JayDee Posted June 29, 2018 Author Report Posted June 29, 2018 (edited) The Taking of Felicia Hardy remains in zMisplaced Stories [ADMIN use only] > Spiderman, and I am sure when I posted it in 2009 there was an X-Man domain but not a seperate Marvel domain. This was a long time ago and there’s been a lot of booze since then, and the only reason I haven’t done the decent thing and taken it down and re-loaded it on the Marvel side myself is because it’s got 12 reviews, which is an insane amount for me. Well, it had 11 but today another one: Donglibog review: Just read part 1. Really enjoyed it. I kinda like the fat guy character. Many thanks for your review! I really appreciate the feedback. Per the disclaimer at the start part 1’s plot and several elements were requested by KZ-01. Now, KZ-01 had a favorite fantasy and that was a smokin’ hot woman with a guy who was ugly as fuck in same way – fat, horrible features, Ted Nugent shirt that sort of thing. I say had, but for all I know KZ-01 still has the same desires. He made quite a few requests and the Felicia Hardy one appealed to me so I wrote it! Now the reason for explaining this is firstly to say I don’t take total credit for the fat guy character and secondly to let you know that KZ-01 inspired/requested fat guys appeared in other stories that you may also like if you can find them! Sadly I don’t have the links, but someone can probably help. Anyway, I appreciate the review, thanks for your kind words. Edited June 29, 2018 by JayDee BronxWench 1 Quote
JayDee Posted January 4, 2019 Author Report Posted January 4, 2019 Savagery is one of those stories with zero redeeming features, save that I wrote it as a request and the person who requested it seemed to like it. Sometimes that’s enough. Quote ANON you should do a sequal when she found by the new 52 wonder woman and both rape kill darius Thank you for your suggestion, I appreciate you taking the time to think about this. It’s been ages since I read a lot of comics so I am not familiar with the New 52 – I did see the Wonder Woman film though, and surely Gal Gadot’s WW could kick his ass good and hard. I have to say though, what would either version be doing walking the boundary between Hell and Faerie? Now, if heroes were to find her it would surely be mighty Baytor and his companions Six Pack, Dogwelder and Bueno Excellente. I’m sure that together they could give Darius a suitable punishment. Bueno in particular specialised in it. Worth thinking about anyway… Some day, maybe. Quote
Guest Hernesto Posted January 8, 2019 Report Posted January 8, 2019 En el 22/10/2010 a las 23:45, DemonGoddess dijo: Como he dicho, incluso con la materia que no estaba cómodo, lo leí de todos modos. concursos de talentos, independientemente de su contenido. Excelente historia Usted ha escrito algo sobre Supergirl o Susan Storm de cuatro fantásticos. O piensa que escribir ?? Quote
Guest Hernesto Posted January 8, 2019 Report Posted January 8, 2019 En 04/01/2019 a las 19:31, JayDee dijo: El salvajismo es una de esas historias con cero características bueno, salvo que lo escribí como una solicitud y la persona que lo ha solicitado parecía que le gustaba. A veces eso es suficiente. Gracias por su sugerencia, aprecio que tomarse el tiempo para pensar en esto. Han pasado años desde que leí un montón de cómics, así que no estoy familiarizado con el nuevo 52 - vi la película de la Mujer Maravilla embargo, y sin duda WW de Gal Gadot podía patear su culo bien y duro. Tengo que decir, no obstante, lo que podría ser cualquiera de las versiones que hacen recorrer el límite entre el infierno y el Hada? Ahora bien, si eran héroes para encontrarla seguramente sería poderoso Baytor y sus compañeros Six Pack, Dogwelder y Bueno Excellente. Estoy seguro de que juntos podrían dar a Darius un castigo adecuado. Bueno, en particular, especializada en ella. Vale la pena pensar de todos modos ... Algún día, tal vez. Supergirl Melissa Benoist o la Mujer Maravilla Gal Gadot, cualquiera de los dos Quote
JayDee Posted January 9, 2019 Author Report Posted January 9, 2019 I haven’t written any story about either of them. I am sure others have done so. Good luck finding these. Quote
JayDee Posted January 18, 2019 Author Report Posted January 18, 2019 (edited) Louisiana Pit Fight: Sandi Stone Vs Jody is one of those stories I always forget I’ve written. It was a request fic for a hugely muscled character I had never heard of. so i stuck her in the the Preacher setting ‘cos Jody was one of the characters could kick anybody’s ass and mean enough to do the brutality the request implied. I was looking through it and this one line, Quote ANON I always hoped to find a story where Sandi finally gets her ass kicked, but I'm not sure if even she deserved this. Still, I was entertained. Any other stories like this? Thank you for the review! I appreciate you taking the time and I’m glad it was entertaining. I suspect you’re right – I don’t think anybody really deserved this. Not the characters, and frankly it is iffy if any of the readers should have been put through it. In terms of muscle women getting beaten and destroyed, VileCorpus (also known as VileCorp) who requested this Sandi story did a lot of work in that area, with obscenely muscled women often fighting other obscenely muscled women. I think he produced quite a few comics that are probably available via google. He did do a bit of writing too – but the forum they were originally on was deleted years ago. Not sure where they would be now. In terms of my stories I’ve got a few more with the violence and the rape (go to my profile and see tags, would take too long to list ), but not so many with the actual muscle woman/fighting back elements. The Crushing of Cassie Cage in the games section might be closest given the kicking meted out to the bad guy before the nastiness kicks in, and it also features a redneck. Cassie isn’t anywhere near as muscular though. I hope you’re able to find more stories with the topics you like. Thank you again! Edited January 18, 2019 by JayDee Quote
JayDee Posted August 28, 2020 Author Report Posted August 28, 2020 The Taking of Felicia Hardy Quote ANON Hey man, great story, do you think you could make a similar one? Maybe of Catwoman or some other cute thief. I am a huge fan and would really appreciate it. Thank you for the comment, I’m glad you liked it! Unfortunately I’m going through a long period of not managing to write anything so I probably won’t get to do any kind of similar sequel, but I’m sure other folks might manage it! Quote
Guest Johnnyboy Posted August 24, 2022 Report Posted August 24, 2022 Hey there. For years I’ve taken note of your stories and seen most of them. And I’ll admit some of them kinda have me not really finishing it. Not because it’s bad but the overall nature which is ironic since as a teen I would look at Gore stuff and became a accustomed. I guess the overall general of these heroines suffering a fate worse than death or actually end up dying. Like Kitty Pryde, Wonder Woman and so on. I guess my questions are “what made you decide on writing these stories?” Of course this isn’t meant to be a jab on you, since I’ve always been curious. Overall your stories aren’t bad at all, Although they’ve not really spanking materials for me. Keep up the good work. Quote
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