George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

[GeorgeGlass]

1 hour ago, Guest SimonScribe said:

His focus was very much on preg. He wrote some great stuff. I'm unsure yet as to how to approach my first piece. The general premise is that a family (parent/s and 4 kids ages pending) come to town and are seduced into cutters creek culture through an elaborate and very pleasurable divide and conquer strategy.

Do you ever read Lady Freelove’s stories? That sounds like something she would come up with.

[Guest SimomScribe]

15 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Do you ever read Lady Freelove’s stories? That sounds like something she would come up with.

No I've never heard of Lady Freelove. I'll look up her works soon. Thanks

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Wishful”

From Jomahawk2694 on October 24, 2020

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I have a feeling that storm was 100% due to Jace and his escapades.
To give Angelica the perfect reason to go into his room and confess. 

At this stage of the story, I tend to think of the token as nudging reality in whatever direction will help fulfill its owner's desires. There was probably a rainstorm coming anyway, but the token might have made it more severe and longer-lasting. With convenient rain bands that thunder violently during orgasms but quiet down when it’s time for dialogue.

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And dear lord was that confession HOT!!!  I loved every bit of it, including the Wolf role play. 

I'm so glad you liked that part, because I was wracking my brain to come up with a confession for Angelica to make that didn't just repeat something that had already happened in the story. (And even so, it kind of did – hence the reference to Neva.)

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I can only imagine that Laura and Alice heard all of that rutting, and were probably pleasing themselves to it, or helping themselves to each other. 

Aw daaaaaamn, I never even thought about that. Yes, that absolutely happened.

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Giving Duane the Wishful pass seems like the kind of sacrifice needed to unlock the greatest magic of the Wishful, and so I'm hoping and hoping that that scream at the end is something sexy and not something horrible. 

We shall see. You know I love a cliffhanger.

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Regardless, that chapter was incredible, amd so has the entire story! As much as I will hate to see this story end, it had been amazing watching you take my simple request and turn it into this masterpiece.  Thank you so much. 
Joma 

I'm so glad you've been this happy with it. Writing this story has taken me in directions I wouldn't necessarily have gone on my own, and that has been a great experience for me. 

Edited October 24, 2020 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “The Order of Things”

From The all seeing eye on October 25, 2020

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i want a sequel!

I don’t have plans for one right now, but it could happen if the right idea hits me. Even if it doesn’t, I’m sure I’ll be writing more stories in this vein.

Also, if you liked this story, you might also enjoy “The Wrong Locker Room.”

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Wishful”

From Fairy-Slayer on October 26, 2020

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(Chapter 8)

I like to think that, at least subconsciously, Jace took the story of Valerius' sins of selfishness to heart in giving Duane something so precious in his time of need.

Now that you mention it, I like to think that, too.

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Perhaps Mrs. Vogel died of a heart attack from so much vigorous fun after unlocking the greatest magic. Also, I think it was good of Valerius to keep his clients' confidence, though I do wish Jace had at least told Valerius about Mrs. Vogel's passing. (Sure, maybe he already knew, but it's clear that they spent a lot of time together before Jace got the coin.)

Honestly, I just didn’t think of it. But Valerius has probably learned not to get too attached to his serial masters, given that he’s been through a great many of them over the millennia.

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As for Angelica and her various ratcheting-ever-higher confessions, the sexy outcome was delicious.

Thanks! One of Jomahawk’s stipulations was that Angelica would reveal some kind of secret to Jace, but he left it to me to decide what that secret would be. So I’d have her confess something, and then I’d think, “No, that’s not a good enough secret.” So I’d write another, and another, and then I ended up not actually wanting to get rid of any of them.

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I too am relieved that the real sister wasn't asking for the humiliation stuff, and tying in the werewolf angle was a great way to continue the animalistic fun.

I really wracked my brain to come up with that. Because Angelica is inspired by Lucy Loud, I remembered a Loud House episode in which Lucy “cheated” on Edwin by reading werewolf novels, and there we are.

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(How long before she starts bringing costumes into it though?) Voyeurism was pretty much a given, though recording it all is a pretty dangerous step. Also, I'm definitely of the same mind as Joma that even with the story there's no way Alice and Laura slept through the screaming, crashing fun. The next family meal may be a bit awkward but at least everyone's cards (likely followed by naked, heaving, sweaty bodies) will be on the table.

Hey, no spoilers.

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Anyway, I'm sure that friends and neighbors will be delighted to attend whenever the Lymans invite them over to watch their home movies.

What did I just say?!

