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  1. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Just wanted to throw a quick update your way. Things at work and in RL have been pretty hectic lately. My job is considered an essential position and I cannot work from home. I won’t go into all the details, but there has been a lot going on here recently that has, unfortunately required me to spend time actually working… Since I do a significant amount of my writing from work during down times and I just haven’t had that much of it the last couple of weeks, I have serious doubts as to whether or not I’ll make my goal of chapter 50 being out by the end of the month / early next month. I am working on it here and there when I can, and maybe it will still happen. But I just wanted to give you all a heads up so you don’t think I’ve gone rogue again should I not produce something in that time frame. As always, I appreciate your patience and I hope to have an update for you guys real soon. Till next time, -Mal
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    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey guys I’m back again! This time, I don’t have a chapter of Billion Dollar Harem for you. I know you’re disappointed, but I felt like working on one of my other celebrity projects and seeing as Episode 3 of Going Gonzo was already partially written, I decided to work on that. As some of you might remember, this story features a heavily focused 2nd person POV and both its major theme, in this case anal, anal and more anal as well as its featured celebrity, in this case Peyton Roi List are determined by fan polling on a different website. If you wish to take part in future polls (there won’t be one for a while), let me know and I’ll direct you where to look. In any case, I think this chapter is ridiculously hot and I’m very happy with how it turned out. Please feel free to let me know here in this thread if you want to talk about it. In other news, I’m in the very early planning and preliminary writing stages for BDH chapter 50. I have every intention of making that my next work to release. I can’t really give any kind of firm time table on when that will be as 1) this is the time of year when my job becomes unpredictably busy, and 2) in general, I’m trying to not put so much pressure on myself to work when I don’t feel like it. Over all with this new philosophy I think I”m working less often, but getting more done when I do work… so… hopefully that’s a good thing. Although I won’t commit to a firm date, I ‘m hoping that by very late August, early September ish, I’ll have it ready for release. So check back around then if you’re just here for BDH (no worries at all if that is the case . I am going to try to be around a bit more often for comments, but I will probably be waiting till there are 3 or more before I sit down and respond. I am checking in nearly every day though so if you want to ask me a question, or just drop a comment, I will try to respond in a timely manner. Anyway, going to respond to the couple of comments here now, and then I’ll let you get back to your regularly scheduled whatevering… ArcherNexus: I agree that defiance can and can often be very hot. The problem is with how realistic it is to be completely defiant, knowing what’s in store for you when you don’t behave and knowing that escape is basically impossible? See what I mean, its like even if Ari, or whoever hated where she was and what she was being forced to do… behaving even just pretending to be what Alex wanted is far and away easier and better for the girls in every way than being defiant. I think that many of the girls, especially those introduced in the first batch are basically too used to complying, too used to taking the easier route that they almost believe they’ve made many of these choices for themselves… I mean that’s what Stockholm Syndrome does to a person. For some of the others, like Bella, Arcadia has warped her brain beyond fighting… I’m sure there are some, like Felicity, Ari and Dove who, if given the choice would gladly go back to their old lives. Even if Ari loves being a Cat, I’m sure she would much rather be a cat at her own multi million dollar house than as a prisoner in some far off other place. But I’m sure she and every other girl in the harem knows that fighting back is compete and utter insanity. I guess what I”m saying is once you know how impossible it is to escape and once you find out how horribly brutal the punishment for misbehaving is, why on Earth would you do anything other than conform when conforming is so much less horrific? ...And yes, if there was a girl who just couldn’t get it through her head to behave, like Bella, Alex could just resort to using Arcadia to bend her to his will. Juan: Thanks for the congrats! That is a huge number and I really honestly couldn’t be more blown away by the response this story has gotten over the years. I know I’ve gotten to the point where I enjoy writing the plot more than the sex. The sex is hot, but it gets kind of repetitive, even with the many varied acts I’ve depicted. Thank you for the compliment and the kind words and I hope you’ll continue to enjoy the story as we march on toward its ending. Alrighty gang that’s about it for now. Please do check in if you want to comment on Going Gonzo or any of my other works. I look forward to hearing from you all! Till next time, -Mal
  3. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Okay guys, I’m back for the promised update after not getting nearly enough sleep. Oh and BTW! The story hit 250,000 views today! I can hardly believe it! Thank you guys for getting me there! Before I get into the business of talking about the new chapter and the next, I want to say something real quick, for those of you who haven’t followed this thread in the past and are maybe just now joining us, or I suppose, even for you guys who might not have read ever post. I suffer from problems with my mental health. I go through bouts of depression, lethargy and insomnia that sometimes make it very difficult for me to function in the real world. Its the reason I read, or play video games and yes, even why I write, they are all escapes from reality. I went over many of the reasons why I went through such a long break with no updates and no explanation of why I was gone and I just want to assure you guys that while those feelings of validation and not being sure if this is worth it, were certainly a big part of the reason mostly all comes back to my mental health. I often struggle when there isn’t an immediate reward involved. Its