Guest Edyrn Posted January 9 Report Posted January 9 Hello and Happy New Year to you. The holidays and end of year celebrations finally passed, I was able to take the time to enjoy this new chapter. I really enjoyed it a lot, so I hope you wouldn't mind my questions and remarks. -In the chapter you refer to other actors who have filmed with Lara, but you don't give the number or details on the scenes. -The convention and glory hole part is excellent, almost too short in my point of view, with "only" 20 winners, Lara made "one mouthful" of it. XD But I find that there is a lack of description of her pleasure or the reasons for it, is it just that she is responding to her mental conditioning of the last few months? Or is she reacting with joy to all the "love" that her fans give her? I really liked the idea of the adult cartoon about her adventures, too bad we never see it, it would definitely be better than the nasty thing released on Netflix ^^ why Hillory to replace the butler Winston? You showed well in the first chapters how Winston had changed towards Lara, keeping him in Sarah's service was not possible? The end of the chapter is interesting, when Sarah tells him that everything was her idea; but when Lara tries to justify herself why no mention of the prison and the abuse suffered there? The trauma seems much more important in the "obedience" she has shown since? Even if I am well aware that it made the event more complicated since this part of the story was hidden from Sam. For the rest, isn't it a bit strange to do the birthday event with sex and the members of the charity since Lara doesn't know that they are the ones taking advantage of her in the game room? For the birthday gangbang, I suggest that only the women use their belts during the afternoon, and that at the end all the men offer her a bukkake, in addition to this radical new experience, it would make a superb new tableau, Lara posing proudly next to her cake. I really like your ideas on upcoming events, with a real preference for the retirement of a professor. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted January 10 Author Report Posted January 10 Hi Edyrn, unfortunately I'm already 2/3 through writing the next chapter, so it's too late to change to just women. Lara not knowing it's the charity members using her in the playroom is addressed at the start of the next chapter (along with more gaslighting by Sam and Sarah, to make it seem like they were doing her a favour). Changing from Winston to Hillary is a strategic move on Sarah's part. Winston is Lara's last anchor to her former life. Even with his changed opinion towards Lara, she'll still be aware of his disapproval. Hillary, in addition to being completely loyal to Sarah, will support Lara's new lifestyle. Over the coming e, he'll make himself indispensable to Lara and ensure she stays on the right course. The choice is also a nod to the butler from the original Angelina Jolie Tomb Raider movies (and poor old Winston is getting old and would probably need to retire soon anyway). The gloryhole fan events are going to be a weekly thing, hence limiting numbers. Also, I wasn't chasing numbers for that scene, because I new bigger events were scheduled for later. I wasn't aware I wasn't describing Lara's enjoyment enough. I'll make a more conscious effort to do so - I think I got focused on moving the plot forward. As for the lack of mention of the Siberian torture, I think Lara wouldn't want to think about it, because of how guilty she feels about betraying Jonah, and how much it crushed her self-confidence being so easily defeated by the Trinity soldiers. Quote
Guest Edyrn Posted January 10 Report Posted January 10 Thank you very much for your replies, sorry for not commenting sooner. Quote
Guest Edyrn Posted January 10 Report Posted January 10 18 minutes ago, Guest Edyrn said: Thank you very much for your replies, sorry for not commenting sooner. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted January 10 Author Report Posted January 10 Hi Edyrn, no need to apologise. Thanks for taking the time to read! Quote
Guest Ibex Posted January 10 Report Posted January 10 Hey, can’t wait till the next chapter comes out, definitely going to be a critical moment for Lara. Also really like your lesbian buissness woman with a foot fetish event idea for later on, hot! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted January 11 Author Report Posted January 11 Hi Ibex, thanks for reading and commenting. Yeah, the next chapter is going to be crucial for explaining Lara's transformation from reluctant participant to insatiable slut. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted January 29 Author Report Posted January 29 Hi everyone, sorry for the lack of updates recently - my personal life has been a bit hectic at the moment. The next chapter is finished and I'm in the process of proofreading it (in between doing other stuff). I'm going to try and make a push over the next couple of days to finish the proofreading and get it posted. Thanks for your patience. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted January 30 Report Posted January 30 Hey CrossroadsMk2, No problem. Take care of family before all else...hope the wife and twins are all doing well. Lead The Way! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted January 30 Author Report Posted January 30 Hi everyone, Chapter 22 has posted. It's another long one, because there was a lot of plot stuff I wanted to cover, to explain the changes to Lara's personality. I hope you enjoy reading it. Hi LHunt, thanks for the good wishes. My wife is doing fine - twins not here yet, but the obstetrician says they'll be coming sometime in the next week. So life's about to get a lot more complicated! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 1 Author Report Posted February 1 Twins came last night - two boys. Both they and mum are doing well. Have a great day everyone! Quote
Guest LHunt Posted February 1 Report Posted February 1 Great news....give my congratulations to your wife, and keep those two bundles of joy warm and safe. Next time...you guys can go for triplets. 😊😊😊 Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 1 Author Report Posted February 1 This makes three, so definitely no more! 😂 Quote
