Guest LaraCunt Posted May 4 Report Share Posted May 4 Hi Extreme, it's me, I'm happy to know that you liked my work there, unfortunately I ended up stopping with the photos with captions due to lack of time, but at least I left some with Lara giving blowjobs to fat, ugly and dirty guys 😄 Hello CrossroadsMk2, I'm happy to know that you liked my work, I hope my work helps you create your story, Thank you for responding to me by email =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted May 9 Author Report Share Posted May 9 Hello everyone, just a quick update. Chapter 17 is finished and I've done the first proofread. I'll finish the second proofread later today and will post it tonight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted May 9 Report Share Posted May 9 Outstanding! 😎 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted May 10 Author Report Share Posted May 10 Hi LHunt, I ran out of space this chapter for the Charity fancy dress party, with Lara going as Lady Godiva, so that will happen early in the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted May 10 Report Share Posted May 10 Hey CrossroadsMK2, That’s cool….I think this latest chapter sets up anything in the future regarding Lara - both sexual and psychological. I must say, you did a great job with it all. The tracking device, disguised as a butt plug, to assist catching her whenever she tried to play with herself. That 2 inch watch face giving her a subliminal messages of her being fucked with huge horse dildos, and the African gangbang….-what a set up. All to keep her horny so Sam could accomplish her top priority in making her a porn star. I had to laugh every time she looks at her watch, and the constant checking it, only to see just a minute or so had passed. Those wolf toys used the way the women were using them – WOW! I think they need to be a permanent staple for the playroom, and used in conjunction with the horse toys. The way Lara just automictically did whatever Sam told her during the photoshoot….was hot as fuck, because Lara already wishes it were Sam abusing her in the playroom. Can’t wait till the next chapter, to see how the photo shoots bring Lara further out into the open orchestrated by Sam. That was priceless when Lara was going to her 4pm playtime and Sam is standing there pretending she was looking for her – just priceless in my opinion. Lead the Way Sir! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted May 10 Author Report Share Posted May 10 (edited) Hi LHunt, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I decided to give Lara the Yuri Bezmenov treatment (Ex- KGB defector who gave some interesting interviews on Soviet psychological warfare tactics) to make her transformation as realistic as possible. First was demoralization (shitty maid duties, bullying by other maids etc), then subversion (sex dungeon and sex addiction) and the final stage will be normalisation (gaslighting Lara into accepting her new reality and believing it's normal). The next Charity fancy dress party will be the start of the normalisation phase. The plan a long time ago was to have the Charity members laugh at and belittle Lara, but instead, they're going to start giving her positive reinforcement for her bad behaviour. I've noticed women are great at sabotaging each other by giving bad advice, so I'm going to take that route. The Charity members will all be laughing at Lara behind her back - they think it's hilarious that Sarah wants to transform Lara into a pornstar and the Charity slut, and are eager to help. But to her face, Lara will be praised for her sexy her photoshoots and livestreams (attention and validation). The women will tell her how they caught their husbands jacking off to her, how jealous they are of her (women love to make other women jealous) and how she made their husbands so horny that afterwards they had the best sex of their lives, and now they watch her livestreams together and can't have sex without them (more validation). Lara's ego will get another boost when some of the men admit to her that while having sex with their wives, they're fantasizing about her. Lots of alcohol involved to sell it. Meanwhile, all the women will be posing for photos with the very naked Lara. She thinks it's because she's so popular, but it's a competition amongst the women to get a picture with her, while pointing towards their initials, tattooed on Lara's ribcage (the photos of which will then be posted to social media. So, lots of plans. Also, if anyone can think of any other animal dildos they think might make good additions to the sex dungeon, let me know. I want to keep the tentacles as something just between Sarah and Lara, so looking for something else that's a little unique. Edited May 10 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted May 10 Report Share Posted May 10 Hey CrossroadsMK2, Check your email - Lead the Way Sir! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ABigFan Posted May 11 Report Share Posted May 11 Hey Cross, I feel like I am repeating myself and that every post could be copy/paste from previous just adding some new adjectives to describe what a marvelous job you are doing with the story! Lara’s progression is going on so smoothly, every step is a logical continuation of previous steps taken. Brilliant! Highlights for me were: the LED display watch with all subliminal messages it was sending to Lara Saying that it is “too much” Begging to be ruined Thank you Cross for those amazing stories. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted Sunday at 05:05 PM Author Report Share Posted Sunday at 05:05 PM Hi ABigFan, thanks for the encouraging feedback and glad you're enjoying the plot as it develops. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme Posted Tuesday at 07:25 PM Report Share Posted Tuesday at 07:25 PM Hi Cross, the new chapter was great. I like how Lara's mind is broken deeper and deeper, to the point where she doesn't even care that much about her reputation compared to previous chapters and like ABigFan said everything is perfectly planned Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted Wednesday at 10:18 AM Author Report Share Posted Wednesday at 10:18 AM Hi Extreme, glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the support. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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