why, right after a new update drops, I’m much more engaged… Its also one of the reasons I’ve struggled so hard to work on a for profit book that I could sell and make money on. Writing 150 or 200 pages with no validation or feed back is a difficult prospect for me. I am still working on it, who knows if something will ever come of it but… I digress. I’m mentioning all of this because I want you all to know how much I appreciate all the support you guys have given me. I appreciate how patient you’ve been and the words of encouragement telling me to take all the time I need and what not. I also want to make sure you guys know that if I go a while without an update or without saying anything in the forums that it has nothing to do with you. Quite the opposite in fact. Without you guys I know I wouldn’t come back and work on BDH or hit the forums to write responses to questions. or whatever. You guys are the reason I do this and without your comments or questions supporting me I can guarantee I wouldn’t have it in me to continue doing it. So please keep doing what you guys do. Read the new chapters, maybe pop on if you have the time or feel like it and tell me what you thought. Even a simple “Loved the new chapter,” is something I see and believe me when I say I couldn’t thank you enough for taking your time to tell me how you feel. Well… enough of that lol on to the new chapter. From what I’ve seen, everyone is really enjoying it. I am glad you guys enjoyed the tension at the end. I worked really hard to make that scene believable and tense. I really wanted you guys to be hanging on every word wondering if Alex was going to fly off the handle, or what was going to happen. This moment is one I’ve had in mind for the story since near the beginning. Almost everything in this chapter is something important to the plot and to what will come and it was very important to me to capture the position Emma was in when Alex popped the question. The sex scene was a question mark for me at the end of the last chapter. I wasn’t sure what to do. In the end, I decided that I really wanted to capture the affection Emma and Cara were developing for each other. That in turn led me organically to Alex’s thought process of “well if I can’t talk to Emma, I might as well go and apologize to Ari.” Knowing that it could only help him to get back on Emma’s good side. I also made a calculated choice put two scenes in and make them shorter that way I could fit in both without the story dragging as a result. I think it worked out well and… If I do say so myself, I really love the imagery in the Emma x Cara scene . I’m sure most of you know how much I adore them and that adoration made that scene so easy for me to write…. As for Chapter 50, I have a lot planned. Obviously I need to wrap up the proposal. But I also need to set up a time jump so that I can get Alexandra into the harem. If you remember from chapter 45, Kendall told Alex that she needed two or three weeks to get Alexandra ready. That was 2 days ago lol… So I plan to have a big time jump. In fact it just might come to all of chapter 51 being dedicated to a massive fast forward sprinkled with a bunch of very short sex scenes. But until I really make some progress on chapter 50, I wont’ know exactly how things will play out. If you’re wondering though I very much plan to have Alexandra’s big entrance to take place in chapter 52, because even if things happen more quickly, the scene I have in mind for her is pretty huge and will take up a chunk far to big for me to try and cram into an earlier chapter. Okay, I feel like I’ve rambled far too long now lol… Let me address your comments and I’ll wrap this up. ArcherNexus: The main reason for the difference between that A and B list are that if I was to recast BDH and write a new version of it with a similar scenario, there are some celebs that I’ve never or hardly worked with that I would want to include. I agree the A list is better because it includes almost all of my current very, very favorite celebs lol...However, I have to disagree with you that none of the girls have consented or enjoy their place in the harem. Taylor is fully on board, and I think there is plenty of room to argue that Chloe, Emma, Bella, and maybe even Margot are right there too. Even Ariana I think has really embraced her role as kitty. I would say that everyone has a few reservations sometimes, but that is just life. Even people who “have everything:” money, a sexy partner and a job they love still have problems and complain. That’s just the way life is... And for the upcoming nude scenes I’d have to say the one I’m most looking forward to is Saoirse’s she is, after all, the only one we haven’t seen before. But on a side note, every time and I mean every time I see that scene in The Wolf of Wallstreet where Margot walks out of the room fully naked, my jaw hits the floor… Sazbi: First let me assuage your concerns… I abso-fucking-lootly plan to include a scene where one of the girls has sex with Ari when she’s dressed up like and behaving as a kitty. I’ve had that thought in my head for a long while now, probably since I brought her in and just haven’t found a good opportunity to insert it. Believe me when I say I think it’ll be just as hot as you do... As we ramp up toward the last dozen or so chapters (who knows how many it will actually take for me to finish) the tension in the harem should mostly be on the rise! Romavictrix: The proposal (not the actual wedding (should it come to that), will definitely be resolved in the next chapter. I’m glad you liked the chapter, and Alexandra is on the way! I’m glad you’re excited for her. I know I’m looking forward to writing her first scene! Well: Oh yeah! The story hit 250,000 views! I am so excited. As to the question can I believe it… Well, on the one hand, I knew I would get there with the release of this chapter. But on the other. If you’d asked me when I first starting writing this I’d have said there wasn’t any way I’d ever hit a mark like that! I honestly didn’t think anyone would want to read this story. It started out as a fantasy I used to play out in my head when I was a teenager…. lol and now its a huge deal! Alright ladies and gents, I feel like I’ve rambled on enough… If you have any other comments or questions on the new chapter or anything else I guess for that matter, please post it up. I’ll try to be around the next few days to respond. Till next time, -Mal
