Crossroadsmk2 Updates

[Guest ABigFan]

Love the direction of a story and how she easily beat Nia and Kana in the game.

I thought that money divide was too much in Lara’s favour. Perhaps the real divide should be like that, like in the end she would get 60% paid into her account, but it could have been better for her to think that majority of that money would go to her owner Sarah. That way she would again be reminded that she is Sarah’s property.

Just an idea, you may disregard it completely

[Guest LaraCunt]

Another fantastic chapter, I think it's incredible how you describe the events without it seeming too forced, great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, while it doesn't arrive, I'll be doing some art imagining Lara's Meet and Greet =D

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1y52x5YtjIeLQKEB1C920D4FMzAcP1bD2/view?usp=sharing

[Guest LHunt]

LaraCunt,

Love all your meet and greet art on Lara. Awesome job!

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi LHunt, in the original version, I would have had Lara being exploited more by Sarah, but the direction I went was to manipulate and corrupt Lara into exploiting herself. Lots of girls get sucked into doing Onlyfans because of the easy money and fame, so I thought the same could be true for Lara (also, Sarah hardly needs the money, and it's never been about money for her anyway - it's about possessing and controlling Lara).

Hi LaraCunt, as always, love the artwork! Thanks so much for creating and sharing it with everyone!

Finally, a question to everyone. Would you be in favour of Lara doing another collaboration with Kana and Nia? Or do you think that would be a little repetitive and I should just move on to some male pornstars?

If I did another Kana and Nia collaboration, it would be more of the game-style challenges of the first scene, with Kana and Nia teaming up in a rematch with Lara.

One event would involve an ovipositor. Kana and Nia have to fill one hole each (either pussy or ass with as many eggs as possible. Lara has to do both holes at the same time and beat their combined score. Haven't decided on any others yet (open to fun suggestions). Just wanted to hear your thoughts, if it's something you'd be interested in reading, or if you'd rather just move on?

 

[Guest Laracunt]

I'm glad you liked the art LHunt and CrossroadsMK2.  😁

 

I'm happy that you changed the story so that Lara degraded herself, it's as if this was already inside her and it was just a push for everything to come to light. 

 

I love Lara's interaction with Kana and Nia, seeing Lara competing with other women to see who is the sluttiest for me is always good, as if it were an Olympics event hahaha

[Guest Lhunt]

Hey crossroadsMk2,

I like how Lara enjoys both Kana & Nia's company, and how she rolls with their flow. Maybe Sam gets both of them to use the biggest dildo from the last square off competition....after the egg contest...or Sam invites them later to the playroom so they learn how Lara's able to take huge toys.

Love where the possibilities may lead whichever way you go.

Lead the Way Sir.

 

 

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi LaraCunt and Lhunt, thanks for the feedback. I think I'll still keep the playroom separate from Lara's public life. I'm jumping the story forward a couple of weeks, with Lara collaborating with some other female content creators.

For Kana and Nia, I want to keep it a light hearted competition, to keep moving Lara in the right direction. I don't think Kana and Nia could compete with the giant dildo thing. I'm thinking event 1 - Ovipositor and event 3 - gloryhole competition (most blowjobs completed in a given timeframe), using either Charity members that Lara's friends will "convince" to "reluctantly" take part in, or it could be using fans at the game convention. I'm still undecided on event 2. That's the basic plan for the next chapter.

[Guest Ibex]

Hi crossroadsMk2,

Came across this story recently and just wanted to say I am a big fan of your work, amazing!

The previous chapter with Kana and Nia was great. If you’re still looking for ideas for event 2 maybe it could be a sort of bondage challenge, all 3 tying eachover up and taking turns to try and break loose with increasing levels of restraint, the more successful escapes the more points until failure.

Lara unsurprisingly does very well when it’s her turn, breaking free multiple times and getting a bit too overconfident. For her final attempt Sam decides to set her up by secretly making  the next restraint inescapable. Then Kana and Nia to teach her a lesson torment her with toys (vibrators, feathers, etc) until they have her begging and verbally degrading herself so she can orgasm.

Also for upcoming events I thought your idea that you mentioned previously of Lara serving as a ponygirl at another charity event would be very fun to see.  
 

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[Guest Lhunt]

Ohhh...Ibex's idea sounds kinky. They should see how many times they can make Lara orgasm.

Lead the Way!

[Guest LHunt]

Maybe Sam can tie this one in a live stream to the fans and for every like comment of 100K Lara has to be forced to orgasm by Kana & Nia. Sam can advertise before that during the convention, some lucky men will also get special treatment by Lara in a glory hole….all the possibilities Sam can cook up!  

