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Author: AnthonyFiction
Title: Time for School
Summary: An unremarkable high school student suddenly discovers an extraordinary, inexplicable superhuman power inside of him. It doesn't take long for him to master it, giving him the confidence to make his fantasies come true.
Feedback: Reasonable comments/constructive criticism accepted. Otherwise, don't bother.
Fandom: Original
Pairing: N/A
Warnings: Fingering,HJ,M/F,Minor2,OC,Oral,SI,Complete
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856

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Chapter 5 is now up. After hunger strikes, Anthony shows there's still some more new tricks up his sleeve. He also continues to branch out and begins talking to a new girl...

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=5

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Chapter 6 has been posted. Eve is a ravishing and wise young woman, but just how strong is her relationship with her boyfriend? Also, what happens when Anthony becomes part of an 'experiment' by his friends?

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=6

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Chapter 7 has been posted. How will Anthony react when he's confronted by an unpleasant person from his past?

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=7

Note: Thanks to some feedback that's got me thinking, tomorrow I'll be working on a characterization update and some other general updates in chapter 2.

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That update I said I was going to make on chapter two today has been uploaded. So what did I do, exactly?

- All changes made were to the first half of chapter two and the very end of chapter one.
- I updated my character to be a little more in line with how he acts later in the story.
- The biggest change was to Jennifer's character. I made her less angry and more pleasant towards the main character. This should clear up the awkward dynamic the two had initially where their scene together felt pretty forced. Their time together should now make more sense and feel right for the reader. (Before I uploaded the story, I actually was struggling a little bit on the chapter since I'd gone through a few rewrites and just wanted to just finally get it finished. I'm glad someone pointed it out so I could go back and fix it!)
- General grammar and sentence structure fixes

Thanks for reading, and keep on giving me those constructive criticisms so I can make the story better.

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Chapter 10 has been posted. Natalie's an aspiring model, sure of herself and a perfect ten. She's also fairly open to trying new things.

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=10

Note: I apologize for the long delay. I've had to deal with some varied real life things that kept my mind off of the story for some time. It also caused me some distraction when I'd try to sit down and write some new content. Another problem was that I rushed into publishing the story with only two chapters. I blew both of them in a week, which was dumb. That left me struggling to keep up the pace and write new chapters as quickly as I could, which may have caused some burnout. Hopefully this new chapter will be enough to make up for it for now. It's the biggest chapter since chapter two, so plenty to read in the meantime as I get some more chapters churned out.

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Chapter 11 has been posted. Ms. Adanna's is the kind of hot teacher that everyone's been a student of at one point or another. But how receptive is she with time frozen around her?

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=11

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