  4. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Updated today! I absolutely plan to come back on to talk about some things and address the comments, but I’ve been up for like 24 hours and am exhausted… I wanted to get this posted before I find my bed and fall into it face first… But worry not, I shall return! Till next time, -Mal
  5. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey guys, just thought I’d check in again to address the comments since there have been a few since my last response. ArcherNexus: I really appreciate the vote of confidence I’m glad that you think I have what it takes to write a serious novel, and I have to say the original project I’m working on now I can tell you is a huge, serious project that could take years to fully finish… I feel obliged to point out though that, in my opinion, writing is less of a talent and more of a skill. Its something to be developed. It does however require patience, but discipline I think only contributes to your overall productivity. I mean think of BDH its about 700 pages right now. There are writers who pump out a novel like that almost every year and BDH has taken four. And this new project has the potential for much much more… I’m almost a little intimidated by the potential scope. But I plan to start small and work from there. I’ve already created a backstory of about 10 pages to build on and from there I’ll start on the actual story, trying to keep it small, at least in the beginning. As for Alexandra’s first scene… I wish I could tell you more. But all I CAN say is that I’ve had a punishment room scene in mind ever since I decided on her as the final choice a long time back. It should be hot… I hope that’s enough lol… This is a very interesting question. I’m not sure there is anything I would change… per say… (I don’t regret any of the ladies I’ve brought in if that’s what you meant). The main thing I would make different however, would be the passage of time. At this point in the story, I think it would be much more believable if we were at more like 6-9 months into the first celebrities’ captivity than the 46 days that we’re at currently. I like the characterizations I’ve come up with though I admit I have struggled to set each girl apart from the others, to give each a unique feel and arch. With so many ladies and such a limited scope of activity I definitely think that has been one of my biggest challenges… On a separate note, your question did make me ponder one of my own. Basically I got to thinking who would I cast in BDH if I were to a) start completely over (i.e. if I had never wrote BDH in the first place) and b) who would I cast if I were to write BDH starting today (assuming that I’ve worked with the ladies currently in BDH). And, because I like lists… here are those two. Billion Dollar Harem Cast List (if I were starting from scratch back in 2016) (Not necessarily in the order they would appear) Emma Watson Cara Delevingne Margot Robbie Taylor Swift Saoirse Ronan Dove Cameron Alexandra Daddario Elsa Hosk Gal Gadot Ariana Grande Alexina Graham (I didn’t know who she was in 2016 but I love her as the only redhead) Billion Dollar Harem Cast List (if I were starting today (2020) and had wrote BDH back in 2016) (Alas there will be no redheads….) (Also not necessarily in the order they would appear) Emma Watson Cara Delevingne Saoirse Ronan Sabrina Carpenter Alexandra Daddario Elsa Hosk Kiernan Shipka Zendaya Coleman Isabella Merced Freya Allen Madison Beer As to your question/comment about Saoirse Ronan… God I wish I could have fit her in to this story. She is now one of my absolute favorites. But by the time I really started to consider her I had very limited space left, basically the last two spots. I wanted to do a vote for one, and I needed Kendall for the story so… yeah, she got left out . But I am definitely glad I could raise your opinion of Cara. I like Kendall and Ariana, but God… there is just something about Cara that really gets my motor running. I think she is way underrated in the celeb fanfic world and that brings a tear to my eye. I’m sure it has something to do with her infectious personality, a killer smile, bright sexy blue eyes and that body type that I just love so much… Anyway… I digress. I admit, I had to do a bit of a double take with your last comment. Margot, Saoirse and Alexandra are doing new (or first time) nude scenes? To that, I have to ask, When, Where and how much? . Well: Glad to hear from you again my friend, its been a while! Glad you enjoyed the chapter and the backstory / info dump on Arcadia. As for Taylor, it has not yet been documented in the story whether she has been given / slipped the drug at some point… Perhaps in time we shall see. Finally, I don’t have plans for a nightclub room or an ABC party, but I do have something in the works (based on a comment some time back) that should make everyone very happy… at least I hope. Romavictrix: Glad to be back! I really appreciate the sentiment. Sometimes it is very hard to motivate myself to work on BDH knowing how much work is still ahead on it. But, knowing you guys really want to know how it will all turn out combined with how much work I’ve already put into it and I’ve got great motivation to finish it. It is great to know that I’ve already sold one copy lol! I will however say that this current project is in a very early stage, and promises to be quite a huge undertaking. As I said above I’ve got 10 pages of just background / world building info already and that isn’t really done yet. I hope though that this project will be a unique combination of serious sci-fi/fantasy and erotic novel like people have never seen before. I have been working on BDH and this new project quite a lot lately. So here’s to hoping I can keep up a good pace. Well gang, that’s about it for now. As I just mentioned, I have been working on BDH and my new project quite a lot and I think I am well on course to get chapter 49 out sometime near the end of the month. So if you’re following along, look for it around then! Take care everyone, wear your masks, and I’ll talk to you all again real soon! -Mal
