Snake_King's Story Discussion Thread

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3 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

Interesting setup, so would Jon meet other characters from Overlord or would he meet other characters from other shows and what have you as well?  Also, who would you pick for this harem?

No, while there have been Overlords in the pastof this world, there hasnt been a real one for centuries. He might meet characters in other shows if he were transported there. Also, my rule for the harem would be one to two from each race like an orc, a goblin shorkstack, a dragon lady, etc. There is one must have, the daughter of darksied and the kryptonian goddess Cythonna. For refference look up Lady Darkseid and just give her blue ice skin.

8 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

Well, I definitely enjoyed it.  It subverts a lot of the expectations you might have from having seen other shows, where you expect it to play out one way, but then it does something unexpected, which is often the setup of the joke.

Kazuma might work as well in this because he’s a bit of an entitled nerd and a pervert.

Neat. I'll look this up later.

[Praetor]

     A friend was watching that while I was in his house playing with a Switch.  I remember thinking it wasn’t as good as Log Horizon.  For heroes, if you’re shooting for younger ones, Link, Beast Boy, Dipper, or Marco.  Marco, in particular, I think is worth exploring since he is technically in his 30s.  You could also do a futa lead, or even a woman, which I was thinking of doing for a similar fic.  She usually cross plays  in game as the opposite gender and so, in either male or futa form, goes to town now that she has a penis of her own.  Could be a serious analysis of gender roles, sexuality, penis envy, and double standards; mostly en excuse for a character to swing around a whale dick with reckless abandon.

[Snake_King]

13 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

No, while there have been Overlords in the pastof this world, there hasnt been a real one for centuries. He might meet characters in other shows if he were transported there. Also, my rule for the harem would be one to two from each race like an orc, a goblin shorkstack, a dragon lady, etc. There is one must have, the daughter of darksied and the kryptonian goddess Cythonna. For refference look up Lady Darkseid and just give her blue ice skin.

Neat. I'll look this up later.

What I meant was would he meet other characters from the Overlord anime?

Interesting choices for the harem members.  If you include girls from other worlds, who would you pick?  I got a few ideas if you’re interested.

Enjoy!

[Snake_King]

16 minutes ago, Praetor said:

     A friend was watching that while I was in his house playing with a Switch.  I remember thinking it wasn’t as good as Log Horizon.  For heroes, if you’re shooting for younger ones, Link, Beast Boy, Dipper, or Marco.  Marco, in particular, I think is worth exploring since he is technically in his 30s.  You could also do a futa lead, or even a woman, which I was thinking of doing for a similar fic.  She usually cross plays  in game as the opposite gender and so, in either male or futa form, goes to town now that she has a penis of her own.  Could be a serious analysis of gender roles, sexuality, penis envy, and double standards; mostly en excuse for a character to swing around a whale dick with reckless abandon.

I haven’t seen Log Horizon, so I can’t make a comparison between the two.

Yeah, porn and smut, often regardless of whatever else you put on it, are thinly veiled excuses to get one person’s genitals to another person’s genitals.  Just something I heard a while back and there’s a bit of truth to it.

But still, we’re just here to enjoy ourselves with it, right?

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35 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

But still, we’re just here to enjoy ourselves with it, right?

Right, and so long as we all enjoy it and no one gets hurt, it’s all good clean fun!

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38 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

What I meant was would he meet other characters from the Overlord anime?

 Interesting choices for the harem members.  If you include girls from other worlds, who would you pick?  I got a few ideas if you’re interested.

Enjoy!

No, but that show will likely be referenced.

Oh, just some standard stuff along with some unique girls. All of whom are busty I might add. Just to name a few:

AtlA (LoK)

Toph

Korra

Azula

Tylee

Korra

Gwen (Ben 10)

Wendy(Gravity Falls)

April O’Neel (TMNT)

Velma (Scooby Doo {she’s my waifu guys})

Shego (Kim Possible)

Lord Dominator (Wander over Yonder)

Panda Delgado (Body Baggers)

Yeah, my least is either good girls to be cherished or bad girls to be dominated.

[Snake_King]

54 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

Right, and so long as we all enjoy it and no one gets hurt, it’s all good clean fun!

Indeed.

 

40 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

Oh, just some standard stuff along with some unique girls. All of whom are busty I might add. Just to name a few:

AtlA (LoK)

Toph

Korra

Azula

Tylee

Korra

Gwen (Ben 10)

Wendy(Gravity Falls)

April O’Neel (TMNT)

Velma (Scooby Doo {she’s my waifu guys})

Shego (Kim Possible)

Lord Dominator (Wander over Yonder)

Panda Delgado (Body Baggers)

Yeah, my least is either good girls to be cherished or bad girls to be dominated.

