Melrick Posted August 28, 2014 Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 Author: MelrickTitle: Chaos DelayedSummary: Rambo is in Thailand trying to forget life, until a Thai girl reminds him there's also pleasure to be had.Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism much appreciated.Fandom: RamboWarnings: M/F, Oral, CompleteSolo story or chaptered story: SoloURL: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094972 This story was written to soothe the much wailing and gnashing of teeth of Pittwitch, lamenting the distinct lack of Rambo smut. Well, for better or worse, there's now one more! BronxWench and DemonGoddess 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittwitch Posted August 28, 2014 Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 If I could - I would jump for joy - finally, Rambo gets SOME! Melrick - you rock every day but especially today. THANK you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melrick Posted August 28, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 lol Now hopefully the story won't be half bad. And you're welcome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittwitch Posted August 28, 2014 Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 (edited) I cannot thank you enough for giving Rambo his due. I don't know why it has always niggled at me that the poor guy never got any. This was awesome! You set the scene so very well, from the nam manao to the young girl being unable to resist the strong silent type. My favorite part, other than of course, actually getting laid, was here: "If he’d resisted then she would have had about as much luck as trying to take a tree for a walk, but John stood and allowed himself to be pulled along the road out of the village." I'm glad I could be even a tiny little bit muse-like to you. Again, I thank you and praise you for creating a masterful little piece for a difficult character to humanize. Melrick Rocks! Melrick rocks! Melrick rocks! PW Edited August 28, 2014 by pittwitch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melrick Posted August 29, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2014 lol I didn't think I'd get much out of writing it, since he is a difficult character, but I enjoy writing it. And I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! I'm always open to muse-like inspiration, considering my own muse abandoned me a long time ago! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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