Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, merry christmas!, how have you been doing? are you having a nice Christmas? 

[GeorgeGlass]

Hey there. Had a nice Christmas; hope you did, too.

BTW, since we’re not talking about “Hot Yoga” at this point, perhaps we could communicate via status updates or something instead.

Edited December 27, 2017 by GeorgeGlass

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Oh, okay, that would be nice but just to be clear, do you want to discuss more about the 'Hot Yoga sequel?, because if you do want to , just say yes and I'll leave a comment about it. I will reply as soon as I can when you leave the next comment, hope you have a nice rest of christmas vacation and a happy new year.

[GeorgeGlass]

I would like to talk more about the “Hot Yoga” sequel, but not until I have a few ideas to kick around. I’ll post here when I do.

Hope you have a happy new year.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Okay, just wanted to know if if you said yes or no, thanks for the reply. By the way, if you need help thinking about an idea for the sequel, maybe you should think about the idea that you had for the sequel, when Jenny has another yoga class while the main characters are having their Christmas special, if you want to use this idea for the sequel, then that would be great, but it is your decision to think and decide which idea is good for the sequel, so I hope to hear from you again and I hope you have a happy new years Eve tomorrow, and take your time trying to think of ideas for the 'Hot Hoga sequel', but if you really like the 'christmas in July special' idea, and you really want to go with this idea, then go ahead and reply to me when you have decided to use this idea or thought of another idea for the sequel, bye and have a happy new years Eve.☺

[GeorgeGlass]

Given that Jenny mentions at the end of the story that she and the others are planning to get together for more group sex, I was thinking that it would be an orgy at someone’s house (probably the Hiranos’, since that whole family is part of the “club” now). Thus, the sexual activities would be more planned and deliberate than those in the first story.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Oh, that's right, I nearly forgot about that part, thanks for reminding me, if you wanna use that idea for the sequel, then go ahead and do it. Since it is your idea, I think you should use this for the sequel, hope to hear from you again, and reply as soon as you can, have a happy New year Eve's☺

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, happy new year! How was your New year's Eve? I had a nice time watching the fireworks last night, oh and by the way, when you have the chance to reply to this comment, tell me what you think of using that idea you had for the sequel, and I'll reply as soon as I can, hope you had a nice New year's eve and hope your having a nice morning today for the new year"s eve.

[GeorgeGlass]

So, I honestly wasn't certain whether I really wanted to write a sequel to “Hot Yoga,” because I am somewhat leery of sequels in general. Even when it comes to pornographic cartoon fanfics, I only like to write a sequel if I can think of some interesting way for the situation created in the first story to evolve. (For example, I wrote “Danville, We Have a Problem” to look at the evolution of the relationships that began in “Truth or Dare 2.0” -- particularly to explore what it would be like for Isabella to actually date Phineas instead of merely pining for him in silence.)

Then, yesterday, I decided that I am indeed going to write a sequel to “Hot Yoga,” because ideas started coming to me fast and furious. Here are a few highlights:

--The “yoga club” has been meeting weekly since it began with Jenny's yoga class. The story takes place during their fifth such meeting.

--In this story, three new members will be inducted into the yoga club:
1. Roger Doofenshmirtz. I wanted to add an adult male to the mix because there aren't enough full-size cocks to go around, and I want at least one of the female characters to get well and truly DPed in this story. I picked Roger because (1) he is good looking as male P&F characters go, (2) he has a connection to the group through Melanie, and (3) I'd like to see some incestuous fucking between him and Vanessa.
2. A preteen boy. Although Melanie has some interest in teenage girls, her real passion is preadolescent boys. Balthazar Horowitz is the only such boy in the group, so Melanie is anxious to bring another one into the fold.
3. A preteen girl. Just as Melanie discovered her passion for young boys in “Hot Yoga,” Monty and Vanessa discovered a shared interested in young girls. They have gotten it on with both Gretchen and Adyson during previous sessions, but their access to Ginger has been limited because Dr. Hirano wants Coltrane to be Ginger’s first older boy. So Monty and Vanessa are interested in having another preadolescent girl join the group. 

I haven't yet decided who the young boy and girl will be, but I want them to be canon characters and not OCs, so I'll be looking through the P&F wiki for B-list characters that might be a good fit. 

--Adyson and Gretchen now have an established dom-sub relationship (with some mentoring from Vanessa). Adyson uses Gretchen for her own pleasure and also enjoys watching Gretchen being used by other members of the group. Adyson has recently begun making Gretchen wear a dog collar and sometimes a leash during sessions. Gretchen gladly goes along with all of this because it means she can have lots of perverted sex with no guilt (because nothing she does is her idea; Adyson ‘makes’ her do it).

