Guest ABigFan Posted August 7 Report Posted August 7 Love the direction of a story and how she easily beat Nia and Kana in the game. I thought that money divide was too much in Lara’s favour. Perhaps the real divide should be like that, like in the end she would get 60% paid into her account, but it could have been better for her to think that majority of that money would go to her owner Sarah. That way she would again be reminded that she is Sarah’s property. Just an idea, you may disregard it completely Quote
Guest LaraCunt Posted August 9 Report Posted August 9 Another fantastic chapter, I think it's incredible how you describe the events without it seeming too forced, great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, while it doesn't arrive, I'll be doing some art imagining Lara's Meet and Greet =D https://drive.google.com/file/d/1y52x5YtjIeLQKEB1C920D4FMzAcP1bD2/view?usp=sharing Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 9 Report Posted August 9 LaraCunt, Love all your meet and greet art on Lara. Awesome job! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 9 Author Report Posted August 9 Hi LHunt, in the original version, I would have had Lara being exploited more by Sarah, but the direction I went was to manipulate and corrupt Lara into exploiting herself. Lots of girls get sucked into doing Onlyfans because of the easy money and fame, so I thought the same could be true for Lara (also, Sarah hardly needs the money, and it's never been about money for her anyway - it's about possessing and controlling Lara). Hi LaraCunt, as always, love the artwork! Thanks so much for creating and sharing it with everyone! Finally, a question to everyone. Would you be in favour of Lara doing another collaboration with Kana and Nia? Or do you think that would be a little repetitive and I should just move on to some male pornstars? If I did another Kana and Nia collaboration, it would be more of the game-style challenges of the first scene, with Kana and Nia teaming up in a rematch with Lara. One event would involve an ovipositor. Kana and Nia have to fill one hole each (either pussy or ass with as many eggs as possible. Lara has to do both holes at the same time and beat their combined score. Haven't decided on any others yet (open to fun suggestions). Just wanted to hear your thoughts, if it's something you'd be interested in reading, or if you'd rather just move on? Quote
Guest Laracunt Posted August 10 Report Posted August 10 I'm glad you liked the art LHunt and CrossroadsMK2. 😁 I'm happy that you changed the story so that Lara degraded herself, it's as if this was already inside her and it was just a push for everything to come to light. I love Lara's interaction with Kana and Nia, seeing Lara competing with other women to see who is the sluttiest for me is always good, as if it were an Olympics event hahaha Quote
Guest Lhunt Posted August 10 Report Posted August 10 Hey crossroadsMk2, I like how Lara enjoys both Kana & Nia's company, and how she rolls with their flow. Maybe Sam gets both of them to use the biggest dildo from the last square off competition....after the egg contest...or Sam invites them later to the playroom so they learn how Lara's able to take huge toys. Love where the possibilities may lead whichever way you go. Lead the Way Sir. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 11 Author Report Posted August 11 Hi LaraCunt and Lhunt, thanks for the feedback. I think I'll still keep the playroom separate from Lara's public life. I'm jumping the story forward a couple of weeks, with Lara collaborating with some other female content creators. For Kana and Nia, I want to keep it a light hearted competition, to keep moving Lara in the right direction. I don't think Kana and Nia could compete with the giant dildo thing. I'm thinking event 1 - Ovipositor and event 3 - gloryhole competition (most blowjobs completed in a given timeframe), using either Charity members that Lara's friends will "convince" to "reluctantly" take part in, or it could be using fans at the game convention. I'm still undecided on event 2. That's the basic plan for the next chapter. Quote
Guest Ibex Posted August 11 Report Posted August 11 Hi crossroadsMk2, Came across this story recently and just wanted to say I am a big fan of your work, amazing! The previous chapter with Kana and Nia was great. If you’re still looking for ideas for event 2 maybe it could be a sort of bondage challenge, all 3 tying eachover up and taking turns to try and break loose with increasing levels of restraint, the more successful escapes the more points until failure. Lara unsurprisingly does very well when it’s her turn, breaking free multiple times and getting a bit too overconfident. For her final attempt Sam decides to set her up by secretly making the next restraint inescapable. Then Kana and Nia to teach her a lesson torment her with toys (vibrators, feathers, etc) until they have her begging and verbally degrading herself so she can orgasm. Also for upcoming events I thought your idea that you mentioned previously of Lara serving as a ponygirl at another charity event would be very fun to see. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
Guest Lhunt Posted August 12 Report Posted August 12 Ohhh...Ibex's idea sounds kinky. They should see how many times they can make Lara orgasm. Lead the Way! Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 12 Report Posted August 12 Maybe Sam can tie this one in a live stream to the fans and for every like comment of 100K Lara has to be forced to orgasm by Kana & Nia. Sam can advertise before that during the convention, some lucky men will also get special treatment by Lara in a glory hole….all the possibilities Sam can cook up! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 13 Author Report Posted August 13 (edited) Hi Ibex, welcome to the forum and I'm happy you're enjoying the story. Be sure to check out my other stories on AFF - the website's a little clunky, but if you click on my username and then stories written, it should take you there. I like your suggestion for event 2. If I go that direction, I think it'll have to be rope play, as other sorts of restraints (cuffs, shackles, straightjackets etc) don't really require any skill to set-up, so it wouldn't be much of a competition. Hi LHunt, I'm leaning more towards edging and orgasm denial than for ed orgasms. I think Kana and Nia could have a lot more fun with that, making Lara beg and call herself some truly embarrassing names to be able to cum. Edited August 13 by CrossroadsMk2 Quote
Guest Ibex Posted August 14 Report Posted August 14 Hey crossroadsMk2, I agree rope play would make sense and allow for more creativity. Also just finished reading all the current chapters of Tomb Raider Bliss, really good! Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 14 Report Posted August 14 Just thinking along the lines that the convention is for the fans. Maybe not forced ...but edged to orgasms based on the fan’s likes – comments – and real time participation. Maybe the two porn stars can tell her something like she needs to do better if she wants to have an orgasm – she needs to reach a certain amount before they let her – still making Lara beg for it and to be used. Lead the Way! Quote
