will be the worst by far. But I think what I have in store for Taylor is going to be fun and terrible in its own interesting way. Also, I totally agree that Cara shouldn’t be punished, and she won’t be. Finally, thanks for casting your vote. Alpa: I’m not sure why Alex would gift Bella to Chloe and not Cara as a slave in retribution for her actions. Although it would be interesting to see what Cara would do if given Bella as a slave for a day or two. Most likely it would end up being violent and potentially hurting her which isn’t what he wants. He wants her to learn a lesson, not end up with broken ribs...As to the idea with the guards, while visually , for the readers, that would be a great punishment, I have to wonder if it didn’t work last time why Alex would think it would work this time… Maybe the fact that Chloe wouldn’t be there watching might make it a more impactful punishment. Its an interesting idea, but I think a punishment where the whole harem takes part in teaching her a lesson will either work wonders, or it’s going to backfire horribly… We’ll just have to see As for favorite Brits, I like your choices, though sometimes, maybe it depends on her makeup or the lighting...I don’t know...but sometimes she looks really damn hot and sometimes she’s just eeehhh… Emma of course to me is always hot… Finally about Orb of Janus. I kind of ended up putting it on the backburner because working on those chapters takes so much time away from BDH. Maybe this summer with my increased writing time I’ll get a second chapter out…. I want to finish up Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular before I consider it though. (Should be 2 more chapters on it). I also have a Rob Zombie / House of 1000 Corpses inspired story in the very early stages of writing. Not sure I want to reveal yet who my celebrity star is or anymore info on it at this time though… Backerton: I like this idea a lot. I had already decided what her punishment was going to be before you posted, but maybe I’ll use something like this at a later time. Although, if you think about it, the port-a-potty, when the restroom is empty is sort of like a sensory deprivation chamber, no lights, no sound. She certainly would keep her mouth closed, so no taste. Just a terrible smell and the unsettling feeling of the liquid and other things floating around her…. BillFriese: Great idea to add Taylor’s music as the only outside sensation… Well: if you mean to add those girls as the guard’s slaves. I still have to say no. Its simply not worth the risk for Alex. His guards get to fuck celebrities when they are being punished and they have all different kinds of slaves when the celebrities aren’t in the punishment room. Besides that, I personally have never seen Big Brother or Eurovision, is that a TV show? So I definitely wouldn’t add them. I guess the bottom line here is, giving the guards celebrity slaves would add a whole new, very unmanageable level of complexity to an already very demanding set of circumstances. I can’t even begin to think how I could incorporate the addition of a whole new group of celebrities added to this, especially when that addition would take the story away from the main character to focus on side characters. Steel: I get why you wouldn’t like it. Its not a fetish of mine either…. I mean not really. I’m a fan of degradation (as some of you might have guessed lol) so from the point of view that getting pissed on is degrading I kind of like it… I mean its still disgusting but the psychological ramifications on those its happening to is pretty hot. Really glad you liked the rest of the story! Juan: Great idea! I actually think this would be pretty fun. The biggest problem I see with it is how to incorporate it. Well that and the time it would take away from me working on BDH. The problem with incorporation, is do I put one of these dreamscapes as a chapter of BDH? Like a solo side chapter to the main story. In which case I have to consider how it adds to the story. What it gives the reader, (aside from the obvious) to include it. If I instead put it off on its own as a “brand new story” the problem becomes context and viewership. People who stumble on the story who haven’t read BDH will be wondering what the hell is going on. While not everyone who reads BDH will find these side chapters or feel inclined to seek them out. Its a good idea and maybe I’ll think about playing with it at some point. But with everything else I have going on, from a writing perspective it just doesn’t seem like the best use of my time. Zoetrope: Thank you for the compiment. Some of my very favorite interactions in the story have been with Chloe. She’s actually one of my favorite characters. As to the new stuff with Dove, I’m a huge fan of corruption, degradation and humiliation… of pushing people inches… What I mean by that is I hate when I read a story and five/six paragraphs in the character has succumbed… become a mindless, witless slave to desire… I find it wholely unbelievable and it really serves to take me out of the story. People who