Ikarusu-dono

The idea itself is actually quite good, and it would be a great read. However, at the moment, I’m working to complete a joint-challenge from Bitter and Emperor, so I won’t be able to attempt yours. Perhaps in the future.

Update: the chapter is roughly 70% done. I won’t set an arbitrary time-table for myself this time, but it should be up soon.

Gremory’s challenge ultimately gave me a writers block – but I should have the first chapter up for the other challenge in about 5 hours.

Might take this after I finish my two current challenges. Not a bad idea at all. As a matter of fact, it’s quite good.

Ignore what I just said – gonna try a fresh writing instead.

It was the length that I originally had planned for the story. (I.e. potential for 10+ chapters.) When I wrote it the challenge manifested itself in the form of a one shot.

Here’s an update on the stories so far: Gremory’s challenge – It’s about ¾ done, reason for the slow progress being a busy schedule the past couple days & lack of a beta. Went back and corrected the grammar myself. “Watch Your Back” Combo of Emperor’s and Bitter’s Challenge – I believe that this challenge needs further development. About half of the first chapter was written when I realized that I’d been writing a one shot. So, Emperor & Bitter, let’s do some more brainstorming to shape the challenge differently. And, if we all have such a mind, perhaps an entirely new challenge. (A bodyguard mission?) Not entirely certain where this one’ll end up – but something will get worked out.

Before I forget – Bitter wanted to know if the first teen she fucks is genuinely trying to help nurse her back to health or has an ulterior motive. You can pick either, or leave it up to me. Just let me know soon.

Alright, I’ll wait ‘til about 10 PM EST before I start the new challenge. That should be enough time for some people from the old thread to come over and give their feedback on the second challenge. While waiting for that deadline I’ll continue on Gregory’s challenge.

Ultimately there’ll be a sub-plot as you suggested, perhaps Orochimaru or an OC that planned the whole thing. So yes, there’ll be more than just teens. Alright – with approval from you and Bitter the challenge is (roughly) set. Any further request for chapters or plot? I’m about 2/3 with the first chapter of Gremory’s challenge.

That he will. I’ll probably end up doing a combination of Emperor’s & Bitter’s first challenge. I.e. – Kushina goes to a small town with bandit problems and fights them – teens will attempt to drug her so she can repopulate the village with Shinobi. When she is first fucked it will be by a teen who heals her, per Emperor’s challenge. Thoughts?

I noticed that as well. Any idea on who was responsible?

I like your town guard one the best. The mod said, “post a link to [Gregory’s challenge] in this thread as soon as you post it to the Archive, and then you can discuss all of this here.” Taking his advice under consideration, I’ll finish Gregory’s challenge ASAP. In the meantime could you elaborate further? (Meaning, expand on the challenge of the town guard one.)

Heh. Do you have any ideas for #2? If so feel free to share them.

The thread has been rebooted here: K.S. Reboot