COJimmyV Posted May 23, 2015 Report Posted May 23, 2015 Oh, and I need a scene in public with Nadi in his head, that could be fun They all go shopping and Max starts checking out shoes! Quote
magusfang Posted May 23, 2015 Author Report Posted May 23, 2015 They all go shopping and Max starts checking out shoes! Oh and while he and Becca are looking at shoes, Mike shows up and Nadi takes control and Max gives his big friend a big ole hug and kiss COJimmyV 1 Quote
Rescue25 Posted May 23, 2015 Report Posted May 23, 2015 Oh and while he and Becca are looking at shoes, Mike shows up and Nadi takes control and Max gives his big friend a big ole hug and kiss OR NOT!!!! Quote
magusfang Posted May 23, 2015 Author Report Posted May 23, 2015 (edited) Public smoochies between Mike and max too much LOL I was actually thinking a love scene with Becca, Nadi driving Max's body, just not sure how to write a girl trapped in a man's body making love to another girl... I might just go with a bull in the china shop scene where she's in the kitchen and keeps breaking things because she isn't used to his size and strength...the whole psyche of a lesbian trapped in a man's body having sex makes my head hurt Edited May 23, 2015 by magusfang Quote
that-one-guy Posted May 23, 2015 Report Posted May 23, 2015 Public smoochies between Mike and max too much LOL I was actually thinking a love scene with Becca, Nadi driving Max's body, just not sure how to write a girl trapped in a man's body making love to another girl... I might just go with a bull in the china shop scene where she's in the kitchen and keeps breaking things because she isn't used to his size and strength...the whole psyche of a lesbian trapped in a man's body having sex makes my head hurt "How the hell do you aim this thing Master?" "Honestly I don't know, it just kind of happens." ......... That could be a funny scene lol COJimmyV 1 Quote
magusfang Posted May 23, 2015 Author Report Posted May 23, 2015 maybe...a funny fail type sex scene could be good... Quote
Rescue25 Posted May 23, 2015 Report Posted May 23, 2015 Public smoochies between Mike and max too much LOL I was actually thinking a love scene with Becca, Nadi driving Max's body, just not sure how to write a girl trapped in a man's body making love to another girl... I might just go with a bull in the china shop scene where she's in the kitchen and keeps breaking things because she isn't used to his size and strength...the whole psyche of a lesbian trapped in a man's body having sex makes my head hurt A Would they make love as a female or male? B: Head hurt = time for more drugs? B Quote
magusfang Posted May 23, 2015 Author Report Posted May 23, 2015 A Would they make love as a female or male? B: Head hurt = time for more drugs? B I think it would be funny if Nadi tried to make love as a male, not sure how to work her new plumbing and not having the right instincts...still need to think about it a bit though and just took more drugs Rescue25 1 Quote
crazychickhull Posted May 23, 2015 Report Posted May 23, 2015 I think it would be funny if Nadi tried to make love as a male, not sure how to work her new plumbing and not having the right instincts...still need to think about it a bit though and just took more drugs Oh god we are in for one wild ride can't wait for this sex scene now. COJimmyV and Rescue25 2 Quote
Rescue25 Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 Oh god we are in for one wild ride can't wait for this sex scene now. And you don't think he is going to leave out the black ops do you? B Quote
magusfang Posted May 24, 2015 Author Report Posted May 24, 2015 oh no, we need our grey haired friend... Quote
Guest Christian1040 Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 Yeah it would be nice to read more scenes with Max and all the kids he has rescued interacting. They are the reason he has sacrificed so much, plus he is their Master after all, so having a scene after a mission or after someone recovers from an injury is a must, so the kids can show their appreciation and the main family remembers why they are fighting. You kind of stopped with the kid scenes after the Max being ignored plotline. There are a ton of kids in the house but you wouldn't get that impression while reading. You don't even have to write long scenes with the kids in it, just maybe when one of the mains is looking for another and they ask Jeevus where they are at, he responds with something along the line of, playing with the kids or when a scene is going on in the house one of the charcters notes all the kids running around.And I think the BBQ with everyone is a great idea, maybe have Max man the grill. Quote
crazychickhull Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 When is Max's birthday? He could come home from school to a surprise party with all the kids there. Or one of Amy's 'plans' she blindfolds him and leads him outside to where all the kids are waiting to wish him happy birthday. Making him the centre attention for once. You could even use this to show off the new amour as the girls put on fashion show for him. Quote
magusfang Posted May 24, 2015 Author Report Posted May 24, 2015 i do need to get the "girls" involved more, i kinda use them as a convinient dumping ground; where the babies? girls have em... as for max's bday...i forgot when it is oh i like a bbq and they get attacked and the twns save the day Quote
MajorMarioc Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 (edited) There was never a specific date for the birthday it was late summer most likely around late july "Maxs birthday came and went while he was in the hospital. The girls wanted to throw him a party, but the staff wouldnt allow a true party in the room but they did, however, help the girls plan a little get together with Max, Amy, Emma, Marge, and June." Chapter 2 bitg Edited May 24, 2015 by MajorMarioc Quote
magusfang Posted May 24, 2015 Author Report Posted May 24, 2015 Oh, don't feel so bad then...thought I forgot my MC's birthday, kinda like forgetting your kids birthday... So took some moriphine before bed and a new story line popped into my dreams: Max decides he's gay but none of the boys will be with him so he builds a spider the screw...well it accidently clips his penis off while giving him a clawjob(?) and he goes in the pod and has a sex change...then I can do a whole new spin off story with Maxine instead of Maxwell really gotta stop taking opiates at bedtime darthel0101 1 Quote
MajorMarioc Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 Lol that dose add to the creepy factor Quote
magusfang Posted May 24, 2015 Author Report Posted May 24, 2015 creepy factor huh? ok, how's this: Emma rescues Max's traumatically amputated penis and starts wearing it on a chain around her neck, using poor Max's balls as ear rings Quote
jelad Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 it might be time to start to tapper off the drugs, your getting a lot more creepy with the maybe story lines. Rescue25 1 Quote
magusfang Posted May 24, 2015 Author Report Posted May 24, 2015 Boredom is not a good thing with me, not a good idea to let my mind wander too much COJimmyV and Rescue25 2 Quote
Rescue25 Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 Less drugs more write = less boredom. B Quote
magusfang Posted May 24, 2015 Author Report Posted May 24, 2015 Yeah, I think I need to switch back to vicoden,,,starting to creep myself out! Rescue25 1 Quote
COJimmyV Posted May 24, 2015 Report Posted May 24, 2015 Yeah, I think I need to switch back to vicoden,,,starting to creep myself out! At least we know where Max gets his creepiness from. Quote
magusfang Posted May 24, 2015 Author Report Posted May 24, 2015 Thank you, that's so nice of you to say COJimmyV 1 Quote
crazychickhull Posted May 25, 2015 Report Posted May 25, 2015 Hey magus how is your convalescence coming anyway? Hope your girls are making you rest. Same with you major how are things going? If your bored come chat on my bblog. Co Jimmy you didn't add enough e's to the word creeeeepy Rescue25 and COJimmyV 2 Quote
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