Review responses for "Creek Dreams" [Craig of the Creek]]

[GeorgeGlass]

From Vero on July 08, 2020

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First time I see a craig of the creek smut fic 

First time I’ve written one, so we’re in the same boat.

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Hope you make more in the future especially ones with Kelsey maybe her with a older guy or her dad 

Part 2 of this story will be “The Dream of Kelsey.” Stay tuned.

[GeorgeGlass]

From neo on July 08, 2020

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thank you! we need more Craig of the Creek stories!

You’re welcome! And agreed!

[GeorgeGlass]

From Fairy-Slayer on July 15, 2020

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Chapter 1

I've only caught bit of the show and like it's style, so at least I knew their personalities going on. 

Then I’m especially appreciative that you read this fic about a fandom you’re not that deep into.

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Of course my first wonderings are about the cause…

All in good time.

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but I don't need to dwell on that because it's clearly going to be a fun ride. (…as JP and Maney have already shown. )

I see what you did there.

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The opening imagery in JP's dreams is worth the price of admission on its own, really, and then adding Maney's approach and how deeply it makes him feel is wonderful.

Dream worlds are fun to create, at least when you have some direction to start with. (Creating them when you don’t, on the other hand, is a nightmare of decision paralysis.)

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Perfectly cute name for the boys' side of their club, by the way.

Couldn’t resist the not-quite-double entendre, there.

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Beautiful action is made even better by continuing to express his feelings a bit more deeply without getting in the way or dragging things out. (I think that's actually a hint you're throwing our way, but I'm sure it'll be clear by the end of chapter 2.)

Hmm...

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Now it's time to actually watch a few episodes from the beginning and maybe even get caught up.

It’s a fun show. 

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Thanks for a nice sweetly erotic start to their tales.

Thanks for another sweet review!

[GeorgeGlass]

From The all seeing eye on August 12, 2020

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that was intresting, now creig is next!

Hey, no spoilers.

[GeorgeGlass]

From Fairy-Slayer on August 15, 2020

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First off, I can very much believe that Kelsey is a great bearer of the Full Moon.

Ain’t she just?

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Very nice description of the battle's aftermath without having to go into gory detail. Sounds like it was epic. 

In Kelsey’s imagination, everything is epic.

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I haven't watched any of the episodes centering on her quests but the Narrator thing was easy to figure out with the way you introduced it. 

Kelsey tends to spontaneously narrate events (in the third person) inside her own head. I thought it would be funny to make her internal narrator an actual narrator that other people can hear.

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Besides, I loved how it had no qualms about blurting out her private thoughts in front of the captive, and super cool that it came up with the plan for ultimate victory over the New Moon Kingdom.

When I first thought about writing this story, the idea of Kelsey’s narrator embarrassing her with its candor was the first thing that came to me.

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The Wikia/fandom page isn't any help figuring out who Prince Vengelios represents from the show, but it seems like she doesn't crush on boys in the show so I'm guessing he's an OC. 

He is. As I note in the story, he’s based on a character from Kelsey’s favorite series of fantasy novels, but there isn’t actually such a character in canon so far.

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Hey, it's not like she seems interested in anyone in the show (yet). 

No, so far, I haven’t seen any signs of her crushing on anybody.

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At least his fiery spirit seems a great match for Kelsey's personality, and being a sexy hunk with a huge cock certainly helps with her schemes… and desires. Beautiful work on the sexy details of how she extracted his full submission (and semen), and it was pretty wise and wonderful of her to let her men celebrate the victory so boisterously too. No pent-up resentment in her ranks!

I’m not usually into femdom, but that scene was fun to write. Especially the parts where the narrator goes on about how helpless and pathetic Vengelios is.

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Forcibly ra… er, "taking" the prince to unite both kingdoms under her father (as much as under her) is hardcore enough, but abruptly leaving him on the ground, naked and humiliated, is a total badassery. Now, whether or not he accepts her ultimatum, Vengelios will always be her bitch.

Yup.

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(…so he may as well marry her anyway.  )

Thanks for the riveting and very feisty action.

 

Thanks for another uplifting review!

[GeorgeGlass]

From Fairy-Slayer on September 20, 2020

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(Chapter 3) 

The mysterious force behind the sexy slumbering is revealed! 

 

Now I've got the "Mysterious Force" song from P&F in my head.

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…and it seems Craig appreciates a great figure as much as he loves the Creek itself. The theme works perfectly.

