George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

[Guest mono11]

29 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Well, I’m not totally sure I understand the idea. So the girl goes into her older brothers’ room and finds a magazine that mentions “adult games.” What kind of games are you talking about?

I mean that she found erotic magazines and a good argument could be that the little sister got sick with a fever and the parents left the older brother in charge because the two of them spend their time working and the older brother takes care of her
she tells him that she is bored and wants to play and he says no because she is sick and she suggests a game that he read on the tv "games to cool down a girl"
The theme of this story would be how the older brother has sex almost all the time with his little sister, for example, while they watch a horror movie in the living room with the family or with the younger brother in the living room, the sister covers herself with a blanket and She sits on top of her older brother and you take the opportunity to play with her under the blanket and synchronize her moans with the horror scenes.
or that they go to the pool and buy an ice cream and the twin brother accidentally knocks his ice cream on the floor and the older brother offers to buy him another one but before they go through the changing rooms and he gives him his  cream first

If you are interested, for the sister, an appearance similar to Alice in Wonderland would be good.

[GeorgeGlass]

The next chapter of “Into the Third Dimension” is posted!

Chapter 5: The Photoshoot

Lots going on at this end. Chapter 3 of “Secret Sash” is back from beta and just needs a tweak or two before posting. “First Time: Luhan” is pretty close to ready, too, as is the final chapter of “Liberatrix.” “Waltney Plus” just went off to beta, and chapter 13 of “Smooshed” ought to be ready for beta by the weekend.

Mono11, I’m afraid your idea doesn’t really grab me. For one thing, if the sister is sick, would her brothers really want to get anywhere near her? Plus, if they behave the way real-life older brothers do, they’d probably be pissed if they caught her rifling through their stuff. And that scene in front of the TV seems a lot like my story “Some Girl.”

Interesting you should mention Alice in Wonderland, though. I’ve actually been thinking seriously about writing a story inspired by it—not a fanfic or a parody, but more of an homage, about a girl stumbling into a strange world where she meets all kinds of creatures that take advantage of her sexually.

Edited August 4, 2022 by GeorgeGlass

[Guest mono11]

7 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

The next chapter of “Into the Third Dimension” is posted!

Chapter 5: The Photoshoot

Lots going on at this end. Chapter 3 of “Secret Sash” is back from beta and just needs a tweak or two before posting. “First Time: Luhan” is pretty close to ready, too, as is the final chapter of “Liberatrix.” “Waltney Plus” just went off to beta, and chapter 13 of “Smooshed” ought to be ready for beta by the weekend.

Mono11, I’m afraid your idea doesn’t really grab me. For one thing, if the sister is sick, would her brothers really want to get anywhere near her? Plus, if they behave the way real-life older brothers do, they’d probably be pissed if they caught her rifling through their stuff. And that scene in front of the TV seems a lot like my story “Some Girl.”

Interesting you should mention Alice in Wonderland, though. I’ve actually been thinking seriously about writing a story inspired by it—not a fanfic or a parody, but more of an homage, about a girl stumbling into a strange world where she meets all kinds of creatures that take advantage of her sexually.

when I said illness I meant a simple cold or flu and that she checked her brother's magazines when he was not there and not necessarily the action has to happen when she is sick it was just an example things could happen after the twin brother is make fun of her for being the youngest and then while the older brother separates them from the discussion she suggests playing those adult games in secret from the younger brother and she makes fun of the fact that he is now the immature one

They could also play fairy tales, an example: Little Red Riding Hood, only this time Little Red Riding Hood is going to devour the wolf in bed

[GeorgeGlass]

From LadyFreelove on August 12, 2022

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Excellent story!

Thank you!

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The training protocols are logical and realistic.

Wow, really? I just made all of that up.

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Actually, rather than just the commercial products benefitting from the training, why not all girls? And the boys, too!

Well, that would be a different kind of story. Not a bad one, just a different one.

[GeorgeGlass]

From Fred_Mac on August 29, 2022

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I typically don't go for m/F at all but Guidelines is simply amazing.

Thank you!

Now I’m curious: If m/F isn’t your thing, what made you start reading Guidelines in the first place?

