mikepd_87 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 (edited) Hey to the potential beta readers out there...I really need sum help im a newbie wen it cums to writing and i really wanna make this story good...basically Sasuke wants to give Naruto a happy birhtday vacation but things go wrong from there and then get a lot better so can anyone help? here's the link: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097073 Edited August 11, 2008 by mikepd_87 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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