Guest sneaky666 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 maybe hi maybe he is a voyeurist and watches the two of them with his byakugan. maybe he even asked kiba to seduce her in the first place. Good idea, I noted, I did not know what to make of he, thank you Quote
Guest sneaky666 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 will sasuke and his harem be moving in by the end? Yes, i think chapter 2, but this will make a very long chapter. Interaction between the four characters+ sissification of Naruto, lemon (Naruto suck the three at breakfast), and Sasuke moving his harem in the mansion under pretext than Uchiha mansion brings back bad memories (his harem appear in chapter three becaus chapter 2 i am going to do a lemon with NarutoXSasukeXHinata) and Sasuke forcing Naruto to be his secretary. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Yes, i think chapter 2, but this will make a very long chapter. Interaction between the four characters+ sissification of Naruto, lemon (Naruto suck the three at breakfast), and Sasuke moving his harem in the mansion under pretext than Uchiha mansion brings back bad memories (his harem appear in chapter three becaus chapter 2 i am going to do a lemon with NarutoXSasukeXHinata) and Sasuke forcing Naruto to be his secretary. what about kiba and hinata's parents. might be crowded but has a lot of potential since kiba seems the type to rub it in everyones face. Quote
Guest Necrohunter15 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Could everyone do us all a favor and stop putting in 'Guest'. Cause I'm getting really confused. Quote
Guest sneaky666 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 what about kiba and hinata's parents. might be crowded but has a lot of potential since kiba seems the type to rub it in everyones face. Already I hesitate, Naruto and Hinata were married together, or at Sasuke and rejoin his harem. In all case, I foresee a scene where Hinata present Naruto at her parents, Kiba is the lover of Hitomi, he will be there. Naruto spend some time with Hitomi to know his stepmother and Kiba will join them. For Kiba parent's... Hana and Tsume... idea? Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Could everyone do us all a favor and stop putting in 'Guest'. Cause I'm getting really confused. all of them are just me except for the asshole grammer nazi Quote
No_1 Posted August 6, 2015 Author Report Posted August 6, 2015 Hana and Tsume seem like very firm femdoms themselves, perhaps Kiba's dad is a sissy (why he's never on the show) and Kiba is doubly assertive as a bull so his sister and mom don't sissify him like his father Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Hana and Tsume seem like very firm femdoms themselves, perhaps Kiba's dad is a sissy (why he's never on the show) and Kiba is doubly assertive as a bull so his sister and mom don't sissify him like his father could be something like tsume married outside the clan so the father is a sissy while kiba is a true inuzuka alpha male Quote
No_1 Posted August 6, 2015 Author Report Posted August 6, 2015 That works well. And it makes sense Kiba wouldn't be living with them if he's Hitomi's bull, they'd be separate from where Naruto/Kushina/Hinata/Sasuke/Konohamaru/etc would be. If I can put in one other scene I'd recommend. When the Harem are brought in, they're all in the hot springs, Naruto comes in looking all feminine with his cock cage on and they all laugh at him (seeing it for the first time) before Hinata and Sasuke enter, making Naruto ride Hinata's futa cock while sucking off Sasuke while the Harem laughs at him (bonus points if the harem includes all his classmates) Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 That works well. And it makes sense Kiba wouldn't be living with them if he's Hitomi's bull, they'd be separate from where Naruto/Kushina/Hinata/Sasuke/Konohamaru/etc would be. If I can put in one other scene I'd recommend. When the Harem are brought in, they're all in the hot springs, Naruto comes in looking all feminine with his cock cage on and they all laugh at him (seeing it for the first time) before Hinata and Sasuke enter, making Naruto ride Hinata's futa cock while sucking off Sasuke while the Harem laughs at him (bonus points if the harem includes all his classmates) really like that idea. also could get naruto and hinata to suck off sasuke together to show he is just one of the girls. Quote