Guest LHunt Posted February 2 Report Posted February 2 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Great chapter as usual. Loved how Sarah used Lara’s attire to gaslight her – just to have her stripped by her frenemies for her birthday gangbang. Making a show of giving her title back early, but showing everyone nothing would change with Lara’s sexual debauchery. The set up was great for Lara (in her mind at least), but the charity members got the most from it I believe. They now are able to see that Lara has no reservations on how she is used. The toast was icing on the cake. Lead the Way Sir! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 2 Author Report Posted February 2 (edited) Hi LHunt, glad you enjoyed reading the chapter. The next chapter will start with Sarah explaining the stages of her plan to the reader, to fill in the gaps. Stage 1 - Isolation (the cornerstone of every good cult brainwashing. Isolate her from friends and broader society, so no one can give her support or a second opinion to counteract the gaslighting) Stage 2 - Demoralization (Undermine her confidence, destroy her pride and sense of self worth. Tear her down to make her easier to rebuild) Stage 3 - Destabilization (turn her old life upside down. Push her past her breaking point, so she hits rock bottom. Get her addicted to new behaviours) Stage 4 - Normalisation (Establish new routines and habits to replace the ones from her old life and reinforce her new habits. Gaslight her into thinking that everything is normal, so there's no reason to question her new life). Edited February 2 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted February 2 Report Posted February 2 Hello Cross, One big congratulation to you and your wife is in order. May the twins grow up to be strong, healthy and happy Have not yet read the new chapter, will give my thoughts later, just wanted to congratulate you first. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted February 4 Report Posted February 4 Hey CrossroadsMk2, I’d think acceptance would fit with stage 4 as well (she wouldn’t give a crap who accepted her...in her mind, her friends has, millions of followers on several platforms have accepted her new life) – after everything she’s been through, I think Lara’s more determined now to live her life the way she wants to live it….FREE. Lead the Way Sir! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 4 Author Report Posted February 4 Hi LHunt, I think acceptance would be the 5th stage, after everything is over and Lara rebuilds her life (I have a plan for a "one year later" chapter to be the final one in the series). I see this stage as more like Lara as a domestic violence victim. Her life is fucked up, everyone else can see it's fucked up, but Lara has been gaslit into believing it's normal. Quote
Extreme Posted February 11 Report Posted February 11 (edited) Hi Cross, first I want to congratulate you. I hope your wife and twins are doing well and are home now I had my gallbladder removed so I wasn't in the mood for a while to do anything but now I recovered and I finally read the new chapter and it was great and hot as always. The idea of stages in the next chapter sounds great and further improves this masterfully written manipulation. I also like LHunt idea about acceptance or maybe push this even further. Lara will become fully aware of everything she's done (and what Sarah has done) or maybe even Sarah will reveal the truth to Lara. Lara will be shock and first will kick out Sarah and will try to return to her normal life but Lara after deep thinking, remembering how much fun she had, how free she feels now and that she discovered something about herself, will decide to bring back Sarah and continue her new life because she loves it and sees it as being free, just like LHunt said. On other hand I also like idea of Lara being gaslit that everyone know how fucked up her situation is except her. Edited February 11 by Extreme Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 11 Author Report Posted February 11 Hi Extreme, glad your surgery went well. Lara will eventually become aware of what's been done to her, but not until the end, and once it's far too late to do anything about it. What you're suggesting is how I plan to play it - Lara initially kicks Sarah out, but eventually returns to her - like a an emotionally damaged girlfriend who keeps returning to her bad boy ex, despite saying he's narcissistic, toxic, abusive etc... because no one else gives her the same tingles and she gets bored easily and is addicted to the drama. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 16 Author Report Posted February 16 (edited) Hi everyone, I've started the next chapter (which is slow going because of a lot less free time). I'm going to be doing the foot fetish thing this chapter (I won't give away any spoilers about the other stuff happening, leading up to that). Question for you guys: I'm thinking of doing it with the Vietnamese maids instead of wealthy business women, since I haven't used them for anything yet. The activities will be directed by Mary. I'm picturing the maids sitting around in Croft Manor drinking champagne, while Lara's crawling between them on her hands and knees, giving them foot massages, which escalate into her licking and sucking on their feet and oral sex - and finally the foot-fisting. I thought it might be hot because of the enmity between Lara and the maids. What do you guys think? Stick with the business women or go with the maids? Edited February 16 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos. Quote
Guest Ibex Posted February 17 Report Posted February 17 15 hours ago, CrossroadsMk2 said: Hi everyone, I've started the next chapter (which is slow going because of a lot less free time). I'm going to be doing the foot fetish thing this chapter (I won't give away any spoilers about the other stuff happening, leading up to that). Question for you guys: I'm thinking of doing it with the Vietnamese maids instead of wealthy business women, since I haven't used them for anything yet. The activities will be directed by Mary. I'm picturing the maids sitting around in Croft Manor drinking champagne, while Lara's crawling between them on her hands and knees, giving them foot massages, which escalate into her licking and sucking on their feet and oral sex - and finally the foot-fisting. I thought it might be hot because of the enmity between Lara and the maids. What do you guys think? Stick with the business women or go with the maids? Hey, Just wanted to say congrats on the news, best of luck with everything! Really enjoyed the recent chapter and can’t wait for what you have next. I think changing it so the maids take part in the foot fetish domination of Laura is very hot. I agree with you that the enmity between them will only make it make more humiliating for her whilst she serves the staff as they degrade and laugh at her throughout. Maybe have it so they make her say self degrading comments whilst worshipping their feet/choking or getting fucked by them? Quote
Guest LHunt Posted February 17 Report Posted February 17 Business women - if Lara was made to visit an office setting under the pretense of a board-meeting or something to that effect. She could service them under Mary’s guidence...in anyway they choose. All powerful women just like Sarah, given free-use with Lara...and they really show their dominance over her. It may even include one of them being an ex-ballerina who knows how to keep her foot straight, and flex to add girth and more depth than any of the other women who clumsily use their feet to fuck her. Lead the Way Sir! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 18 Author Report Posted February 18 One vote for maids and one vote for business women. I'm leaning towards maids, but I'll wait to see how the voting goes. Quote
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