Extreme Posted August 15 Report Posted August 15 Hi Cross, I'm a bit late, but I just want to say that the new chapter was great. I like stories with corruption, both manipulation or when a characters starts to like something they don't like at first. If I sum up the story from the beginning, its amazing how slowly but super well and believably written Lara's "fall" was and now she's almost completely shameless in what she does. As always I can't wait for the next chapter and new adventures of our now favorite pornstar countess Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 17 Author Report Posted August 17 Hi Ibex, glad you enjoyed Tomb Raider Bliss. I plan on finishing that story after the current one. If you enjoyed Bliss, you might also like BDSM Raider and Professor Croft, if you get around to them. Hi Extreme, thanks for reading and the vote of confidence for the direction of the story. Hi LHunt, don't worry - I plan to have Kana and Nia help ease Lara into her true calling of being the most famous pornstar of all time. Quote
Guest Edyrn Posted August 19 Report Posted August 19 Hello Crossroads, thank you for your answer. Like you, I also think that Lara is already too advanced in her depravity to ask herself the question of her video game at the time she streams with the two young girls. However, it seems that only the hope of recovering her title and finding a (good reputation) still prevents her from going crazy. If you have perfectly described the relationship between Lara and the work of (charity), therefore her reputation with a certain social circle. I expect much more to discover in detail her reputation with the general public, both locally and worldwide, I think that this revelation should be the biggest shock for Lara, as much in the loss of her reputation or the idea she had of it, as in all the love and devotion of her millions of admirers. So I look forward to your future chapter. For your question about another stream between Lara, Kana and Nia, I find that if the first one was clearly a physical fitness challenge, I think that the next one should be more of a talent test, a demonstration of all the experience accumulated by Lara these last 8 months. As much as it could make her proud of her prowess, and make her accept even more the evidence of her reconversion. Whatever you do, I would read it with pleasure. PS: The image of the outfit for the convention is very beautiful, but isn't it too much if she is not aware of her reputation with the general public? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 19 Author Report Posted August 19 (edited) Hi Edyrn, a lot of the plot revolves around warping Lara's perspective of what is proper behaviour. Propriety is very contextual: a hundred years ago, a woman showing her legs would have been considered scandalous and gotten you arrested for public indecency, but now women wear bikinis and thongs at the beach, and no one bats and eyelid. In that respect, Lara's social isolation, the explicit support and encouragement from her friends and her own social circle, the enthusiastic support of her fans - everything is designed to skew Lara's sense of reality and make her believe she's making good choices for her career. If you repeat a lie often enough, it becomes the truth. There will be a tipping point, which I have planned towards the end of the story, a couple of weeks after Lara's year of slavery ends, when Lara attends the AVN awards. Afterwards, while holding her awards for best new performer, best anal sex scene, best gangbang sex scene etc. Lara breaks down crying with the realisation of what she's done, but by then it's far too late. In terms of Kana and Nia, I think I'll use them to ease Lara into boy/girl scenes with Chad and Tyrone (the pornstars Lara was with for the sex documentary in Switzerland). Could be start with some challenges to bring out Lara's competitive nature (who gives the best blowjob, who can make their man cum quickest from riding them cowgirl etc). As Lara gets more comfortable, Kana and Nia are less involved, acting like fluffers and supporters, as Lara fuck both male pornstars at once. Edited August 20 by CrossroadsMk2 New idea. Quote
Guest Setv Posted September 20 Report Posted September 20 Hey Cross, Last chapter was great. Any news on how the next one is looking? Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted September 21 Report Posted September 21 Hey Cross, Been over a month since your last post, checking if all is good with you Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 22 Author Report Posted September 22 Hi everyone, I hope you're all doing well. All is good with me - just been very busy with work and home life (my wife is pregnant with twins). The current chapter is about half done. I plan to finish it as soon as I get some free time. As stated in my last post, this chapter will have some more Kana and Nia collaborations, which will ease Lara into her first boy/girl scenes on Onlyfans, and her next public appearance at another gaming convention (designed to get Lara hooked on the fame and adulation she's getting from her Onlyfans activities, and convince her that she's making the right career move). Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 23 Report Posted September 23 Well, I think a double congratulations are in order. If I smoked I'd send you a couple of cigars and a double shot of fine Scotch whiskey. Tell the lady of the house congratulations as well. Rock On and Lead the Way! Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted September 24 Report Posted September 24 Congratulations Cross! All the best to your wife and you. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 24 Author Report Posted September 24 Thanks for the kind wishes LHunt and ABigFan. I don't drink or smoke, but I appreciate the sentiment. We made the mistake of saying, "just one more" 😂 - it was quite a shock when we found out during the ultrasound, when we found out there were two of them in there! Quote
Extreme Posted September 24 Report Posted September 24 Congratulations to you Cross and your wife, time flies so fast because I can swear I wished you and your wife all the best not long ago when you were talking about your first child Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 29 Author Report Posted September 29 Hi Extreme, thanks for the kind wishes. Time does fly past - makes you feel old! My theory is that we experience time relative to what we've already experienced. When you're 10, the summers seem to last forever, because 3 months amounts to 2.5% of your entire life up to that point. But when you're 25, 3 months only equals 1% of your life. By the time you reach 50 (not there yet thankfully), it's only 0.5%. So our perception is that time keeps moving faster and faster, the older we get. Quote
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