[Guest Fred_Mac]

19 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

From Fred_Mac on August 29, 2022

Thank you!

Now I’m curious: If m/F isn’t your thing, what made you start reading Guidelines in the first place?

I was actually skimming through this thread and came across a review for it that intrigued me. 

[GeorgeGlass]

6 hours ago, Guest Fred_Mac said:

I was actually skimming through this thread and came across a review for it that intrigued me. 

I’d never thought of having a review response thread as a form of advertising.  Nice.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “The Last Toy”

From TheAllSeeingEye on September 07, 2022

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I want this toy

I bet a lot of people would. Thanks for reading.

 

[Guest obone]

Hey George, there any way I can personally message you at all? Wanna talk to you about a potential story idea. 

[GeorgeGlass]

2 hours ago, Guest obone said:

Hey George, there any way I can personally message you at all? Wanna talk to you about a potential story idea. 

If you make an account on this forum, you can PM me here. I’m also on Inkbunny, Lolicit, and Pixiv, and on the Palcomix and DGB Discord servers. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Rough Night”

From ANON - Roughin’ it on September 09, 2022

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That was.....INSANELY HOT!!!!! Thank u SO much!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE write more! Especially similar stories, and a sequel, or sequelS would be amazing!!!!

Thank you! I don’t have plans for a sequel right now, but if you want to read another story of mine that’s in a similar vein, check out “The Wrong Locker Room.” You might also enjoy “Anything That Moves.”

Edited September 16, 2022 by GeorgeGlass

[Guest Ainz]

Hey yo I've been reading your stories for a while now and I love them. So I was wondering would you be interested in a story I request?

So the story I wanted to suggest you is about a boy growing up with pornstar parents and the things he sees and experiences growing up with them. If you're interested please reply 

[GeorgeGlass]

12 hours ago, Guest Ainz said:

Hey yo I've been reading your stories for a while now and I love them. So I was wondering would you be interested in a story I request?

So the story I wanted to suggest you is about a boy growing up with pornstar parents and the things he sees and experiences growing up with them. If you're interested please reply 

I’m afraid the idea doesn’t grab me. 

If you happen to be on Inkbunny, MDGusty has a comic series you might like called Freaky Foxday, about a girl who switches bodies with her porrnstar mom.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Surprise”

From Resting-Madness on October 07, 2022

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super

Thanks!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Can’t Resist Her”

From ANON - SSB123 on March 26, 2022

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great now i wish to see a followup to this one-shot showing Dolly's new life as her mothers sex slave.

Glad you liked it. I’m not planning a sequel at the moment, but if the right idea for one hits me, I’ll go for it.

[GeorgeGlass]

I’ve posted about this in my Transparency Thread, but it bears repeating here: If you would like to review one of my stories, PLEASE DO IT HERE AND NOT IN THE ARCHIVE. Because of the situation with the AFF archives right now, if you review one of my stories in the archive, your review will not actually appear there, and I will never see it. 

The site coders are working to deal with the issues (caused by a hacker sabotaging the site), and I hope that they will soon be able to declare victory and return the site to full functionality.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “What Counts as Incest?”

From LadyFreelove on January 31, 2023

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Excellant story! I totally lloved it. It was such a beautiful and loving mother/daughter story!

Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this story from the perspectives of both mother and daughter and trying to give them distinctive voices.

Edited February 23, 2023 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “What Counts as Incest?”

From lexlogan8 on February 22, 2023

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Loved it! Lines get blurred.

Thanks! Rationalization is fun.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Can’t Resist Her”

From lexlogan8 on February 26, 2023

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Loved it! Well-paced. George Glass rocks!

Thank you! Glad you liked the pacing (something I try to get right but don’t always succeed at).

 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “There's a New Seraph in Town”

From Yahegai on March 04, 2023

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This story was really sweet and wholesome. I loved how the two main characters did a lot of good and made a lot of people happy and have a better life. The happy ending was the sweet cherry on top for this delicious cheese cake of a fic

Thank you! I originally wrote this for a Halloween story contest on Hentai Foundry, and I decided at the time that it would be a nice change of pace to do a feel-good piece instead of a horror story. I’ve always been proud of the result.

