Guest Ronin Posted March 10, 2015 Report Posted March 10, 2015 Yeah, my bad. my weekend proved busier than I wanted. The new goal is tomorrow-I've written most of the set-up, which usually gives me the most problems and takes the longest. I think one chapter every seven days or so is gonna be the best pace I can keep up for a while. Quote
Guest Guest Posted March 10, 2015 Report Posted March 10, 2015 one a week is good. don't want you to burn yourself out. Quote
Guest Ronin Posted March 10, 2015 Report Posted March 10, 2015 Ok, chapter 5 is up, starring the Mizukage. I hope you like it! Quote
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 Awesome chapter Ronin I have no complaints with it at all. I look forward to seeing what you do next time (which would be in about a week or so according to your post). Quote
Guest Ronin Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 Yep, should be about a week. Next chapter, Kushina corrupts her sons girlfriend Hinata into getting turned into a come addict by Sasuke. Quote
jojo Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 nice chapter ronin i cant wait to see the next Quote
Guest DPSKG42 Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 Yeah it was a nice chapter, just not a fan of the Mizukage but should be neat to see some Hinata action. But I'm still most excited for Naruko, not many people use the transforming Naruto. They usually just have him be a natural girl, damn shame. But question would Naruto and Hinata still be a thing but with a shared lust for sasuke or are they done? Quote
Guest Ronin Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 That's an interesting question. I'm not sure, just yet. On the one hand, I want Naruko and Hinata to be just as eager for Sasuke's dick as Kushina. On the other, Sasuke only cares about most of his women when he wants to. So if Hinata and Naruto want to keep banging, he wouldn't object. That could lead to an interesting dynamic where Naruto transforms and lets Hinata bang her with a strap-on. I would even have Naruto bang Kushina, because Naruto's dick (in this story) is bigger than Minato's but not quite at Sasuke's level but Kushina at this point is a big titted MILF slut and the taboo of getting her ass packed by her son is hot. I might just leave those ideas as potential side-stories, to be picked up at a later time. Quote
Guest Guest Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 i always viewed sasuke as too possessive to share his women. i would keep it just a sauke story. Quote
Guest DPSKG42 Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 It does look like Sasuke is more of a "I don't need you now so fuck it all to hell," Kind of guy. Plus it just feels right ya know, Naruto and Hinata loving each other while lusting after sasuke. Plus the way Sakura kissed Kushina at the end of chapter two made it seem like intermingling would not be frowned upon. And it just feels like something Naruto/Sasuke would do, a sort of twist on the whole rivalry thing. Also I don't know if you've said yet but will Naruto ever get with Sasuke or will it strictly be females, Naruto seems like the experimental type. Either way I'm down to clown. Quote
Guest Ronin Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 Naruto will use jutsu to turn into Naruko and be Sasuke's greatest sexual partner, the two will have marathon sessions. That's coming up in chapters 7 and 8. As far Sasuke/Naruto just gay sex, that would have to be a different story. I get the feeling a lot of the fans of this story wouldn't be down for that. Though some would, as you can see by your comment and the one before, different people have different ideas. Quote
Guest DPSKG42 Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 Neat. Do you have plans to use their separate abilities, like Sasuke using his Sharingan or Naruto using the chakra cloak for lord knows what. I've seen people get creative with the jutsus and ability, its hit and miss but when it hits it hits it right out of the park. True, I guess in the end its down to what you as the author and whoever originally requested this want out of the story. Either way its sure to be neat. And for some reason I now want to see Naruko just absolutely bitch slap the living day lights out of someone. Hmm weird, either way an't wait for your other planned stories especially that harry potter one. Quote
Guest Naruhina 123 Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 Hey Ronin its great chapter. While you doing continue to restore sasuke harem. Just how did u going to bang out with means sasuke could takes down Hinata, Naruko and Kushina, I,challenge you that can you that sasuke could take down Wide beast Tsume Inazuka not Hana and Strategist yoshino becuase sha is more smarten than Shikamaru. ohh last part cingratulation for your great chapter Mei. Quote
