Snake_King's Story Discussion Thread

[Strange_idea]

Here we go! Strange_idea, formerly known as guest, guest, maybe writer

[Snake_King]

2 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

Here we go! Strange_idea, formerly known as guest, guest, maybe writer

If you’d like to speak to me or anyone else with ideas, feel free to PM us.

[Strange_idea]

Speaking of....kinda

Someone mentioned samurai jack a little while ago. I missed the context, but i have an idea what you could do with him if you'd like to hear

[Snake_King]

We’re all ears.

[Red_Light_Zone]

4 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

Speaking of....kinda

Someone mentioned samurai jack a little while ago. I missed the context, but i have an idea what you could do with him if you'd like to hear

Lay it on us, Strange!

[Strange_idea]

So i missed the context of the question, BUT, since he got the.... wait you guys saw the new series right?

 

 

 

 

SPOILERS if you try

Since he became immune to time, we can use that. Have him either lay with, give a blood transfusion to the girls that strike you and have THAT slow down and eventually stop their ageing, so everyone's in the endgame era. Oneshots for everyone, they realise offscreen and go looking for him. They find him an join him, seeking to use the chance to end aku and since he's propbably the only one who'll lice like them so they want answers. If you like, this has the side effecta that more sisters survive the fight, but ashi is the only one he doesn't loose, so she falls for him first and is put in charge of convincing her sisters when the others catch up. Maybr throw in a scottsman daughter. The ending is dfferent in that the greater 'time immunity' means they all survive the trip into the past

 

 

End spoilers.

 

 

I've a workable harem scenario for many series, including most of the ones you mentioned. Maybe I should make a thread

 

 

 

[Strange_idea]

Girls would include rave girl, josephine the hunter and more if i can rememer as well as the spoiler girls

[Snake_King]

I’ve seen the entire series, so no worries about spoilers with me.

As for the harem, do you plan on just including the girls from the show or others as well?  Just curious.

[Strange_idea]

I generally try for self-contained. It can work but i don't trust meyelf enough. Don't take that as a sign not to try.

[Snake_King]

I see.  Just thought I’d ask.

Yeah, that ending in the show was pretty bittersweet, and showed that actions, whether good or bad, had consequences.  Not sure about the time immunity thing, but I can see the possibilities.

[Strange_idea]

I'm going to make a thread and post as many ideas as i can remember. Feel free to critique, suggest things or ask to take a shot yourself at any of them.

 

Thanks for all the advice so far

[Strange_idea]

Threads up. Please feel fee to give thoughts, suggestions, crituque or opine which is the best to write first. Or take one for yourself.

 

 

 

While I'm here, have ypu thought about having an omnitrix freakout mutate appa into an anthro?

[Snake_King]

4 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

While I'm here, have ypu thought about having an omnitrix freakout mutate appa into an anthro?

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Not really, as I was pretty much planning on just having Appa be Appa.  Plus, there’re plenty of characters to work with as it is, and a good number of Ben’s aliens look like anthros themselves, don’t you think?

[Snake_King]

But I appreciate the suggestion.

[Strange_idea]

actually, that reminds me, have you plans of including korra and company?

it’s doable i think

[Snake_King]

8 hours ago, Strange_idea said:

actually, that reminds me, have you plans of including korra and company?

it’s doable i think

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I’ve thought about it, though that would mean adding more to the list I already have planned for the harem:

1. Fem!Aang
2. Katara
3. Sokkara (Fem!Sokka)
4. Toph Bei Fong
5. Suki
6. Yue
7. Zuka (Fem!Zuko)
8. Azula
9. Mai
10. Ty Lee
11. June
12. Irah (Fem!Iroh) (Maybe)

With the edition you suggest, it would be this:

1. Korra
2. Fem!Mako
3. Fem!Bolin
4. Asami
5. Lin Bei Fong
6. Suyin Bei Fong
7. Eska
8. Fem!Desna
9. Opal
10. Ikki
11. Jinora
12. Fem!Meelo

Quite a load, don’t you think?  Although I could probably find a way of reimagining them into the setting.

Edited May 28, 2018 by Snake_King
clarification

[Strange_idea]

good point. maybe for kenny 10?

[Strange_idea]

actually, better question, are you including any other ben 10 characters

[Snake_King]

3 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

good point. maybe for kenny 10?

Possibly, if I decide to do a sequel.

2 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

actually, better question, are you including any other ben 10 characters

I was planning on having a few of them appear at the ending for after Ben returns back to his world.  PM me if you want to discuss it in more detail.

[Strange_idea]

forgive me for asking here, but what did you think of the ideas in my new thread?

[Snake_King]

37 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

forgive me for asking here, but what did you think of the ideas in my new thread?

Took me a little while to read through them all, but the ones that interested me were the Kim Possible, Gravity Falls, RWBY,  and Transformers Prime ones.

[Strange_idea]

was it the pictures? too long?

If you;d like to make me a suggestion for any of them or take a crack at one please feel free to PM me.

 

Gravity falls and transformers prime were two of the more interesting ones to me as well. They’re not so much ‘adult’ fanfics as fanfic which happen to contain threesomes i was going to get around to writing. I like ot3s, and it’s fun coming up with creative and plauible enough ways they could happen.

Not that the other two aren’t. they’d be good to work with i think. The important thing is a that the story be fun to write, and interesting to read. erotica is not enough on it’s own.

though i must ask, which version of transformers? the first, with the reformatter or the second, with the ‘succubus’

[Snake_King]

I don’t mind the pictures, and while I got the gist, it was a lot to read through.  Most of what I and others do with these threads is post one idea at a time and discuss each of them before coming up with the next one and repeating the process with that and so on and so on.  Yours is...well, it’s not bad, but...the ideas are all posted one right after the other and it can be a lot to process at once, especially given the length of some of them.

And you’re right, writing the story should be fun.

I sent you a PM not too long ago clarifying what NTR meant, so you can respond to that and we can go from there if you want.

The reformatter one makes more sense to me.

[Strange_idea]

okay…. okay… i can fix that easy

[Strange_idea]

I had a thought, have you seen lurkerggs ‘melon lord’ pictures? well, i was just talking about an azula/aang harem story in a nother thread, and i had a thought, what if in your ben 10 story, azula was less a sociopath (still kinda one) and more just had an aburd libido. the firenation could be capturing ‘enhancing’ and brainwashing girls for her to enjoy. like in this picture: https://lurkergg.deviantart.com/art/Jun-Melonlord-Universe-676118947 though it’s toph running things in the pictures.

 

Given the fire nation already practises kidnapping and brainwashing, and azula’s lust for power and control freak tendencies it makes some sense. it wouldn’t be openly happening, it’s an agenda she’s building for herself in secret.