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Ibex, welcome to the forum and I'm happy you're enjoying the story. Be sure to check out my other stories on AFF - the website's a little clunky, but if you click on my username and then stories written, it should take you there.

I like your suggestion for event 2. If I go that direction, I think it'll have to be rope play, as other sorts of restraints (cuffs, shackles, straightjackets etc) don't really require any skill to set-up, so it wouldn't be much of a competition.

Hi LHunt, I'm leaning more towards edging and orgasm denial than for ed orgasms. I think Kana and Nia could have a lot more fun with that, making Lara beg and call herself some truly embarrassing names to be able to cum.

Edited August 13 by CrossroadsMk2

[Guest Ibex]

Hey crossroadsMk2, I agree rope play would make sense and allow for more creativity.

Also just finished reading all the current chapters of Tomb Raider Bliss, really good!

[Guest LHunt]

Just thinking along the lines that the convention is for the fans. Maybe not forced ...but edged to orgasms based on the fan’s likes – comments – and real time participation. Maybe the two porn stars can tell her something like she needs to do better if she wants to have an orgasm – she needs to reach a certain amount before they let her –  still making Lara beg for it and to be used.

Lead the Way!

[Extreme]

Hi Cross, I'm a bit late, but I just want to say that the new chapter was great. I like stories with corruption, both manipulation or when a characters starts to like something they don't like at first. If I sum up the story from the beginning,  its amazing how slowly but super well and believably written Lara's "fall" was and now she's almost completely shameless in what she does. As always I can't wait for the next chapter and new adventures of our now favorite pornstar countess 

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Ibex, glad you enjoyed Tomb Raider Bliss. I plan on finishing that story after the current one. If you enjoyed Bliss, you might also like BDSM Raider and Professor Croft, if you get around to them.

Hi Extreme, thanks for reading and the vote of confidence for the direction of the story. 

Hi LHunt, don't worry - I plan to have Kana and Nia help ease Lara into her true calling of being the most famous pornstar of all time.

[Guest Edyrn]

Hello Crossroads, thank you for your answer.

Like you, I also think that Lara is already too advanced in her depravity to ask herself the question of her video game at the time she streams with the two young girls.

However, it seems that only the hope of recovering her title and finding a (good reputation) still prevents her from going crazy.

If you have perfectly described the relationship between Lara and the work of (charity), therefore her reputation with a certain social circle.

I expect much more to discover in detail her reputation with the general public, both locally and worldwide,   I think that this revelation should be the biggest shock for Lara, as much in the loss of her reputation or the idea she had of it, as in all the love and devotion of her millions of admirers.

So I look forward to your future chapter.

For your question about another stream between Lara, Kana and Nia, I find that if the first one was clearly a physical fitness challenge, I think that the next one should be more of a talent test, a demonstration of all the experience accumulated by Lara these last 8 months. As much as it could make her proud of her prowess, and make her accept even more the evidence of her reconversion.

Whatever you do, I would read it with pleasure.

PS: The image of the outfit for the convention is very beautiful, but isn't it too much if she is not aware of her reputation with the general public?

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Edyrn, a lot of the plot revolves around warping Lara's perspective of what is proper behaviour. Propriety is very contextual: a hundred years ago, a woman showing her legs would have been considered scandalous and gotten you arrested for public indecency, but now women wear bikinis and thongs at the beach, and no one bats and eyelid. In that respect, Lara's social isolation, the explicit support and encouragement from her friends and her own social circle, the enthusiastic support of her fans - everything is designed to skew Lara's sense of reality and make her believe she's making good choices for her career. If you repeat a lie often enough, it becomes the truth.

There will be a tipping point, which I have planned towards the end of the story, a couple of weeks after Lara's year of slavery ends, when Lara attends the AVN awards. Afterwards, while holding her awards for best new performer, best anal sex scene, best gangbang sex scene etc. Lara breaks down crying with the realisation of what she's done, but by then it's far too late.

In terms of Kana and Nia, I think I'll use them to ease Lara into boy/girl scenes with Chad and Tyrone (the pornstars Lara was with for the sex documentary in Switzerland). Could be start with some challenges to bring out Lara's competitive nature (who gives the best blowjob, who can make their man cum quickest from riding them cowgirl etc). As Lara gets more comfortable, Kana and Nia are less involved, acting like fluffers and supporters, as Lara fuck both male pornstars at once.

Edited August 20 by CrossroadsMk2
New idea.