George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Daddy's Rules"

Anon 2014-07-01 id # 3000219825

Hi, I just discovered you stories and read them all in one sitting. I really like them.

Thank you! But...really? I have 24 stories in the Originals category alone. Are you a superhuman speed-reader, or are you one of those people who only sleeps an hour a night?

I have a request. Would you be open to bestality? I would love to read a story you write of a girl in her late teens with huge breasts who is forced to mate with beasts. She could be made into one and forced to live with real beasts in a zoo, on a farm, or at a college. she could be put on exhibit and she would also be subject to experiments and they would use all sorts of instruments and drugs on her.

You're in luck--I'll soon be posting the first of three chapters of "Caitlyn's Punishment," a story that fits at least some parts of this description.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Wish List"

Victoria 2014-07-11 id # 3000220213

I don't know how to add you as a fav Author but I'd love to.

Thank you! I think this item from the FAQ explains how to do it (although it's a little confusing because they call it Recommended Authors and not Fav Authors): http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/29616-how-to-use-the-new-recommended-authors/

I am hoping to read more from you soon. Specialy this kind of stories.

If you liked "Wish List," you may also enjoy "Wild Side" and its sequel, "Everything She Needs."

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

Anon 2014-07-13

Oh dear poor Caitlyn! I wonder what part 2 of her punishment will entail.

Oh, I'm sure it won't be that bad...It'll be worse.

[GeorgeGlass]

Vixen_Bitch 2014-07-19

I would love to see a flashback scene chapter showing how Roy and Caitlyn met, the first time he made her mate with the family dog, how she became the family sex slave. Why doesn't she fight back or tell a friend or family member?

That's a very interesting idea. The story is already pretty well sketched out at this point, but I won't rule out the possibility of a 1-chapter prequel.

Also, if there is any total stranger whose advice I would trust with regard to a story like this, it would be one who calls herself "Vixen Bitch."

Update soon!

I can do better than soon--I can do 20 minutes ago.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

Anon 2014-07-20 id # 3000220397

Oh my gosh! Poor Caitlyn, LOL. I think she better learn to behave at home. After this, it might be in her best interest to start to thinking of Earl as her mate and treat him with more respect.

Excellent advice! Although perhaps (just perhaps) a bit too late for poor Caitlyn...

Holy poop, that Roy is an evil dude but I sort of like him, LOL.

Thanks! The villain is the linchpin of a story like this.

I wonder if there is a vet at the zoo to examine Caitlyn to make sure there is no internal damage or tearing.

They get the same vet who works the Donkey Show down in Tijuana.

I AM SO SIKED UP TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS TO CAITLYN NEXT!!!!!!

Thanks for the fast update, your rock!!!!!

Thank you, and thank you!

P.S. If you haven't already, check out a story here on AFF called Kennel Club by DragonSong... I think you would love it!!

Thanks for the rec! I'll check it out.

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

Vixen_Bitch 2014-07-20 id # 3000220411

Hey there, thanks so much for the fast update since I just found this story yesterday! I don't know what is in store for her next but can't wait to find out.

Well, time is relative--I actually posted the two chapters 6 days apart. Not quite sure how long it will take to post the third and final chapter, given that I've got a lot of stories going at the moment.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Wish List"

xXDasXGoochXx 2014-07-22 id # 3000220440

Excellent.

Thanks!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

Anon 2014-07-24 id # 3000220466

Please please please update soon!!!

What, no cherry on top?

I honestly can't make any promises as to when the third and final chapter will be posted. I literally have about 20 other stories going, and then, of course, there's life.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Daddy's Rules"

Merekbow 2014-07-31 id # 3000220687

Dude this is pretty messed up, I feel dirty after reading it and what's more I feel kind of ashamed that I clicked on the story in the first place. The writing is good and your voice in your writing is out standing, but the subject matter is just messed up. This is a wakeup call for me dude, because I should never have clicked on something like this and I need to get off the internet for a week or so if this is what I'm stooping to. Dude smut is one thing, but raping little girls is just not right bro, but what do I know I'm just a dum raft guide.

This may sound odd, but I find it somewhat comforting that some people react this way to "Daddy's Rules" and those of my other stories that are in a similar vein. This is really strong stuff, and I'd feel a little weird if every single reader reacted with "Oh, that was lovely." Even though I'm the author, there are plenty of moments when even I don't want to be looking at a story like this. And I certainly wouldn't want anything like it to happen in real life. If the father were a real human being, I would like to think that I'd bash his head in with a two-by-four and escort his family to a shelter.

As you say, it was your choice to look at the story, and it's tagged well enough that you had ample warning about the contents. But at least it gave you a better idea of what your preferences are when it comes to erotic literature.

And thank you for the comments about the quality of the writing. (If it's not too arrogant to say so, I'd like to think that you would not have had such a visceral reaction if the story had been less well written.) If the mere sight of my name doesn't make you physically ill, I have a lot of other stories that you might like much, much better.

As for your being a "dum raft guide," I'm willing to bet that your life is more interesting than mine for at least 8 hours a day.

Thanks for taking the time to review.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "F**k Perfect"

Kehlan 2014-07-31 id # 3000220691

Thanks for a very enjoyable story, I really enjoyed reading this,,, I know its probably only a one-shot but would actually be nice to read more about these characters.

Thank you! It is indeed a one-shot, but I can't dismiss the possibility that I'll want to write about these characters some more in the future.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "F**k Perfect"

Anise 2014-08-01 id # 3000220698

I loved that ending, it certainly gives you a bit of a giggle after all that sexiness^^

Thanks! I was going to end the story a few lines earlier, but that ending seemed too predictable, and I didn't want the story to take itself too seriously.

