George Glass' Transparency Thread

[GeorgeGlass]

The alternate ending of “Splinter” is posted! I think readers who were hoping for something darker are going to like it. I certainly enjoyed writing it.

Of course, as one story drops off the List of Twenty, a new one leaps on to take its place: “Wishful.” My friend Jomahawk, who has beta-read for me for years and has asked for very little in return, offered to commission me to write it, but because I don’t do commissions, I’m doing it as a thank-you.  

 

 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I just read the alternative ending to ' Splinter ' and I think it was really good, although I think that I prefer the lighter ending, anyway I read your last comment and I think it is very nice that you're writing the story for your friend as a thank you for beta reading for you, so I hope you had a nice 4th of July , and I hope to hear from you again soon,  oh, and a question or two if you don't mind, 1. How is it going with ' The more, the Merrier ' and 'Rose ? 2. I know you said that in ' The more, the Merrier ' ginger would appear later in the story, so I'm guessing that she won't be in the second chapter, but I do wonder, will she appear in the third chapter ? (but no spoilers please ) anyway,  let me know when you have the time, hope you're doing well, good luck with your stories,  and have a nice day

[GeorgeGlass]

As with most of the stories on the List of Twenty right now, progress on the next chapters of TMTM and “Little Rose” is slow but steady.

Here’s what currently appears to be closest to being finished:

--Chapter 7 of “Country Summer”

--Chapter 3 of “Auntie’s Home”

--”Imaginary Tokyo”

--Chapter 1 of an as-yet untitled dickgirl story

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and that I heard about your loss, I am so sorry for your loss, you're mom seemed like a very nice person, like I have said before , I know what it's like to lose someone, but I am glad that she said to you that she got to do everything she wanted in her life, and I believe that meant having a fun life, meet someone and fall in love, and have a family, and I believe that she is resting peacefully with your dad in heaven, where their bodies are healthy and happy, when I first heard of you're mom's passing, I made a prayer for her, just like how I did for your dad, I know that I am just a commenter on stories, but to me you seem like a very nice person,  who had wonderful parents, so once again ,I am sorry for your loss, and I really hope you feel better, and I am sure that both of your parents are resting peacefully in heaven, and I wish you good luck with your stories,  and I hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a nice day. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Thanks so much, SWP1. Hope you’re having a good day, too.

News: Both “Imaginary Tokyo” and chapter 1 of the story tentatively titled “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” are now in beta. “Imaginary Tokyo” is mainly satirical comedy about anime, whereas “Mia” is porn with doses of character development. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, first off, I just wanted to say your welcome,  and second , I will be checking out the two stories probably tommorow, I hope you're doing well and hope your doing well with your other stories, including 'the more, the Merrier ', 'Multiversy ', and ' little rose, hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Oops, sorry, when I read the comment, I missed the word beta, so I won't be checking the two stories tommorow.

[GeorgeGlass]

Whereas some people stress-eat, I stress-write. Between dealing with my parents’ deaths and some nasty stuff at work, the first thing I want to do when I get home is throw myself into my imaginary worlds. 

As a result, I’m finishing things left and right. I’ve just posted “Imaginary Tokyo” (in which a man describes his travels in a land where anime tropes come to life), and tomorrow I expect to post the first chapter of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl.” And I think the next chapter of “Country Summer” will be ready very soon after that. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me again,  I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I have just read 'Imaginary Tokyo ', and I think that it was a very nice story, I really liked the ending, oh and also, I just wanted to let you know that whenever I'm stressed, I usually do what you would do, just do something you love doing to help relieve it, I think that it does help, anyway hope you're doing well and I will check out the first chapter of 'Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl' when it's posted tommorow,  oh and one question, how are you doing with ' The more, the Merrier ' ? and I was also wondering, in 'The more, the Merrier ' will there be more than one female character Dped in the story ?,  because I already know that Gretchen will be Dped by Baltazar and Midas during the story, and I am really interested in it, but no spoilers please, anyway, hope you're doing well and not too stressed out, good luck with your stories,  and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

My stress-writing continues to be productive. Last night, I posted chapter 1 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” (beta-read by JayDee, who has my gratitude), and just now, I posted chapter 7 of “Country Summer.” I also expect to have chapter 4 of “Auntie's Home” ready for beta in the next day or two.

