Ikarusu-dono Posted August 11, 2017 Report Posted August 11, 2017 I’ve read some stories recently about Kushina getting fucked senseless by hung teens. They’re all quality, well written one-shots, but that’s all they are – one-shots. What if I did a 10+ chapter story? And, as one of my favorite authors once said, “You can't just be reading [stories] all the time and leave the writing of them to others.” Thus I’ve decided to write a story of my own, which will be of quite good quality. Assuming I get good ideas, of course. So without further ado, here are my three starting ideas. Kushina has been a housewife for 12 years, and Minato hasn’t fucked her since Naruto was born. She is constantly horny and wants to fuck somebody senseless. Thus she comes out of retirement to take a team, and is gradually succumbing to her student(s) lustful advances inch by gratifying inch. (10+ chapters) Kushina goes on missions and is constantly flirted with by young, hung teens. She usually brushes them off – but one day she snaps. One of them says “Want to share a room with us?” or “Damn would I want to fuck that slut,” and she goes along with it. Kushina entertains young, hung nobles for a night, or she infiltrates a casino to assassinate an escaped Mizuki. Eventually the tables are flipped and she is fucked senseless. Just say your thoughts below – I’m welcome to all feedback; criticism and praise alike. Quote
ZamielRaizunto Posted August 11, 2017 Report Posted August 11, 2017 I would like to see one where she becomes infected with a chakra virus that makes her slowly lose control on her libido until she becomes a total slut. The virus could even cause her body to change to match the more she loses control and if possible have a fem naruto catch the virus as well. Quote
Ikarusu-dono Posted August 12, 2017 Author Report Posted August 12, 2017 (edited) On 8/11/2017 at 6:23 PM, ZamielRaizunto said: I would like to see one where she becomes infected with a chakra virus that makes her slowly lose control on her libido until she becomes a total slut. The virus could even cause her body to change to match the more she loses control and if possible have a fem naruto catch the virus as well. Interesting concept, Z.I.R.. Perhaps something along the lines of she takes a team and becomes infected, then over time she succumbs to the lustful advances of her students? Edited August 13, 2017 by Ikarusu-dono Quote
Tsuna Tsuna Posted August 12, 2017 Report Posted August 12, 2017 15 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said: Maybe you should try to write Kushina x Mature Men story and sometimes add teens idea: Because Minato hasn’t fucked her Mikoto let Kushina joins her and Fugaku after that Kushina start to cheat on Minato with other people(Asuma and Kirenai,Hiashi...) Start to go out with Anko and sleep with random villagers she become a teacher to a Genin Team(Sasuke,Kiba,OC black teen from Kumo) where she start to let her Genin Team fuck her Some of the men you can let her cheat on Minato with Fugaku(with Mikoto) Asuma(with Kurenai) Anko and OC villagers Genin Team Some OC teens she meets Hiashi Zavuza Haku Tazuna Teuchi Raikage Killer Bee Baki ... Quote
Ikarusu-dono Posted August 12, 2017 Author Report Posted August 12, 2017 (edited) On 8/12/2017 at 5:12 AM, Tsuna Tsuna said: Maybe you should try to write Kushina x Mature Men story and sometimes add teens idea: Because Minato hasn’t fucked her Mikoto let Kushina joins her and Fugaku after that Kushina start to cheat on Minato with other people(Asuma and Kirenai,Hiashi...) Start to go out with Anko and sleep with random villagers she become a teacher to a Genin Team(Sasuke,Kiba,OC black teen from Kumo) where she start to let her Genin Team fuck her Some of the men you can let her cheat on Minato with Fugaku(with Mikoto) Asuma(with Kurenai) Anko and OC villagers Genin Team Some OC teens she meets Hiashi Zavuza Haku Tazuna Teuchi Raikage Killer Bee Baki ... I’d definitely be adding more mature men later on, after all of her students have fucked her. However, because of your request specifically for Fugaku I will be leaving the Uchiha Clan in the story. (i.e. the Uchiha Massacre never happened). Edited August 13, 2017 by Ikarusu-dono Quote
BitterNTR Posted August 13, 2017 Report Posted August 13, 2017 Honestly, I’d like to pose you one of my ideas or challenges, but would be totally fine with seeing any one of the three options. Anything for more Kushina-smut. Quote
Ikarusu-dono Posted August 13, 2017 Author Report Posted August 13, 2017 13 hours ago, BitterNTR said: Honestly, I’d like to pose you one of my ideas or challenges, but would be totally fine with seeing any one of the three options. Anything for more Kushina-smut. What would one of your challenges entail? I’m open to anything. Quote