fall don’t do so overnight. When people change, they do so by degrees, slowly over the course of years. Now, admittedly, I fucked up the timeline of my story. I look at it as my biggest failure with BDH, but I still think the slow fall is apart of it. I guess what I’m getting at with the interactions with Dove are this: Imagine if you will, you were thrust into this situation. You’ve been kidnapped. Shown what happens to people who disobey. You’re given a choice, you can fight, and end up like them, or you can give in and while you won’t come out unscathed, your experience will be far less harrowing. What do you do...of course, you make the choice nearly every rational being would. You give in. So when Emma is fondling Dove, when Alex is forcing her to do something she obviously doesn’t want to do… that hesitation...that unwillingness is sooo hot. But whats fun about it is familiarity….the more you do something unspeakable, the easier it is to do it again… Then, pretty soon, that line you said you’d never cross is just a little further out… you go a little further and a little further…. till the next thing you know, you are that mindless, witless slave to desire…. That fall from grace….I find that shit sooo bleeding hot its almost beyond belief. Ok gang, I hope that answers everyone’s questions and address all their comments. I hope you’ll keep them coming for chapter 32. As I said in my earlier post, I plan to dive right back into BDH 33 and put Emma Watson’s Blowbang spectacular on hold for a bit. I hope to have 33 ready by then end of June but if not I do think i’ll be early in July...we’ll just have to see how it works out. Till next time, I’m Back to the Black -Mal
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    Lol TimeofAngels, I didn’t even get a chance to post here yet… Are you following me…? <looks around anxiously> phew, I would have been really freaked out if you’d been there. Yes! As TimeofAngels said, the new chapter is here! I’m really short on time, its really late...early depending on your point of view so I’m gonna keep this short for now. Chapter 32 is a two parter so please don’t be disappointed if everything you wanted to see wasn’t in this chapter. If I had detailed all of day 38 it would be like a fifty page chapter…. As is, there is definitely some good stuff here, with more to come in chapter 33. I think because of that I’m going to go straight to work on chapter 33 and leave chapter 3 of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular till later. I have plenty of time for writing right now, so I’m really hoping I can push 33 out in 2-3 weeks, maybe even by the end of June.. we’ll just have to see… I’ll be back on later to address all the awesome comments of the past few days, but for now, I have to get going...bed is calling my name… Till next time, I’m Back to the Black, -Mal
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    Hello again! I’m short on time, so I’ll just say chapter 32 is up and that its a two parter so there are definitely questions left unanswered. Please continue reading along, and leaving your comments in my thread. Till next time, -Mal
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    Hey Gang! Just posted chapter two of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular! Again, this is a short chapter with a little more back story and another hot BJ scene. I won’t ruin it by giving you guys any other details. The chapter is short. If you want to know what happened, it’s a quick read. I will say this though, the event in this chapter wasn’t what I had intended for chapter 2… it sort of took an unexpected detour. Because of that, to my mind the story will now take four chapters to finish. But I do imagine that all of them will range around this same quick length. As such, I can push them out fast between chapters of BDH. On to other news: My vacation is now over. I got back to work writing in earnest earlier this week and now that the new chapter of EWBS is up, I’ll start work on BDH 32. Its my current plan to finish the writing over the next 2 weeks, give or take a few days. After that I’ll pass it along to my editor and then I’ll get it up asap. You’ve all had some great comments and questions and all I can say about the upcoming chapter is that I more or less know how things are going to play out, it should be super hot, and I’ll soon focus on getting the previous poll scene incorporated into the narrative. For those of you who may have forgotten, the previous poll scene will feature Alex, Emma and Cara in a BDSM setting. I know that poll was a while back, but because of the characters and the scene type it hasn’t been easy to include up to this point. But I think I’m getting close to a moment where its inclusion is possible and will work with the current plot. I’d also like to add, that once BDH reaches 100k views, (we’re currently about 8k away), I’ll post a new scene poll. I don’t know if the current poll scene will be included by the point where this poll gets posted, but I can promise you that I will include