SirGeneralSir Posted February 20, 2013 Report Posted February 20, 2013 if you want to add to any thing review wise to just comment wise to my story please do so, but use full sentences. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103481 Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted September 6, 2013 Author Report Posted September 6, 2013 well its at 15 chapters ATM but I am still working on the story, shouldn't be long till its done. please feel free to make any comments as long as there going to be useful or constructive, i dont want a pat on the back or someone trying to kick me in the balls, just be respectful is all I ask Quote
Guest loneseeker15 Posted November 27, 2015 Report Posted November 27, 2015 Really great story I love it so far Quote
Guest loneseeker15 Posted November 28, 2015 Report Posted November 28, 2015 If its not one thing its another. How many girls are going to be in this marriage with naruto? Also can you explain the shadow creatures a bit More. Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted December 19, 2016 Author Report Posted December 19, 2016 at current, I am thinking that there will be about 10 – 12 girls, 90% of them are canon too in some way or another. the shadow creatures are more of a description than an actual ….. element? its not like they are made of shadow its they use shadows to their advantage in battle if you will. Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted January 29, 2017 Author Report Posted January 29, 2017 a review mentioned that in my story “ if there has to be ten people of breeding age to be a clan then the uchiha clan is not a clan since there is only 1 or 2 alive. ” this is true, because there are no Uchiha left in my world, no sasuke or itatchi, all are dead, in fact Sasuke was killed in the first chapter, memory wise. Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted June 23, 2017 Author Report Posted June 23, 2017 http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103481 Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted November 16, 2017 Author Report Posted November 16, 2017 ive updated some more of the chapters, up to 17 now. I’m hoping it corrected all the mistakes, probably not though. hope you all enjoy. Quote
Guest Loneseeker 15 Posted March 24, 2018 Report Posted March 24, 2018 I love your story can't wait to read more any idea when the next chapter is coming out Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted January 4, 2019 Author Report Posted January 4, 2019 I have posted a few, and will be posting a new one very soon …..2-3 days? Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted January 21, 2019 Author Report Posted January 21, 2019 ok so its taking longer than I thought, wife and I just had a baby (Dec 6th) so he has been keeping us busy BUT SOON! Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted February 14, 2019 Author Report Posted February 14, 2019 New Chapter is up Quote
Guest DIOR CRIMSON Posted October 28, 2022 Report Posted October 28, 2022 On 2/14/2019 at 10:45 AM, SirGeneralSir said: New Chapter is up When will you update your story, I've been waiting for ages. ... please update 🥺 Quote
SirGeneralSir Posted December 29, 2022 Author Report Posted December 29, 2022 currently working on editing this chapter, it is on its way. Quote
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