Thundercloud Posted April 1, 2023 Author Report Posted April 1, 2023 Catching up with reviews I have missed and there is two reviews for my sexy villain on a rampage story. A shame that I don’t get email when I get reviews when they were written. Quote Carmen Elisa Nees to Die Chapter 1 From Wilde_Guess on February 27, 2023 Yet another wonderful story. This is not a bog-standard "Hero on a Quest" story, and I like that. The story is well-written, and the sex scenes are a perfect fit for both the plot and the mood of the story. Thank you for the review. I have actually been toying with the idea that the setting could work for follow up story with “Hero on a Quest” when somebody tries to fix things. It sounds like it will be very long story so I am bit hesitant to jump into. I have far too many epics going on and the Carmen story was meant to be a short interlude that became much longer when I kept coming up with more fun to write scenes. Quote Carmen Elisa Needs to Die Chapter 2-5 From Wilde_Guess on February 27, 2023 The ending made sense, but was still a surprise. My favorite quote, though, is from Chapter 3. "Every body needs to breathe, except Ted of course." There are minor typos here and there throughout, but you've written a great story! Having a surprising ending that makes sense is best feedback you can get. I am also very glad you liked the chapter 3 scene. It was much effort to write the first person narrative from the lead person that is not entirely trustworthy narrator, but chapter 3 scenes feels like the occasion when the effort paid off. A big thank you for doing the reviews of my story. Wilde_Guess 1 Quote
Thundercloud Posted July 19, 2023 Author Report Posted July 19, 2023 Quote With the Mirror Came… From D1xon on July 12, 2023 Was a fan of this on sexstories.com, glad to have found it again and glad it's continued Great that you have found the story again. Sexstories had very good reading numbers, but the moderation was abysmal with some bot thing that make bonkers decisions that you could not challenge. I am very glad to be away from there, but I am glad that you found the story while it was posted there. You might be interested to know that story will feature 13 chapters. I am working on 12 and 13 in parallel to be able to go out with a bang. Quote
Thundercloud Posted 2 hours ago Author Report Posted 2 hours ago Quote With the Mirror Came… Review of Chapter 10. Spoilers in review below! Well, it’s been 3 and a half years since I got back to havea look, but within the first few words it was all flooding back. The assholeghost! Man, I hope he gets his some day. I have not seen that word before, but googling it shows it is a very accurate description. Quote I enjoyed the opening scene, Ronja sort of having control for a second with her pretend hypno acting and imagining Maria, only to kind of get it turned on her as “John” just used her face and left her lying there. The ghost actually wanting the masturbation on the table was an amusing escalation.I guess it won’t be catching up on the morning papers! Good that you enjoyed it. There are meant to be more and more situations when Ronja participates kind of willing, but normally with a different outcome than what Ronja would have preferred. Quote Then another Mark and dog part! I know Ronja’s had to do some messed up things to get by, but actually making her do the math study? I kid, actually her being naked around the blind guy and the dog is hot. Heh, kinda shot himself in the foot by not getting her off first, didn’t he? So then she goes for the dog. That whole decision to just be unfaithful with too cocks felt like self justification because she’s more into the dog than she wants to admit. I totally agree about the preference for bestiality. She would have gone there eventually no matter what Mark did to satisfy her. Quote Oh, right Mikaela! I’d forgotten about her, actually. Still,seems like a smart move from Maria to go for mutually assured destruction threat to end the blackmail. If it doesn’t somehow go wrong or get turned against her, I mean Maria and Ronja are normally so lucky! I actually laughed out loud at the exchange “Maria beamed at Mikaela as she sent the recorded voice message. “I sent it now. No point of my phone suffering an accident.” “You look peachy for somebody that will get fucked by a male cock soon,” Mikaela said.” Yeah, the sarcasm really drips off there. Indeed. As for mutual assured destruction I would say that Maria is finally starting to trying to play it smart, but she is not ruthless enough to really win the game. Mikaela have reasons to think that Maria won’t go through with her threats, but the same does not hold with the landlord. Quote The scene with Frank, well, he was pretty keen not to be fucking a 16 year old. That’s gotta make him the most decent guy so far. He is probably the most decent, but I think Mark is not too bad. He might take advantage of nude hypnotized girls, but besides that he is rather okay. It is also worth to notice that Ronja has been asking to spend time with him after they had sex at the school so he has good reason to believe she have the hots for him. Maybe working with the story has warped my perspective a bit...taking advantage of hypnotized girl is rather nasty when you view it from a real world perspective. 😉 Quote Also,second laugh out loud was him getting one over Mikaela at least for now. Nobody beats the landlord! …and the unsolicited dick pic ending. Cliffhanger or cockhanger? These long detailed chapters take some time to get through,but I hope to read and review 11 before long too! I will looking forward for another thoughtful review from you. Many thanks for the review! Quote
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