Guest Edyrn Posted December 10 Report Posted December 10 I assure you, far be it from me to want to influence the end of the story. There are still weeks left in his contract year, you did 11 chapters in the same amount of time at the beginning. You can still make him experience a lot of things, that gives you time to adjust and decide. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted December 16 Author Report Posted December 16 (edited) Hi everyone, Chapter 21 has posted. Merry Christmas. Also, does the font look ok to you guys? It looks smaller but it's the exact same font I always use, so I don't know what's up - whether it's just my computer doing weird shit. Let me know if you'd like a larger font size. Thanks. Edited December 16 by CrossroadsMk2 Font issues. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted December 16 Report Posted December 16 Font’s not an issue on my end. Loved how Sam made Lara think masterbating in her presence at any time was a common thing to do...as common as breathing air – giving her unlimited access to porn kept her primed at Sam’s photo room. Sam directing her while at the glory hole, then on the convention floor was wild and hot in my opinion. Loved how the chapter ended...just the right touch and can’t wait till Mary and the others get their special time with Lara. Lead the Way! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted December 17 Author Report Posted December 17 (edited) Hi LHunt, glad you liked it. The font thing must just be at my end. I was considering removing the helmet permanently in the playroom, but I thinks it's hotter to keep Lara unaware of whose using her. I think I'll have Mary and her other friends use her in the playroom, followed by the helmet coming off, so that she can be gaslit into believing that her friends and everyone else support her. Then they can convince Lara to explore her slave fantasy (which Sarah invented for her) in a more public setting, at her birthday party, the following day. Lara will dress in all her finery, be given back her Title, and then be publicly stripped and turned into a free-use ponygirl for the evening (or perhaps a puppy on a leash, I haven't decided - either way she'll love it!). Edited December 17 by CrossroadsMk2 Quote
Guest LHunt Posted December 17 Report Posted December 17 In my opinion, Lara being unaware of whose using her in the playroom before helmet comes off is way hotter. Maybe she’ll learn not only Mary and friends, but a relative or two was using her as well. I think the puppy on a leash would allow her hands to be free...just can’t wrap my head around the pony girl suit, wearing hooves would restrict Lara’s hand use….unless those aren’t a part of the costume, then the girls can pretend they’re stallions breeding their free-use pony. Lead the Way! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted December 17 Author Report Posted December 17 One vote for puppy - with Mary walking her around the party room on a leash and Sam filming. Quote
Guest Ibex Posted Sunday at 04:50 PM Report Posted Sunday at 04:50 PM Hey, awesome couple new chapters! Really great and loving how you’re depicting Laura’s internal beliefs and actions being completely corrupted. Can’t wait to read what’s next, personally the idea of Lara as a pony is hot as hell! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted Sunday at 10:18 PM Author Report Posted Sunday at 10:18 PM Hi Ibex, glad you enjoyed the last chapter and thanks for voting. Puppy girl - 1 Ponygirl - 1 Quote
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