Ikarusu-dono Posted August 13, 2017 Author Report Posted August 13, 2017 A challenge proposed by NarutoGremory: Part I Kushina and Minato survive the Kyuubi attack, and Kushina had given birth to twin girls two years before Naruto was born. The story would start at the Genin team assignments – and there would be six chapters. Three for Kushina, three for Naruto. Kushina would gradually succumb to the lustful advances of her students, and Naruto would end up fucking Satsuki (female Sasuke) and gain forbidden power. Minato would die in the final two chapters and be succeeded as Hokage by his younger sister “Sue”. Naruto would also develop a crush on his mother. Part II Naruto returns from his training trip, and begins to develop a deep-rooted love for his mother. It would follow canon to a certain degree, with him laying the groundwork for an invasion of Hi no Kuni. He also fucks his two olders sisters. Part III This part would consist entirely of Naruto’s campaign against Hi no Kuni and reclaiming Uzushio. Him and Kushina would begin dating. Naruto would be challenged by Minato’s younger sister “Sue” in Konoha. Part IV Naruto is now 32, and has conquered the Elemental Nations. However, he desires much more than what he already controls – he wants the entire world to bow before him. Soon enough his plains are foiled. The Gods themselves stand in his way – and although he is nigh their strength, together he is no match for them. He must marry Kushina and have her bare him children in order to conquer the world once and for all. Any thoughts on that as well? Quote
TheBossMan Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 A story that has a combo of 1 and 3... Quote
Guest Cora Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 1-The same as The Lemon Games by HunterBerserkerWolf but with Kushina in Naruto's place 2-Kushina run away from Konoha after to protect her son,she join Kumo and make a deal with the Raikage He must protect her and her son and in return she will become his wife and restore the Uzumaki clan in Kumo The Raikage treat her as breeding stock and let other fuck her even when she becomes his wife She give birth to Karui and Samui and other children Quote
Emperor-of-Evil Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 For the teen stuff out of curiosity would the academy be too young for her? Cause I can think of a few ideas for it. however if the students wouod be too young I can probably think of other ideas. Do let me know. Quote
Guest Assassin01 Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 I like the challenge from Naruto Gremory Naruto-Gremory 1 Quote
Guest Desertfox Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 I agree I like the challenge from Gremory as well Naruto-Gremory 1 Quote
Guest HarukaStrom2017 Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 I also agree that I like the Gremory challenge. Naruto-Gremory 1 Quote
JordoZ Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 Hmm, you know...this thread kinda leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Granted, not because of Ikarusu. It seems most people that replied just came to try and force their ideas on you in a way – not one of them even discussed the ideas you already proposed, the ones you’d already thought on yourself. Out of the votes, the one I voted for myself was the bodyguard mission. Since, all the other ones actually have had lemons written for them. Not many, but still there hasn’t been a bodyguard one for Kushina – out of all the ideas, it’s the only one that hasn’t been done already. Do you have anything thought up for that one? Quote
Neo_Shepard Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 1 hour ago, JordoZ said: Hmm, you know...this thread kinda leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Granted, not because of Ikarusu. It seems most people that replied just came to try and force their ideas on you in a way – not one of them even discussed the ideas you already proposed, the ones you’d already thought on yourself. Out of the votes, the one I voted for myself was the bodyguard mission. Since, all the other ones actually have had lemons written for them. Not many, but still there hasn’t been a bodyguard one for Kushina – out of all the ideas, it’s the only one that hasn’t been done already. Do you have anything thought up for that one? Look up The unforgettable escort mission of Kushina Quote
Emperor-of-Evil Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 (edited) 5 hours ago, JordoZ said: Hmm, you know...this thread kinda leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Granted, not because of Ikarusu. It seems most people that replied just came to try and force their ideas on you in a way – not one of them even discussed the ideas you already proposed, the ones you’d already thought on yourself. Out of the votes, the one I voted for myself was the bodyguard mission. Since, all the other ones actually have had lemons written for them. Not many, but still there hasn’t been a bodyguard one for Kushina – out of all the ideas, it’s the only one that hasn’t been done already. Do you have anything thought up for that one? Admittedly you are not wrong. And for that I apologize but he did say he wanted to hear ideas. In my case though I honestly just had no interest in the other three choices. The genin team has been done before. Same as the bodyguard mission and undercover mission just seems too generic. However that doesnt mean they can be good if done. Before anyone says anything I do not want to start an argument at all. I just wished to state my opinion. Also cause I never got an answer to my original question I just wanted to see if ikarusu could answer my question if he was interested at all. I retract my statement on the bodyguard story Edited August 14, 2017 by Emperor-of-Evil Quote
