Kushina Story [reboot]

[Ikarusu-dono]

At the request of a mod the previous thread has been discontinued – this will serve as the reboot, in the free-for-all “General” section. No rules “pinned at the top” as was said, so we should be fine.

Anyway, I’ll be doing two stories. Gregory’s challenge—

Part I

Kushina and Minato survive the Kyuubi attack, and Kushina had given birth to twin girls two years before Naruto was born. The story would start at the Genin team assignments – and there would be six chapters. Three for Kushina, three for Naruto. Kushina would gradually succumb to the lustful advances of her students, and Naruto would end up fucking Satsuki (female Sasuke) and gain forbidden power. Minato would die in the final two chapters and be succeeded as Hokage by his younger sister “Sue”. Naruto would also develop a crush on his mother.

Part II

Naruto returns from his training trip, and begins to develop a deep-rooted love for his mother. It would follow canon to a certain degree, with him laying the groundwork for an invasion of Hi no Kuni. He also fucks his two olders sisters.

Part III

This part would consist entirely of Naruto’s campaign against Hi no Kuni and reclaiming Uzushio. Him and Kushina would begin dating. Naruto would be challenged by Minato’s younger sister “Sue” in Konoha.

Part IV

Naruto is now 32, and has conquered the Elemental Nations. However, he desires much more than what he already controls – he wants the entire world to bow before him. Soon enough his plains are foiled. The Gods themselves stand in his way – and although he is nigh their strength, together he is no match for them. He must marry Kushina and have her bare him children in order to conquer the world once and for all.

 

And one story to be determined. Vote on the poll and we’ll discuss the ideas below. Just make any original ideas roughly equivalent to a bodyguard mission.

Edited August 15, 2017 by Ikarusu-dono
Grammar correction.

[WillowDarkling]

I also said in my post, to create a thread here after you post a story, but I’ll let this slide since you state that you are writing one of the stories. Please post a link to that story in this thread as soon as you post it to the Archive, and then you can discuss all of this here.

Thank you for your cooperation. 

 

Willow Darkling, forum mod. 

[Emperor-of-Evil]

Ok so for both ideas it's pretty straightforward.

Bodyguard: escort and guard a youngteen and his family or a group consisting of young teens with one elder. That way they can make frequent stops so she can get fucked a lot.

Town guard: simple guard a town from bandits. She'd have to stay an extended time for the mission probably 2 weeks to a month. Enough time for her to be banged senseless by teens. 

[BitterNTR]

In response to your reply in the last thread…

I’ve got tonnes of challenges on my AFF bio. But here’s some I’d be interested to see you try out (if they get selected, of course).

1 ~ Dirty Bathtime

Involves: Kushina, Naruto, Choji, Kiba, Shikamaru

Summary: Things don't usually go to plan when bathing a lot of kids, especially when you're the 'Number 1 MILF' in all of Konoha.

Tags: Shota, Body Expansion, Cheat

Plot – In this one, I was thinking of a young Naruto going out to play with his friends. A quick downpour puts an end to their fun time and they decide to head back to Naruto’s house to stay out of the rain. Kushina invites them in but gets into a fit with all the mud they’re tracking throughout the house. She gathers them all into the bathroom, strips them all and gets them into the bath and shower. (At this point, you can choose to have Naruto stay, or leave because he’s excited to play with his toys or something) Things take a turn when Kushina joins them to make sure they’re completely squeaky clean. Equally as naked with nothing to fear since they’re kids, they eventually end up teasing her about her body and groping her, which slowly leads into a steamy shota-gangbang in the bathroom.

Note – One thing I’ d definitely like to see in this is Choji using his family’s Jutsu to expand his dick to a rather impressive size, at least enough for Kushina to go slack-jawed in surprise.

 

2 ~ The Tomato's Bet

Involves: Kushina, Classmates

Summary: A lesson Kushina wanted to teach her future children was to never gamble and make bets. She would know, she learned it the hard way.

Tags: Loli, Shota, Group, Slave

Plot – Starts off with Kushina talking to Naruto about why gambling is bad, recounting a story in her younger years. The younger Kushina gets a little too cocky when her classmates decide to pick on her again, betting something almost impossible for her to do (perhaps beating their older, stronger Genin brothers) just to prove her own superiority amongst her peers. In exchange if she wins, they’ll stop bullying her and she gets the respect she deserves as the future first female Hokage, or if she loses, she will forfeit her freedom and become their slave for the next few days/weeks/months/years. 

