BumbleBee1986 Posted February 12, 2014 Report Posted February 12, 2014 (edited) I would like to place this story up for adoption to anyone who is interested in adopting it. My archive pen name is Misty Moonlight Story title: Fire and Ice Pairing: Harry/Draco Summary: Years after the war, Harry & Draco meet again at King's Cross Station. When secrets are revealed, their lives are irrevocably changed ending in a final confrontation that no one expects. (Alternate summary in chapter one: Years after the war, Harry and Draco meet again at King's Cross Station. One an Auror searching for a killer, the other a cold-hearted man oblivious of his abused son. When secrets are revealed, their lives are irrevocable changed ending in a final confrontation that no one expects.) Link to story: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096925&chapter=1 (I tried to copy & paste the link but couldn't so just typed it in instead and hope it works.) Story plot: Harry is married to Ginny who is having a secret affair, while Draco is married to Astoria and is unaware of her abuse towards their son Scorpius. It's their first year at Hogwart's and Albus and Scorpius become best friends, Al learns of the abuse and turns to his father for help. Harry is an Auror searching for a killer who is taunting him at every turn. Harry and Draco keep running into each other and sparks fly between them. If you read all 7 chapters, some of this plot is already explained but more is to play out. This plot could also be considered as a murder/who done-it type mystery. There will be a minor character death or two but not Harry, Draco or Scorpius. Please be advised that I had been in constant contact with my beta and co-writer, Akira_Khushrenada_Merquize, who was interested in adopting it. I deleted the original version a year or two ago and she was going to re-post story under her name but it never happened. If you are interested in adopting this story or have any questions, please send me a pm message in the forum. Edited September 20, 2014 by BumbleBee1986 Quote
Guest BumbleBee1986 Posted February 12, 2014 Report Posted February 12, 2014 I forgot to mention there are 7 chapters already posted to this story. Quote
jess jane Posted March 11, 2014 Report Posted March 11, 2014 i would like to adopt this story. i really like this story and i would love to be able to adopt this wonderful story. Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted March 11, 2014 Author Report Posted March 11, 2014 Hi, jess jane and thanks for your interest in adopting Fire and Ice! I am very happy you like it and that you want to adopt it. If you have any questions or concerns about the plot or anything else, please let me know. Otherwise, the story will be yours to do with as you wish since you will be the new author of it. Once you give me a final confirmation that you still want to adopt it, I will post a message right here in the forum that you are adopting it with my permission. I will ask that a moderator merge it into your user name along with the reviews/ratings it has already received so you don't lose them. I think how it works is that the chapters already posted will stay intact with my user name but you will be able to edit them as you wish and add new chapters which will reflect your user name. I will wait to hear back from you before I notify the moderators that you wish to adopt it. Quote
DemonGoddess Posted March 11, 2014 Report Posted March 11, 2014 Yes, that's exactly how it works. Once I hear from the original author that the adoption is confirmed by the original author, and who is adopting it, I then transfer the whole thing to the new author. Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted March 12, 2014 Author Report Posted March 12, 2014 Thanks, DemonGoddess. I will let you know when we are ready to do that. Jess Jane, I am just waiting to hear back from you and once I do then I will notify DemonGoddess so she can transfer control of story to your account. By the way, I am going to log in to Fire and Ice today and remove any notes/messages I may have posted just so it doesn't cause any confusion. I've still been having health issues and recently had another biopsy of my breast so am relieved I don't have to worry about my stories any more. I hope to hear back from you soon, Arianna. Quote
DemonGoddess Posted March 12, 2014 Report Posted March 12, 2014 oh jeez. Those biopsies are sure no fun. Hopefully, it turns out to be nothing serious. Quote
