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When A Heart Cracks


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  • 6 months later...

well its at 15 chapters ATM but I am still working on the story, shouldn't be long till its done.

please feel free to make any comments as long as there going to be useful or constructive, i dont want a pat on the back or someone trying to kick me in the balls, just be respectful is all I ask

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at current, I am thinking that there will be about 10 – 12 girls, 90% of them are canon too in some way or another.

the shadow creatures are more of a description than an actual ….. element? its not like they are made of shadow its they use shadows to their advantage in battle if you will.

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a review mentioned that in my story “ if there has to be ten people of breeding age to be a clan then the uchiha clan is not a clan since there is only 1 or 2 alive.

this is true, because there are no Uchiha left in my world, no sasuke or itatchi, all are dead, in fact Sasuke was killed in the first chapter, memory wise. 

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