Yes he does, and thanks!

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Despite her beautifully described womanly form, I love that Tanya had the playful attitude and hedonistic tendencies of most nature spirits. The descriptions of her "mansion" were gorgeous too, and I got the impression of what it was straight away. It was also neat that Tanya had incorporated some of the manmade structures into her design, perhaps since each made at least some effort to blend in with her domain. 

I think she views them as art pieces: They were made by someone else, but they're part of her home.

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Her explanation of what she was doing was simple and sweet, easy for the boy to take in, just as her directions to help take him in.

My thinking was that because she's come to know Craig so well, she knows how to communicate on his level.

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Cute that the trio decided on "rocks" while omitting how they'd gotten said rocks off. 

I did not even think of that.

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Nice to know Craig and Tanya will continue to commune occasionally, though I wonder if JP and Kelsey could handle having more of those dreams themselves. JP would probably go a bit nuts dreaming of the Horse Girls like that then having to interact with them as normal. Meanwhile Kelsey might start to worry that she's some kind of sexual predator. Well, I'm sure Tanya will make sure their "rewards" don't cause any real troubles.

Maybe Tanya will give Maney a similar dream at some point.

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Thanks again.

Thank you!

[GeorgeGlass]

From ANON - Curious Rando on June 30, 2021

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Soooo, are you gonna make more Craig of the Creek stories? 

Should I? I mean, what did you think of this one?

[GeorgeGlass]

From ANON - Curiousrando on June 30, 2021

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Well, i really think you should consider it. Out of the existing CotC smutfics (which are like, 5 or 6 total) yours is by far the best one i've come across.

Thanks!

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I'd really like to see what you could write about other characters like the Sewerqueen, Handlebarb, the witches... Totally up to you tho.

I’d certainly consider writing another CotC fic. It’s just a question of whether an idea comes to me that I really like.
 

[GeorgeGlass]

From ANON - CuriousRando on August 26, 2021

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If you don't mind me asking, are you open to requests/suggestions on fic scenarios?

I’m open to suggestions, but I make no promises whatsoever about acting on them, as I have an awful lot of fic ideas myself.

[GeorgeGlass]

From ANON - CuriousRando on August 26, 2021

No worries, I understand. The ideas I had so far were:- A Ha

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Handlebarb/Warpspeed fic where they ditch the Tea Timers' ball to make out (and eventually do the deed) in private;

- A Maya solo fic where she decides to blow off some steam while on patrol/BFF duty;

- A Tabitha/Courtney fic where Tabitha visits Courtney during the night shift at the smoothie store to show off a tongue piercing she got.

 

I can’t say I’m terribly into most of the side characters. Tabitha and Courtney might be exceptions to that (along with Jessica, Sparkle Cadet, and Deltron), but the piercing thing...gyaaah.

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Aaand that's about it. Sorry for spamming your review section, and I hope you have fun with whatever you're currently writing!

Thanks!

[GeorgeGlass]

From ANON - CuriousRando on September 02, 2021

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Yeah, piercing stuff isn't really my thing either, i just thought it would be fitting. How about this instead:

- Tabitha and Courtney are out on a date, Tabitha gets a call from her father furiously demanding her to come back home, Courtey has none of it and tells him Tabitha is gonna sleep at her place, Tabitha thinks that was really hot and they get down to business as soon as they get to Courtney's place.

Sound any better?

 

Hmm, get-back-at-Dad sex? I kind of like that. I will put this in the Ideas file.

BTW, if you want to discuss this further, feel free to do it here on the forum rather than adding non-review reviews to the story. (No offense, but I’m gonna go ahead and delete those now.)

[Guest Anon]

Wait i can do that without an account?

[Guest Anon]

… welp, i’m a dumbass

[GeorgeGlass]

In your defense, you can only post without an account in a few parts of the forum. This just happens to be one of them.

[GeorgeGlass]

@Yahegai

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“I am not here to surrender,” Vengelios replied, his black eyes smoldering. “My armies may be defeated, but my people will never accept your father’s rule. They will fight until the last old woman dies with a pitchfork in her hands.”

Oh my god that last line was good

“And did you think you would fare any better against my people if you had been the victor?” Kelsey demanded. “They would fight your armies to the last child with a sharp rock.”

Holy shit the comeback was hot like lava

 

Thanks! I tried to think of what sort of dialogue one might find in one of Kelsey’s favorite books, and this kind of banter between enemies seemed like a must.