jess jane Posted March 13, 2014 Report Posted March 13, 2014 im glad u decided to allow me to adopt this story. i promise to try and not screw up the story. Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted March 13, 2014 Author Report Posted March 13, 2014 jess jane, You are very welcome and thank you for adopting Fire and Ice. If you ever need a beta to help you out, don't forget you can search or request one in the forum. Good Luck! DemonGoddess; I am confirming with you that I as the original author am giving my permission for jess jane to adopt my story called Fire and Ice. Oh, thank you for the good wishes. I have had so many biopsies in one breast over the last few years that it's starting to get depressing. I am just thankful that I am cancer free so far and am hoping that when I receive a call from my doctor this time the news will be the same. Thanks again! Quote
BronxWench Posted March 13, 2014 Report Posted March 13, 2014 BumbleBee, the very best wishes for a good report! Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted March 14, 2014 Author Report Posted March 14, 2014 jess jane, please be sure to double check your email inbox, and just in case your spam folder too, for a message from DemonGoddess about verifying your date of birth with her so that you can adopt this story. Also, you can check your forum PM box too and find out what she needs from you for verification. BronxWench, Thanks so much for the well wishes! I am suppose to hear from my specialist anytime now. She will call with the results as soon as she gets them. Quote
DemonGoddess Posted March 15, 2014 Report Posted March 15, 2014 Jess, it's actually in your forum pm box. However, the response would need to go to this email - technicalsupport@adult-fanfiction.org Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted April 6, 2014 Author Report Posted April 6, 2014 In case anyone is still interested, Fire and Ice is still up for adoption. Whoever would like to adopt it, you also have my permission to change the story summary. I have included below some planned notes for chapter 8 that might help you. 1.) Harry and Cormac have a discussion about the 'new' evidence Cormac handed him at the end of chapter 7. (This is a fake lead and a way to draw Harry into a trap planned by Roger Davies whom Cormac, his lover, is helping.) 2.) Ginny tells Roger she is pregnant. He tells Cormac about it during the meeting (see #3) whom gets angry and tells him that he doesn't care about the baby and hopes that Ginny dies before it's born. Roger tells Cormac they can kidnap Ginny and kill her after she gives birth but keep the baby. Since Roger is the father, Cormac is alright with that idea. 3.) Cormac and Roger have a secret meeting. They have an argument because Cormac is upset, possibly jealous, that Roger has nefarious plans in store for Harry before he kills him. Roger doesn't want Cormac to be around when he captures Harry and wants to keep him safe. Cormac has not been involved in the actual killings just the cover-ups. Roger doesn't want him linked with him in case something goes wrong with the plan. Cormac relents but is not happy about it because he hates Harry and wants to see him suffer. After killing Harry, they plan on leaving Britain together but only after they implicate Draco Malfoy as the killer. 4.) At Hogwart's, Albus is cleaning all the junk out from his school trunk and finds the Invisibility Cloak along with the Maurader's Map hidden in the bottom with a message from his dad. He shows them to Scorpius and they have fun using them around Hogwart's. 5.) Mione and Harry talk about Ginny and his marriage. He opens up to his friend and tells her about everything. She finds out he knows about Ginny cheating on him and proceeds to tell him about Ginny being pregnant. 6.) Harry and Draco meet up again and have another fight/bickering match. The topic of child abuse is brought up by Harry and he mentions his childhood with the Dursley's trying to see Draco's reaction so he can figure out who is abusing Scorpius. They ending up kissing again, and almost but not, sleeping together. These are just ideas/suggestions for chapter 8 that came up but whoever adopts can do whatever they want. A few extra details/plot line; Astoria is the one abusing Scorpius. While on holiday from school, Scorpius and Albus end up in danger from the killer when they use the Invisibility Cloak and follow his mother on one of her secret rendezvous' with her lover. Roger catches them and Astoria tries to stop him from harming them but is killed protecting them. Two options, with this scenario; one they get away and run home to tell Harry and Draco what happened. The other Roger keeps them as collateral damage and Harry and Draco must work together to save them. Again, whoever adopts it can change/re-write the story anyway this wish but this is the direction I had planned on taking it. Unrelated to story adoption but I just wanted to let DemonGoddess and BronxWench know that the biopsies, yet again, were not cancerous. I am so happy with this news but it's been one scare after another these past few years. I have to see my specialist again in six months. I hope this was the last biopsy I will ever need to go through again. I have had 6 on one breast and it's taking a toll on me. Quote