I realized today that I now have nine incomplete multi-chapter stories in progress (not including the ones that don't have any posted chapters yet, most notably “Wishful,” which I'll be starting on soon). So I made a list of them and the date on which each story last had a new chapter posted.

4/18 Auntie’s Home
5/10 The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant
5/17 Make It All Better
6/10 The More, the Merrier
6/16 Little Rose
6/18 Delta Delta Delta
7/02 Multiversity
7/11 Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl
7/12 Country Summer

So I'm going to be working on new chapters in roughly that order. (I say “roughly” because I'm always subject to the whims of inspiration or lack thereof.) I'll be adding “Wishful” to the rotation at some point, but I won't start posting any other new multi-chapter stories until at least a few of the ones on the list above are complete. 

Also: With the one-shot “Imaginary Tokyo” now completed, a new one-shot story has leaped out of the “ideas” file and onto the List of Twenty. Its working title is “Tension,” and it's about a single mom who gets sick and tired of her teenage son and daughter’s constant bickering. The mom realizes that her kids’ feud is the result of unresolved sexual tension between them, so she makes them *cough* resolve it.

Finally: Indeed, SWP1, Gretchen will not be the only female who gets DPed in TMTM. There’s a reason why I added two more male characters to the ensemble.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  thanks for replying, and I also wanted to let you know that I read chapter 1 of 'Mia : Confessions of a Dickgirl ', and I thought it was a nice chapter, and I also read chapter 7 of 'Country Summer' and I thought it was a very good chapter, anyway, hope you're doing well and good luck with your stories, hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

My streak of productivity continues: I just posted chapter 4 of “Auntie’s Home.” What is more, I’m making good progress tonight on the next chapter of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant,” so I expect to have that off to beta in the next few days. Made a bit of progress on “The More, the Merrier,” too. I’m having a lot of fun with Adyson and Gretchen in this story; in chapter 2, they’re going to do something that may or may not be physically possible. But, you know, they’re cartoons, so physiological correctness be damned.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and I'm pretty excited about what Adyson and Gretchen are going to do in chapter two of 'The more, the Merrier ',  oh and by the way, in your reviews responses original fiction page, I left a comment and I left my full review of ' Hot Yoga ' since I've been wanting to review this story for quite a while, so I hope you'll check it out soon, and let me know what you think of my review, anyway bye and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

Made good progress on the next chapter of “The More, the Merrier” tonight, this time mainly with regard to Balthazar, Melanie, and Roger. Also spent some time on the Victoria’s Secret site for research purposes. (Is it better or worse when that’s actually the truth?  )

This story is chart-intensive. Not only is every chapter outlined, but I have a big table showing what each character is wearing (top, under top, bottom, under bottom), and each item of clothing is color-coded according to the chapter in which the character takes that item off. (I decided this was necessary after I discovered that in “Hot Yoga,” I mistakenly had Jenny take her pants off twice.)

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I am really glad to hear from you again, and I am really excited about the second chapter of 'The more, the Merrier ', oh and I also am interested in how you decide what each character is wearing with the chart, I think it's a nice way to help show what they're wearing, anyway, hope you're doing well, can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

I initially filled in the chart with what each character was wearing in “Hot Yoga,” just to give myself a place to start with regard to their wardrobe choices. Then I looked at the Phineas and Ferb Wiki to see what Pedro and Sally wear. (Being typical cartoon characters, they always wear the same outfit.) Roger always wears a suit on the show, but he wouldn't wear that to “yoga class,” so I just made up an appropriate outfit for him.

