Praetor's Discussion Thread

[Praetor]

     I thought that was obvious, but to reiterate.  Booblover, if you have a preference, is there any women in Hiccup’s harem, current or future, who you would particularly like to see get analized, usually hard and often, to their pleasure?  Do you have a stance on NTR and the level of it that is acceptable or ideal for this story?  Or on the ultimate fate of the various princes that, by the nature of the story, are not going to get their happy ending with their princesses?  and do you have any work arounds for the Beast and how he factors in?

     Regardless, next chapter will likely be Overlord, with maximum effort on the next Omniharem  and partial work on Naruko’s pact.  I will also try to fit in one of the one shot projects I have toyed with the idea of taking.  These are going to be kinkier, less mainstream ones like Mad Love.

[piltheser]

It's not NTR in that case if you simply have Belle be the beasts prisoner, and not his lover. Then it's just Hiccup rescuing her. In this instance I think just having Hiccup demonstrate how sexually superior he is in length, girth, staying power, stamina, and load size would be plenty - no need to have a monster who acts like a monster touched Belle.

 

Say, the beast agrees to whoever is sexually superior should have her as the alpha. Hiccup objects saying that Belle should be free to choose her own lover, but Astrid silences him and says that he accepts. The Beast pulls out his 9 inch gnarled cock, believing hell beat Hiccup. But Hiccups harem caress and stroke his knob to its full 18 inches, making sure Beast cannot miss that Hiccup is twice the man. The Beast masturbating his own prick, while Hiccups harem pleasures his prick for him.  When Hiccup proves himself superior in every fashion, Beast loses it and attacks him. Hiccup fights him and defeats him before saying Belle is free to go. Belle says that no, a deal is a deal, and Hiccup proved himself the superior male, so he can claim her.

 

Also, how do you feel about throwing in Fifield the maid, or the bimbettes (yes, that's really what they're called)? Just because they hold no strategic value is no reason to turn down some already busty and flirty French girls.

Edited February 18, 2017 by piltheser

[Praetor]

     I dunno, that just sounds like NTR with extra steps.  No way, that is not what they’re called… ha, way to go Disney.  I am never opposed to throwing in busty girls and wouldn’t mind having them for a fun filled short chapter.

[piltheser]

Eh, it's not NTR if they have no relationship.

 

If that's a problem, how about this? Beast and Belle are the last two holding out against corruption. Hiccup makes contact with them and agrees to help depose Gaston, who is tyrannically ruling the town. Hiccup fights him, after he transforms into a beast-like form, deposes him and conquers the land. It's at this point the bimbettes leap into his arms.

 

Afterwards, Beast and Belle tell him they have one more request. Though they are in love, Beast is simply too large for them to consummate their love. Hiccup works his magic, and Belle turns into a sex bomb. The pair are able to fuck madly, and they invite Hiccup (and his harem if you like) to join them, ending with them spit roasting Belle, or even Dping her.

 

While they are distracted, a still alive Gaston sneaks in and fatally wounds Beast. Hiccup kills him, then tries to heal Beast, but it's no use. He tells Belle he wants her to be happy, and to go with Hiccup.

Edited February 18, 2017 by piltheser

[thebooblover]

13 hours ago, Praetor said:

is there any women in Hiccup’s harem, current or future, who you would particularly like to see get analized, usually hard and often, to their pleasure?

Well there’s Ruffnut. Heather and Belle would be good as well.

13 hours ago, Praetor said:

Do you have a stance on NTR and the level of it that is acceptable or ideal for this story?

I prefer when it’s netori (aka when the protagonist does it) or when the person being netorared isn’t a nice person (like maybe a bully, or a villian).

13 hours ago, Praetor said:

Or on the ultimate fate of the various princes that, by the nature of the story, are not going to get their happy ending with their princesses?

Maybe they were killed by the villians?

13 hours ago, Praetor said:

and do you have any work arounds for the Beast and how he factors in?

Maybe Gaston finds a way to control and use him to terrorize the town he took over.

(Also, I added the Bimbettes and the maid to the list)

Edited February 18, 2017 by thebooblover

[piltheser]

Also, Beast could tell Hiccup to take his cock with his magic, so a part of him still lives on and can fuck Belle. So now Hiccup has two 18 inch cocks to fuck his harem.

[Praetor]

      When it comes to the order, I go by whatever makes the plot flow better.  In the case of L&PD, I went out of order to add characters and move a few around, the only definite thing being Tink was last before the orgy.  I realized when writing Omniharem that putting the capital ship at the end makes the plot fall in line on the way.  Since Ben took Gwen and Lucy in the opening chapters, there isn’t much to build towards besides Kai.  So that’s more of an anthology piece now, each chapter being its own arc.  I’m trying to do something similar with Pact but even I don’t know where that’s going to wind up.  With Overlord, I am trying to make an over arching plot line again.  I’m working on the Heather chapter now, then there will be a short orgy piece in a mostly plot chapter.  Then he’s going to pick up Mala and, I guess, conquer Arendale first.

     As for the second cock, I don’t know.  Is it the beast form’s dick?  What’s that look like?  Does it have a knot?  Where would it go on Hiccup?  Does he have it all the time or is it retractable?  I guess there could be other spells in his book, extra cocks, tentacles, even futa spells.  I fear that’d be beyond the scope of what I am trying to do here and besides, I have a separate work for the harder, kinkier things like that.