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    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey guys, Thanks for all the wonderful comments! I mean to write this response post the other night at work, but the wifi was out and I wasn’t able to log in. So sorry if its a little late, but I’d like to take a moment to respond now and let you guys know what’s going on with me right now. First some news. I’ve been doing some work on the new chapter, not too much so far, mostly mental outlining and trying to decide what I want the main sex scene of the chapter to be. Its been so long since we’ve seen some of these characters in action, not just because I haven’t produced anything in a while, but also because some of the girls haven’t been active in a few chapters. I noticed just the other day that Bella, for example hasn’t been with Alex since like chapter 28! Then you have characters like Dove and Ariana who haven’t had much interaction just because they are new and, of course, there are my personal favorites whom I’d simply like to just work with again, like Emma and Cara… Good news is I have a pretty good idea where the chapter is going from a plot point, and once I work out the pairing I want to highlight as the main scene it should be easy to figure out how to get there so I can get started writing. I don’t really have a time table for release yet but I’m aiming for sometime near the end of July or so… As a side project, I’m also still trying to work on an erotic novel (book) I can sell on Amazon so that maybe, just maybe I can see a little money for my efforts. I’ve had several ideas like this in the past, and so far I’ve had a hard time getting them off the ground. So, this time I’m wanting to take a slightly different approach. As this new idea of mine is pretty big in scope, I’m basically starting with world building. I’ve been creating some of the main characters, creating a backstory and actually creating an outline so that I can better track the course of the story. (This outline is pretty simple as I still feel I work best when I have the freedom to go where my instincts take me). But I’m hoping that this will give me an easier time getting started, once I actually try to start writing the novel. So often I find it difficult to gain momentum and I hope that by laying a solid foundation this time that the path to a beginning will be easier. Okay, now on to you guys: Bill Friese: Good to see you again! Thanks for the comments! I’m really glad you enjoyed the chapter, let me see if I can answer your questions. 1) I assume by side story you’re referring to Kendall befriending Alexandra and luring her to the harem? Assuming that, it will take a few months. Kendall attends the premier party in February and the first abductions (Emma, Taylor, Bella, Chloe and Margot) don’t even happen till mid March(ish). The harem has been in operation for almost 3 months so… yeah it’ll take her months to get close and befriend her. If they question is “How long will you have to wait before you see Alexandra in the harem?” Then the answer to that is #@%#$%#@#$@# (spoiler alert, section deleted). 2) Will Kendall become a full member of the harem? Yes, absolutely she will. What fun would it be if she did all the work to help Alex abduct these women if she wasn’t then put in a position where they might find out? Desert: First off, thank you so much for the compliment. I really appreciate it. This story is a lot of work, and its hard to express how long a simple thank you goes towards making me feel the justification for working on it. As someone who’s read it through multiple times, I hope there aren’t too many incongruities? I work harder than I think most people realize not to contradict myself. The challenge of writing a story like this where one chapter gets published before the entire thing is done is that its easy to get caught up in the moment of writing and forget something that I said in a previous chapter. I know there was a lot of tension, so to speak, between the Gal Gadot supporters and the Alexandra Daddario supporters, I was honestly kind of neutral on the matter as they are both hot. (though honestly, I think I find Alexandra a little hotter because of the eyes (eyes are sort of my thing), but I do think Gal has the better body...) I am glad that your choice was the winner . To answer your question, no, my choices weren’t at all influenced by nude scenes. I had two major parameters for choosing the celebrities I did. 1st and I’d say foremost, is my personal attraction to them. Not one of the women selected or put up for vote was a celebrity that I don’t find incredibly attractive. There is no way I could spend so much time working with them without having that attraction (although I will say occasionally on social media mostly when she’s not trying I’d say that Bella Thorne rides the line. Sometimes she’s a fucking smoke show and sometimes she looks like a greasy homeless beach goer...) But I digress… My 2nd parameter has to do with popularity (mostly on social media). The popularity of a celebrity meets two needs. 1, Alex is a collector of rare things. He wants popular, he wants rare, he wants things that other people want and can’t get. Because of that, the popularity of a celebrity is a big draw. 2, The popularity of a celebrity means that I could find more and new readers as I add someone’s favorite celeb to the story. I hope that helps lol… Juan: Hello again, my friend! Thank you for the warm welcome back, I’m glad to be working on BDH again and I hope I don’t make you guys wait as long for the next chapter. Lets see, lots to unpack here. I think that it is frustrating to work so hard on something and feel as if people aren’t appreciative of that work. I think that is the hardest part. Made more so by the medium, the only way to show support for an author on this site is to force a reader into writing a comment or a post and I know how hard it can be to find the right words, trust me its not always so easy. I never really did this to “crush” the other writers, and I know your comment was about illustrating how many views I have not about being better than anyone. But… if you look at BDH’s dragon print count. First and foremost a story gets 1 DP per chapter per device. So you could return a thousand times, if its from the same device, you’re counted once. Assuming that most people visit from the same device each time, I think the count comes out to like 5100 per chapter (even less if people often visit from 2 or more devices), and there are plenty of celeb stories who hit those kinds of numbers. I guess what I’m saying that while true, I know BDH is big, its hardly the biggest in terms of views per chapter and that makes other forms of support even more important in my opinion. Although I am very glad to hear that people have read through the entire thing more than once! It does make me feel like people care about the story. Thanks again for the comments and the compliment, it really does mean a lot. In closing, thanks again you guys and I’ll continue to try and be around if you have other comments or questions. Though I might start checking in every week or so now that the comments seem to have slowed down. I hope to hear more from you guys and I’ll try to keep you all updated on my work on the next chapter and on my novel as they continue. Till next time, -Mal