Clothing is a little bit important in this story because it shows how the situation has evolved since the events of “Hot Yoga.” In that story, everyone was dressed for an exercise class; they didn't know it was going to turn into an orgy. This time, in contrast, everyone knows what they're getting into (except maybe Sally and Pedro), so although they are still dressed for the exercise class that everyone else in their lives thinks they are going to, what they have on underneath may not be merely jockeys and sports bras.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

OHI, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying, I really like your idea of the clothing of all the characters in 'The more, the Merrier ', because like you said, it shows how the situation has evolved since 'Hot Yoga ' , oh and one question,  I especially like Dr.hirano's choice of clothing because she has sexy tight yoga pants, and a blue yoga top, did she choose that type of clothing not only to do yoga, but also encite Coltrane ? Let me know when you have the time, anyway, hope you're doing well and good luck with your stories, can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Oh, yes, Dr. Hirano definitely chose those tight yoga pants to be appealing as well as functional. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how was you're weekend ? and how are you doing with your stories ? Oh, and thank you for replying to my question, hope you're doing well and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a nice day.

[GeorgeGlass]

Yesterday, I had another one of those decision-paralysis moments in which I couldn’t decide which story to work on, so I decided to do another cycle through them all. That usually takes me at least a couple of days, but I’m nearly through the list now. 

The next thing I’ll finish will probably be the penultimate chapter of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.” The next chapters of “The More, the Merrier” and “Little Rose” are likely to follow. 

6 hours ago, Guest Star wars player 1 said:

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how was you're weekend ? and how are you doing with your stories ? Oh, and thank you for replying to my question, hope you're doing well and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a nice day.

Howdy. My weekend was uneventful, but that was fine; I really needed to relax. And yours?

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say my weekend was pretty good and relaxing, oh and one thing, recently I've had something similar to your decision-paralysis moment, I hve a large collection of films and shows on dvd, and I just couldn't decide on what to watch so I looked through the shelf to see what kind of film I was in the mood for and it worked, anyway hope you're doing well and I can't wait for the next chapter of 'The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant ', 'Little Rose ', and the second and intense chapter of 'The more, the Merrier ', good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I might not be commenting fr awhile, at least not until this weekend probably, I am dealing with something that is very important,  and saddening, but I won't say what it is here, I have one question for you Mr.Glass, have you ever had a pet, have you ever had a pet that you do a lot of things with, play, relax, and love, and have you ever had a pet that you know that you will never forget,  even if he's gone?, so anyway, I really hope you're doing well and I wish you good luck with ' The More, the Merrier ', and the rest of your stories, and I really hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night Mr.Glass.

[GeorgeGlass]

21 hours ago, Guest Star wars player 1 said:

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I might not be commenting fr awhile, at least not until this weekend probably, I am dealing with something that is very important,  and saddening, but I won't say what it is here, I have one question for you Mr.Glass, have you ever had a pet, have you ever had a pet that you do a lot of things with, play, relax, and love, and have you ever had a pet that you know that you will never forget,  even if he's gone?, so anyway, I really hope you're doing well and I wish you good luck with ' The More, the Merrier ', and the rest of your stories, and I really hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night Mr.Glass.

It sounds like you have a pet that is very sick or has died. If so, I’m very sorry.

I have four cats, and I love them all. They are quirky, goofy, irritating, wonderful creatures, and I will remember them all (and miss them terribly) when they’re gone. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and say thank you for replying and saying sorry, although, I did have a pet, but he did not get sick or has died, but like I said, I rather not discuss it here, but thank you for saying sorry, and I will always love my pet, and I will always remember him, anyway,  hope you're doing well and hope to hear from you again soon, oh and one question, in the 'The more, the Merrier ',  when Baltazar and melanie are paired with each other, will Roger join them or will he watch ? because I wondered if he would watch Melanie when she was paired with Baltazar,  let me know when you have the time, and I can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', and the penultimate chapter of 'The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant ',  bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

I’m pleased to say that chapter 5 of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” has just flown off to Betaland. 

I also made good progress on chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” tonight. This is going to be a long chapter—probably 5000 words or so. All of the remaining chapters will probably be about that long. 

I made the decision to change the “Hot Yoga” formula slightly, in that the perspective-shifts are not quite as frequent. More time is spent with each pair or trio of characters before we move on to the next. I think this will add to the erotic intensity of the story.

BTW, for anyone looking for a hot incest story, I recommend JayDee’s “Twinpregnation.” Hot incest sex and romance, with girl-twin getting knocked up...it checks a lot of my boxes. 

Oh, and SWP1...you’ll just have to wait and see.