Shadowknight12 Posted November 16, 2010 Report Posted November 16, 2010 First of all, thanks to all for taking the time to leave your thoughts! Asexual Biped: Hahahah, yes, I do. :3 kisamiko: LOL, you have no idea how many evil plot bunnies you just planted in my head. ApolloImperium: Next prompt, I promise! Thanks for the praise! I really wanted to capture a sexy+WTF moment there. TheRedHead: Glad you enjoyed it. That was my goal, after all. FairySlayer: Hey, thanks for reading this even though it's not your kind of thing, I really appreciate it (and the comments you left). Heh, I honestly don't know any other word for "goat-like" other than caprine. And yeah, I tried as hard as I could to capture a strong combo of feelings for that scene. A veritable... cornucopia of emotions, even! Heh, what can I say? I like happy endings. Quote
FairySlayer Posted November 16, 2010 Report Posted November 16, 2010 FairySlayer: .... Heh, what can I say? I like happy endings. I love happy endings too, but you'd never know it from the first 3/4 of any of my longer stories. I think your story showed enough of his pleasure all the way through, which definitely works. Quote
Shadowknight12 Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Posted November 16, 2010 I love happy endings too, but you'd never know it from the first 3/4 of any of my longer stories. I think your story showed enough of his pleasure all the way through, which definitely works. Firstly: *makes mental note on how to do the 3/4* Secondly: Thanks! I tried to go for that effect and I'm really glad it shone through. Also, I'm adding you to my 'to read' list. I might not get to you right now, but some day, I'll leave you a review. Good authors are hard to come by. Quote
Shadowknight12 Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Posted November 16, 2010 pittwitch: Hahahah, thanks for the review! I admit I have a weird imagination at times... Quote
Shadowknight12 Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Posted November 17, 2010 djackgirl: Thanks for the review! I try to be original whenever I can. I'm awfully pleased you liked it even if it wasn't something you usually read. It's a great accomplishment to me. Quote
Shadowknight12 Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Posted November 17, 2010 JayDee: Thanks for the review and specially for the recommendation! You RULE! And you got the goatse pun, too, now that's just awesome. Heh, what can I say, I love using obscure words, especially to conceal stealth puns. It was fun to write, and maybe one day I'll turn it into a larger story (I swear the word limit killed me!). Quote
Shadowknight12 Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Posted December 1, 2010 Techno-Ninja: Thank you! Glad you think it was primal and sexy, that's exactly what I was aiming for! Quote
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