  7. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey gang, just popping on real quick to address some of the comments since my last post. First off, I want to thank everyone who took the time to write something. I also just wanted to say that my post about the problem I have with fanfiction wasn’t to try and guilt you guys into commenting. But was more to point out that it gets me down when I put so much effort into something and seemingly get no reward. I really do appreciate the comments nonetheless and want to say that I can’t thank you guys enough for supporting me. Guestish: No, lol I did not catch the plague. I live in a small town in the middle of nowhere, I think we’ve had less than 200 cases during the entire quarantine, and I take all the proper precautions when I got out, mask, hand sanitizer etc. So even though I have an “essential,” and public job, I have avoided it. I also very much appreciate your support over the years and am very glad you’re enjoying the story. Have you read my other works, or do you just enjoy BDH? Guest1998: Thank you as well, Guest1998 for your support over the years. I really do appreciate it and I’m very glad you enjoyed the choice of the final girl who will enter the harem. On a side note, if your handle means that you were born in 1998 I feel very old indeed… Megaman: Thanks for the kind words, Megaman. There is nothing wrong, at the basics with not writing a comment or hitting a like. But it is, unfortunately one of the only ways that readers of fanfiction can show support to the writers. Its nothing to feel sorry for, if it makes you uncomfortable to do so. But I will say that even just a quick: “Loved your story, thanks for writing it!” Goes a long long way to helping those of us who pour so much effort into everything we write. I appreciate the sentiment of “have a nice weekend.” Unfortunately for me, I work every weekend. My “weekend” is in the middle of the week. ArcherNexus: I’m very glad to hear you enjoyed the new chapter. Honestly, I probably could have made it a two or even three part chapter, since so much stuff happened. It would have made the ending much more believable too, but I really wanted to get back to the main story so I used some exposition to cram everything into one chapter. (Coincidentally though, chapter 48 is, by a substantial margin, my longest chapter yet). I have many reasons for selecting Kendall Jenner as one of the two final girls to enter the harem, which I’m sure you know since you’ve been following this thread for a while. But my main reason was her connection to many of the characters and her influence across multiple industries. I think those things made her a very plausible spy to help Alex collect data on his targets. It also doesn’t hurt that, despite what you may think of her as a person, she is incredibly hot. As to the “I love you” at the end. I nearly removed it. My editor suggested I do so, and I did where she said it in an earlier moment in her training. But I decided to leave in the I love you at the end because I figured that it was more an effect of the euphoric feeling that she was experiencing as she was high on Arcadia and had just had the best orgasms of her life than her saying it out of genuine love. Here is what I have to say about the fanfiction you wrote. I remember reading part of it. I think I even commented on it in a review and I’m pretty sure I enjoyed what I had read up to that point. The main thing that you CAN get out of writing fanfiction, is practice. As a writer, I feel you are wholly unprepared to write a serious, feature length work, something that could be legitimately published, either by you or an actual publishing company until you’ve got at least a thousand hours of writing under your belt. Your work just won’t be sophisticated enough to sell till you’ve had enough practice to refine your own unique technique. I would urge you, that if this is a goal of yours, to continue to work on your fanfiction. Even if you don’t get much feedback you will get practice and that is not an insignificant reward for your hard work. I want to thank you again for your kind words, and I will reiterate what I said. I will finish it, just the only question is how long it will take… Thanks again, and good luck with your own endeavors. Take-Takeoff: Thank you for the kind words. I’m very glad you’ve enjoyed what you read and I’m very happy that you’re looking forward to Alexandra’s upcoming appearance. I haven’t decided exactly how long it will be till she makes it into the harem. I need to have a small amount of time pass before I can bring in Kendall and Alexandra. But I can promise that her entrance will be one to remember! Sazbi: I’m sorry that Gal didn’t make it in. I had one spot left, and at least one of the prevailing reasons Alexandra made it over Gal is that I personally find Alexandra much hotter than Gal… Those eyes of Alexandra are just…. well they are just too damn much. I figured that if this is the last fanfiction I write (no idea if that will be the case), but if it was, I just HAD to include Alexandra or I would hate myself . As to Kendall, I think there are a lot of interesting potential points of tension. There is the question of whether or not the other girls will find out that SHE played such a significant roll in their capture. There is the really close friendships she had with not just Taylor Swift, but Kendall is also BFFs with Cara Delevingne. And how will that play out with Emma being in the picture? And finally, as you said how will Kendall’s addiction to Arcadia effect the others, especially Bella? There are plenty of very interesting opportunities there. I am excited to finally get the entire cast together as I ramp up towards my planned ending and I’m as excited as you to see where everything goes… Should be very interesting! Okay gang. I’ll be around at least every other day or so to respond to any other comments that might emerge. So if you guys have any other questions or concerns or whatever, let me know and I’ll try to respond to them. Till next time, -Mal
