BitterNTR Posted September 18, 2016 Report Posted September 18, 2016 This thread will be here solely for contributing ideas and plots you'd like to see Kushina go through in the story: Uzumaki Kushina the Violated Heroine, which can be found here: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106012 Quote
BitterNTR Posted September 19, 2016 Author Report Posted September 19, 2016 Kushina will meet several ‘BAD ENDS’ through the entirety of this story. I have some of them planned already, but I’m still not too sure on how I would implement a restart or continue or even saving in general. Perhaps saving could occur when she goes to bed? Or would a legitimate save option for Kushina to use be better? Any ideas or contributions would be cool. Quote
rockgleb1999 Posted October 9, 2016 Report Posted October 9, 2016 I think it would be better if to save was possible after sleeping in safe place(for example she can sleep everywhere but foing it outdoors would be dangerous) Quote
rockgleb1999 Posted October 9, 2016 Report Posted October 9, 2016 for me it was to easy because i could save every moment(another situation in datk souls where its impossible to save, this system is more interesting) Quote
JordoZ Posted October 10, 2016 Report Posted October 10, 2016 Well, the world is already sexualized so it isn’t out of the realm of possibility that most people Kushina runs into would be hung and skilled, or something along those lines. Maybe you can start off with something simple as a mission, like babystting. I seem to recall a similar mission in the actual violated heroine game. You could show the difference in the worlds here, with her babysitting a young teen of some kind, possibly the kid who saw her naked that first time, having him come on to her and eventually dominate her. A show of’ if that’s what the young teens are like, what are the full grown like? Quote
BitterNTR Posted October 12, 2016 Author Report Posted October 12, 2016 On 10/11/2016 at 1:54 AM, JordoZ said: Well, the world is already sexualized so it isn’t out of the realm of possibility that most people Kushina runs into would be hung and skilled, or something along those lines. Maybe you can start off with something simple as a mission, like babystting. I seem to recall a similar mission in the actual violated heroine game. You could show the difference in the worlds here, with her babysitting a young teen of some kind, possibly the kid who saw her naked that first time, having him come on to her and eventually dominate her. A show of’ if that’s what the young teens are like, what are the full grown like? Yes, there are babysitting missions which involves having sex with the boys. However, they, much like any other child you encounter in the game, are pretty inexperience or are realistically sized, with the female MC usually dominating them instead. But perhaps I could do one where she, as you have mentioned, babysits a teenager or something, one who just so happens to have been well-endowed. Though if I were to write this, it won’t be for another few more chapters. Any more ideas and contributions would be cool. Quote
BitterNTR Posted October 12, 2016 Author Report Posted October 12, 2016 I’ve thought about the saving thing and am leaning towards the side of one where she does not remember what she did prior to reaching a bad end, but choosing a good end in her second run. For example, she ends up getting raped to death by something/one and returns to her last save, unaware that she had died. But this time, instead of repeating the same event, she does something differently and lives, proceeding on until the next problem. How does that sound? Quote
rockgleb1999 Posted October 12, 2016 Report Posted October 12, 2016 21 minutes ago, BitterNTR said: I’ve thought about the saving thing and am leaning towards the side of one where she does not remember what she did prior to reaching a bad end, but choosing a good end in her second run. For example, she ends up getting raped to death by something/one and returns to her last save, unaware that she had died. But this time, instead of repeating the same event, she does something differently and lives, proceeding on until the next problem. How does that sound? Not bad By this way you could avoid problems with savings, but on the other side its quite silly for the main heroine not to think about her death Quote
BitterNTR Posted October 12, 2016 Author Report Posted October 12, 2016 1 minute ago, rockgleb1999 said: Not bad By this way you could avoid problems with savings, but on the other side its quite silly for the main heroine not to think about her death She doesn’t think about her death because she doesn’t remember it. It’s basically a restart, or a continue like in the actual game. Quote
Ccebling Posted October 20, 2016 Report Posted October 20, 2016 (edited) So will there be more yuri action than there is in the actual game? I can see Kushina have sex with a good amount of beautiful and sexy women. Edited October 30, 2016 by Ccebling I wasn't aware that there were yuri scenes (albeit very few of them) in Violated Heroine until recently. Quote
Guest CuriousWriter Posted February 4, 2017 Report Posted February 4, 2017 Hello BitterNTR, I had a question. Is your Naruko: Konoha’s #1 Slut something you’ll be writing or is it a possible challenge? If so, I would like to pick your brain on a few ideas about it. Idk if this is the right place to talk about such a thing so I apologize i it is. Quote
