Ikarusu-dono

The idea itself is actually quite good, and it would be a great read. However, at the moment, I’m working to complete a joint-challenge from Bitter and Emperor, so I won’t be able to attempt yours. Perhaps in the future.

Update: the chapter is roughly 70% done. I won’t set an arbitrary time-table for myself this time, but it should be up soon.

Gremory’s challenge ultimately gave me a writers block – but I should have the first chapter up for the other challenge in about 5 hours.

Might take this after I finish my two current challenges. Not a bad idea at all. As a matter of fact, it’s quite good.

Ignore what I just said – gonna try a fresh writing instead.

It was the length that I originally had planned for the story. (I.e. potential for 10+ chapters.) When I wrote it the challenge manifested itself in the form of a one shot.

Here’s an update on the stories so far: Gremory’s challenge – It’s about ¾ done, reason for the slow progress being a busy schedule the past couple days & lack of a beta. Went back and corrected the grammar myself. “Watch Your Back” Combo of Emperor’s and Bitter’s Challenge – I believe that this challenge needs further development. About half of the first chapter was written when I realized that I’d been writing a one shot. So, Emperor & Bitter, let’s do some more brainstorming to shape the challenge differently. And, if we all have such a mind, perhaps an entirely new challenge. (A bodyguard mission?) Not entirely certain where this one’ll end up – but something will get worked out.

Before I forget – Bitter wanted to know if the first teen she fucks is genuinely trying to help nurse her back to health or has an ulterior motive. You can pick either, or leave it up to me. Just let me know soon.

Alright, I’ll wait ‘til about 10 PM EST before I start the new challenge. That should be enough time for some people from the old thread to come over and give their feedback on the second challenge. While waiting for that deadline I’ll continue on Gregory’s challenge.

Ultimately there’ll be a sub-plot as you suggested, perhaps Orochimaru or an OC that planned the whole thing. So yes, there’ll be more than just teens. Alright – with approval from you and Bitter the challenge is (roughly) set. Any further request for chapters or plot? I’m about 2/3 with the first chapter of Gremory’s challenge.

That he will. I’ll probably end up doing a combination of Emperor’s & Bitter’s first challenge. I.e. – Kushina goes to a small town with bandit problems and fights them – teens will attempt to drug her so she can repopulate the village with Shinobi. When she is first fucked it will be by a teen who heals her, per Emperor’s challenge. Thoughts?

I noticed that as well. Any idea on who was responsible?

I like your town guard one the best. The mod said, “post a link to [Gregory’s challenge] in this thread as soon as you post it to the Archive, and then you can discuss all of this here.” Taking his advice under consideration, I’ll finish Gregory’s challenge ASAP. In the meantime could you elaborate further? (Meaning, expand on the challenge of the town guard one.)

Heh. Do you have any ideas for #2? If so feel free to share them.

The thread has been rebooted here: K.S. Reboot

At the request of a mod the previous thread has been discontinued – this will serve as the reboot, in the free-for-all “General” section. No rules “pinned at the top” as was said, so we should be fine. Anyway, I’ll be doing two stories. Gregory’s challenge— Part I Kushina and Minato survive the Kyuubi attack, and Kushina had given birth to twin girls two years before Naruto was born. The story would start at the Genin team assignments – and there would be six chapters. Three for Kushina, three for Naruto. Kushina would gradually succumb to the lustful advances of her students, and Naruto would end up fucking Satsuki (female Sasuke) and gain forbidden power. Minato would die in the final two chapters and be succeeded as Hokage by his younger sister “Sue”. Naruto would also develop a crush on his mother. Part II Naruto returns from his training trip, and begins to develop a deep-rooted love for his mother. It would follow canon to a certain degree, with him laying the groundwork for an invasion of Hi no Kuni. He also fucks his two olders sisters. Part III This part would consist entirely of Naruto’s campaign against Hi no Kuni and reclaiming Uzushio. Him and Kushina would begin dating. Naruto would be challenged by Minato’s younger sister “Sue” in Konoha. Part IV Naruto is now 32, and has conquered the Elemental Nations. However, he desires much more than what he already controls – he wants the entire world to bow before him. Soon enough his plains are foiled. The Gods themselves stand in his way – and although he is nigh their strength, together he is no match for them. He must marry Kushina and have her bare him children in order to conquer the world once and for all. And one story to be determined. Vote on the poll and we’ll discuss the ideas below. Just make any original ideas roughly equivalent to a bodyguard mission.