Guest Guest Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 i think it would be fun to see hinata turn into a compete sasuke fangirl, having her fall for sasuke just as bad as kushina. with her getting jealous of naruko in the beginning before starting to look at her as a fellow slave. Quote
Guest of Guests Posted March 11, 2015 Report Posted March 11, 2015 I quite like the idea of Naruto and Hinata still being in love, even when they're lusting over, and vigorously fucking, Sasuke. It fits their characters better, I think, especially Hinata's. Quote
Guest Guest Posted March 13, 2015 Report Posted March 13, 2015 what if hinata just starts having sex with naruko instead. since no dick can compare to the mighty uchiha. refusing to touch narutos average sized cock. maybe have naruko eat hinata's creampie or vise versa. Quote
SpartanAlchemist Posted March 14, 2015 Author Report Posted March 14, 2015 Ok first off, holy crap!! This thread is ranked #1 in the Naruto category in both views and replies, so thank you all for making not only Ronins story but this post so popular as well. Also Ronin man, I LOVED ch5 and look forward as always to your next chapter. Quote
Guest Ronin Posted March 14, 2015 Report Posted March 14, 2015 Chapter 6 might take a little longer-honestly I'm getting a little tired of the Naruto-verse, and chapters 6,7,8 are all characters I've done before. That said, im not going to stop, and once I get dine with the next three, I'll be doing new stuff (Sasuke/Mabui, Sasuke/Samui&Karui, even Sasuke&his mom) so that will be more exciting for me. Just know im not quitting even if my rate slows down-and be sure to leave a review if you haven't already. Quote
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted March 14, 2015 Report Posted March 14, 2015 Alright Ronin thanks for informing us as well as continuing on regardless of your weariness. Also yes I will continue to review your chapters as I look forward to your work in this story. P.S. Thanks for the Info Spartan I didn't know that but it makes me happy that a story which I like it is regarded siimilarly by others on this site besides the other active people on this thread Quote
Guest H Posted March 16, 2015 Report Posted March 16, 2015 Kushina Uzumaki is sexually frustrated MILF whose arrogant young student is a hung sex god. And she's next on his list to turn into his cum-whore. If this sounds familiar then its because this challenge is based on Milf-Kushinas 'Milf Sensei Vs Perverted Student'. That being said I in NO WAY am condoning plagiarizing, copy and pasting or any other euphemism for stealing the written work of another. I am looking for a story with content that is similar. Now that the serious stuff is out of the way lets get on to the porn! YAY PORN!!...at least until I get a girlfriend. Standard squick disclaimer; no scat, gore, vore, snuff or anything along those lines please. I would like section Kushina is a must for this to be a dub-con, even if it progresses quickly hung student lots-of-cum student skull fuck arrogant/confident student tit fuck rough sex dirty talk Kushina cheating on Minata Minato doesn't know I would this to be a multi chapter but if you can only get out one chapter that is fine as well. If you do make this a multi chapter I have several other women that I would like to see made the students toys. You can have them cheating on husband/boyfriend or not, it's up to the author. Anko Kurenai Hinata(would prefer her cheating on Naruto) Mikoto Fem Sasuke Tsume Hana Naruko Shizune Yugao Ino Sakura Temari Mei Yoshino Yugito Please feel free to leave comments or questions i would prefer her cheating on Sasuke lol Quote
Guest zero gawain Posted March 21, 2015 Report Posted March 21, 2015 When the chapter goes out of kushina and hinata? Quote
Guest anon Posted March 23, 2015 Report Posted March 23, 2015 I want to see Kushina get fucked by guys the same age and younger than Naruto. Have Kushina's student(s), Konohamaru, Udon, Chojuro, Omoi etc. fuck her. Hell even have filler kids like this fuck her http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Suiu. It would be even hotter if Kushina still played the role of a good wife/mother with Minato/Naruto, but still slutted it up when they aren't around. Quote
jojo Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 hey ronin can i ask what up with the next chapter or the harry potter story Quote
Guest Ronin Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Sadly I've had to put this story on the back burner for a while. I'm a little burnt out on it, and right now I'm focusing on my commissions. That said I will come back to this story, just not sure when. Quote
Guest Guest Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 that's fine. as long as it's not abandoned. i'll read whatever you write until you get back to this story. what are your current commissions about anyway. and will they be posted on adultfanfic or somewhere else. Quote
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