A wonderful story and a great read

Thank you! This story was a little tough to write, because most of my stories are not about unrelated human adults having conventional, consensual sex in the privacy of their own homes. But maybe I'll try it again some time.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "A Beach Like No Other"

Locke Lamora 2014-08-25 id # 3000221493

A rather interesting story and well thought out I think. I'm curious as to how it will continue,I get the idea that there's more to this beach than meets the eye. Please do us the service off continuing to another chapter.

Thank you! Yes, there's definitely a bit of mystery to this beach. Hope you'll stay tuned!

[GeorgeGlass]

Jomahawk2694 2014-09-02 id # 3000221702

Awesome second chapter. Great idea, and I can totally see Glassfish's art style in my head as I read this.

That is a high compliment indeed. I tried to make the imagery as comic-like as possible so that readers would envision it that way.

Although, as nice as those two ladies are, and as amazing as this beach seems, I can't help but feel as if something...sinister is lurking in the shadows. Guess I will have to wait till next time to find out.

That you will. They don't call me Spoiler-Free George for nothing. Okay, nobody calls me that. And I'm kind of glad, because it's sort of a stupid name.

Keep up the great work, and please update soon.

Joma

Thanks! More beach, bikinis, and busts on the way!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "A Little Goes a Long Way"

Mona Thompson 2014-09-10 id # 3000221950

Ahaaaahahahaaaaaa! I just laughed my ass off reading this! You always have the mosst fucked up stories and I mean that in a GOOD way!!!!! Keep up the amazing stories and...tank you fow shawing. Ha!

Thank you and you're welcome! (Excuse me, "Yo wewcome".) This was my first experiment with using a dialogue-only format, so I'm really glad you think it turned out well.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "A Little Goes a Long Way"

TheBiz 2014-09-10 id # 3000221966

I uh, don't think I've ever seen a story quite like this, thanks for showing me something new! It's definitely entertaining.

Thanks! The dialogue-only format was new to me, but I enjoyed trying it out. (I'm a big believer in the idea that limitations stimulate creativity.) As for the story itself, it was inspired by the hilarious "The Death of Romance" by Dr. Awkward and Scoundrel over at Hentai Foundry.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

xXx 2014-09-15 id # 3000222142

Hey, I would love to be able to read more of this story sooner than later. I you continue it and make it multi-chapter. Just think of all the fun things you can do with Caitlyn.

A third and final chapter is in the works and should be ready soon. Thanks for the comment!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Learning a Daughter's Duty"

Kirara 2014-10-22 id # 3000223052

This is one of the best stories I have read on here! Please please please update!

Wow. Thank you! An update is actually coming very soon--probably tomorrow. (Although it will be the last one for a little while, because I'm going to be busy through November with a big ol' writing project.)

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

Anon 2014-10-25 id # 3000223099

You should continue this! Maybe write about the new girl Roy gets and her "training?"

Thanks for the comment! A sequel, prequel, or pre-sequel (hey, they're doing it with BORDERLANDS) could happen someday. Right now, though, I've got lots of other stories in the works. I hope you'll like at least one of them just as much!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Wish List"

discord_the_lunatic 2014-10-28 id # 3000223160

Quite good, would very much like to see a second chapter with some more foreplay and active involvement from the daughter.

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the story. I don't have any current plans for more chapters--it was always intended to be a one-shot--but it's always possible that one day I'll be inspired to write a sequel.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Side Effects"

RESCUE25 2014-11-28 id # 3000223728

Child rape as portrayed in this story is SICKENING !! The story would have been much better if the kids were introduced to sex and enjoyed it.

The story is clearly tagged, so if you don't like that sort of content, I'm not sure why you read it in the first place. Maybe you're saying that there's another form of child rape that you would find more appealing.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Unbidden"

Anon 2014-12-02 id # 3000223780

Very well written, and very, very hot.

Thank you!

I might need to go fuck myself now.

I aim to inspire.

Edited December 6, 2014 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Learning a Daughter's Duty"

Anon 2014-12-04 id # 3000223802

Very hot. Looking forward to the little girl getting rammed by her father.

Thank you, and so am I.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "A Beach Like No Other"

RS 2014-12-18 id # 3000224014

Question: Is it possible for the women here to get pregnant? If so, what happens to the children that are born? If not, do not of the women want to have children, what if a woman wants to have a child?

I would prefer not to answer that question until after the fourth and final chapter is posted, because anything I might say would be at least slightly spoiler-y.

[Rescue25]

Re: "Side Effects"

The story is clearly tagged, so if you don't like that sort of content, I'm not sure why you read it in the first place. Maybe you're saying that there's another form of child rape that you would find more appealing.

I obviously miss the "child rape" tag. Don't care for rape especially of children.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Some Girl"

RESCUE25 2015-02-15 id # 3000224733

Nice beginning. How about some continuing chapters.

Thanks. This is actually a one-shot story, but if you'd like to read something in a similar vein, you might like "The Small Hours" and "Satisfaction."

Edited February 17, 2015 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Some Girl"

Jomahawk2694 2015-02-19 id # 3000224779

Very well written and cute, I could totally see a sequel centered around other holidays, or perhaps the parents go out and leave their kids with a very sexy female babysitter. Either way, I would love to see more of this relationship

Joma

Glad you liked it. And I think you've inspired me; I've got an idea for a Fourth of July story involving these characters and some cousins they haven't seen for several years. (One of those "My, how you've grown--hot" scenarios.)