  8. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey gang! I’m going to try and keep this relatively short, but we’ll see how that goes lol… I just want to say a few words about why I was gone for so long and why I was quiet during that time. So, as some of you correctly deduced, I was feeling more than a little burned out on BDH. I had hoped, to distract myself, and entertain you guys while I dealt with those feelings by trying something new. That new thing was the short lived Going Gonzo series which had quite a significant voter turn out on CSL. But, despite that enthusiasm, it was met with, (at least what seemed to me), a very tepid response. See, here is the thing about fanfiction, and in particular, the problem with celebrity fanfiction. I want to quickly add an addendum to this mini rant, which is, that if you are one of the people actually reading this, this rant probably doesn’t apply to you. The thing about fanfiction is that the people who are writing it ARE DOING IT FOR FREE! (sorry for the caps). What I mean by that is that the people who take the time out of their busy, hectic, crazy lives to write shit for the whole universe to see get very few perks for all their hard work. One of those perks for me especially is to see the view count go up, or to interact with you guys as you write all your lovely comments, or, in the case of CSL, to see those likes accumulate. And, the problem is that not everyone feels the need to hit a like button, and even fewer, the need to comment or drop a review. This is especially exacerbated with celebrity fanfiction because, at least for many, there is a taboo around writing fiction about real people. (I personally feel that once you turn someone into a character they cease to be a real person… but that is a whole different argument which would require many many more lines for me to fully explain)… But I digress. With celeb fanfiction many people don’t mind reading it, but they don’t want their handle (username) associated with it, so they might not comment or like for that reason alone. The other problem with celebrity fanfiction stems from the fact that it is inherently easier to write as you already have a real person to base your fictional character off of (and many of the people writing celeb fics omit any sort of character development entirely). This means that the caliber or skill of the people who write it tends to be less. I can maybe name 2 or 3 writers of celeb fiction at best who I would consider to produce quality work. The rest is a giant field of steaming shit. This lack of quality writing also exacerbates the likes and comments problem because people get used to reading sub-par work and thus get used to the idea that they don’t need to offer the writer any support. So here is my problem. I put 40 or so (maybe less, but sometimes a little more) hours of work into a 20 page chapter which I can comfortably produce once a month. Essentially I am adding 1 unpaid work day to my week each and every week during a month to write quality fanfiction. Now, it might be selfish to say this, but I am working, I feel like I should get something out of it. So when I produce a new chapter or whatever the only thing I get out of it is the likes and the comments. But, because (as stated above) readers of celebrity fanfiction tend to be notorious for NOT doing those things and it really gets me down. Going Gonzo, saw a very lackluster response, even on CSL, where dozens of people voted to select a star and a scenario. Add to that, I’m already feeling burned out because of the sheer volume of time invested in Billion Dollar Harem. (Which by last count is over 700 pages and nearing 2000 hours to produce.) And I’m not going to lie, I seriously considered being done with writing all together. I however, being the calm, logical person I am, didn’t want to do anything rash. I decided to think about it. Well… that thought process took months. I would check in here periodically, just to see how the stories were doing and to read your comments. I felt bad about ignoring them I can assure you. But I knew that I just needed to keep my distance while I thought about what I wanted to do. Eventually, the writing bug hit me and I decided to do another chapter of BDH. I’d like to say that I’m going to dive back in with both feet and get to work on finishing the story up, but I seriously doubt I will…. Obviously, this chapter doesn’t finish the story and there are many things still unresolved. To that, I say I AM NOT DONE WRITING! But… I’m also not sure that I’m going to buckle down every month and take time from things, when I feel more like doing something else to work on BDH. The bottom line is that I have every intention of finishing BDH, but I also probably won’t be producing a chapter every month (unless I feel like it ). I’d like to emphasize that if you’re one of the people reading this, and you’ve gotten all the way down to here, you are definitely not part of the problem. I want to thank you guys, the ones who do take the time to comment, the ones who read every chapter even when it doesn’t feature a celeb that your “into,” or that on other sites, hits that like button. I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it again, this story would never have gotten to this point without you guys, because honestly you’re the only ones who make it worth the effort. Thanks again everyone! I look forward to hearing from you guys again real soon and seeing your reaction to the new chapter! Till next time, -Mal P.S. I considered taking the time to address all the comments, but its been so long on many of them and in other cases this post answers those questions I chose not to. I would love to address any new comments. So if this post didn’t address your concern, or you have a new question to ask please do so and I will make every effort to answer it.
  9. Mal

    Billion Dollar Harem

    I was hoping to get the chapter up this morning but alas I’m not going to get it done in time. I’m sorry to have kept you all waiting so long, and I promise I’ll have some things to say about why I was quiet for so long when I post the chapter. But I wanted to pop on really quick and say that because I didn’t meet my deadline tonight, I likely won’t get the chapter posted for a few more days… It is now my hope to finish it up and post it by early Saturday morning, so if you’re eagerly waiting in anticipation of the release, it should be up in time for your morning cartoons… (Are Saturday morning cartoons even still a thing?) Anyway look for it then, and I hope you enjoy it. Till next time, -Mal
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    Billion Dollar Harem

    I don’t know who this Guest Mal is lol, but its not over… I’ll have a brief update on why I’ve been silent here in the next few days when I release chapter 28. So, if I may quote Uncle Iroh from Avatar the Last Airbender: “You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.” lol… I’ll have a more in depth update soon.
