Shadowknight12 Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 Asexual Biped: Why thank you! That's awesome to hear, it was really hard for me to stay within the word limit to capture both things. Fairy Slayer: Heh, that's the point of the story, a different take on your typical D/s relationship. A very dark, unhappy one. And yes, you've absolutely nailed it! She enjoys it far more because he can't leave (that poor ailing mother of his...), and gloats about it often. I'm kind of attached to these two, so I might do them again, just to explore a new side of their relationship. Mwahahahah, you're observant. kisamiko: Excellent! I'm glad you feel that way, that's the exact reaction I was aiming for! You've made me awfully pleased. Apollo: Heheheh, why am I not surprised in the least? All I was missing was a kilt and a leaf-blower! But thank you, she really is one naughty Mistress... DemonGoddess: Yes, yes she is! She's meaner than a demon cat, I tell you! Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 pittwitch: Hahahah, yes, she is a mean ol' Mistress! Thank you, I tried not to make it too obvious at the end that she was 'carving' him. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted November 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2010 JayDee:Yes, indeed she is! I think she's the villain I've written that's roused the most visceral responses to date, hah! Thank you, I'm glad I could convey the fact that he's so scared shitless of her, he's already quaking in his boots before she even appears. And yeah, poor Hayden's had to push his pain threshold to the MAX to keep that job. The things we do for the people that birthed us into this awful world, huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Techno-Ninja: Thanks again! I'm glad you enjoyed the explanations and underlying justifications, they were really fun to think through! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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