Pippychick's LotR Fiction - Review Responses

[pippychick]

A little dwarf worship, indeed. I quite fancy a bit of dwarf myself, after that. Gimli is perfectly delicious, and quite mysterious as well. Something, he says. I'm as curious as Legolas was, and I'll be waiting right here to find out.

Thank you! Heh... while you're distracted by the bright, shiny dwarf, I'll run off with all the pretty elveses

Oh, I know what the something is, but I won't be spoiling you. I am resisting (for once)!

[pippychick]

I'm actually loving how long this is taking to get to the actual dirty bits, not that I'd complain if the dirty bits happened like say maybe in the next chapter.

Still mildly in love with Gimli or at least with the way you've portrayed him here. Will be waiting for more.

CL

Hi CL, and thank you

I am on with it, and nearly done. The dirty bits are indeed in the next chapter. They only didn't happen in the last one because I thought one or both of them might protest about having it off on the riverbank. Honestly, no sense of adventure, either of them

Ahh.... I don't know if I can change 'mildly' to 'madly' but I'll certainly give it a good go!

[pippychick]

Oh, my dear Pip! Gimli is beyond delicious. I thought I would never quite put a dwarf into the same class as an elf in terms of desire, but I do think you've changed my mind. And Legolas is utterly perfect, as ever. I'm quite sure his future lovers, aside from Elrond, will quite pale in comparison to Gimli.

And I see I still have to wait to find out about the mark. Wicked, wicked woman...

Thank you, Bronx!

lol... they've only done it one way so far. Wonder what that will be like? Maybe give myself a bit of time on that one... (I mean, the evil.. got to get over that first, lol.. *fans self*)

I can honestly say I didn't expect Legolas to be like this, but he's absolutely at ease with it all now they've admitted it. Or, you know, mostly... (insert dirty Gimli laugh here)

Elrond showed him everything, bless... Legolas is hooked on Elrond, in some ways more so than Thranduil. He's got this memory of Imladris being like some kind of pleasure Heaven, with Elrond in it. But Gimli is The One, and I'm determined to write it that way.

I'll reveal about the mark next chapter. Promise.

[pippychick]

To lazy to log in but it's me! I think I may just chain you to your desk and force you to write Gimli porn for the rest of your days... I really must start on The Teacher soon...

CL

Thank you, CL!

I accept, as long as I can spend at least some of that time writing Elrond smut.

Then, one day, I will appear on the internet as:

xXx XxX Hot Dwarfs Getting it On!!! Pay per read!!! XxX xXx

Oh, my empire will be utterly complete... *giggles*

[BronxWench]

I need my "Like" button back!

[pippychick]

I'll admit I wasn't quite expecting that, either, so I was as surprised as Elrond. I'll admit that Elrond no doubt had the advantage of me in terms of pleasure, though, and I am decidedly jealous, too.

So many lessons to learn, and to be taught. It's a lovely journey, and I am eager to see what comes next.

Thank you, Bronx!

*gulps* I hope it was a nice surprise. Leggy really liked it. He had been planning to have his way with Elrond under the trees. He was surprised to have the tables turned on him so easily. Then the blindfold seemed to free him to do just what he wanted.

I think there's only one more scene here, where Thranduil gets to play with Elrond a bit too. He's really beginning to feel much, much better... *evil laugh* But then we'll go forward in time at last.

The time of Celebrían's loss gets ever closer. Poor Elrond

[pippychick]

Ohhhh I loved that chapter! I could just put it in a blender and then drink it. X-D The three together-- Thranduil, Elrond, Legolas-- so sexy-hot, so wrong, yet so right. *I love Elrond's outrage and his uncertainty-- is he lying to himself? Somehow I hope not. Wonderful! *sighs happily*

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Oh, it was his dream all right. But it won't be even close to being fulfilled for a long time... Still, it was nice to write it. I think I needed to, lol The three of them are good together *nods*

[pippychick]

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

This was wicked, and lovely, and utterly delicious, and a perfect treat for a lovely, lazy Sunday. And what a glorious chapter to have dedicated to me. I'll be all happily shivery for the rest of the day now, and my dreams will be full of graceful, wicked elves and their shenanigans.

::purrs happily::

Thank you, Bronx – I'm so glad it made you happy!

Scandalised!Elrond with wicked!Thranduil and playful!Legolas... it's not quite the whole set, but this is Elrond. I'm quite sure he's already thinking ahead... and worrying.

