CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 11 Author Report Posted July 11 Thanks for the suggestions everyone. I think I'll keep Sam behind the camera - she is getting more than enough hands-on time with Lara in the playroom anyway. I like SetV's idea of getting the maids involved. Maybe they could wear half-face masks and Lady Sarah could offer them a million dollars bonus at the end of the year, if they agree (enough for them to return to Vietnam and retire, so too good to pass up). My only worry is that the maids have been so horrible to her, it might push Lara back into her shell. People tend not to like working with people they intensely dislike. I was actually planning on replacing the current maids with a new batch of very respectful Japanese maids, who'll treat Lara like a lady, to reinforce in Lara's mind that there's nothing wrong with doing Onlyfans. Also as a way for Sarah to reward Lara for going more hardcore. What do you guys think. If Lara hates being around the maids, do you really think she'd be ok with performing with them on camera? An alternative might be to get Lara's friends to perform with her. They could wear full latex body suits and masks to hide their identity, and it would still add that personal element of humiliation for Lara. Quote
Guest Lhunt Posted July 11 Report Posted July 11 I don't think she'd feel too pleased with the current maids...so I don't think she'd do it unless forced....in fear that Sarah would send her back to the gulag. Maids...pornstars...dom's can all be bought easily by Sarah....use them all at different times based on Lara's OF fans. But, if you use the maids...Sam can convince her because of their employment they had already signed a disclosure agreement...and it would better to go with someone Lara's worked with already. They would hate fuck her and she would get into it I think....maybe it would heighten her humiliation even. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 11 Author Report Posted July 11 Hi LHunt, yeah, I think it's a bit of a stretch. The purpose of the maids in the story was to make Lara's life so miserable that she'd be willing to do literally anything to escape - mission accomplished. I definitely think I'll go with a pair of small Asian pornstars for Lara's first lesbian scene - for the small hands and double fisting (thanks for that mental picture, SetV). I think I'll keep the friends at arm's length as well. Lady Sarah can give Lara access to a group chat, where her friends can stroke her ego and keep egging her on to go further and further (while secretly laughing at her behind her back). Quote
Guest LHunt Posted July 11 Report Posted July 11 Maybe keep the maids around like you did for the last charity gathering – so Lara knows they all despise her, and are always laughing at her but don’t hide it – unlike her friends who laugh behind her back. Lead the Way Sir! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 12 Author Report Posted July 12 Hi LHunt, yes I think I'll keep the maids around, but not use them for any Onlyfans stuff. The non disclosure agreement is pretty irrelevant, now that Lara's doing porn. The only secret that's left to protect is Lara being Sarah's sex slave. I'll use pornstars for the Onlyfans scenes as needed. I'm sure they'll be lining up to work with Lara, to help their own careers. Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted July 17 Report Posted July 17 Hello Cross, The slow and meticulous nudging of Lara towards porn was masterfuly done. Love how all those guests told her stories about how much they enjoyed her videos and how it spiced up their sex life. “Peer pressure is a very real phenomenon” beautiful sentence Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 19 Author Report Posted July 19 Hi ABigFan, I'm glad you're enjoying the direction of the story. Thanks for the comment. Quote
Extreme Posted July 22 Report Posted July 22 Hi Cross, the new chapter was great, the way Lara was manipulated into everything and now into porn was brilliantly written. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter since Lara has become a well-known porn star and what new adventures await her Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 24 Author Report Posted July 24 Hi Extreme. I won't spoil it but the next chapter is already finished and I'm just trying to find the time to proofread it. Expect more psychological manipulation and Lara's first Onlyfans collaboration, as Sam will start introducing Lara to other performers. Quote