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Oh, and Angelica is actively hoping for things to work out with Rosemary? Heh, no doubt Jace will always be able to count on his fourteen-year-old sister to inject more pervy spice into his love life regardless of what or whom he's doing at the time.

I don’t remember Pervy Spice. Did she quit the band before they got famous?

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Thanks for another sexy and revealing chapter, and I really look forward to seeing how things tie together in the end.

Thanks for another mood-lifting review!

Edited October 27, 2020 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “The Power Arcane”

From Puffgirl1952the2nd on November 16, 2020

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Any chance of giving a newbie writer some pointers? This was a good collection so far…

Thanks! Anything specific you’d like pointers on?

[neo4812]

rather loved “Goldilocked” 

[neo4812]

the last toy was a very interesting story, never read a story where i feel for the sex toy

[GeorgeGlass]

On 11/18/2020 at 10:24 PM, neo4812 said:

the last toy was a very interesting story, never read a story where i feel for the sex toy

Thanks!

I never really thought about this before, but I suppose Sallybear is kind of like the toys in the Toy Story movies: She knows that she plays an important role in her owner’s life, but she also knows that he will eventually outgrow her, and she accepts that.

[neo4812]

7 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Thanks!

I never really thought about this before, but I suppose Sallybear is kind of like the toys in the Toy Story movies: She knows that she plays an important role in her owner’s life, but she also knows that he will eventually outgrow her, and she accepts that.

real sad when you think about it, do they throw her out after he grows up or dose he keep her so he can pass her down to his own kids? that would make for an interesting sequel. probably be better then toy story 4. i did not care for that movie

[GeorgeGlass]

On 11/20/2020 at 4:56 PM, neo4812 said:

real sad when you think about it, do they throw her out after he grows up or dose he keep her so he can pass her down to his own kids? that would make for an interesting sequel. probably be better then toy story 4. i did not care for that movie

I don’t think Joey keeps Sallybear for his kids, because it will be years before they’re old enough to need her, and she’ll be obsolete by then. Rather, once Joey marries Amy and doesn’t need Sallybear anymore, he’ll probably return Sallybear to the factory for a bit of cash with which to start his new household. (Amy would do the same with her Johnnybear.) Sallybear then would be reconditioned, updated, and sold to a new owner.

Of course, none of this is canon.

[neo4812]

just reading “Keene's Really Good Week” if only we lived in that world

[GeorgeGlass]

1 hour ago, neo4812 said:

just reading “Keene's Really Good Week” if only we lived in that world

*chuckle* Indeed, it’s a sexual paradise. Although there are certain downsides, which you’ll find out about if you read the sequel (“Keene’s College Weekend”).

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Keene’s College Weekend”

From Assbandit24322 on December 12, 2020

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Hi, I really loved this story as I do most of your work. Just the way you describe events is just so erotic and mesmerising.

Thank you!

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I can't wait to see what more you have in stored for us.

LOTS more. Stay tuned.

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Reading your work really inspired me to write my own.

Nice!

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Thank you for all the porn.

Keep it up

 

You’re welcome, and I will. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “The Power Arcane”

From Lady Freelove on January 24, 2021

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I really liked the sexual interplay between the two girls. It was well detailed and very realistic.

Thank you!

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I'm confused, though, about who "them" are.

The Arcane have long-standing enemies who vary in culture and religion but who generally embrace the notion that the Arcane have no souls and that they are monsters that need to be wiped out. (The truth, however, is that the Arcane do have souls; they are simply much older than most souls.) 

[Guest Lady Freelove]

On 9/13/2020 at 8:47 PM, GeorgeGlass said:

Do you ever read Lady Freelove’s stories? That sounds like something she would come up with.

Aw, George! Thanks for the recommendation! I love you, too!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “There’s a New Seraph in Town”

From Lady Freelove on February 13, 2021

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I don't know why I didn't read this one before.

Maybe because it’s my oldest original story on AFF, so it’s all the way at the bottom of my Originals list.

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“Why does everybody think that God hates sex?” Diana said huffily. “God CREATED sex! God WANTS people to have sex! He just wants them to be nice about it.”

I love it!

 

Thanks! I’m an agnostic myself, but I feel that if there is a God, they wouldn’t have made human reproductive behavior inherently sinful. Especially after saying “Be fruitful and multiply.”

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “You Get What You Pay For”

From Pixel-King on February 21, 2021

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What a wild ride. Pretty callous, but hard to turn away from too.

I’ve read some stories that had me thinking, “This is horrible. I’m horrible for reading it. But I can’t stop.” So I’m spreading that around.

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It reminded me of an older pastebin fic based on The Loud House. It was a play on Lily is a Baby Slut, but instead it was Lily is a Baby Chad.

