AnthonyFiction

This is where I will be replying to reviews left on any stories in the 'Your Art as a Sexy POV Story' series. Story listing: YASPS #1 - Ahri's Tease: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089288 I appreciate the fact that you took the time to review my story. However, my insistence on countering your first point is too strong. There's literally no reason to feel the need to write a negative review. What I meant was negative reviews without constructive criticism: i.e., "THIS STORY SUCKS, YOU'RE AWFUL," etc. A long time ago, people called these "flames." Not sure if they're still called that. That is not how you get better as a writer. I very clearly stated that I accept any and all constructive criticism. Negative reviews are pointless and have no place anywhere. Like I said in the opening notes, "Feel free to comment, just don't be a jackass." The 'lack of sex' was the entire point of the story. It's supposed to fuel your own imagination, just as a good piece of artwork (such as the one this story is based off of) would do as well. If you're looking for 'non-implied intimacy' I have an entire novel's worth in my story 'Time for School.' Thanks again.

A new series begins. YASPS #1 starts with Ahri's Tease by artgerm on DeviantArt. More information explained within the story's introductory notes. Author: AnthonyFiction Title: Your Art as a Sexy POV Story #1 - Ahri's Tease Summary: Ahri appears before an unsuspecting young man for a little late night fun. Your Art as a Sexy POV Story #1 - 'Ahri's Tease' by artgerm. Feedback: Reasonable comments/constructive criticism accepted. Otherwise, don't bother. Fandom: League of Legends Pairing: Ahri/Original Male Character Warnings: Anthro,COMPLETE,M/F,OC Solo story or chaptered story: Solo URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089288

Chapter 20, the epilogue, has been posted. It's been an incredible journey, but every hero needs some downtime. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=20 Thank you all for reading!

Chapter 19 has been posted. Being a hero is sometimes dull work. But, at the end of the day, it still has its perks. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=19

Chapter 18 has been posted. The answers are finally revealed... http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=18

Chapter 17 has been posted. Having a crush usually doesn't have a happy ending. Some crushes, though, can have a more amicable parting... http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=17

Chapter 16 has been posted. Making amends for past transgressions continue with Samantha, Anthony's best friend from childhood. But just how deep does their bond go? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=16

@Guest_Jamey Monroe: Thank you very much for finding my story fascinating. I truly did not think that anyone would think of this story as such, but is really nice. So is having an English professor reading my story, haha. Hot damn, has it been two and a half months? Go figure. Regardless, people like Jamey continue to show interest in the story and I appreciate the hell out of it - really. Considering the fact that I've been slacking on writing, it's invigorating to know that more people are still reading and enjoying this story. Thank you. I really hate going radio silent, but I don't want to ever make promises that I may not be able to keep. However, with that being said, I will make my intentions (read: not a promise) clear. I really did not expect that I would take this long to finish this story after starting it at the beginning of this year. My personal expectations were to have it finished by August at the latest. It is now the beginning of December and it's still not done. So, in the interest of moving the hell on already, I want to finish the entire rest of this story by the end of the year. I still have a decent chunk of story to write, plot points to wrap up and one very big action-fueled surprise before I can finally slap "The End" on it. So I'm going to be buckling down as much as I can this month to get this bad boy finished up for good. Please, look forward to it - because I am.

Chapter 15 has been posted. Tamara's birthday party didn't go as planned, but there's always a way to pick things up. And, who is the new girl at the pool? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=15

Chapter 14 has been posted. Elizabeta knows what she wants and isn't afraid to say anything - ever. Tamara's birthday is also right around the corner. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=14

Thanks again for another great review. However, unlike the last ones, this one left me scratching my head. Specifically, this line: "That all the women have been riding their post orgasmic high for weeks without periods of insecurity or disbelief is the most unreal moment in a story about stopping time." So far, less than two weeks have even passed in the timeline. Aside from that, I really just don't understand what you're saying. What post orgasmic high? Why would they have periods of insecurity or disbelief? If you ever get back to me on this, I could address these concerns (if there are any? I really don't know!) and use it to make the story better. But regardless, thanks again for continuing to be a fantastic reader.

I'm glad that the aspects of the story that I always keep in mind are indeed being noticed! I strive for the believability factor as well as the elements of surprise and suspense. Thanks for the cool review and being such a loyal reader!

Chapter 13 has been posted. Sofia's been holding back, but clearly wanting something for a while now. Time to find out what it is. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=13

Very true. 100% true. During writing, I also felt like it was a little bit rushed. The problem was, as I've said before, for the most part I'm in the mindset of just getting the story done. I did feel as though if I'd done anything to make the scene longer, it would've felt like it was dragging on in my mind. I like to think of the story as a big piece of gum that you chew on. I don't want to keep overexplaining and extending something more and more to the point where all the flavor runs out. This is just a minor instance, but even still, I wanted to take the 'shortcut' this time around. Thanks for continuing to give the story a good read!

Chapter 12 has been posted. Breaking up is rough and it's hard to do. However, some breakup's are necessary and for the best. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106856&chapter=12