Extreme Posted July 24 Report Posted July 24 Sounds great btw I don't want spoilers, I just wanted to say that I'm very curious what will happen next Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 26 Author Report Posted July 26 Hi everyone. One proofread down but ran out of time for the second one, so I probably won't post until next week. I'm looking for suggestions. You know how YouTubers have their signoff speal at the end of videos? Example: Thanks for watching. Don't forget to like, share and subscribe. Catch you next time etc. I want Sam to come up with a sign off for Lara, that she'll say at the end of each video. Can obviously be a little dirty, since Lara's conditioned to obey Sam, and she's already used to saying she's a dirty little slut each time she orgasms. Basically something saying thanks for watching, if you enjoyed the video, be sure to like and comment and recommend me to all your friends. I'll also add a thanks to BRAND for sponsoring this video (all of Lara's videos are sponsored now). Maybe some play on Tomb Raider (getting raided) or a joke regarding her status as a Countess. I want Lara subtly reminded of her old life each time she says it, so there's a little bit of embarrassment for her. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks. Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted July 26 Report Posted July 26 Perhaps something along the lines of: “You can count on Countess to deliver wildness” Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 26 Author Report Posted July 26 Thanks ABigFan and LHunt for the suggestions. I don't think I'll go with the Countess angle (technically she isn't one at the moment anyway) and will go with the Tomb Raider angle instead: - Womb Raider - Ass Raider - Thanks to BLANK for raiding my holes today… If I can't think of anything catchy, I'll just leave it out. It's not essential to the story - just an idea I was toying with at the end of the chapter. Quote
Extreme Posted July 26 Report Posted July 26 (edited) I often see people commenting "Womb Raider" on R34 sites, so it would be quite nice to have that in the story. "Thanks BLANK for raiding my holes today" also sounds good. ABigFan's Countess line sounds the best to me, and I think it fits well even if Lara isn't a Countess, because as you said earlier, she want to remind about her old life when she was a Countess.I don't know much about this stuff, but I think being an aristocrat for the English is something that people here are incredibly proud of and are very respected for. So for Lara to mention her past life while also starring in porn and doing other scandalous things that are not appropriate for a wealthy and well-bred aristocrat would be sexy and I'm sure at that point Lara would be a little embarrassed but also incredibly turned on. Especially since she would use her former title in such lewd way. Edited July 26 by Extreme Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted July 27 Report Posted July 27 Beautifully said Extreme! I agree wholeheartedly. Also, I think that she could not completely erase from her mind her title and status and although she is degraded down to a much lower status deep down there is that smalI part of her feel still feels prideful as a true aristocrat. So the contrast of blue blood Countess and a lewd porn star will be both embarrassing and a turn on. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 28 Author Report Posted July 28 (edited) I think I'll go with something like this: "Hi, I'm Lara Croft, the world-famous Tomb Raider and classiest Countess on Onlyfans. If you enjoyed watching my holes getting raided by NAME, please like the video and leave a comment about what turned you on the most, and what naughty things you want to see me do next. Stay subscribed for more content, and please recommend me to all your friends." *blows a kiss* Edited July 28 by CrossroadsMk2 Quote
Guest LHunt Posted July 28 Report Posted July 28 Awesome. Sounds authentic too – both her Tomb Raiding and her being a Countess mentioned would certainly sting her with a double dose of embarrassment I think. But, asking to like the video and leave a comment on what turned on the fans the most, then asking them what naughty things they want to see next...in a way selling herself to her fans all for the price of a like and subscription - just priceless in my opinion. I feel Sam will have a field day with all the things she has Lara doing now! Damn genius idea. Lead the Way! Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted July 29 Report Posted July 29 I thought you were looking for something short and catchy, but you went for a bazooka and I love it Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 1 Author Report Posted August 1 Hi everyone, I finally found some time to finish proofreading! The latest chapter has posted. The story is on the home stretch. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 1 Report Posted August 1 CrossroadsMk2, You never stop amazing me….this was a very fun and sexy chapter to read. I liked that Lara got along with Kana & Nia and the way Sam eased Lara into the third double fisting video. Making Lara horny in the first two certainly helped and loved how that was laid out. Have to wonder if the head maid Trinh will get a chance to hate fuck Lara, especially after having to call her Miss Lara now.….on Sarah’s request of course….as a reward for her pent up anger towards Lara. Kind of like good cop-bad cop routine. Kana & Nia the good...Trinh and another senior maid bad cop. (Just a thought) Awesome chapter man. You did a great job! Lead the way Sir! Quote