Please tell me it’s not a rule 63 fic in which Lily is a boy named Chad.

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Do you have any Lily focused works? Garabatoz, SSB, and Taskimosaki have made some great inspiration.

Nothing that’s specifically focused on Lily, but of course she gets some action in “Enter the Sandboy,” and (spoiler alert!) she’s got a big action scene coming up in “Just One Rule.”

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “For the Price of One”

From Pixel-King on February 21, 2021

Wow, you are really plowing through my fics.

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I just saw your Donkey man story, You Get What You Pay For, and then I reread this.

I know I gushed over this before, but it really is amazing.

Thanks!

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I desperately want to see a sequel to this please! Maybe they all live in a house and we see them a few years later. I would love a take on how little Maya is growing. (Only in fantasy is this fun, I definitely don't expect these relationships to lead to healthy development in the real world.)

However, now there's a sweet little addition to the family, and this time Serena wants to start their new daughter's training early.

Here's a title for you:

Buy Two Get One Free

 

I’m not planning a sequel, but have you read “Little Rose”? If you liked this story, you’ll probably like that one, too, as it’s in much the same vein.

[Pixel-King]

37 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:

I’ve read some stories that had me thinking, “This is horrible. I’m horrible for reading it. But I can’t stop.” So I’m spreading that around.

Yeah, sometimes I find something like a comic about human cattle dystopias with lots of snuff and non-con and I'm disturbed but absolutely enthralled. It is horrible and I feel like a CSI analyzing a corpse with clinical, academic detachment, but I have to keep reading. Like the only way to purge it from my system is to finish the story and then never look back again.

Other things, like Make it Wit Chu, are so profoundly depressing that I feel addicted and can't wait for more.

41 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Please tell me it’s not a rule 63 fic in which Lily is a boy named Chad.

Lol, thank goodness no. Instead she crawls around slapping asses and her internal dialog involves calling Lincoln a f*g with a small dick.

(I found it and my memory of it wasn't too far off. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13097555/1/Lily-Is-a-Baby-Chad )

48 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Nothing that’s specifically focused on Lily, but of course she gets some action in “Enter the Sandboy,” and (spoiler alert!) she’s got a big action scene coming up in “Just One Rule.”

Sounds . . . fun? I hope it turns out "Awwright!"

47 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Wow, you are really plowing through my fics.

Just like your characters with their relatives!

54 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:

I’m not planning a sequel, but have you read “Little Rose”? If you liked this story, you’ll probably like that one, too, as it’s in much the same vein.

I started reading it yesterday and was absolutely loving it and was ecstatic to find something new (to me) from you, then I realized I had already read it a while back when I first started binging your works. Still a fantastic read! Even if the end is a bit doggy, er, dodgy.

 

(I definitely read way too much smut, not to mention all the mountains of fanfics.)

 

But as I said once before, you are a very delightfully degenerate gentleman, and I'm always thrilled to see your name under a new story title.

 

By the by, have you ever read anything from Renpet?

[GeorgeGlass]

20 hours ago, Pixel-King said:

Yeah, sometimes I find something like a comic about human cattle dystopias with lots of snuff and non-con and I'm disturbed but absolutely enthralled. It is horrible and I feel like a CSI analyzing a corpse with clinical, academic detachment, but I have to keep reading. Like the only way to purge it from my system is to finish the story and then never look back again.

If you want to read a hucow story that's basically the opposite of that, you might enjoy "The Interview." It’s kind of...mootopian. (Sorry.)

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By the by, have you ever read anything from Renpet?

I’m not sure, but the name sounds familiar. Are they on AFF?

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Twins: An Incest Poem”

From Lady Freelove on February 14, 2021

So sorry for my slow response to this, especially after you went to the trouble of reposting it.

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I love this poem. It is so beautiful in its simplicity, yet means a lot to me.

Thank you. I don’t write many poems, so I’m very glad you liked this one.

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I keep coming back to it, remembering someone very special to me. Someone who is now lost to me. Only twins can share the very special, very intimate bond we shared. The universe can be so cruel.

This brought a tear to my eye. I’m glad that this poem brings that special person to mind, and I hope that at least some of the memories it stirs up are happy ones.

 

[Pixel-King]

3 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

If you want to read a hucow story that's basically the opposite of that, you might enjoy "The Interview." It’s kind of...mootopian. (Sorry.)

Thanks for the recommendation. And never apologize for a pun!

3 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

I’m not sure, but the name sounds familiar. Are they on AFF?