JordoZ Posted August 14, 2017 Report Posted August 14, 2017 1 hour ago, Neo_Shepard said: Look up The unforgettable escort mission of Kushina I don’t count that story. Even being the one that lay the foundation for it in the first place. The fact of the matter is, it was originally written in French. And then translated with Google Translate, and it shows...badly. I can’t consider it an English written piece, so as far as I’m concerned. There still isn’t an English bodyguard Kushina written other than a few drabbles in my own thread. Quote
Emperor-of-Evil Posted August 15, 2017 Report Posted August 15, 2017 http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106143 Does this one count as bodyguard? Quote
Ikarusu-dono Posted August 15, 2017 Author Report Posted August 15, 2017 This topic has exploded since I last logged off – quite shocking, really. I didn’t expect it to gain much traction. Thank you to everyone who’s participated thus far! Naruto-Gremory 1 Quote
Emperor-of-Evil Posted August 15, 2017 Report Posted August 15, 2017 3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said: This topic has exploded since I last logged off – quite shocking, really. I didn’t expect it to gain much traction. Thank you to everyone who’s participated thus far! No problem happy to be on and this being the first topic I take part in since joining yesterday. While you're on now though could I please get an answer on if the academy would be too young for the topic. Cause honestly I can think of ideas you could possibly use on that subject easier. If not though it is fine. I just want to help as much as I can. Tha k you Quote
Ikarusu-dono Posted August 15, 2017 Author Report Posted August 15, 2017 I’m just going to make a blanket statement here – literally for the past 20 minutes I’ve been writing replies to everyone and when I hit “submit reply” the site logged me off. Emperor-of-Evil: I’d be open to academy ideas, but I’d put them on the back-burner. They’d be the third story I work on after the two ones coming up. TheBossMan: Majority rules, so I’ll be doing Gremory’s challenge & challenge #2. Cora: Not bad ideas, but I won’t be using them. People voted for #2 & #4 (Gremory’s idea). Assasin, Desert and Haruka: Your votes are noted. As #4 is the plurality vote taker and Gremrory’s idea is the winner of it, the idea will become one of the two stories I’m doing. JordoZ: I listed the rough ideas I had – but nothing concrete, no. Just a general sketch of young, hung teens being guarded by Kushina. Any ideas of yours would be welcome. To everyone: My apologies for the mass rejection of ideas, but democracy rules. #2 and Gremory’s challenge will be the two main stories. Upon the completion of those Emperor’s academy will take precedence. Any thoughts and ideas are welcome. Tl;dr – Democracy rules: #2 & #4 (Gremory’s challenge) won. Continue to share ideas. Quote
Emperor-of-Evil Posted August 15, 2017 Report Posted August 15, 2017 3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said: I’m just going to make a blanket statement here – literally for the past 20 minutes I’ve been writing replies to everyone and when I hit “submit reply” the site logged me off. Emperor-of-Evil: I’d be open to academy ideas, but I’d put them on the back-burner. They’d be the third story I work on after the two ones coming up. TheBossMan: Majority rules, so I’ll be doing Gremory’s challenge & challenge #2. Cora: Not bad ideas, but I won’t be using them. People voted for #2 & #4 (Gremory’s idea). Assasin, Desert and Haruka: Your votes are noted. As #4 is the plurality vote taker and Gremrory’s idea is the winner of it, the idea will become one of the two stories I’m doing. JordoZ: I listed the rough ideas I had – but nothing concrete, no. Just a general sketch of young, hung teens being guarded by Kushina. Any ideas of yours would be welcome. To everyone: My apologies for the mass rejection of ideas, but democracy rules. #2 and Gremory’s challenge will be the two main stories. Upon the completion of those Emperor’s academy will take precedence. Any thoughts and ideas are welcome. Tl;dr – Democracy rules: #2 & #4 (Gremory’s challenge) won. Continue to share ideas. I understand. Tthak you for letting me know. When you are ready for the ideas I will send them to you no problem. Quote
Ikarusu-dono Posted August 15, 2017 Author Report Posted August 15, 2017 Emperor, I'll be sure to message you when the time arrives. In the meantime – do you have any ideas for the #2 challenge? Quote
WillowDarkling Posted August 15, 2017 Report Posted August 15, 2017 I’m going to step in now and ask all of our readers and users to please read the rules for this forum. They are pinned at the top of each of the sub forums. It is clearly stated that the Challenges and Request forums are for issuing Challenges or Requests to other authors, not for discussing your own ideas. It is also stated in the rules that this forum is not to be used for “think tank” posts, which is what this thread is turning into. So, please keep any further discussion on this thread focused on the original post, and Ikarusu-dono, create a Review Reply thread in the appropriate subforum as soon as you have a story up on the Archive. There you are free to discuss all of this as much as you like, and guests can post there too without needing to sign up. Willow Darkling, forum moderator. Quote
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