BitterNTR Posted February 4, 2017 Author Report Posted February 4, 2017 1 hour ago, Guest CuriousWriter said: Hello BitterNTR, I had a question. Is your Naruko: Konoha’s #1 Slut something you’ll be writing or is it a possible challenge? If so, I would like to pick your brain on a few ideas about it. Idk if this is the right place to talk about such a thing so I apologize i it is. I may or may not write it. It just depends on my free time. But go ahead and shoot me any questions. Quote
Guest CuriousWriter Posted February 4, 2017 Report Posted February 4, 2017 2 hours ago, BitterNTR said: I may or may not write it. It just depends on my free time. But go ahead and shoot me any questions. Thank you. I actually wrote a starting chapter to this, but was curious on your take on it. I don’t think I’m suppose to upload it to this site, but my main concern is how it should start and I guess the starting age and a timeline. I have ideas, but it’s a jumbled mess at the moment. Quote
DemonGoddess Posted February 4, 2017 Report Posted February 4, 2017 38 minutes ago, Guest CuriousWriter said: Thank you. I actually wrote a starting chapter to this, but was curious on your take on it. I don’t think I’m suppose to upload it to this site, but my main concern is how it should start and I guess the starting age and a timeline. I have ideas, but it’s a jumbled mess at the moment. Only thing that would prevent you from adding to this site is if you’re underage, or have been previously banned for plagiarism, trolling, and the like. Of course, as this concept is something that BitterNTR posted, you would need permission for that as well from BitterNTR. Quote
Guest CuriousWriter Posted February 4, 2017 Report Posted February 4, 2017 Just now, DemonGoddess said: Only thing that would prevent you from adding to this site is if you’re underage, or have been previously banned for plagiarism, trolling, and the like. Of course, as this concept is something that BitterNTR posted, you would need permission for that as well from BitterNTR. Ah yes! But what I meant was uploading a chapter on the forum. And no, I actually have never really communicated on this site before. More of a viewer until now. Quote
DemonGoddess Posted February 4, 2017 Report Posted February 4, 2017 to add a story, you have to register for the archive. the archive is where the stories live. Quote
BronxWench Posted February 5, 2017 Report Posted February 5, 2017 To create an archive account, follow the steps laid out here:http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/29598-new-user-how-to-register-for-an-archive-profile/ Quote
Guest CuriousWriter Posted February 5, 2017 Report Posted February 5, 2017 3 hours ago, DemonGoddess said: to add a story, you have to register for the archive. the archive is where the stories live. 1 hour ago, BronxWench said: To create an archive account, follow the steps laid out here:http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/29598-new-user-how-to-register-for-an-archive-profile/ Wow 0///0 thank you so much. You guys are real nice here. Nice to know. I will do so when I can. BitterNTR, are there any restrains on the story fetish-wise? I know it’s loli, hate-sex, and prostitution. Just curious. Quote
BitterNTR Posted February 5, 2017 Author Report Posted February 5, 2017 5 hours ago, Guest CuriousWriter said: Wow 0///0 thank you so much. You guys are real nice here. Nice to know. I will do so when I can. BitterNTR, are there any restrains on the story fetish-wise? I know it’s loli, hate-sex, and prostitution. Just curious. No real restrains that will limit or hinder your writing ability. I’d just prefer there not to be any scat or the like since I don't find those kinks very... pleasant. It doesn't necessarily have to be hate-sex either. But it's honestly up to you. Quote
Guest CuriouWriter Posted February 5, 2017 Report Posted February 5, 2017 I c. Well i’ll posting my first chapter later today on aff. So I hope to get some decent feedback. Im just trying to work on a timeline. I don't want to rush into the sluttiness . I like a gd build up to the corruption. Quote
Guest CuriousWriter Posted February 5, 2017 Report Posted February 5, 2017 http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106089 And here it is. Enjoy. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 6, 2017 Report Posted February 6, 2017 Hey, BitterNTR, that forum is made. Join in if you want. Quote
Lucius-Walker Posted September 11, 2019 Report Posted September 11, 2019 (edited) Just found your story, and grew interested in it. I, however, would like to play the game. Can someone please tell me where to find the link for this game, or at least give me the directions for it? Many thanks. (PS: I have recently taken up the challenge for “Loving Nympho Kushina” and “Kushina Slut of Sluts.” It’s called Kushina’s Infidelity, which you can find on AO3, HF, and AF. Please let me know what you think of it, and here’s the links.) https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/LuciusWalker/37368/Kushinas-Infidelity http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106564 https://archiveofourown.org/works/20501378/chapters/48653141 http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/68260-kushinas-infidelity/ Edited September 11, 2019 by Lucius-Walker Quote
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