[pippychick]

Okay, I feel so bad, I'm on chapter 28 and have yet to leave you a review. First, you've made me totally fall in love with Elrond. I hate that he lost his first love, that was so sad. I love Legolas in this and now I'm torn because I want Elrond to be with both him and Thurindil since Thurindil lost the love of his life too. But that would mean Incest and I'm not sure that's where you're going with this but if it is, I will gladly follow you into that sticky situation. Oh and I hate spiders!

CL

Thank you, CL – I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story so far!

Oh, it's very true there are just not enough Elrond's to go around. I should perhaps explain that both Oropher and Nimbrethil will be reincarnated and reunited with everyone once they (Elrond & Co) cross over the sea. It's a journey they make once, and there is no coming back.

Now there really aren't enough Elrond's to go around! Oh, dear. But Celeborn is on his way. That might make things clearer.. or maybe not. He's such a frightful tease.

I hope you enjoy the rest of it!

Oh... and did I introduce someone new to Tolkien elf-smut? Because if so, that's kind of awesome!

[pippychick]

Oh, my! The mark is explained, and what a lovely thing it is. So very serious, and so very Gimli, that explanation, and I'm glad that Legolas found joy in it. They really are unique, this elf and this dwarf, but so very enchanting, too.

I will admit I found Legolas' concern, voiced so tentatively to Elrond, to be perfectly wonderful.

Just lovely! Thank you!

Thank you, Bronxie!

I admit I was a little worried about the amount of dialogue in this chapter, but I think there were things they needed to say to each other, so I'm glad that comes across so well. Gimli has another secret, and I'm not sure when he's going to confide it, but I think they'll get to have a bit more fun first.

lol @ Legolas. I am awful, but he does trust Elrond so much at this point... he was certain to ask.

Always that delicate dance of trust, and Elrond knows both sides of it well. But truly, I think Legolas, young and new to these games, will one day surpass them all. And Elrond, ever the teacher, is still learning himself, despite all the long years of experience he has.

So very beautifully told, and thank you!

Thank you again, Bronx!

lol, I am sure you are right about Legolas. He's pretty good at it here... will Gimli will soon be in trouble? Who knows! Suddenly I'm imagining him all tied up!

Oh, Elrond is still learning, definitely. Somewhere far off, many years in the future, Thranduil is shaping him into the perfect Master... to his own specification, of course

[pippychick]

That was exquisite. I'm actually trembling almost as much as Elrond, I think.

Thranduil is such a powerful Master, having learned so well from Nimbrethil, and it amazes me every time Elrond succumbs so beautifully. There is something compelling in his surrender, I confess, even more so than when Thranduil surrendered to him.

I did so love that very last bit, however. What a perfectly Elrond response. Delightful, and I cannot wait to see what comes next!

Thank you, Bronx – your reviews encourage me no end!

I think Thranduil will always be Elrond's Master... but I am hoping to convince you over time that the same applies the other way around too.

But having said that... even I note when writing, he is so pretty when he gives in. It's because he really doesn't, anywhere else. He's a strong character, just not so dramatic about it as, say, Thranduil.

[BronxWench]

Thank you, Bronx – your reviews encourage me no end!

I think Thranduil will always be Elrond's Master... but I am hoping to convince you over time that the same applies the other way around too.

But having said that... even I note when writing, he is so pretty when he gives in. It's because he really doesn't, anywhere else. He's a strong character, just not so dramatic about it as, say, Thranduil.

Oh, I agree! I always see Elrond as one of the stalwart bastions of the elven ranks, strong and competent, so his surrender is both unexpected and glorious at the same time. Thranduil is very dramatic, and I love that about him. Still, I do think he'll manage to train Elrond to be the perfect Master, especially because he is able to teach Elrond the bliss of surrender.

[pippychick]

Oh, that Legolas is just a naughty little boy, isn't he? Leaving a mark that he knew would get poor Elrond into trouble. I love the dominant playful side of him that you've written, I think I may be in love...

Now on the other hand that spanking that Elrond got for punishment was seriously yummy. Spankings administered bare handed while over the lap are my favorite kind so you got my number on that one.

Can't wait for more now that I'm caught up.

CL

Thank you so much, CL!

Legolas is very naughty indeed. At this point, he's quite experienced. And, somewhere I have him using that considerable experience and playfulness on one suddenly very overwhelmed dwarf...

I thought another spanking scene in this story was appropriate, given that it was one of Elrond's 'lessons'... now we see who taught it to him. Glad it was good for you!

Hope you continue to enjoy it.

[pippychick]

Oh, wicked! Wonderful, delicious, and very wicked indeed!

Somehow, I think Elrond and the Mirkwood Three (I do like that!) have managed to find a way to make Valinor even more inviting.

