Shadowknight12 Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 First of all, thanks to all for taking the time to leave your thoughts! Asexual Biped: Hahahah, yes, I do. :3 kisamiko: LOL, you have no idea how many evil plot bunnies you just planted in my head. ApolloImperium: Next prompt, I promise! Thanks for the praise! I really wanted to capture a sexy+WTF moment there. TheRedHead: Glad you enjoyed it. That was my goal, after all. FairySlayer: Hey, thanks for reading this even though it's not your kind of thing, I really appreciate it (and the comments you left). Heh, I honestly don't know any other word for "goat-like" other than caprine. And yeah, I tried as hard as I could to capture a strong combo of feelings for that scene. A veritable... cornucopia of emotions, even! Heh, what can I say? I like happy endings. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FairySlayer Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 FairySlayer: .... Heh, what can I say? I like happy endings. I love happy endings too, but you'd never know it from the first 3/4 of any of my longer stories. I think your story showed enough of his pleasure all the way through, which definitely works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 I love happy endings too, but you'd never know it from the first 3/4 of any of my longer stories. I think your story showed enough of his pleasure all the way through, which definitely works. Firstly: *makes mental note on how to do the 3/4* Secondly: Thanks! I tried to go for that effect and I'm really glad it shone through. Also, I'm adding you to my 'to read' list. I might not get to you right now, but some day, I'll leave you a review. Good authors are hard to come by. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 pittwitch: Hahahah, thanks for the review! I admit I have a weird imagination at times... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 djackgirl: Thanks for the review! I try to be original whenever I can. I'm awfully pleased you liked it even if it wasn't something you usually read. It's a great accomplishment to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 JayDee: Thanks for the review and specially for the recommendation! You RULE! And you got the goatse pun, too, now that's just awesome. Heh, what can I say, I love using obscure words, especially to conceal stealth puns. It was fun to write, and maybe one day I'll turn it into a larger story (I swear the word limit killed me!). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowknight12 Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Techno-Ninja: Thank you! Glad you think it was primal and sexy, that's exactly what I was aiming for! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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