[thebooblover]

5 minutes ago, Praetor said:

I fear that’d be beyond the scope of what I am trying to do here and besides, I have a separate work for the harder, kinkier things like that.

Yeah thinking about it more maybe it wouldn’t be a good idea for Hiccup to have a second cock. But thanks for the idea anyway piltheser.

Edited February 18, 2017 by thebooblover

[Praetor]

     I might throw it in anyways with magic.  As the story evolves it is only going to get weirder and it’s not going to be a permanent thing.  Those kinds of things fall under what I like to call ‘The JayDee Stuff’ and I try to avoid that ‘genre’.  Not that there’s anything wrong with that kind of stuff, don’t get me wrong.  That author does great work and is a huge inspiration who I can only dream of imitating but I try to avoid the hard kinks unless that’s the point of the fic or specifically asked for.

     I also looked over the porn star island challenge.  Again, I have a slight problem with celebrity works.  The proportions are the extreme end of extreme, I almost want to draw cantaloupe sized balls and tits bigger than Beshine’s just to see what that looks like.  I also like Amazon works.  If I did it though, I’d have an all or mostly female cast that use the bananas to become hung futa’s temporarily. It also doesn't make that much sense to me to super size the proportions of already mega busty stars.

[piltheser]

That is fine if you're just going with regular women and turning them into gigantic tit amazons, though I still would prefer it if there was the one megahung male instead of futas. Though if you want to keep the futas too, that's fine with me.

[Praetor]

     I can’t think of a male porn star I would want to cast in the lead though.  Next chapter of Overlord is up.  Comparatively short, no new tags.  What’s with all the interest in Belle anyways?  She’s just one of the many princesses and that’s way down the road.  Going to take a short break now and then work on the next Omniharem, Naruko’s Pact and try some prewritting for other challenges I demonstrated interest in. 

[piltheser]

I never intended for the husbamd in that story to br a male pornstar. I had always meant for a more nebulously defined author avatar. However, since i know you prefer not to use those, how about a man tending the fruit alone on the island who already looks how we would have a male who eats the fruit would look. Huge muscles, devilishly handsome, hung like an elephant. He leaves the fruit for the female shipwreck survivors, watches them grow to insanely busty amazons and partake in a lesbian orgy, then introduces himself and joins them. They all get addicted to his huge cock and beg him to come back.

 

For the Beasts cock, it would depend on if you want him to be Hiccups ally or his enemy. If the former, human like though jet black and in humanly long and thick.  If the latter, with a knot but still relatively small could work. 

[Praetor]

     I’m not against author avatars, I just didn’t know that’s what we were shooting for here.  That makes things easier.  As for the Beast, I really want him to be an ally but I also want to have the prophesized fight and can’t figure out how they can be on the same side when Belle is also in his harem.  I guess we’ll just see how the story starts shaping up when we get there.  Are there any other women we missed that could be in these stories?

[Guest UltimateGuyver]

Have you considered doing an Avatar: The Last Airbender story?

[Praetor]

     I was considering the Avatar retelling challenge before other projects that interested me more came up.  Now Snake King is working in a Ben10 Avatar project so I put what little I did for on the back burner for a later time, if at all.  Why?

[Guest UltimateGuyver]

Just curious. I know you’d make a really good story of it, that’s for sure.

[Praetor]

     I think I'll at least do one shots from it in the very distant future.  Anything else you think I should try or could pull off?  I kind of want to take a shot at some harder kinks or those fighting games I have been playing a lot of recently.

[Guest UltimateGuyver]

Something with a big assed Toph and hotdogging would be wonderful, like Jay-Marvel and Shiin’s art.

[Praetor]

     I’m more into that Zimmerman guy.  Well, that won’t be for a long while regardless.  I need to get a Patreon or something.  Anyways, next chapter of Omniharem is up.  I was writing it concurrently with the Charmcaster chapter but this got finished first, so they’ll reference events that haven’t occurred yet.  Also made progress on the next Overlord chapter, as well as the start of a Ron’s Harem story and one of the side project one shots.  This one’s a bit on the longer side and a lot raunchier than usual.  I decided to take a break from the whole character development and emotional connection thing to see where that road lead.  Which is ironic considering I was pulling from Your Lie in April straight until a few lines into the major conversation before they have at it.  I kind of gave up when I remembered that this is a harem fic so the idea of love as any kind of meaningful construct is sort of nixed.

[piltheser]

You’re a Zimmerman Fan? Have you put anything into the Zimmerman Fuck Fics?

[Praetor]

     Zimmerman fuck fics?  We’re talking about Julius Zimmerman right?  Draws those uber busty fan art sketches?

[piltheser]

Yes. It's a group dedicated to writing stories based around his pics.

[Praetor]

     Never heard of them.  I only just figured out all those thousands of sketches were by the same dude like a week ago while doing something completely unrelated.

[piltheser]

Ah. Well, here is the group where you can find all the new art he makes as he makes it, as well as people sharing the private commissions they get from him.

https://groups.google.com/group/zimmermanart

[Praetor]

     I think I’ll try that as a one shot side story at some point.  If you have a favourite pic(s) you think I could write a story around, let me know.  Anyways, opening yet another front.  Took up the Ron’s Harem challenge.  This one will be more of an anthology work than an actual beginning, middle and end story.  It’s a little short, almost PWP but the lemon passes my 2,000 word minimum.  I need something that isn’t an epic to break up the monotony.  So as usual, any questions or statements you’d like to issue or make, let me know.