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Hi everyone, just a quick update. The next chapter is 90% finished. I'll hopefully get the chance to proofread it in the next few days and then post it either late this week or early next week. Thanks for your patience.

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Hi everyone, Chapter 20 has posted. The focus of this chapter was Lara's moral degradation, so that she's ready to bring the story home. Planned events for the next chapters:

1. Sam finally removing the sensory deprivation helmet and revealing that it's been her all along.  I also want Lara's friends using her in the playroom unmasked as well, although that'll probably occur a bit later.

2. Tomb Raider booth at a convention. I've decided to do the gloryhole there as a fan event.

3. Some ponygirl fun at the next Charity Event. I'll think I'll make this Lara's birthday party.

Any other feedback and suggestions always welcome. Have a great day!

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Hi Cross, the new chapter was great. I like how after so many chapters Lara has been brainwashed step by step and how she is no longer like she was at the beginning. It's also a bit scary because something like this could probably work in real life, especially with the new chapter summary where Lara is conditioned, cut off from her life and real friends, and then praised for doing things that are obviously not good (but still hot), so her shame is completely replaced with lust, desire, and pride. The next chapter sounds very promising, so I will wait patiently and let you cook :)

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Hi Extreme, thanks for the comment and glad you like where the story is heading. I know it's been a slow burn, but I wanted to try and make Lara's transformation as believable as possible. I think it's got enough of a setup now that I can accelerate the plot faster now.

Guest Edyrn
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Hello, thank you for the new chapter, a new step forward for our favorite heroine.

Really looking forward to this meeting with her fans, I think it's really another important step for Lara,    in public and outside the so confined and controlled framework of the mansion.

It's also a fight for another version of herself, the adventurer who must finish disappearing, become a slut and satisfy her countless admirers.

Why choose such an exposed outfit for the convention? And not a more "slutty" or "lighter" version of her tomb raider costume for example?

 

For the charity event, I suggest that we ask her to raise funds by giving blowjobs to the men present.

Her female friends have been encouraging her for a while now in her new "career", it is imaginable that good arguments and various flatteries will be enough to convince her to put her "new" talents at the service of a good cause.

Approval of her own behavior and subliminal beginning to associate with reality the members who take advantage of her in the game room.

 

I am already looking forward to reading your next chapter.

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Hi Edyrn, thanks for the comment. Lara already wore a much sluttier version of her Tomb Raider outfit at the first Convention she attended (Chapter 6 - The Tomb Raider gets a new public image). Given that her Onlyfans runway outfit was nipple pasties and a thong, going back to her Tomb Raider outfit feels like a step backwards. Even Lara's regular workout gear is more revealing than that now.

 

Love the idea for the Charity fundraiser. It'll be a good progression for Lara as a sex worker - going from anonymous blowjobs behind a gloryhole to servicing clients in person, in front of an audience.

Guest Edyrn
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Glad you like the idea, besides helping it will increase my pleasure in reading :)  

To express myself better about the costume, as you say she is already getting used to wearing much less.

I see it more as fan service, is it really an event for the game?
To please the fans and thanks to the main attraction convince a few million players who were still hesitant to join her Onlyfans.

That's just my opinion, and it doesn't change my desire to read the rest.

By the way, didn't you elaborate on who the men were who sodomized Lara behind the curtain of the first convention?

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Hi Edyrn, regarding the first Convention, I never elaborated on it, but I always thought that it was a select group of Charity members - Sarah's way of giving them a taste of Lara to whet their appetites, and then use them to convince the others to sign on and pay the 50,000 pound entrance fee.

 

In terms of the costume, my idea is that what Lara wears would be based on a fan poll. 120 million plus players all voted for their favourite Lara Croft outfit from the game (like the armour mods in Skyrim). Lara then wears that outfit as a tribute to the fans. I'll give some thought to how I can keep the general Tomb Raider feel of her outfit, but make it sluttier: crop top now made of  see-through fishnet material, shorts now a specially made thong with belt loops, high lace combat boots with stripper heels at the bottom. I think I can make it work.

Guest Edyrn
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Hi, This is more or less what we could imagine, but I think that descriptions of different members could improve our vision.
As for me, reading the chapters gives the impression that there are only couples of rich members of the aristocracy.
Couldn't there be adversaries or rivals, old frustrated professors, politicians in business with Sarah... ... all having jumped at the chance to satisfy their fantasy of the beauty.

I feel like I'm apologizing for each message, but I assure you that these are only details, and that it does not take away from my desire to read other adventures of Lara.

For the costume, your description made me think of a Lara disguise used by AKABUR in his game "Star Channel 34" I'll give you a link with images of the costume in question.

I won't explain how this costume comes about if you don't know the game^^  The game is very fun ;)

hope the link works as it should.

https://photos.app.goo.gl/DvWvBXdpHp8zCNAW6

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Hi Edyrn, the plan at the moment is to keep the different groups separate: just Charity members - wealthy aristocrats etc - for the playroom and Charity events, and Lara's fans for the fan events. However, I can see some merit to having a third group for Lara's rivals, be they academic rivals like old frustrated professors or otherwise. I don't have any plans to make that a major part of the story, but it's certainly feasible to have a scene or two.

A future scene I was planning was for Mary and Sybil to pimp Lara out as entertainment at a bucks party for some wealthy young men - as a way to reward her friends for assisting in turning Lara into a pornstar. Maybe I could do that or something similar with Lara's old professors - both rivals and allies. I feel like I've already covered her military rivals with the Trinity arc, but academic rivals could be interesting - and another part of Lara's former life to be torn down by Lady Sarah's corrupting influence.

Guest Edyrn
Posted

Hello,

i like the idea of bachelor party entertainment, but would this really be a step forward in Lara's moral decadence?      compared to what she's already done I mean.

Posted

Hi Edyrn, you need to remember that all of this is happening in conjunction with her Onlyfans, Charity events etc. It's all part of showing her moral corruption: she starts doing stuff in private (behind a camera) but escalated to doing it in public; she starts out reluctant and embarrassed, but over time becomes enthusiastic and shameless.

 

In terms of the idea above, if instead of a bucks party, it's a birthday or retirement party for one of Lara's old professors, with all Lara's archaeology professor rivals in attendance (people who never considered her a real archaeologist or academic, and think she's no better than a treasure hunter and adrenaline junky), that would certainly be a big step for her. These were people she was desperate to be accepted by (the same as the high society aristocrats at the Charity), and now she's willingly flaunting herself to them, no longer recognising that this is not the sort of attention she should be aspiring to. It's just an idea, anyway.

Guest Edyrn
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I understand the idea better, and it would surely be very interesting as a development.

I'll stop bothering you and let you write the rest,  impatiently    :)

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