Guest Billie Posted November 11, 2016 Report Posted November 11, 2016 As long as there are no rules about multiple authors taking the same challenge then you are welcome to take it. Quote
WillowDarkling Posted November 11, 2016 Report Posted November 11, 2016 We have no rules about how many authors take on a challenge. It’s absolutely in the hands of the original poster how often his idea can be used. I think that the only thing the archive moderators ask, is that you clearly mark the story as being an answer to a challenge, just to prevent any complaints of copying or plagiarism. Willow Darkling, Forum Moderator. Quote
Guest Billie Posted November 11, 2016 Report Posted November 11, 2016 On 11/10/2016 at 9:07 AM, TheDogSage said: Hey Billie, mind if I take this challenge? Looks like there is no problem. So if you do still accept this challenge I look forward to reading your story. I read your other story from No_1's challenge and I have to say love what I've seen so far. Quote
TheDogSage Posted November 17, 2016 Report Posted November 17, 2016 (edited) On 11/11/2016 at 6:14 PM, Guest Billie said: Looks like there is no problem. So if you do still accept this challenge I look forward to reading your story. I read your other story from No_1's challenge and I have to say love what I've seen so far. Thanks, but I have a question and I don’t know where else to ask: I want to start the story at the beginning of the manga story (that way I can have Haku survive in it without writing an excuse for him surviving his canon death), but that’ll have Naruto, Sakura, and their ilk 13, and I’m not too sure about the legality of writing the humiliation because much of it will be sexual. What I’m getting at is: can I get arrested for it? Edited November 17, 2016 by TheDogSage Quote
Guest guest Posted November 18, 2016 Report Posted November 18, 2016 you could always just age them up Quote
TheDogSage Posted November 19, 2016 Report Posted November 19, 2016 On 11/17/2016 at 7:05 PM, Guest guest said: you could always just age them up Yeah, but the way parts of the original post are written makes me believe the challenger wants the ages to be canon-accurate, so if I start where I want they’ll have to be 13, hence my question. Quote
WillowDarkling Posted November 19, 2016 Report Posted November 19, 2016 I am pretty sure that you can’t be arrested for writing fiction about fictional characters, even if it’s underaged sexual content. It’s real person fiction that could get you into trouble, which is why the site does not allow real person fiction depicting persons under the age of 18. Quote
BronxWench Posted November 19, 2016 Report Posted November 19, 2016 Willow’s quite right. We have allowed stories about fictional characters as young as 13 and younger, as long as the stories are properly tagged, up front, along with all the other disclaimer requirements. As far as tags, we use Minor1 for up to and including age 13, and Minor2 for ages 14 up to when the character turns 18. So, you’ll need both if the story carries on past the initial starting point and the characters grow older. Quote
TheDogSage Posted November 24, 2016 Report Posted November 24, 2016 I’ve posted the first chapter: Naruto the Kunoichi Toy, and I’ve started the general discussion thread here: Naruto the Kunoichi Toy (General Discussion) Quote
BronxWench Posted November 24, 2016 Report Posted November 24, 2016 Guest Zweig, can you post this to the discussion thread for the story? The Challenge thread isn’t the place for this. Thanks! Quote
DemonGoddess Posted November 25, 2016 Report Posted November 25, 2016 I moved the discussion parts to the story topic BronxWench and WillowDarkling 2 Quote
WillowDarkling Posted November 26, 2016 Report Posted November 26, 2016 Thank you for that, DG. Quote
Guest Seedfan85 Posted May 12, 2017 Report Posted May 12, 2017 Are you going to continue Learning his true self? Quote
Guest guest Posted May 12, 2017 Report Posted May 12, 2017 hey does anyone know if Naruto the Kunoichi Toy is a dead story or is it going to get an update anytime soon? Quote
TheDogSage Posted May 19, 2017 Report Posted May 19, 2017 On 5/12/2017 at 7:01 PM, Guest guest said: hey does anyone know if Naruto the Kunoichi Toy is a dead story or is it going to get an update anytime soon? Just posted chapter 2, Quote
Guest Quest Posted May 15, 2019 Report Posted May 15, 2019 Does anyone know if this story has been discontinued? It was interesting to read and really like the work the author was doing with it. Quote
Guest Revan Posted June 22, 2019 Report Posted June 22, 2019 Is this story dead please don't be dead. Quote
TheDogSage Posted June 27, 2019 Report Posted June 27, 2019 Not dead, but likely to be remade/rebooted/rewritten or whatever you call it when you start over from scratch. Quote
Guest Billie Posted June 29, 2019 Report Posted June 29, 2019 Is there anytime that we can expect this new version to be posted? Quote
TheDogSage Posted July 21, 2019 Report Posted July 21, 2019 Answering your question, I don’t know when I’ll begin posting it, but I have run into a problem while working out how it’s gonna go. I want to have the girls to force Naruto to crossdress in a fetish french maid uniform complete with makeup and jewelry and serve them to humiliate him before anal sex comes into play (with it likely being Ino or Sakura fucking him during one of his sessions as a maid). Thing is, I want Naruto to be getting fucked before the Wave mission and I also want to bring in male Haku (whom you said would be the one to make him crossdress to show how much more of a man he is). So I hope you can see my problem. I have a possible solution in that while the girls force him to crossdress in the french maid uniform, they don’t really treat him especially feminine. Then we have Haku come into the situation and he forces Naruto to dress in non-fetish girl clothes (while Haku dresses more masculine) and treats him as if he were a girl. You know, giving compliments as if Naruto were a girl, having Naruto hold his arm as they walk, giving him gentle caresses and kisses, using feminine pronouns for Naruto, all while forcing Naruto to act more traditionally ‘feminine’ while Haku acts more traditionally ‘masculine’ (especially in public lest Naruto’s humiliating situation become common knowledge). This could snowball into the girls also treating Naruto like ‘one of the girls’, all while still doing other things to humiliate Naruto and using him as their personal cum dump. Quote