--Coltrane is now the Hiranos’ “family boyfriend.” He will have sex with all three Hirano women in this story.

--Jenny now describes herself as “omnisexual.” She enjoys sex with males and females, whether child, teen, or adult, and she especially likes group sex. She also loves having sex with Midas and would like to try it with other species besides dogs. Maybe the story opens with her masturbating to one of her parents’ old National Geographics.

I have more ideas than these, but these are the highlights. I think this story should be as much fun as the original.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

On 1/1/2018 at 0:28 PM, Guest Star wars player 1 said:

 

Hi, I love all these ideas of yours, and I can't wait to see them in the sequel, good luck whenyu start writing the story,  and leave me a reply to this comment when you can, oh by the way, just in case you want another idea for the sequel, I thought about one particular thing about the Dr.hirano/Coltrane is that during the story she told him that he could give her and stacy and ginger another sibling, I thought that was a very nice touch to the story, maybe you can include this in the sequel and see how it developes, if you want. I will be awaiting your reply to this comment,  and hope you have a nice weekend, and  I wish you good luck with writing the sequel, bye and see you soon.

[GeorgeGlass]

Yes, I will definitely be following up on that exchange between Dr. Hirano and Coltrane. 

I’ve never written a story that required as much outlining in advance as “Hot Yoga.” But this one will require even more, both because of the additional characters and because there will be even more partner-switching than in the first one (for Jenny, in particular). 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Okay thanks for letting me know, I think that the sequel to the 'Hot Yoga' story will be a very nice story, oh one question though when are you going to start writing the story?, let me know when you have the time to reply, bye and have a nice rest of the week and weekend. 

[GeorgeGlass]

I’m not sure yet when I’m going to start writing. With the number of characters involved, figuring out who gets it on with who at what time point is proving very tricky, particularly given that there are several specific things that I want to include at certain time points in the story (eg, I want Coltrane/Ginger to happen in the middle of the story and Coltrane/Dr Hirano to happen after that).

Also, I always have a lot of stories in progress at once, and whenever I have time to write, I work on whichever one I feel most inspired to work on at that moment. Although this means that I am always making progress on something, I can’t really commit to a time frame on any particular story.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Okay, I am sorry for asking that question, in fact I nearly forgot that you said that you were planning the sequel,so I won't ask anymore questions about when you are going to write the sorry, just take your time as much as you need, hope you're doing good with your weekend and doing good planning ideas for the sequel, oh, just a few questions if you don't mind, 1.how long is the story going to be ? is it going to be four chapters long like the first one, or five or six chapters long? If you have already planned how long the sequel will be, let me know, but if you still haven't decided yet, just take your time. 2.how is it going finding another boy and girl for the story, because if you haven't found anything yet, let me know so I can search the site so I can help if you want. 3. Will baltzazar Horowitz have a crush on Melanie since she was the first girl he was paired with? Because I wondered if he developed a crush on her during the time they were paired, if you think this is a good idea, then let me know. And finally, 4. You said you had some more ideas than the ones you posted on your comment, so maybe if you want, you could probably post them on your next reply, mostly because I am excited to see what kind of great ideas you have for the sequel, anyway, reply to this comment as soon as you can or when you have the time, and also, let me know what you think of my questions, and I'll reply as soon as I can, have a happy Martin Luther King Day.

[GeorgeGlass]

To answer your questions:

1. I’m planning the same 4-chapter structure as before, although I’ll go to 5 chapters if that’s what it takes to tell the story properly.
2. I’ve picked a couple of background characters that I think will be just right. The girl will be Sally, best known as the little girl from whom Vanessa swiped the Mary McGuffin doll (yes, there’s going to be a bit of confrontation over that), but she’s appeared in other episodes, too. The boy will be Pedro, who has been a background character since the very first episode ("Phineas and Ferb built a rollercoaster! Do you think we get a discount if we bring the flyer?"). Melanie will be spending some quality time with him.
3. Balthazar actually has developed a crush on someone else: Gretchen. Adyson takes particular joy in getting Balthazar and Midas to DP Gretchen, and Balthazar has grown fond of her. He’s not sure what to do about it because Gretchen is Adyson’s girlfriend at this point, but Vanessa gives him some advice about how to make the situation work.
4. In addition to the ideas I’ve mentioned above, here are a few other things I want to include:
   1. Monty fucks Jenny in front of Vanessa and Sally (with Vanessa fondling Sally as they watch), because Vanessa wants Sally to see what Monty is going to do with Sally later.
   2. Adyson and Gretchen, being young and flexible and having practiced some actual yoga in the preceding weeks, have an anal 69.
   3. Roger and Melanie discover that they share a liking for teenage girls and double-team Jenny.