Note – I really don’t want any scat or anything alike. 

 

3 ~ Information Extraction

Involves: Kushina, Baki, OC/Male Characters

Summary: Naturally equipped with chakra chains, a penchant for torture and an impossibly high, unfulfillable libido, Kushina found herself a good job as the Head of Konoha's Torture and Interrogation Unit.

Tags: Violence, Cheating, Group, Gangbang, Slight Fem-Dom.

Plot – Pretty self-explanatory. Kushina’s part of the Konoha Torture and Interrogation Unit and she has to get information out of a lot of people. She found that the easiest way to do so was through their dicks. Both traitors and enemies of Konoha are not spared from her sexual deviancy. Kushina can fuck OC’s and Canon characters and everything done should be hush-hush from Minato. Or at least, hidden from him as best as she can.

Note – Kushina has to use her chains to pin someone down to the floor or bound to a chain. She should probably be in control for most of the sex scenes, but she can lose her will to a particularly large cock, but only momentarily.

 

But yeah, that’s about it. I’ve got plenty more but these are some of my oldest ones. I’d definitely like to know what you think about them. If you’d like more, feel free to ask.

[Emperor-of-Evil]

Bitterntr good to see you on here huge fan of your work. Might send you a message for a story idea if you are interested

[BitterNTR]

11 minutes ago, Emperor-of-Evil said:

Bitterntr good to see you on here huge fan of your work. Might send you a message for a story idea if you are interested

Thanks, but I’m in quite the writing slump right now and this thread is for Icarus’ story. I wouldn’t mind hearing that one out through a PM though.

[Emperor-of-Evil]

 

3 hours ago, BitterNTR said:

Thanks, but I’m in quite the writing slump right now and this thread is for Icarus’ story. I wouldn’t mind hearing that one out through a PM though.

I was referring to a pm

[BitterNTR]

Also, regarding that last thread I noticed that Naruto-Gremory’s story was very well liked amongst the ‘anonymous guests’ after it had been posted. I’m not pointing any fingers but it seems very suspicious that they all came in one after the other, posting almost identical remarks… almost as though they’re just fake accounts made purely to have Naruto-Gremory’s story get chosen. 

Not complaining, but just found it funny how… robotic they felt.

[BitterNTR]

1 hour ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

And one story to be determined. Vote on the poll and we’ll discuss the ideas below. Just make any original ideas roughly equivalent to a bodyguard mission.

 

Whoops, I missed that part. Feel free to ignore my ideas then since I don’t think any of them come close to being a bodyguard mission.

[Ikarusu-dono]

2 minutes ago, BitterNTR said:

Whoops, I missed that part. Feel free to ignore my ideas then since I don’t think any of them come close to being a bodyguard mission.

Heh. Do you have any ideas for #2? If so feel free to share them.

[Ikarusu-dono]

1 hour ago, Emperor-of-Evil said:

Ok so for both ideas it's pretty straightforward.

Bodyguard: escort and guard a youngteen and his family or a group consisting of young teens with one elder. That way they can make frequent stops so she can get fucked a lot.

Town guard: simple guard a town from bandits. She'd have to stay an extended time for the mission probably 2 weeks to a month. Enough time for her to be banged senseless by teens. 

I like your town guard one the best. The mod said, “post a link to [Gregory’s challenge] in this thread as soon as you post it to the Archive, and then you can discuss all of this here.” 

Taking his advice under consideration, I’ll finish Gregory’s challenge ASAP. In the meantime could you elaborate further? (Meaning, expand on the challenge of the town guard one.)

Edited August 15, 2017 by Ikarusu-dono
Added clarification.

[Ikarusu-dono]

15 minutes ago, BitterNTR said:

Also, regarding that last thread I noticed that Naruto-Gremory’s story was very well liked amongst the ‘anonymous guests’ after it had been posted. I’m not pointing any fingers but it seems very suspicious that they all came in one after the other, posting almost identical remarks… almost as though they’re just fake accounts made purely to have Naruto-Gremory’s story get chosen. 

Not complaining, but just found it funny how… robotic they felt.

I noticed that as well. Any idea on who was responsible?

[Emperor-of-Evil]

3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

I like your town guard one the best. The mod said, “post a link to [Gregory’s challenge] in this thread as soon as you post it to the Archive, and then you can discuss all of this here.” 