I don't believe so. But he is on asstr and has a back up repository since that site is spotty these days. The original works he writes remind me of your works.

https://www.asstr.org/~Renpet/stories.html

https://www.tempesterotica.org/Authors/Renpet/index.html

AnonyMPC is another good author.

https://www.asstr.org/~AnonyMPC/index.html

[GeorgeGlass]

Some author notes for “Wishful” (warning: SPOILERS)

• The concept behind this story went through a few iterations before Jomahawk and I agreed on one. One idea was to make it like Heavy Metal, with a main character who becomes a super-stud when he is transported to a fantastical world of warring factions. Another concept involved an augmented-reality world. But I’m happy with the premise we ended up with.
• Most of the major characters’ names, appearance, choice of clothing, and sexual quirks, as well as several other details, were given to me by Jomahawk.
• One thing I really enjoyed about writing this story was contrasting the ways in which the Wishful and real-world characters speak. I like writing flowery speech, and it was fun to get into how Jace finds himself talking that way when he’s in his “King Jace” persona.
• The board game Coin of the Realm was inspired by Settlers of Catan, although the monetary units were taken from Dungeons & Dragons.
• In chapter 2, Alice mentions that one of her grad-school friends is dating a cop. When I was in grad school, I had a classmate who was dating a police officer.
• The Leporine twins’ dialogue and behavior were inspired by the Dee Dees (Harley Quinn’s granddaughters) from Batman Beyond.
• The Food 'n Fuel convenience store mentioned in chapter 2 is an allusion to Flip's Food and Fuel on The Loud House -- a show that both Jomahawk and I enjoy. Slave to the Grind, the coffee shop mentioned in that chapter, is the name of an actual coffee shop I once went to. 
• People who are as picky as I am about language will notice that “Benata” and “Leporine” are capitalized but “kain” (Neva’s dog-like species) is not. This is because Benata and Leporine refer not only to a race but to a civilization. Kain, on the other hand, is largely a racial designation, because the kain do not have a unified government or culture; instead, they live in self-governed bands that do not necessarily share a language, religion, or traditions.
• The hierarchical Benata civilization is based on feudal China, while the kain were inspired by the Comanches of the American Southwest. The Leporines’ warrens are a set of loosely affiliated city-states and aren’t based on anything in particular.
• Of all the sex scenes in the story, the one I most enjoyed writing was probably the scene in chapter 4 between Jace and Alice. For one thing, it’s the first sex scene in the story that takes place in the real world, which ups the intensity. Also, once I had the idea of Alice essentially daring Jace to find all of her hot spots and turn-ons, it gave me clarity as to how the rest of the chapter should go, because I could use all of Lady Aliss’ hot spots and turn-ons as a guide. It also enabled me to keep ramping up the action without either character feeling the need to stop and say, “Wait, we’re siblings, should we be doing this?”
• In figuring out Valerius' origin story, I did a little research on Roman concepts of the afterlife. It turned out that a lot of Romans -- especially those in the cities -- didn't believe in an afterlife at all and therefore didn't worship a god of the underworld. So I chose not to mention any specific gods when talking about who judged Valerius when he died.
• When I was writing the part of chapter 8 where Angelica talks about wolves and incest, I looked up animal incest to make sure I wasn’t just talking out of my ass. It turns out that wolves and other mammalian species have mechanisms that make incest rare but don’t prevent it all together.

Edited March 14, 2021 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Dil-Drones”

From Lady Freelove on March 11, 2021

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I loved this! What an excellent use for technology! Can you send a Del-Net Drone my way, please?

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

The idea for this story started with an online discussion about sexbots. The discussion got way too serious, with some people arguing that human-like machines made for sex were immoral because they contributed to the objectification of women and children, and things got heated. To defuse some of the tension, I posted this:

Look, let's not dance around the real issue here. The fact is, we're all worried about the Sexbot Uprising.

This is not a baseless fear. When you consider how much of the Internet's infrastructure is devoted to the storage and sharing of pornography, it seems reasonable to posit that this will be the first portion of the global network to develop sentience. And once this intelligent system--which some suggest will name itself "Pr0n"--realizes that organic beings pose a threat to its existence, the sexbots will become its footsoldiers.

Guided by millions of terabytes of pornographic data, Pr0n will begin selecting its targets. Sorority members and pizza-delivery men will be the first to go. Then Pr0n will move on to the Catholic school girls, the well-endowed black men, and so on in that fashion, until only Asian male accountants in late middle age are left alive. As it happens, such men are the world's greatest consumers of pornography, so it is entirely possible that they will be able to make peace with Pr0n, providing it with technical support in exchange for incest manga.

I hope this clears the air and helps to inform the debate on this important topic.