Guest ALL Posted August 2 Report Posted August 2 CrossroadsMk2 with your story telling never ceases to amaze me! I have to wonder, with Lara craving constant attention for her holes , after more and more OF sets. What would happen if Sarah went on leave and told Lara she can’t touch herself and has to find alternate outlets? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 4 Author Report Posted August 4 Hi LHunt and ALL, glad you both enjoyed the latest chapter. No plans for an absence of Sarah, since I want to maximise Lara's pair-bonding with her, but even if she was away, I think the morning Onlyfans sessions and evening Playroom orgies would probably keep Lara's labido under control. I thought about Trinh and the other maids using Lara, but I feel like Lady Sarah values their loyalty and professionalism too much for that (given all the trouble she went to recruiting them). Also, Lara hates them and I think it would be counterproductive to Sarah and Sam's scheming to make Lara a willing participant in her own debasement. Quote
Guest Edyrn Posted August 4 Report Posted August 4 Hello, I discovered your stories with (The Idol of Hathor), and without being a big fan of (humiliation or domination) I still never get tired of your stories, you always manage to make me want to read the rest. It must be said that Lara is, and will always remain my favorite "heroine". Continued as long as you want, you will always make a happy reader. One thing bothered me in this last chapter, a detail, but which overall was missing. Lara's isolation from the outside world is a great idea, but because of this she is almost completely unaware of the actions taken by Sarah to ruin her reputation, in this case the video game and all the sexual Mods. And yet she has no reaction when the two girls talk about it, the fact of discovering that millions of people play with her in her conditions, and the effect that such a spectacle could have had on the media's opinion of her. Shouldn't that have made her react or panic? Even if she seemed to take advantage of the moment, it will surely become apparent to her after the fact? I know I'm quibbling over nothing, after what you've already made her go through in some previous chapters, but I thought it was good to point it out. Good luck. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 5 Author Report Posted August 5 (edited) Hi Edyrn, thanks for the comment and welcome to the forum. I figured that by the stage, Lara was pushed to far along to question too much of what's happening behind the scenes - if Lara's far gone enough to be performing livestreamed sex shows on Onlyfans, her video game character's action aren't probably aren't at the front of her mind. That said, I'll think I'll add some introspection to the next chapter, to flesh out how Lara feels about everything. Maybe have Lara cautiously ask Sarah about the modifications to her game and let Sarah gaslight her: she can tell her that the mods started as a massive fan-based reaction to how sexy Lara is, and when Sarah saw how profitable they were, she decided to adopt them as an official part of the game. Then play up how everyone loves them, how sales quadrupled since they were introduced etc. I was going to do another Charity event next chapter, but I think another gaming convention appearance might be better - a nice meet and greet for Lara and her dedicated fans, so they can show how much they appreciate her. Lara will wear the game outfit that her fans vote is their favourite. I'm thinking something like this: https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=9010379 Or maybe a fishnet top and very short leather skirt. I haven't decided yet. (In-game, the outfit let's Lara earn 50% more loot from prostitution, while wearing it) Edited August 6 by CrossroadsMk2 Auto correct does not like your username. Quote
Guest Lhunt Posted August 6 Report Posted August 6 So cheeky as Lara would say....hundreds of her fans getting a possible chance to touch and fondle her at the meet & greet. I like the idea of the convention...which would make her recall the first one...she's now a famous pornstar and famous Tomb Raider just adds to all the excitement I'd think for her. Oh my....what dirty things has Sarah & Sam conjured up for Lara either way. Awesome! Quote
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