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    Going Gonzo

    Author: MalTitle: Going GonzoSummary: This and all episodes of this story will feature a celebrity / celebrities and a major theme (kink) both chosen by fan poll. Episodes will be told / staged with a second person heavily focused point of view and will be heavily focused gonzo style porn featuring little to no plot.Feedback: Yes, please, of course.Fandom: CelebrityPairing: Random (voted on by fans)Warnings: 3Plus Anal DP HJ MF Oral PWP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://celeb.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094843 This story will feature a unconnected series of gonzo style stories featuring little to no plot. There will be a rotating cast and kink chose by fan polling. (I’m using another site for the poll). I’m not sure if I’m allowed to put links to, or discuss other websites here, so I’ll simply say if you want to know where to look drop me an email. The first episode is a cons style gangbang where seven nameless, faceless strangers knock boots with a sexy Victoria Secret model, in this case the delightfully cute, super hot, Elsa Hosk.
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    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey guys, I really hate doing this. But I’m putting Billion Dollar Harem on the back burner for a maybe a month or two. I don’t really have an excuse except I think I’m getting a little burnt out on it. In the mean time, I’m going to be working on a new series called Going Gonzo. It will be a series of unconnected stories which will contain little to no plot. The only thing linking them together will be a magic / alien viewing screen that allows the viewer to see anything their heart’s desire. To decide who and what will be seen. I’m using the forum of another site I post my stories at to create a poll that users can vote. I’ve also created, on that site, another post where users can offer up suggestions for celebs and content they’d like to see featured in the poll. I’m not sure if I’m allowed to do this, but if you’d like to participate, the site is called Celebrity Story Library, and the posts to look for are “The Going Gonzo Suggestion Box” for dropping off any suggestions, and the Going Gonzo polls will be labeled by number. (The second poll has 3 days left on it if you’re interested). I’ll happily take your suggestions here, but the only way to vote is on that site…. In other news, this has been a horribly shitty month for me, well past two weeks really. I got horribly sick with the flu (I never get sick fyi). The last time I was really sick was at least 5-6 years ago. I also wrecked my car. I was driving to a friends house where we were me and some friends were going on a day trip to a nearby big city to see the new Star Wars in Imax… Well I hit a patch of ice and flew off the road down a 25 foot embankment. The car was nearly a total loss and cost me the full deductible (money I certainly didn’t have) to repair it. Not to mention the fact that I nearly died… If the car had rolled, or there had been an on-coming vehicle, it would be my ghost typing this right now (not that I believe in ghosts ). Then finally, days after my wreck, I basically lost my job. I found out that my job was being outsourced, and if I wanted to keep it, I’d have to reapply with the new company. So yeah, bright cheery start to the new year…. In the week since those two weeks, I’m over the flu, just barely (still coughing and hacking up unrecognizable crap), but feeling much better. My car is done being fixed, I got it back just today actually. And I’ve applied and gotten the job with the new company. Now lets just hope they don’t fuck with shit too much so that I can continue to write and slack off while I’m here…. <fingers crossed> Anyways, I’m planning to post the first episode of Going Gonzo sometime next week. If you have any questions, or comments or anything, feel free to let me know. I’m hoping that working with some celebs who aren’t in BDH will get me in the mood to get back to work on it. And in the mean time, you’ll have some random hot fantasies to read. Oh, the first episode (voted on by fans) will star Elsa Hosk of Victoria Secret fame in a cons style gangbang! That’s it for now guys, till next time, -Mal
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    Billion Dollar Harem

    Hey guys! I noticed there were a couple of posts and thought I’d pop on (as promised) to address them. Sazbi: First off, thank you so much for continuing to comment, even when I was having trouble putting this together and it may have seemed like I might not post . Also, thank you for inquiring about my wellness. It was a hard couple of weeks after my family medical emergency. Dealing with that, work, and feeling pressure to get the chapter done made it very hard for me to work and focus. The support you and everyone here shows me is amazing and, as I’ve said before, is probably the only reason Billion Dollar Harem has survived this long. At this point, I want to finish it for you fans much more than I want to finish it for me (I know how it ends already . As to your post, the new girl in 47 isn’t the poll girl. The last fan poll was a sort of feeler to see who you guys MIGHT want to see and when it concluded, I told you guys it would be one of two people. Those two ladies were Alexandra Daddario and Gal Gadot. So one of them will be introduced as the final girl, and likely soon at that. I’m assuming, by the wording of your post that your comment and question refers to Kendall . In that regard, let me say this, her introduction into the harem will be unique, and I can promise you that it will be fun. I can’t / don’t want to say anymore about it because I don’t want to give anything away. Finally, your comment about the last girl before the time jump. In my previous post, I said something like there’s one more thing to deal with before the time jump or something to that effect. What I was referring to wasn’t one girl, so much as an event, and that event, of course, is the proposal cliffhanger I left off with at the end of 46. Once that is wrapped up, I’ll move forward with the time jump. Juan: Arcadia is an