Not_But_A_Shadow Posted November 19, 2017 Report Posted November 19, 2017 Okay so Franklin Richards can do pretty much whatever he wants and is basically a near all powerful god right? What happens when puberty hits him? My idea is that Franklin at about age 14 gets hit by puberty and due to his powers it hits with the force of a nuke, when this happens he uses his powers to manipulate the universe to turn the women around him into his own personal sex toys without the knowledge of anyone else in the multiverse. Must include- Bold means prominence would be preferred: His mother Sue Storm, Namorita ( because Irony), Carol Danvers (with her longer hair), Kamala Khan, Ororo Munroe (Storm), Rogue, Kitty Pryde, Emma Frost, Medusa, Tigra, Black Widow, Mystique (role playing celebs and porn stars), Maria Hand, Stepford Cuckoos, Scarlet Witch, Jubilee, Domino, Squirrel Girl, Black Cat, Shanna the She-Devil, White Tiger, Satana, America Chavez (Please be brutal with this one.), Nico Minrou,Galacta. You can be creative with what he does with each girl, but each one has to be submissive to him and be reduced to a very slutty servant when in privet with the reality warper. Any takers? Ideas? Questions? Shota-bo 1 Quote
Praetor Posted November 19, 2017 Report Posted November 19, 2017 What’s with the America Chavez hate? Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted November 19, 2017 Author Report Posted November 19, 2017 Other than the fact that the writers generally make her seem like an ass? They wrote her in to Captain America’s past so she could STEAL his iconic Hitler punch, she’s a braggart in the least endearing way possible, and her comics Suck big time. I have yet to find someone who actually LIKES her books, and the fact that in universe characters that I DO like keep praising her for no reason doesn’t help. Her and Iron Heart are my least favorite Marvel characters along with Scott Summers and Amadeus Cho. Other than that, what do you think of the challenge? It’s my first one and I don’t know whether or not I’ll just try and write it myself. Quote
Praetor Posted November 19, 2017 Report Posted November 19, 2017 Sorry, I thought this was related to an earlier challenge with similar themes. It’s in the vein of fics and challenges I usually write but if I do it then giant hentai tits and super cocks will probably appear. Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted November 19, 2017 Author Report Posted November 19, 2017 Super cocks are fine for this one, but if you DO decide to take it up- which I am more than okay with- can you keep the chest sizes within ‘normal’ bounds for the characters? I mean Emma Frost and Carol Danvers would both have giant breasts but maybe avoid breast sizes that booblover asks for? Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted November 20, 2017 Report Posted November 20, 2017 (edited) On 11/19/2017 at 6:42 PM, Not_But_A_Shadow said: Super cocks are fine for this one, but if you DO decide to take it up- which I am more than okay with- can you keep the chest sizes within ‘normal’ bounds for the characters? I mean Emma Frost and Carol Danvers would both have giant breasts but maybe avoid breast sizes that booblover asks for? So less this… And more this… Edited December 13, 2017 by WillowDarkling Images removed as per new rules concerning images in the forum. Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted November 20, 2017 Report Posted November 20, 2017 (edited) Also this (Imagine the small one is a regular cock)… Edited December 13, 2017 by WillowDarkling Images removed as per new rules concerning images in the forum. Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted November 20, 2017 Author Report Posted November 20, 2017 Pretty much yeah. I mean the girls in Marvel have bigger chests than that second one but all in all that is what I’m asking for here. Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted November 20, 2017 Report Posted November 20, 2017 Oh… so it’s fine to have the tits bigger than heads (The Pit, Rabbies, Legoman, donaught, and joelasko) But nothing hyper to where the tits are bigger than an average torso (Jay-Marvel, Zimmerman, Shinnsart, Rampage, and JAEH) Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted November 20, 2017 Author Report Posted November 20, 2017 Right. They’re still comic girls after all. A good deal of them have some rockin’ boobs. Still possible for the human gnome to create, but on the upper end of the naturally possible spectrum. Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted November 21, 2017 Report Posted November 21, 2017 Alright, I’ll see what I can do. Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted November 21, 2017 Author Report Posted November 21, 2017 Post a link if you write it, if not I’ll give it a shot myself. I can write, I was just feeling lazy and wanted someone else to give it a shot first. Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted November 23, 2017 Report Posted November 23, 2017 Will do. Two things first. Who is Maria Hand? Do you mean Maria Hill or Victoria Hand? What’s an appropriate dick size? Foot Long (12 in), Bull (2.5 feet), or somewhere in between? Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted November 23, 2017 Author Report Posted November 23, 2017 Maria Hill. Sorry about that. Foot long, again looking for sizes that are in the upper realm of humanly possible. Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted December 13, 2017 Author Report Posted December 13, 2017 No one else interested? Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted December 13, 2017 Report Posted December 13, 2017 13 hours ago, Not_But_A_Shadow said: No one else interested? Im getting it done, its just hard getting this right. Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Hey, it’s me again. I just wanted your opinion. We both hate America Chavez, she’s pure-left fanfiction and I’m planning on letting Franklin subjugate her into an obediant cumdumpster bitch. But have to ask, should he go into her universe or vice-versa? Obviously, since the people in her comics say she’s the greatest hero ever despite being C-Tier at best (Also her Oasis College practically doesn’t exist in any other book), she has to be in a separate dimension. So, I had this idea of Franklin either going to her dimension, she gets mad because a “privileged white boy” randomly shows up on school grounds, and attacks only to be one-shotted by Franklin, who was trying to talk with her. After looking at how strangely Leftist the world is, Franklin concludes this is an alternate reality and decides to degrade this “World-Famous Hero” until she’s his personal toy for pure fun. Or alternatively, America is sent into Franklin’s universe after a fight with Dominatrix (Stupidest. Villain. Ever) and attacks an innocent man who bumped into her, but Franklin stops her and proceeds to TKO her. She’s then spouting about how she helps out shield and the Avengers constantly and her being a hero, but no one’s even heard of her which makes her upset. She then blames Franklin thinking he’s responsible for them not remembering her. Franklin, tired of her shit, uses his powers to make her forget all about her home and turn her into a mindless slut. Which sounds better? Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Also, on to the subject of the story. I was able to organize it (as well as MANY others) and plan on how the story will work. Here’s what I have so far. It’s an Alternate Universe Franklin is an only child because Reed Richards Secretly aborted his sister out of fear of another Franklin without Sue’s knowledge or Concent. The Fantastic Four is Disbanded because Reed abandoned them to join the Society of Reeds (An organization composed solely of alternate Reed Richards) until he came back as a villain called The Maker. Franklin hated him ever since. Franklin resents several other heroes (Like the illuminati) because they’ve continued to try and dampen his mind so he wouldn’t be too powerful. He also has Family issues due to his father being a villain as well as being raised by an immortal witch most his life while they were on missions. Franklin at fourteen is MUCH more powerful to the point where he can casually bend all of reality at his whims as if he had an Infinity Gauntlet. Thanks to training with his alternate-future self, he’s gotten to the point of being just below the level of the Living Tribunal. The Thing and Human Torch now work with the Avengers, while Sue Storm took a career of modeling and Raising Franklin I’m having trouble deciding if Franklin should join the Champions, or if he should go to school like a normal kid, or do both. Or alternatively, he can just stay at home, going out to be a hero on occasion. What do you think? Quote
Hide_My_Sins Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 12 hours ago, Guest Red-Light said: I’m having trouble deciding if Franklin should join the Champions, or if he should go to school like a normal kid, or do both. Or alternatively, he can just stay at home, going out to be a hero on occasion. What do you think? He should do some heroing, so he can team up with the female heroes, and fight the female villains. He can get separated from the other heroes when fighting a villainess, and than use that moment to use his power to turn the villainess into his woman. Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 28 minutes ago, Hide_My_Sins said: He should do some heroing, so he can team up with the female heroes, and fight the female villains. He can get separated from the other heroes when fighting a villainess, and than use that moment to use his power to turn the villainess into his woman. Cool, sort of like a hero in training with more experienced heroines. And occasional team ups with the Champs. But what about the rest of the story premis so far, would you change anything? And what about America Chaves's interdimensional encounter? Quote