Taking his advice under consideration, I’ll finish Gregory’s challenge ASAP. In the meantime could you elaborate further?

Ok so the town guard idea. Kushina has just recently started training again to take a mission after naruto enters the academy. Minato has bot touched her since naruto was born. So after gaining some skills back sbe goes on this simple mission. However during the misssion she is flirted with and even hit on by teens in he town. At first she ignores it but as it continues she feels special from it. At one point a bandit injures her. Nothing fatal or even severe just a small cut. One teen helps heal it and at that point the dam opens up and kushina bangs him. Afterwords however she cant find an off switch for her sex drive so she goes arund town getting banged by teens. 

[BitterNTR]

18 minutes ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

Heh. Do you have any ideas for #2? If so feel free to share them.

If Kushina’s guarding a town, I suppose I could just throw you one I just thought of at the top of my head.

Watch Your Back

Involves: Kushina, Male OC/Characters

Summary: Assigned to protect a simple-minded village in the far corner of the Land of Fire, Kushina does her job and does it well. But with her eyes pointed to the horizon at any would-be threats, how can she see the evil lurking behind her?

Tags: Rape, Drug-use

Kushina’s assigned to a simple village as a ward against bandits and thugs, and things seem to be going great. Even better, the villagers treat her well, appreciating her presence and prowess at keeping their homes safe. But behind those smiling facades lies their true intention.

1 – Having been raided without fail for the past few years, the villagers came to the conclusion that they simply did not have enough able-bodied soldiers to defend them. So with Kushina now in their presence, the villagers secretly poison her with drugs, weakening her enough so that they can imprison, rape and impregnate her in order to get more strong shinobi.

2 – The villagers plan on drugging (and/or raping) Kushina with a powerful aphrodisiac, eventually turning her into their village whore or something along those lines.

The poison and drugs can be delivered through food and water they provide her. Perhaps a subplot to explain where the aphrodisiacs come from can be that: Orochimaru has been sending them drugs for this very purpose, including setting up Kushina being the one sent to the village. All this in order to cripple Minato’s will and bring into question his ability to lead the village while he’s fretting over his missing fiance, allowing him to get one step closer to the seat of the Hokage. 

It’s pretty far fetched, but political drive makes crazy people go even crazier.

Edited August 15, 2017 by BitterNTR

[BitterNTR]

12 minutes ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

I noticed that as well. Any idea on who was responsible?

I think that it’s pretty evident that Naruto-Gremory was the one, considering they liked every single one of the posts. Not that this is concrete proof, nor do I really mind since his idea isn’t that bad – just a little confusing. Besides, I’d enjoy anything you decide to produce.

Edited August 15, 2017 by BitterNTR

[Guest Assassin01]

Does Naruto have any super ancient powers in the Gremory challenge ?
 

[Ikarusu-dono]

52 minutes ago, Guest Assassin01 said:

Does Naruto have any super ancient powers in the Gremory challenge ?
 

That he will.

1 hour ago, Emperor-of-Evil said:

Ok so the town guard idea. Kushina has just recently started training again to take a mission after naruto enters the academy. Minato has bot touched her since naruto was born. So after gaining some skills back sbe goes on this simple mission. However during the misssion she is flirted with and even hit on by teens in he town. At first she ignores it but as it continues she feels special from it. At one point a bandit injures her. Nothing fatal or even severe just a small cut. One teen helps heal it and at that point the dam opens up and kushina bangs him. Afterwords however she cant find an off switch for her sex drive so she goes arund town getting banged by teens. 

1 hour ago, BitterNTR said:

If Kushina’s guarding a town, I suppose I could just throw you one I just thought of at the top of my head.

Watch Your Back

Involves: Kushina, Male OC/Characters

Summary: Assigned to protect a simple-minded village in the far corner of the Land of Fire, Kushina does her job and does it well. But with her eyes pointed to the horizon at any would-be threats, how can she see the evil lurking behind her?

Tags: Rape, Drug-use

Kushina’s assigned to a simple village as a ward against bandits and thugs, and things seem to be going great. Even better, the villagers treat her well, appreciating her presence and prowess at keeping their homes safe. But behind those smiling facades lies their true intention.

