Tomb Raider - Satisfying the Hunger Discussion Thread

[s-incubus]

Alright, I've been putting this off for a long long while now. But here it is: Satisfying the Hunger forum thread, where you can review, discuss and comment on StH.

You can suggest things if you want, share your ideas, ask a question or stop by to say hello.

But bare in mind that the soul of StH lies in Lara-dominated action.

There are some REALLY GREAT non-con stories by extremely talented writers on AFF, which I enjoy myself from time to time.

However, I like variety and challenge. And I think a Domme-Lara story can be hot as well.

What do you think?

s-incubus

[Loth-Cat]

When first finding your work I was positivly shocked and quiet happy to have found a different Lara, in this case your Lara. Reminds me of the good old Pre-Reboot Croft.

Your ideas were hitting the spot too. I think a Croft has to be crafty to achieve their goals. In this case Lara getting what she wants, her way.

I posted my idea in the comments before this thread was created which was loosly based on Lara Crofts Lore/background Story at one point. She had some military experience with some "Commandos/Marines", but I never got what kind of branch it actually was.

How about her visiting some Royal Marines/ British Commando Cadets in some relieve/R&R typ mission. Maybe she knows her old Drill Instructor too. Could be anywhere.

Those young guys/boys might be worth her time and willing/able too and she would give them hell with her idea of a training course/session.

Edited August 9, 2016 by Loth-Cat

[s-incubus]

Hello Loth-Cat. First of all thank you for your comment. I'm really glad you enjoy my story and especially my different approach on Lara.

I saw the earlier comment you made about Lara visiting the Royal Marines/ British Commando Cadets. Although I liked the idea I had difficulty in imagining how she could keep such a sexcapade secret. In the chapters so far she is visiting far off places and hiding behind a mask to be incognito. However visiting her old base would expose her sexual depravity which she so desperately tries to keep secret. You may argue that the cadets are under oath and it would be a secret mission and so on, but think yourself in their places. Would you be able to keep it a secret if the world famous Tomb Raider came to your garrison and was gang fucked by a platoon in which you happily take place? I don't think so.

But be assured that I'm looking for a way to come up with a plausible plot that includes at least a part of your suggestion and still keep Lara's secret

Cheers mate.

[Guest The Belgian]

Hello, you're doing a fantastic job! Keep it up! I have an idea. I think it would be good to know how Lara Croft became a woman as depraved.

Or she has read the book of depravation and triggered a curse. Or Treat? Or just his aunt taught him everything? (Lesbian, orgies ...). Or is it to university. Thank you and keep it up.

Ps: I am Belgian and used google translation to write

[Loth-Cat]

Hi there s-incubus,

you are totally right on having Lara being careful. Making her forget the danger of exposure is not in her character. I am sure you will find an appropriate scenario that makes sense by keeeping it within some restraints. My first thought would been an exluded post/station manned just by Squad sized unit that would fit into one of her adventures. Or just her drill instructor/mentor aka Conrad Roth making him an interersting cadidate.(Tho he would be from the Reboot. Don't know if you wanna mix the games/Timelines)

PS: Our Belgian friend has some nice ideas. Food for thought indeed.

Edited August 9, 2016 by Loth-Cat

[s-incubus]

Hello Belgian Guest. Thank you for stopping by and commenting.

I am indeed working on an origin story for our hungry Lara. It will be longer than just a couple of chapters (maybe a whole story on its own). I ask for a little patience, for I think you will like the outcome.

Cheers.

[s-incubus]

Hi Loth-Cat.

I'm not sure if I want to include the stories in the games. For now, I'm keeping away from them. It gives me more freedom.

Cheers

[Guest The Belgian]

Hello, when you keep the same ideas (NOT : rape, animals, humiliation, dickgirls ...) you will keep me in your biggest fan! ^^

[Loth-Cat]

Hi Loth-Cat.

I'm not sure if I want to include the stories in the games. For now, I'm keeping away from them. It gives me more freedom.

Cheers

No problem. Makes sense. I thought about Roth just as a cameo of some kind. Some kind of crossover. But having the freedom of your own story seems to be the more logical way to progress. Thank you for making that point clear.

Edited August 9, 2016 by Loth-Cat

[Guest The Belgian]

Following please ^^

[s-incubus]

I'm currently swamped in work Be assured there will be a continuation soon, but how soon, I cannot tell

[Guest The Belgian]

Thank you

[Guest The Belgian]

Thank you

[Loth-Cat]

On 17.8.2016 at 11:58 AM, s-incubus said:

I'm currently swamped in work Be assured there will be a continuation soon, but how soon, I cannot tell

No problem. I think most of us do understand time, pressure and life is hard to balance out.

[REEHR]

Hi s-incubus. I've been reading your stories here and collaborations with Detomasso and I have to say that they are fantastic. The quality of writing is unparalleled. STH and ToA are my favourites.

I have a few ideas for stories:

-Lara gets fucked in a glory hole (maybe you can add Sam or Doppie)

-Lara goes to an expensive restaurant and sees a handsome man there. She sits in front of him and starts masturbating him with her feet. After that the go to the alley or his car and fuck like there is no tomorrow.

-Lara goes to a mask party and gets gangbanged (bukkake, double anal and vaginal penetration, fisting)

Hope you like them and continue with your work that you're doing it great.

[WolfCock]

Dunno if you’re still writing this, but given Lara’s last sexual experience that you wrote was ruined, by asshats, maybe lesbian stuff next. 

[REEHR]

On 6/9/2017 at 4:45 PM, WolfCock said:

Dunno if you’re still writing this, but given Lara’s last sexual experience that you wrote was ruined, by asshats, maybe lesbian stuff next. 

That would be cool but I think it might be something unexpected

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