Guest Billie Posted July 22, 2019 Report Posted July 22, 2019 9 hours ago, TheDogSage said: Answering your question, I don’t know when I’ll begin posting it, but I have run into a problem while working out how it’s gonna go. I want to have the girls to force Naruto to crossdress in a fetish french maid uniform complete with makeup and jewelry and serve them to humiliate him before anal sex comes into play (with it likely being Ino or Sakura fucking him during one of his sessions as a maid). Thing is, I want Naruto to be getting fucked before the Wave mission and I also want to bring in male Haku (whom you said would be the one to make him crossdress to show how much more of a man he is). So I hope you can see my problem. I have a possible solution in that while the girls force him to crossdress in the french maid uniform, they don’t really treat him especially feminine. Then we have Haku come into the situation and he forces Naruto to dress in non-fetish girl clothes (while Haku dresses more masculine) and treats him as if he were a girl. You know, giving compliments as if Naruto were a girl, having Naruto hold his arm as they walk, giving him gentle caresses and kisses, using feminine pronouns for Naruto, all while forcing Naruto to act more traditionally ‘feminine’ while Haku acts more traditionally ‘masculine’ (especially in public lest Naruto’s humiliating situation become common knowledge). This could snowball into the girls also treating Naruto like ‘one of the girls’, all while still doing other things to humiliate Naruto and using him as their personal cum dump. This sounds like a good idea. I trust you can do an amazing job from what I've seen of your original story for this prompt. If possible do you have a plan for which girls will be futas. Would like a bit an idea on that subject. Would like to try to involve the other hidden villages, with each having their own views on futas. Quote
TheDogSage Posted July 22, 2019 Report Posted July 22, 2019 (edited) A general idea for Konoha (though due to the title of the challenge, there will be more futas than non-futas): Futas Sakura Ino Hinata Hanabi Ayame Tsume Mebuki Non-Futas Anko Kurenai Tenten Hana Yoshino As for involving the other villages and seeing how they view futas, I’ll think about it. Edited July 22, 2019 by TheDogSage Quote
Guest Billie Posted July 23, 2019 Report Posted July 23, 2019 I was thinking for the leaf they could have a higher opinion of futas, and then have Tsunade be a regular female with shizune being a futa. This way as Tsunade and Naruto grow closer the futas find out that Tsunade is not a futa and start fucking her and degrading her in front of Naruto. Showing him he has no safe place left. Quote
TheDogSage Posted July 23, 2019 Report Posted July 23, 2019 (edited) That’s an idea, but I was thinking more along the lines of Tsunade being a futa, with Naruto and Tsunade getting close… until Tsunade finds out about what the other futas/non-futas are doing to Naruto and why. Then she begins treating Naruto like the others do. Something I’m considering is having the genin teams live together with their jonin sensei in special housing to increase team unity. This is mostly so that Naruto’s team (consisting of Kurenai and two of the kunoichi genin with it most likely being Ino and Sakura) can more easily and regularly torment him, including using the the aforementioned forcing him to dress in a fetish french maid uniform and serve them. I was also thinking of incorporating Kushina in some way, most likely in ways that have been suggested in this thread. Naruto starts off stand-offish toward her, but slowly begins opening up to his mother. However, Kushina notices something strange going on with Naruto, several of the females in the village, and even Haku. She starts asking questions around town, with one of the futas (most likely Ino or Sakura, with Tsume being another option) deciding to show her by forcibly fucking her until they break her. Kushina then goes from Naruto’s mom to fellow futanari cumdump and acts like a teasing older sister. Before/just after Naruto leaves to train with Jiraiya, one of the futa gets Kushina pregnant, and Naruto comes home to a three-year-old sister who’s already as big as him. And I’m also considering the ‘Kushina swears the remaining Uzumaki clan members (Naruto and her) as slaves to one of the futa ”, with the most likely choice being Sakura/Mebuki. It’ll likely be after Kushina gets pregnant (meaning one of them is probably going to be the “father” ) making the Harunos a (new and small) clan with the child being the first of several new members birthed from Kushina fathered by Mebuki and Sakura. Edited July 23, 2019 by TheDogSage Quote
Guest Billie Posted July 24, 2019 Report Posted July 24, 2019 This sounds like a really great plan here. If possible would love for the first to get her pregnant to be Sakura. Quote
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