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Neet choices, although you mentioned Korra twice.  Did you mean Katara for one of them?  Also, would it be safe to assume that they would all be reimagined to fit in this dark fantasy world?  I can imagine Korra as either a type of Red Sonja-like barbarian queen or a tribal shaman of sorts, both versions with her elemental powers.

I haven’t read Body Bags so I’m not familiar with Panda Delgado.  The rest of them I’m familiar with.

[Red_Light_Zone]

Sorry for the late reply, but here’s my list of potential overlords from greatest to least potential.

1. Jon Kent: Being the son of Superman, one of my favorite heroes, he’s supposed to surpass his father. A Superman that’s not completely goody two-shoes has always been interesting, and having him take over a planet would be awesome. That, and having a Kryptonian being being a master of the mystic arts would make him flat out op.
2. Gohan: He was supposed to be the universes greatest fighter, for Kai’s sake! I say let him reach that potential by taking over the planet.
3. Marco: He has good reason to be an Overlord with the short end of the stick he’s constantly given to clean Star’s messes. Plus that tentacle, illidid brain-eater arm could transform him.
4. Zak Saturday: His powers are undefined enough to justify him being the heir of the Overlord’s throne.
5. Dipper: His knowledge and experience with the metaphysical would help him on his journey to be the overlord.
6. Kazuma: I need to watch  the anime, but interesting premis non the less.

[Snake_King]

1, 4, & 6 get my vote.

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14 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

Indeed.

 

Neet choices, although you mentioned Korra twice.  Did you mean Katara for one of them?  Also, would it be safe to assume that they would all be reimagined to fit in this dark fantasy world?  I can imagine Korra as either a type of Red Sonja-like barbarian queen or a tribal shaman of sorts, both versions with her elemental powers.

I haven’t read Body Bags so I’m not familiar with Panda Delgado.  The rest of them I’m familiar with.

No that was be an accident, I meant to say just Korra. And I had this idea that the overlord, more than once, tried to take over other worlds, leaving “Gates” to come back to, the girls would unwittingly wall into the gate and into the overlord’s chambers. or the opposite happened and the Overlord ended up sucked into their world. A funny thought is that the Overlord is sucked into the Avatar world multiple times.

This is Panda, and that’s actually how big her boobs are.

[Snake_King]

3 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

No that was be an accident, I meant to say just Korra. And I had this idea that the overlord, more than once, tried to take over other worlds, leaving “Gates” to come back to, the girls would unwittingly wall into the gate and into the overlord’s chambers. or the opposite happened and the Overlord ended up sucked into their world. A funny thought is that the Overlord is sucked into the Avatar world multiple times.

This is Panda, and that’s actually how big her boobs are.

 

Oh, so this would involve dimension-hopping.  That can get tricky if you’re not careful.  Plus, I was under the impression that this fantasy world the Overlord takes control of would be a sort of mish-mash of multiple worlds rolled into one, but if you want to do the dimension hop, that’s fine.

I looked up the character in Google after I saw her on the list, although the way she was drawn had her waist be so thin it made me wonder how she didn’t snap in half.

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1 minute ago, Snake_King said:

Oh, so this would involve dimension-hopping.  That can get tricky if you’re not careful.  Plus, I was under the impression that this fantasy world the Overlord takes control of would be a sort of mish-mash of multiple worlds rolled into one, but if you want to do the dimension hop, that’s fine.

I looked up the character in Google after I saw her on the list, although the way she was drawn had her waist be so thin it made me wonder how she didn’t snap in half.

Yeah, dimension hopping is hard to write, but I was going for more comical chapters where the Overlord is taken to an alternate world for a while to dick around for a while and band a new girl.

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7 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

I looked up the character in Google after I saw her on the list, although the way she was drawn had her waist be so thin it made me wonder how she didn’t snap in half.

And yeah, she's far more T than A. It’s even brought up in the comic. But hey, tits are tits and hers are natural, so thats a win in my book.

[Snake_King]

7 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

Yeah, dimension hopping is hard to write, but I was going for more comical chapters where the Overlord is taken to an alternate world for a while to dick around for a while and band a new girl.

If you want to do that, that’s fine, it’s your story.  Although I think this would still be nice to see:

I feel a little stupid for asking this, but would anal be involved in the sex scenes?  It’s kind of a must for me.

[Snake_King]

Also, I can kind of imagine Korra as a nudist.

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1 minute ago, Snake_King said:

If you want to do that, that’s fine, it’s your story.  Although I think this would still be nice to see:

I feel a little stupid for asking this, but would anal be involved in the sex scenes?  It’s kind of a must for me.