both at the earliest possible moment. Ok, that’s about it for now. I’ll quickly respond to the most recent comments and then head back to the black. Time of Angels: First off, I must thank you for the amazing compliment. I’ve never read 50 shades, but I know it was a huge best seller… It makes me wonder though, what are the sex scenes like in a big main stream novel like that? Are they as explicit as something I might write in one of my stories? I suppose I just have a hard time imaging a novel on the NY Times best seller list including things like extreme sex scenes and words like cock and cum lol… I see what you mean about the cell reception remark feeling like a trap, but if you take it in the context of where the mansion is located, it makes more sense. Alex’s mansion is literally in the middle of nowhere, high in the Yukon Mountains… Not the type of area that typically would have any kind of signal. Seeing as location had to be on Emma’s mind as she was sitting in front of a window with a clear view of the wild wilderness… its not so far fetched to think she might have doubts. My first instinct, was to set up the situation in much the way you described, with Emma stumbling across a phone or a computer that Alex left conveniently behind. But I thought the Love Test idea was much better and would more firmly secure Emma to Alex when she passed. The funny thing about Bella’s revenge was that I wasn’t expecting it either. That scene rose from my organic writing style. It just sort of came to me as I was working the chapter. I ended up liking the idea and the scene so much that I had to include it. I’m sorry you felt that way about the lack of Ari and Dove in 31, but I try to keep the chapter length around 20 pages in word, and this one was already at 22 or 23 if memory serves. Adding a scene with them, however short would have pushed that to at least 27-28. I think the pay off in chapter 32 will be worth the wait though. Thank you for voting, I’m keeping a running tally. I can guarantee Bella’s punishment will fit the crime and be probably the worst punishment we’ve yet seen. Also, I can guarantee Ari’s punishment will be worse than normal because she resisted, but more importantly because of what she did to Thando. Finally, Emma Watson is my favorite Brit, so I just like saying that. If not her, then who is your favorite? (FYI, there aren’t many answers I’ll find acceptable !!!!) ArcherNexus: What about Emma and Kate Beckinsale? I don’t get it… There won’t be a MILF included in BDH. The only remaining possibilities for inclusion into the story are listed in the poll. There is one curvier girl on that list, Alexandra Daddario. Sorry if that list disappoints you, but I like writing about celebrities I find attractive, and I tend to go for tall and lean or small and petite… I guess I’m kind of shallow… Joe: I’ve just got this feeling that what I have planned for Taylor is going to really fuck with her, and should be something most of the fans will really enjoy. Stay tuned for details On that note, I’m out Thanks for reading along and your participation in the thread. I really do appreciate it! Till next time, -Mal
  14. Chapter 2 is up! A little more set up, a lot more hot blowjob action from everyone’s favorite Brit.
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    Hey guys. I know its been a few days since my last check in. I had some vacation time I had to use at work and I kind of ended up taking a last minute, spur of the moment vacation. Which is why I haven’t been around as much to address all your comments. So I just wanted to take a quick moment to respond to the comments and give a quick update. First, because of the vacation, I haven't’ really been working on my writing, in so much as actually sitting at the computer and typing… But I have done quite a bit of thinking about how Chapter 2 of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular and Chapter 32 of Billion Dollar Harem will progress. Therefore, I’m still confidant I can put them both out in good time. Here in the next week and a half, two weeks, I’ll work on EWBS. If I get it done faster, great, I’ll put it out once it’s done. If I end up hitting a snag with it, I’ll move on to working on BDH. Either way, I will make sure I’ve got BDH 32 out before the end of June. (My guess would be that it’ll be closer to mid-June), but I really don’t like tying myself down with hard completion dates. After all, I do this for fun and in my spare time, no need for it to become the cause of stress. Well, I guess since you know where I’m at, I’ll go ahead and try to respond to comments. Steel: Glad you enjoyed the plot twist. You weren’t the only one who told me they were worried… lol. I was worried that people would realize what was going on right away and see the whole thing as a bit contrived. But based on the responses I’ve had, most everyone seemed to enjoy the twist and didn’t see it coming. With the twist, I was definitely trying to remind people that Alex is still more than capable of deception and that he is firmly in control