Hide_My_Sins Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 13 minutes ago, Guest Red-Light said: Cool, sort of like a hero in training with more experienced heroines. And occasional team ups with the Champs. But what about the rest of the story premis so far, would you change anything? And what about America Chaves's interdimensional encounter? About America Chaves. I don’t read Marvel, and only a few select titles form DC and IDW. So I don’t know anything about her, good or bad. If Frankie can create a pocket universe where stores the villainesses, after fucking them, that could be good. Just have him lie about them getting away, but really he has them in his personal sexual paradise. Quote
Not_But_A_Shadow Posted January 8, 2018 Author Report Posted January 8, 2018 I say Franklin should go to her dimension and make her his bitch there, I like your 6 points (but not all heroes right? Those like Wolverine and Spider-Man arn’t that big of assholes.) I think he should go to school like a normal kid, but still go out heroing with all his peers and teachers knowing, just because I think it would be funny if he heard some stuff from the boys (and/or girls) in his school about how they want to bang the super-heroins that he himself has turned into cumdumps. The pocket dimension for sexed up villenesses Hide-My-Sins thought up is also a good idea. Anyway, is there an ETA for chapter 1? Or can we at least get a link to your profile so we can check out some of your other works? Quote
WillowDarkling Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 There’s a link where it says “Archive Profile: link” just beneath the avatar picture. There should be one for every user. Quote
Guest Red-Light Posted January 9, 2018 Report Posted January 9, 2018 9 hours ago, Not_But_A_Shadow said: I say Franklin should go to her dimension and make her his bitch there, I like your 6 points (but not all heroes right? Those like Wolverine and Spider-Man aren’t that big of assholes.) Oh no, he actually likes Spiderman (Mostly, I’ll get to that later) and most of the other Avengers. I meant to say solely the people Marvel’s Illuminati, especially Charles, as well as certain villains who did try to shut down his brain/powers or use him as a weapon of some sort. Also, what do you mean about his peers and teacher “knowing?” Know that he’s the son of Reed Richards? That’d be interesting since he’d be in an honors school like Peter in Spiderman: Homecoming and everyone there would know . And also, sorry, but no ETA. This is going to be my first erotica ever so I’m taking my time getting this right and making this. Also, I don’t have an account yet. My goal is to finish the story and then make the account, I’ll post a link to it when I’m done. What I can say is that I got the premise Chapter 1 done and printing it at the moment. It’s fairly typical for the story setting, we see him going to school like a regular kid, then getting on the helicarrier to meet with SHIELD and any training to see if he’s needed anywhere, and then he goes home to find Peter with his mom and gets weirded out (Like I said, he mostly likes Spiderman), and it goes down from there. Quote
Hide_My_Sins Posted January 10, 2018 Report Posted January 10, 2018 On 1/9/2018 at 3:33 AM, Guest Red-Light said: what do you mean about his peers and teacher “knowing?” Know that he’s the son of Reed Richards? That’d be interesting since he’d be in an honors school like Peter in Spiderman: Homecoming and everyone there would know . What I can say is that I got the premise Chapter 1 done and printing it at the moment. It’s fairly typical for the story setting, we see him going to school like a regular kid, then getting on the helicarrier to meet with SHIELD and any training to see if he’s needed anywhere, and then he goes home to find Peter with his mom and gets weirded out (Like I said, he mostly likes Spiderman), and it goes down from there. I thought that the school would now he is a hero. He gets a call to help, and the school allows it as a “Okay, go out and save the world.” As for Peter and Frankie’s mom, clearly she has been lonely and possibly fell for Peter, as he reminds her of a younger, nicer, better Reed. Quote
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