Guest sneaky666 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 That works well. And it makes sense Kiba wouldn't be living with them if he's Hitomi's bull, they'd be separate from where Naruto/Kushina/Hinata/Sasuke/Konohamaru/etc would be. If I can put in one other scene I'd recommend. When the Harem are brought in, they're all in the hot springs, Naruto comes in looking all feminine with his cock cage on and they all laugh at him (seeing it for the first time) before Hinata and Sasuke enter, making Naruto ride Hinata's futa cock while sucking off Sasuke while the Harem laughs at him (bonus points if the harem includes all his classmates) I like your idea Guest for Kiba, No_1 i love this idea, it's for the chapter 3, but when you say include all his classmate, you say all classmate? (Boy and girl?) because theone man than in harem of Sasuke is Naruto, but they can be spectator. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 if minato is a drunk then maybe he becomes homeless and then begs kushina for a place to live and she agrees if he becomes the mansions butler. having to clean up and babysit and getting ordered around by everyone. Quote
No_1 Posted August 6, 2015 Author Report Posted August 6, 2015 I was thinking just specifically the girls, Sakura, Ino, Tenten etc, all the girls Naruto knew very well before. I was't thinking about other males, no. Quote
Guest sneaky666 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Having males as spectators would be good to add to the humiliation, i think. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Having males as spectators would be good to add to the humiliation, i think. but all the females laughing at naruto in unison seems worse to me. by the way what do you think of my minato butler idea. Quote
No_1 Posted August 6, 2015 Author Report Posted August 6, 2015 I'm fine having males there if you want to add that in, have them be Sasuke's guests, but I do agree with Guest, all the girls laughing at Naruto in unison seems worse to me Quote
Guest sneaky666 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 I'm fine having males there if you want to add that in, have them be Sasuke's guests, but I do agree with Guest, all the girls laughing at Naruto in unison seems worse to me So we will not do that, we'll settle for a few derogatory remarks and giggles. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 So we will not do that, we'll settle for a few derogatory remarks and giggles. if minato is a drunk then maybe he becomes homeless and then begs kushina for a place to live and she agrees if he becomes the mansions butler. having to clean up and babysit and getting ordered around by everyone. Quote
No_1 Posted August 7, 2015 Author Report Posted August 7, 2015 (edited) So we will not do that, we'll settle for a few derogatory remarks and giggles. Sorry, should have explained better since you're French (or at least seem to write in French originally), and English is a confusing language, we were saying it'd be worse for Naruto/more humiliating. Thus better for the story Edited August 7, 2015 by No_1 Quote
Guest sneaky666 Posted August 7, 2015 Report Posted August 7, 2015 Sorry, should have explained better since you're French (or at least seem to write in French originally), and English is a confusing language, we were saying it'd be worse for Naruto/more humiliating. Thus better for the story Sorry for the confusion, i'm tired definitely. Quote
Guest 1234 Posted August 7, 2015 Report Posted August 7, 2015 if minato is a drunk then maybe he becomes homeless and then begs kushina for a place to live and she agrees if he becomes the mansions butler. having to clean up and babysit and getting ordered around by everyone. i really like that idea. making him watch his son get feminised Quote
Guest Necrohunter15 Posted August 7, 2015 Report Posted August 7, 2015 BTW Sneaky, I've been meaning to ask if you can put in comfort moments between Naruto and Kushina. Like where Naruto is crying in his room following the hot spring event or something, Kushina comes in and sits on his bed. After managing to get him to look at her after a few attempts, she hugs him and lets him cry in her chest, all the while soothing him. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 7, 2015 Report Posted August 7, 2015 BTW Sneaky, I've been meaning to ask if you can put in comfort moments between Naruto and Kushina. Like where Naruto is crying in his room following the hot spring event or something, Kushina comes in and sits on his bed. After managing to get him to look at her after a few attempts, she hugs him and lets him cry in her chest, all the while soothing him. that seems like a big turn off for me. why would you want naruto crying and miserable. Quote
No_1 Posted August 7, 2015 Author Report Posted August 7, 2015 Yeah, I'm wondering the same, Naruto's humiliated, but as we've said before, he gets off on the humiliation, he'd likely be rock hard and masturbating from the hot spring thing if his cock wasn't locked away in a cage, not crying and hurting Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 7, 2015 Report Posted August 7, 2015 Yeah, I'm wondering the same, Naruto's humiliated, but as we've said before, he gets off on the humiliation, he'd likely be rock hard and masturbating from the hot spring thing if his cock wasn't locked away in a cage, not crying and hurting hey what do you think of my minato butler idea. i think it would be really bad for minato to watch naruto's sissification. Quote
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