interesting plot twist. It wasn’t something that I went into the story intending to add. But after the first… I don’ t know, ten-twelve chapters at most I started thinking about how hard it would be to pull off the “heist” Alex does in the first chapter. At first I just thought “well this is a porno, who cares how he did it.” But as I’ve said from the beginning, what I care about most, within the context of the story, is believably. I want you guys to feel that, inside the story, that this guy could really have pulled this off. So I started thinking about “well, what if he had an inside man?” And the idea of a celebrity who was somehow forced to help him just sort of snowballed out of that, as did the Arcadia plot line. I would say that certainly by chapter 20 or so the idea of this drug and more or less how it might work had taken shape. But I also didn’t want to lose one of the more important plot points to a drug that could easily break these celebrity’s minds down. And that is just the fact that Alex enjoys the breaking process. He doesn’t want to rely on a drug and he would much prefer not to use it. So, in Bella’s case, I think he felt he’d had enough of her shit and wanted to make sure she was kept in line. And as for Kendall, he needed to ensure she was fanatically loyal to keep his secret and to perform the job he needed of her. In general, I don’t expect you’ll see too much more Arcadia moving forward (there are obviously some plot points involving it to tie up first), but after that, Alex prefers to and will always try to rely on the methods which have served him well so far. (and yes I love the new Bella too ) As for Kendall’s intro to the harem and the drama which will likely follow… again, I can’t really say that would be giving too much away. All I can say is what I told Sazbi, it will be fun and I promise it will be entertaining. Thanks so much you two for the comments and questions. I’ll be around for a few more days at least if anyone else posts between now and then, I’ll be around to answer them. Till next time, -Mal
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    Billion Dollar Harem

    Chapter 47 is up! If you want to talk about it drop by my thread in the M/F section of celebrity fiction! Hope to hear from you guys! -Mal
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    Billion Dollar Harem

    Greetings from the Black! Hi everyone, I’m back / here, or something again! I know its been a while and for that I do apologize. It seems like all I do lately is miss my self imposed deadlines… In this case, I have one good excuse and one not so good excuse… First, let me put everyone’s worries to bed. I am fine, and the family medical emergency which kept me from writing for about a week has been resolved. The effected family member is doing better and getting stronger every day. We (my family and I) all have high hopes that a full recovery for the person involved is not only possible, but is well underway. So that is excuse number 1. I had a big family emergency which drastically cut into the time I had to work. Excuse number 2 isn’t nearly as good… but here it goes… As some of you know I struggle with mental health issues from time to time, and while I wouldn’t say this was that… I went through a period of about 2 weeks where I found it nearly impossible to motivate myself to work. As you will see when you read this chapter, it is something different and introduces a new character ( I won’t revel who here), but because I was doing something kind of new with a kind of new character the story didn’t come as easily to me as chapters of BDH usually do, add to that a general feeling of malaise and the writing of this chapter just sort of dragged on…. I missed many self imposed deadlines which caused me to feel worse and it wasn’t easy to pull my shit together…. All I have to say is thank goodness my editor is a very patient person! Okay, enough of that. I want very much to talk about this chapter! But I also don’t want to give anything away. What I’ll say for now is that this chapter is a prologue and it introduces one of the two remaining women who will join Alex’s harem. In this chapter we learn even more of Alex’s back story… the whys and more importantly the hows behind him pulling off the bold kidnappings on that first night 46 days ago. Also, if you pay attention, you’ll be able to figure out a pretty detailed timeline of how and when things came together. The last thing I’ll say about the chapter at least before people have had a chance to read it, is that it adds a lot more details about Arcadia and how it works… Chapter 48 will also likely be mostly a prologue. But I may jump down the timeline and give you guys a surprise at the end. I haven’t really decided yet. It will probably depend on how things come together. But the main thing the next chapter will focus on is to further develop the new character and to give you guys more insight on how many of the women in Alex’s harem came to be captured. Depending on how many pages it takes to finish this prologue story, I may end up back in the harem and back on the normal timeline. There’s a cliffhanger that needs wrapping up there, and then I want to do a time jump to get us to the point where I can bring in the final celebrity. If you guys remember from way way back, this last celeb will be the one you guys voted on, and who I told you would be one of two celebrities. I can’t say for sure when she’ll be unveiled, but it is coming very soon. This is the part where I’d normally address your comments, but its been so long since I’ve done properly done this that I’m not exactly sure where I left off. I know its been a long time since I’ve done this, but rest assured the I’ve read all your wonderful comments and I love hearing from you. Because its been a while, I promise you guys that I’ll be bouncing in the next few days and if you have a comment or a question you’d like addressed post it up. I’m going to try to be around and respond to them. And next time I post a chapter, I will make sure I address any comments that I haven’t gotten to. Thank you guys so much and I can’t wait to hear your responses to this chapter and to the new celebrity! Till next time, -Mal