Hmmm… maybe. I may do that. Or I might just have the girls from other universes stick around, or just be one-off omake chapters, who knows.

And yes, anal will be a thing, maybe even rimming.

[Snake_King]

I kind of like them sticking around, although it helps to have a reason for them to stick around.  Like, say, their world was destroyed and they’ve got nowhere else to go?  Just a thought.

[Red_Light_Zone]

Or the dicking is so good they get addicted?

Also, You Like Zak Saturday?

[Snake_King]

Possibly, although I’m sure they might get curious as to how things are going on back in their own worlds, or someone could come looking for them and just happen to find the portal to the Overlord’s world.  My thought was that if you remove the old life, they’ve got no reason not to stay with the Overlord.

I’m good with him, yes.  I saw Secret Saturdays way back when, although I don’t think I was able to catch all the episodes.  Why do you ask?

[Red_Light_Zone]

Its just I didnt think youd like him as an overlord.

[Snake_King]

Well, I’ve seen a couple fics where he ended up being corrupted into the role of Cur or had to play the part in order to keep his remaining friends and family safe.

And on the subject of why the girls stay, you understand what I mean, right?  Still, it’s your story, so your decision to make.

[Red_Light_Zone]

8 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

Well, I’ve seen a couple fics where he ended up being corrupted into the role of Cur or had to play the part in order to keep his remaining friends and family safe.

And on the subject of why the girls stay, you understand what I mean, right?  Still, it’s your story, so your decision to make.

I can promise a soft maybe...

[Snake_King]

2 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

I can promise a soft maybe...

Not sure what you mean by that.

[Snake_King]

If it were me, I’d go the mish-mash route of combining these worlds into one.  Plus, I can see how these girls could be molded to fit into a dark fantasy world:

1. Toph, the daughter of a prominent noble house that secretly practices earth-bending magic, and whom her parents offer to the Overlord in order to get in good favor with him.
2. Korra – has her elemental powers and is the leader of a roaming band of mercenaries that the Overlord inducts into his service.
3. Azula – the tyrannical princess of a foreign land that seeks to conquer the rest of the world before falling at the hands of the Overlord, who takes her as a slave.
4. Ty Lee – a court performer that the Overlord inducts into his service and whom he beds from time to time.
5. Gwen – a practicing mage that is sort of the “court wizard:” for the Overlord that he has regular sex with
6. Wendy – a woodsman’s daughter whom the Overlord picks up and serves as both his architect and someone to share his bed with.
7. April O’Neil – the Overlord’s spymistress (sneaks around to dig up dirt for him) and sleeps with him, of course.
8. Velma – the Overlord’s librarian and record keeper that he makes plenty of noise with (wink-wink)
9. Shego – a wood elf assassin and magic-user that the Overlord keeps around.
10. Lord Dominator – another would-be conquerer that the Overlord brings to her knees
11. Panda Delgado – a human assassin that the Overlord keeps around like Shego.

Just an idea, but what do you think?

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7 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

If it were me, I’d go the mish-mash route of combining these worlds into one.  Plus, I can see how these girls could be molded to fit into a dark fantasy world:

1. Toph, the daughter of a prominent noble house that secretly practices earth-bending magic, and whom her parents offer to the Overlord in order to get in good favor with him.
2. Korra – has her elemental powers and is the leader of a roaming band of mercenaries that the Overlord inducts into his service.
3. Azula – the tyrannical princess of a foreign land that seeks to conquer the rest of the world before falling at the hands of the Overlord, who takes her as a slave.
4. Ty Lee – a court performer that the Overlord inducts into his service and whom he beds from time to time.
5. Gwen – a practicing mage that is sort of the “court wizard:” for the Overlord that he has regular sex with
6. Wendy – a woodsman’s daughter whom the Overlord picks up and serves as both his architect and someone to share his bed with.
7. April O’Neil – the Overlord’s spymistress (sneaks around to dig up dirt for him) and sleeps with him, of course.
8. Velma – the Overlord’s librarian and record keeper that he makes plenty of noise with (wink-wink)
9. Shego – a wood elf assassin and magic-user that the Overlord keeps around.
10. Lord Dominator – another would-be conquerer that the Overlord brings to her knees
11. Panda Delgado – a human assassin that the Overlord keeps around like Shego.

Just an idea, but what do you think?

I actually like this idea a lot more than I thought I would. Idk, maybe its just my inner roll-player demanding I keep a consistant tone when in the end of the day this is all porn and Im taking things too seriously.

If all els fails, I'll likely end up doing it because it all sounds fun.