That’s all for now. Back to writing I go.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Okay, thank you for answering my questions, good luck with your writing, and I will keep in touch, in case you want to give me an update on how your doing with the sequel, just leave a comment and I'll reply as soon as I can, hope you have a nice day tomorrow and a nice weekend, good luck and goodnight.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi it'sme, I just wanted you to know that I won't be leaving another comment for a while since your busy with the sequel and your other stories, so I probably won't leave another comment until the 31st of january or during one of the first days of February, anyway, hope your doing good and I say hi in a little while, bye and hope your having a nice rest of the day.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, surprised huh?, I just wanted to say hi tonight since I could be busy on January 31st, I didn't know until now that I might be busy during this next week,but I'm not entirely sure if I will truly be busy this next week, or just january 31st, but if I'm not busy during this next week, then I'll probably leave another comment, so anyway, how are you doing ?, and also, how are you doing with the sequel,  anymore ideas?, and how are you doing with your other stories ? let me know when you have the chance to reply, and I''ll leave another comment, if I'm not busy during this week that is, anyway good night and have a nice weekend.(Oh, and one other thing,  when I was going on your response page for comments on your stories, I noticed that one commenter left you a message with him naming you ''Mr.Glass'', I think in my opinion,  that's a pretty good nickname for you, so anyway have a good night and weekend Mr.Glass.

[GeorgeGlass]

Haven’t been making too much progress on “Untitled Hot Yoga Sequel” (as it’s currently named in my story file), because I’ve been pushing forward with my Steven Universe fic “Splinter” and my The Loud House story “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.” Inspiration sort of comes and goes for me, which is why I keep several stories going at once, but I’m pretty sure I’ll be back to scribbling away at the outline for UHYS soon enough. Have a good one.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Okay, take your time and good luck with your other stories, let me know when you're going back to making the outline for the sequel when you have the time, and have a good day.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say good morning and tell you some news, I recently read your last comment yesterday and I checked out you 'Splinter' story, and your 'the miss cutie patootie pageant' story and they're both very good, including the 'Splinter' story,and I will be checking the story out again to see if the next chapter is up yet, and I will do the same for the other one, anyway hope your having a nice morning and good luck with your stories, P.S, I didn't want to say anything about the 'Hot yoga sequel' or any questions about it since your busy with your other stories, so just focus on the story you want to work on the most and take your time, anyway, bye and good luck with your stories

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me again, I just wanted to say hi and ask you if you enjoyed the superbowl last sunday, I watched most of it, including the ending, so how have you been doing? and how are you doing with your stories? p.s I mean your other stories like 'splinter' and the 'loud house story', I know you're busy with these stories and your other ones, so if you haven't been working a bit on the 'hot yoga sequel' recently,  don't worry,  just do the story you want to work on the most, but if you have been recently working on the sequel,  then let me know when you have the time and I'll reply as soon as I can. But anyway,  hope to hear from you again soon and have a nice day, oh and if you have more news about the next chapters for the 'splinter story' and the 'loud house story', let me know when you have the time, anyway bye and have a good day.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, I decided to say a quick hi and give you some news, yesterday, I read your new chapter for the 'cutie patootie pageant story' and I must say, I really liked it. Can't wait for the next chapter and I will be checking out the 'Splinter story' again because I really like reading that one, anyway, how have you been doing? Did you have a nice weekend ? Let me know when you can and I'll reply as soon as I can. Oh, and by the way, if you haven't been working on the 'Hot Yoga sequel' if you're still busy with your other stories,  then just say that in your reply, take your time oh and one more question, have you thought of a title for the sequel yet, because if you haven't, then let me know and I can help you think something up, anyway,  hope you have a nice week and hope to hear from you again, bye and happy Abraham Lincoln day.

[GeorgeGlass]

Hey there. Glad you’re liking “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.” 

I have been working a little bit on the Hot Yoga sequel—some outlining, and some writing bits of text. But I’ve been more focused on a few other things, including finishing up an original one-shot story called “Dil-Drones.”

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Okay, I'll check that story out when I have the time, hope your doing well and have a nice valentines Day, hope to hear from you again soon and have a nice rest of the week. Oh, and good luck with your stories.