So. Very. Wicked.

Thank you, Bronx!

Ha... I had great fun writing this. As I get closer to the end, they really want to be together. All the lot of them.

This kind of idea is waking Elrond up at night, lol

Glad you enjoyed it!

Edited March 21, 2016 by dafdes

[BronxWench]

Poor Elrond. It's a very good thing he'll be immortal, because those three could kill him with love.

[CL Mustafic]

Legolas is very naughty indeed. At this point, he's quite experienced. And, somewhere I have him using that considerable experience and playfulness on one suddenly very overwhelmed dwarf...

Yeah, I know and I'm waiting on a new chapter of that one too! Grr, guess I'll have to read The Teacher out takes until you give me more of my favorite dwarf...

[pippychick]

Poor Elrond. It's a very good thing he'll be immortal, because those three could kill him with love.

Poor Elrond.... Yes, especially when you consider he's probably waking up every morning next to Celebrian as well

[pippychick]

Yeah, I know and I'm waiting on a new chapter of that one too! Grr, guess I'll have to read The Teacher out takes until you give me more of my favorite dwarf...

Ah, my writing list is as long as my reading list. How did that happen? I will try for it next. I've just got to get this little Legolas/Gimli/Galadriel idea out of my head and into libreoffice.

Edited March 21, 2016 by dafdes

[pippychick]

Okay I'm reviewing on my kindle because this just couldn't wait. OMG seriously who knew almost incest could be so hot!! I would so not be opposed to reading more scenes like this one.

That is all.

CL

Thank you very much! Glad you thought it was hot!

Oh, I think I can promise you more scenes like this, especially in this 'Missing Scenes' bit. I just can't help writing them, even though they don't really belong in the main story. I blame the characters... they are all thinking about it, all the time. Elrond is worried about it, but he's still thinking it all the same.

[BronxWench]

Thank you very much! Glad you thought it was hot!

Oh, I think I can promise you more scenes like this, especially in this 'Missing Scenes' bit. I just can't help writing them, even though they don't really belong in the main story. I blame the characters... they are all thinking about it, all the time. Elrond is worried about it, but he's still thinking it all the same.

I'm not going to complain. I'm also a fan of some good twincest, so...

[pippychick]

I'm not going to complain. I'm also a fan of some good twincest, so...

Well now... TAFKAB has just shown me lots of inspiring pictures... it's happening. How can I not?

[BronxWench]

I can see a re-reading of the Princes Three saga in my near future...

[pippychick]

Ah, lovely! I can picture this so clearly and the way you've written it is utterly sublime. There is something very satisfying in this, as if it completes a circle that demanded completion (although I fear Lord Elrond would not quite agree). Things are in their proper place now. Thranduil and Legolas are simply delicious, and I will carry this feeling of satisfaction into the main story as well.

Thank you, this was a treat indeed!

Thank you, Bronx!

As I think further and further ahead to the end of this story, the characters are really trying to make me leave them all in some incestuous, quivering heap of limbs with Elrond still weakly protesting somewhere in the middle of it all. I still have it strongly in mind not to, but I may end up writing many more of these missing scenes in order to achieve it.

Ha! If Elrond even vaguely suspected this was on the cards he'd be on his knees like a sacrifice, promising Thranduil anything he wants! If only Thranduil knew... *laughs*

So glad you liked it. I feel quite satisfied to have written it. They are so beautiful together, and I'm happy I managed to take them down adequately.

[pippychick]

Oh boy now you've taken me down a path that probably should have been left unexplored. Daddy/son inc? Oh hell yeah! Now we need another scene with Elrond but I do believe Legolas should be the filling in the sandwich...

CL

Thank you, CL!

Thranduil/Legolas is a thing that (almost) everyone loves. They're both so pretty! If you want that kind of sandwich, I'm working on a chapter of the main fic you'll probably like, though it's only heavy hinting. Character development takes precedence, I'm afraid.

Having said that, I am tending to dedicate these missing bits to people. One will appear for you in the not-too-distant future.

[CL Mustafic]

Thank you, CL!

Thranduil/Legolas is a thing that (almost) everyone loves. They're both so pretty! If you want that kind of sandwich, I'm working on a chapter of the main fic you'll probably like, though it's only heavy hinting. Character development takes precedence, I'm afraid.

Having said that, I am tending to dedicate these missing bits to people. One will appear for you in the not-too-distant future.

*Dances about like a lunatic* Why doesn't the like button work??? I will be patiently awaiting the posting of that chapter. I'm lying, I'm never patient.