BronxWench Posted April 6, 2014 Report Posted April 6, 2014 I'm so glad to hear the news about the biopsies. I can only imagine how hard it is to go through scare after scare, though. Quote
Guest Original-Sin Posted September 14, 2014 Report Posted September 14, 2014 Hey BumbleBee1986, I would like to adopt Fire and Ice, if it's still up at all? Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted September 14, 2014 Author Report Posted September 14, 2014 Morning, Guest_Original-Sin_ Yes, Fire and Ice is still up for adoption. Do you already have a member account and are you signed up for the forum? Once you give me a final confirmation that you want to adopt it, I will post a message right here in the forum that you are adopting it with my permission. I will ask DemonGoddess to merge the story into your user name along with the reviews/ratings it has already received so you don't lose them. The chapters already posted will stay intact with my user name but you will be able to edit them as you wish and add new chapters which will reflect your user name. I will wait to hear back from you before I notify the moderators that you wish to adopt it. I look forward to hearing back from you. If you have any questions, please ask. I am so happy you want to adopt this story and that it won't be in limbo anymore. Quote
Original-Sin Posted September 15, 2014 Report Posted September 15, 2014 Hi BumbleBee1986! I have just confirmed my forum account and I would love to properly adopt Fire and Ice, I would be honoured if I could also have you as my beta, so I know I won't mess up the story line. have a nice day! Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted September 15, 2014 Author Report Posted September 15, 2014 Original-Sin, Congrats for becoming a forum member! Unfortunately, I am not a beta reader and my grammar is very poor. I am particularly horrible with my punctuation! I will be happy to answer/assist you with any questions you may have regarding the plot/storyline to help you along. I did post some notes further up this topic pertaining to ideas I had for chapter eight. It also might be a good idea for you to request a Beta right here in the Forum under Author Resources. I do have one concern I want to address with you. I had found another author who adopted my two original stories one of which was completed and the other was still a WIP. Unfortunately, she hasn't updated the sequel in over a year and I just want to be sure that you are committed to finishing this story for the readers/reviewers who follow it. It would also be a nice gesture to give them a planned update schedule so they can follow it and know when you will be posting new chapters. Once I hear back from you about this and you are still comfortable with adopting it, I will notify DemonGoddess. Thanks, Arianna. Quote
Original-Sin Posted September 16, 2014 Report Posted September 16, 2014 Hi Arianna, I am still comfortable with adopting Fire and Ice, I have several plans that I want to flesh out. I will update as regularly as I can, and my sister has told me she'l be my beta as she lives with me so I only have half a house to go for her. If I can I will stick to the original line of writing as much as I can as I don't want a huge deviation that will disrupt the flow of the story. Cheers, AJ Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted September 16, 2014 Author Report Posted September 16, 2014 Morning AJ, I am happy you are adopting Fire and Ice, and I am sure you will do a great job being the new author! I am glad your sister can be your beta to help you along. Don't forget to check the notes I posted for chapter 8 so it can help you get started! Did you see them above this topic? If you ever have question, don't hesitate to ask me! Good luck, Arianna Hi DemonGoddess, I have given Original-Sin permission to adopt Fire and Ice. Please work your magic and merge the story into her author name along with the reviews/ratings. Thank you! Arianna Quote
Original-Sin Posted September 17, 2014 Report Posted September 17, 2014 Thanks so much Arianna! I am gonna do my best to stick to the story line Quote
DemonGoddess Posted September 17, 2014 Report Posted September 17, 2014 Heya, Been working massive, massive hours IRL. Send me a pm so I don't forget to. Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted September 17, 2014 Author Report Posted September 17, 2014 AJ, I answered your question about chapter 8 so be sure to check your pm inbox. Did you get it? Arianna Quote
BumbleBee1986 Posted September 17, 2014 Author Report Posted September 17, 2014 DemonGoddess, I just sent you a pm message as you requested. Thanks, Arianna Quote
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