1 – Having been raided without fail for the past few years, the villagers came to the conclusion that they simply did not have enough able-bodied soldiers to defend them. So with Kushina now in their presence, the villagers secretly poison her with drugs, weakening her enough so that they can imprison, rape and impregnate her in order to get more strong shinobi.

2 – The villagers plan on drugging (and/or raping) Kushina with a powerful aphrodisiac, eventually turning her into their village whore or something along those lines.

The poison and drugs can be delivered through food and water they provide her. Perhaps a subplot to explain where the aphrodisiacs come from can be that: Orochimaru has been sending them drugs for this very purpose, including setting up Kushina being the one sent to the village. All this in order to cripple Minato’s will and bring into question his ability to lead the village while he’s fretting over his missing fiance, allowing him to get one step closer to the seat of the Hokage. 

It’s pretty far fetched, but political drive makes crazy people go even crazier.

I’ll probably end up doing a combination of Emperor’s & Bitter’s first challenge. I.e. – Kushina goes to a small town with bandit problems and fights them – teens will attempt to drug her so she can repopulate the village with Shinobi. When she is first fucked it will be by a teen who heals her, per Emperor’s challenge. Thoughts?

[Emperor-of-Evil]

3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

That he will.

I’ll probably end up doing a combination of Emperor’s & Bitter’s first challenge. I.e. – Kushina goes to a small town with bandit problems and fights them – teens will attempt to drug her so she can repopulate the village with Shinobi. When she is first fucked it will be by a teen who heals her, per Emperor’s challenge. Thoughts?

I dig it

[BitterNTR]

3 minutes ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

That he will.

I’ll probably end up doing a combination of Emperor’s & Bitter’s first challenge. I.e. – Kushina goes to a small town with bandit problems and fights them – teens will attempt to drug her so she can repopulate the village with Shinobi. When she is first fucked it will be by a teen who heals her, per Emperor’s challenge. Thoughts?

Sounds good. But I'd like to see more than just teens though if the whole town is bad. And is the person trying to rid Kushina of her drugs genuinely doing so because he's good and really wants to help her, or if it's because he's reverse psychology-ing her?

[Ikarusu-dono]

59 minutes ago, BitterNTR said:

Sounds good. But I'd like to see more than just teens though if the whole town is bad. And is the person trying to rid Kushina of her drugs genuinely doing so because he's good and really wants to help her, or if it's because he's reverse psychology-ing her?

Ultimately there’ll be a sub-plot as you suggested, perhaps Orochimaru or an OC that planned the whole thing. So yes, there’ll be more than just teens. 

 

1 hour ago, Emperor-of-Evil said:

I dig it

Alright – with approval from you and Bitter the challenge is (roughly) set.

 

Any further request for chapters or plot? I’m about 2/3 with the first chapter of Gremory’s challenge.

[Emperor-of-Evil]

3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

Ultimately there’ll be a sub-plot as you suggested, perhaps Orochimaru or an OC that planned the whole thing. So yes, there’ll be more than just teens. 

 

Alright – with approval from you and Bitter the challenge is (roughly) set.

 

Any further request for chapters or plot? I’m about 2/3 with the first chapter of Gremory’s challenge.

Nah I think we have all the bases covered

[Ikarusu-dono]

Alright, I’ll wait ‘til about 10 PM EST before I start the new challenge. That should be enough time for some people from the old thread to come over and give their feedback on the second challenge. While waiting for that deadline I’ll continue on Gregory’s challenge.

Edited August 15, 2017 by Ikarusu-dono
Grammar correction.

[Ikarusu-dono]

27 minutes ago, Emperor-of-Evil said:

Nah I think we have all the bases covered

Before I forget – Bitter wanted to know if the first teen she fucks is genuinely trying to help nurse her back to health or has an ulterior motive. You can pick either, or leave it up to me. Just let me know soon.

[Emperor-of-Evil]

3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

Alright, I’ll wait ‘til about 10 PM EST before I start the new challenge. That should be enoguh time for some people from the old thread to come over and give their feedback on the second challenge. While waiting for that deadline I’ll continue on Gregory’s challenge.

Sweet

[Emperor-of-Evil]

3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:

Before I forget – Bitter wanted to know if the first teen she fucks is genuinely trying to help nurse her back to health or has an ulterior motive. You can pick either, or leave it up to me. Just let me know soon.

Originally it wasnt healing her of drugs. It was a simple cut from a bandit. However I would say ulterior motive would be best