[Guest moloch]

Do you plan on continuing? Can’t Resist Her and/or writing more lesbian stories? I’m a sucker of female on female smut, mainly incestuous ones and I would love to read more of it in your writing style! 

[GeorgeGlass]

3 hours ago, Guest moloch said:

Do you plan on continuing? Can’t Resist Her and/or writing more lesbian stories? I’m a sucker of female on female smut, mainly incestuous ones and I would love to read more of it in your writing style! 

I don’t have immediate plans for a sequel to “Can’t Resist Her,” but I would certainly write one if a good enough idea hit me. And I will most certainly be writing more lesbian stories, including incestuous ones.

[Guest Rioesmarex]

Enjoyed your story about Little Rose immensely. Young girl anal is my thing but I can’t find anywhere on the website to create an account so I can post my stories

How do I get a profile URL if I don’t have an account yet

Please reply to me at ….. puntasur123@mail.com

 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Make It All Better”

From Brugremawes on March 16, 2023

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There's this song that feels like it might go well with this song though I haven't heard it in a while and I'm too lazy to but it's called "Drive By" by Train and this story reminds of the chorus (or the whole song) a little bit. 

Yeah, I could see it.

[GeorgeGlass]

Yahegai, you are one heck of a voracious reader! (Not to mention a fast reader.) Here are my responses to all of your recent reviews.

Re: “Firelight”

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A big tittied cow MILF getting bred by a hot stud turns out to be a very nice recipe for a really good time. In other words what an astounding piece of writing

Thank you! In this story, I was kind of trying to turn the prostitute/john trope on its head by (a) making the man the prostitute and (b) making their interaction respectful instead of degrading. I’m glad you liked the result.

Re: "Wild Side"

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A hot romantic story about a father and his daughter having secret sex in the woods as they make plans to start secretly fucking in their own house under the nose of the mother is incredibly hot

Thanks! This started as a simple one-shot story but, as you’ve seen, it grew into a lot more because I became so fond of the characters.

Re: "Everything She Needs"

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This sequel is great! Not to mention erotically hot as well!

Thank you!

Re: "Make It All Better"

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What a beautiful ending to an extremely hot story filled with hot sex that became increasingly intense with every chapter, the fic along with its two exquisite prequels were somehow simultaneously wholesome and erotic at the same time.

Thanks! This story was meant to be a character study in addition to being pornographic. I really enjoyed showing the contrast between Dad and Angela’s very normal life together versus Daddy and Angie’s wild one. 

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I'm very happy about the fact that Gloria got her own happily ever after and knew about the Daddy and Angie thing but didn't try anything stupid that would have made things worse for everyone

I felt that the story needed a twist at the end, and Gloria knowing about everything her husband and daughter had been doing seemed like the perfect thing. It also gave credence to Dad/Daddy’s statement at the beginning that his wild sex life with Angie was not about hurting Gloria.

Re: "Leilaya's Evening"

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Okay not gonna lie, the woodmen joke at the end left a quite nice taste in my mouth

I’m glad. Like “Firelight,” this was a story in which I tried to subvert the prostitution trope by making the experience about fun instead of money and degradation.

Re: "The Last Toy"

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This story was creepily hot but I like creepily hot

Re: "The Interview"

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This story was really sweet because a woman stuck in poverty was able to finally find her happiness in life. Thank you for the story

Thanks for the comment! This story was another effort to turn tropes on their heads: The corporation turns out to be benevolent instead of evil, and life as a human animal is pleasant and not horrific.

Re: "Cruel Nature"

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What an intriguingly hot story

Glad you liked it, considering that this is one of my nastier ones.

Re: "A Day at the Beach"

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What a genuinely wholesome story filled with sexy family friendly bonding. A story about hot public sex on the beach is one of my favorite things to read! It becomes  an even more favorite of mine if the ones doing the hot sex are related to each other by blood or law

Glad you enjoyed! Once again, this was me taking what seems logical and expected and doing the opposite. My original idea was that the MCs would go to a secluded beach where they could have their incestuous fun alone, but then I decided to put them on a beach full of like-minded people instead.

 

Thanks so much for all the comments!