Emperor, I'll be sure to message you when the time arrives. In the meantime – do you have any ideas for the #2 challenge?

I’m just going to make a blanket statement here – literally for the past 20 minutes I’ve been writing replies to everyone and when I hit “submit reply” the site logged me off. Emperor-of-Evil: I’d be open to academy ideas, but I’d put them on the back-burner. They’d be the third story I work on after the two ones coming up. TheBossMan: Majority rules, so I’ll be doing Gremory’s challenge & challenge #2. Cora: Not bad ideas, but I won’t be using them. People voted for #2 & #4 (Gremory’s idea). Assasin, Desert and Haruka: Your votes are noted. As #4 is the plurality vote taker and Gremrory’s idea is the winner of it, the idea will become one of the two stories I’m doing. JordoZ: I listed the rough ideas I had – but nothing concrete, no. Just a general sketch of young, hung teens being guarded by Kushina. Any ideas of yours would be welcome. To everyone: My apologies for the mass rejection of ideas, but democracy rules. #2 and Gremory’s challenge will be the two main stories. Upon the completion of those Emperor’s academy will take precedence. Any thoughts and ideas are welcome. Tl;dr – Democracy rules: #2 & #4 (Gremory’s challenge) won. Continue to share ideas.

This topic has exploded since I last logged off – quite shocking, really. I didn’t expect it to gain much traction. Thank you to everyone who’s participated thus far!

A challenge proposed by NarutoGremory: Part I Kushina and Minato survive the Kyuubi attack, and Kushina had given birth to twin girls two years before Naruto was born. The story would start at the Genin team assignments – and there would be six chapters. Three for Kushina, three for Naruto. Kushina would gradually succumb to the lustful advances of her students, and Naruto would end up fucking Satsuki (female Sasuke) and gain forbidden power. Minato would die in the final two chapters and be succeeded as Hokage by his younger sister “Sue”. Naruto would also develop a crush on his mother. Part II Naruto returns from his training trip, and begins to develop a deep-rooted love for his mother. It would follow canon to a certain degree, with him laying the groundwork for an invasion of Hi no Kuni. He also fucks his two olders sisters. Part III This part would consist entirely of Naruto’s campaign against Hi no Kuni and reclaiming Uzushio. Him and Kushina would begin dating. Naruto would be challenged by Minato’s younger sister “Sue” in Konoha. Part IV Naruto is now 32, and has conquered the Elemental Nations. However, he desires much more than what he already controls – he wants the entire world to bow before him. Soon enough his plains are foiled. The Gods themselves stand in his way – and although he is nigh their strength, together he is no match for them. He must marry Kushina and have her bare him children in order to conquer the world once and for all. Any thoughts on that as well?

What would one of your challenges entail? I’m open to anything.

I’d definitely be adding more mature men later on, after all of her students have fucked her. However, because of your request specifically for Fugaku I will be leaving the Uchiha Clan in the story. (i.e. the Uchiha Massacre never happened).

Interesting concept, Z.I.R.. Perhaps something along the lines of she takes a team and becomes infected, then over time she succumbs to the lustful advances of her students?

I’ve read some stories recently about Kushina getting fucked senseless by hung teens. They’re all quality, well written one-shots, but that’s all they are – one-shots. What if I did a 10+ chapter story? And, as one of my favorite authors once said, “You can't just be reading [stories] all the time and leave the writing of them to others.” Thus I’ve decided to write a story of my own, which will be of quite good quality. Assuming I get good ideas, of course. So without further ado, here are my three starting ideas. Kushina has been a housewife for 12 years, and Minato hasn’t fucked her since Naruto was born. She is constantly horny and wants to fuck somebody senseless. Thus she comes out of retirement to take a team, and is gradually succumbing to her student(s) lustful advances inch by gratifying inch. (10+ chapters) Kushina goes on missions and is constantly flirted with by young, hung teens. She usually brushes them off – but one day she snaps. One of them says “Want to share a room with us?” or “Damn would I want to fuck that slut,” and she goes along with it. Kushina entertains young, hung nobles for a night, or she infiltrates a casino to assassinate an escaped Mizuki. Eventually the tables are flipped and she is fucked senseless. Just say your thoughts below – I’m welcome to all feedback; criticism and praise alike.

You’re a good writer and have done well with your story. I have no complaints. -- The Right Honorable Lord Icarus