of the harem. At least in so far as keeping the girls from escaping. Niveral: I guess I both agree and disagree with you. It has been well established that the first signs of Stockholm Syndrome can develop in as little as a few hours. Granted, that is typically under different circumstances, but I think its too blanket of a statement to flat say that someone couldn’t become nearly hopelessly enamored of someone in the 37 days that have passed. I do see your point too though, that, this someone is Emma Watson and she would likely be more resilient to such things or at least I would think so… Juan: In some ways, I think the biggest mistake I made with BDH was to document the passage of time. The only real benefit to doing so is to help orient the reader along the timeline, especially when I have flashbacks or when there are multiple things happening at the same time. The draw backs, are numerous and problematic. First of all, its much easier to contradict myself about events and when they took place. Not to mention the aforementioned problem of dealing with accounting for things like sleep, bathroom time, and menstrual cycles. I’ve often thought of things I would change, if I were to start this story over from scratch. The first thing would be to abandoned the use of days to mark the passage of time. Because, while I agree that a fast-forward every chapter would really put a damper on the tension of the plot, it would be more realistic for the reader to be able to assume X number of days passed instead of me forcing the passage of time upon them. At this point though, I think the best way to deal with it is, as you said, a certain level of disbelief. I suppose I could abandon the marking of days, but I think that would be too jarring an experience. I think this is a very interesting subject, but overall, at this point, there really isn’t much I can do to fix it, short of completely starting over… Well: Sorry, there is no way Alex would let his men enslave celebrities. He has a penchant for the lavish and the special and if everyone got celebrity slaves, his just wouldn’t be as special as they are now. Besides that, every celebrity taken drastically increases the chance of being caught, and Alex wouldn’t risk it, just so his men could have celebrity slaves… I plan to do a poll when BDH hits 100k views. Which will probably be a month or so. I’m hoping by then I’ll at least be on the track to resolve the Alex, Emma, Cara, BDSM poll… I do at least have an idea now for how i’ll bring that scene around… I doubt very seriously I’d do a map of the mansion. With its multiple floors and big, grandiose spaces it would just be way to much work for a space that isn’t likely to be featured in the story too often. I did think about making a map of the above ground pool area, but unless I start using it more I probably won’t worry about that either. Bill Friese: I also imagine that there is downtime that never gets reported on. But I think there are still problems with saying that every day equals a week, if anything, that could exacerbate certain problems, even while it solves others. The best way I could account for the passage of time, is how most novelists do it… which is to say don’t address it hardly at all. Unless something specifically needs to happen the next day, or the next week based on prestablished plot points the best thing is just to leave it alone. In a novel, very rarely does the writer tell us when things happen or how much time passes, he just moves in a linear way from one plot point to the next. If I were to start over that is certainly what I would do. Joe: Part of Emma’s job as level 5 IS to participate in breaking in the newbies, so you can bet on her being there and being involved! I think you guys are really going to like what I have planned for breaking them in… Its going to be something a little different than I’ve done with any of the other groups… Should be a lot of fun. I think there are some different challenges when trying to punish someone who’s already so used to dirty depraved acts. Taylor in particular presents problems because she likes being treated like a dirty slut. But, don’t you worry, I’ve got some great ideas in mind for punishing her and Bella. I haven’t decided yet where the bulk of chapter 32 will take place. Whether I’ll feature more of the breaking in stuff going on in the punishment room, or if I’ll focus more on the Taylor, Bella, Cara aftermath. Likely I’ll do a bit of both and it’ll take two chapters for both things to fully resolve, but we’ll just have to see. I never know exactly how a chapter will go till I sit down and start writing it. Ok gang, that’s it for me now. I really appreciated all the questions and comments around the last two chapters. On a side note, I was really wondering what everyone thought of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular. If you like it if you want to see more of it (beyond the three planned chapters) or I guess just general thoughts… Please let me know what you thought… Till next time. I’m Back to the Black, -Mal